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Offline Matron

Flounced Fics (Twilight fanfiction)
« on: January 14, 2013, 04:02 PM »
Ok folks, list em here. Fics that you have flounced, and why you flounced them. Help keep others apprised of the good, the bad, and the badly edited. :-*

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Offline michangelina

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #41 on: January 15, 2013, 07:57 PM »
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I know that i'm def'y in the minority here but i flounced Emancipation Proclamation. It was a good fic,i just got bored with the repetitive POV's.

I tried so hard with this one and even though there were parts I liked, I just couldn't.
 
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Offline robsten143

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #42 on: January 15, 2013, 11:11 PM »
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I really, really disliked this fic., although I appear to be one of the few it has oiver 4k reviews. 

Cracks in the Pavement BY VampiresHaveLaws

Life is never perfect, the cracks always appear. "My Polaroid would show the face of a girl who has forgotten how to truly smile." Even the strongest of dreams can fail to become enough.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Angst/Romance - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 20 - Words: 148,909 - Reviews: 4,739 - Favs: 2,350 - Follows: 2,359 - Updated: 08-30-12 - Published: 02-21-11 - Status: Complete - id: 6765479

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Me too. I tried to read this fic because someone mentioned  at other place that how beautiful writing is blah blah.But this is one hell DEPRESSING story.  :( :( :( I never read completely but yes writing is so annoying.Its basically bella's inner monolouge  in entire story no real conversation.    :thumbsdown:  You actually get headache after 3-4 chapters. I actually didnt understand what was exact problem between edward & bella. It was such a messed up writing that i also didnt understand certain scenes.
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& yes at  the end they live HEA just like that. :P
 
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Offline robsten143

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #43 on: January 15, 2013, 11:14 PM »
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this is going to be the best thread  >:D >:D >:D


Yes.  :iagree:
 
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Offline Caro

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #44 on: January 16, 2013, 05:54 AM »
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I found this fic so depressing! There was basically nothing happy about it at all. I ended up feeling sorry for Edward for having to deal with someone so whiny.

She was a nightmare. I couldn't stand it.  ::)
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Offline deranged_dreamer

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #45 on: January 16, 2013, 05:54 AM »
Rm w a Vu
Author: AngelGoddess1981  PM
Bella's a struggling student at AZ State who finds her boyfriend in bed with her roomie. Unable to look at them, she moves out. When another dorm room cannot be found, Bella takes to the classifieds. Just how good is the view being advertised?
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Humor - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 31 - Words: 203,170 - Reviews: 3,827 - Favs: 2,492 - Follows: 3,341 - Updated: 01-15-13 - Published: 02-12-12 - id: 7829435
 

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So you see the romance/humor label? Well, around chapter 28/29 she decided that she didn't want a fluffy fic anymore. So she inserted two cliches plot twist that turned this fic into drama.
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What a mess. :33: :33: :33: :33:

She killed the story. Plus on chapter 30 she wrote an a/n in the middle of the chapter, which pi.ssed a lot of people off.

 
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Offline Caro

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #46 on: January 16, 2013, 06:05 AM »
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Rm w a Vu
Author: AngelGoddess1981  PM
Bella's a struggling student at AZ State who finds her boyfriend in bed with her roomie. Unable to look at them, she moves out. When another dorm room cannot be found, Bella takes to the classifieds. Just how good is the view being advertised?
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Humor - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 31 - Words: 203,170 - Reviews: 3,827 - Favs: 2,492 - Follows: 3,341 - Updated: 01-15-13 - Published: 02-12-12 - id: 7829435
 

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So you see the romance/humor label? Well, around chapter 28/29 she decided that she didn't want a fluffy fic anymore. So she inserted two cliches plot twist that turned this fic into drama.
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What a mess. :33: :33: :33: :33:

She killed the story. Plus on chapter 30 she wrote an a/n in the middle of the chapter, which pi.ssed a lot of people off.


Funnily enough this was another fic I flounced. 
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Offline avag

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #47 on: January 16, 2013, 07:14 AM »
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Rm w a Vu
Author: AngelGoddess1981  PM
Bella's a struggling student at AZ State who finds her boyfriend in bed with her roomie. Unable to look at them, she moves out. When another dorm room cannot be found, Bella takes to the classifieds. Just how good is the view being advertised?
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Humor - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 31 - Words: 203,170 - Reviews: 3,827 - Favs: 2,492 - Follows: 3,341 - Updated: 01-15-13 - Published: 02-12-12 - id: 7829435
 

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So you see the romance/humor label? Well, around chapter 28/29 she decided that she didn't want a fluffy fic anymore. So she inserted two cliches plot twist that turned this fic into drama.
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What a mess. :33: :33: :33: :33:

She killed the story. Plus on chapter 30 she wrote an a/n in the middle of the chapter, which pi.ssed a lot of people off.

Does it count if you flounce before reading a word?   This one just updated and I have been waiting to read it.  Taking it off my TBR list now due to your  timely words.   

I really like this thread.   :-*
 
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Offline Loopy

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #48 on: January 16, 2013, 08:13 AM »
I've just flounced on You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login by ericastwilight - I managed 7 chapters, then had to give up.

I really thought I was gonna like it as I love Mobward

But.......
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Offline lucylu0508

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #49 on: January 16, 2013, 08:23 AM »
 Masquerade » reviews
He was unbreakable. She broke too easily. Beneath the shards of sin, lies the steady drip of innocence abused. Jasper x Bella.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 12 - Words: 31,104 - Reviews: 127 - Updated: 10-27-11 - Published: 8-20-11 - Bella & Jasper - Complete

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This is another that i did read the entire thing and LOVED it until the end. It was a fantastic story, loved both the plot and writing style. But then I got to the end and nothing, and i mean nothing, was resolved.  The author's note at the end stated there wld def'y be a sequel (never happened and that was over a year ago) and the reader should think of this fic as a really really long prologue.  :wtf: :wtf:

I was so pissed ,what a waste of time. This fic should not have been marked complete.

 
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Offline Gotofrell

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #50 on: January 16, 2013, 08:59 AM »
What about when authors flounce US???  Great stories, great writing, regular updates, then. POOF!  :'(.   They never update again.    The flounCERs become the flounCEEs.


eg, "All at Once," by stella luna sky. (Truly poof, it was pulled)

eg, "Unbecoming," by Bookishqua. (Yeh, I know it's coming back ANY minute now...)
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eg,  "Company Loves Misery," by Angstgoddess003 (I know there was some dirt slung, whatever)
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I loved and left good reviews for all three.
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Offline deranged_dreamer

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #51 on: January 16, 2013, 09:24 AM »
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What about when authors flounce US???  Great stories, great writing, regular updates, then. POOF!  :'(.   They never update again.    The flounCERs become the flounCEEs.


eg, "All at Once," by stella luna sky. (Truly poof, it was pulled)

eg, "Unbecoming," by Bookishqua. (Yeh, I know it's coming back ANY minute now...)
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eg,  "Company Loves Misery," by Angstgoddess003 (I know there was some dirt slung, whatever)
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I loved and left good reviews for all three.

I hate that!!! dont get me hooked and then disappear.
Or at least let us know why.

Bookishqua apparently is having some health issues. so that i can forgive. lol
 
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Offline Caro

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #52 on: January 16, 2013, 11:07 AM »
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I've just flounced on You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login by ericastwilight - I managed 7 chapters, then had to give up.

I really thought I was gonna like it as I love Mobward

But.......
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I made it to chapter 2!
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Offline Matron

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #53 on: January 16, 2013, 11:13 AM »
I hope whoever flounced Cullenary Coupling comes back and says why she flounced it, cause I was really interested in this one. I actually LIKE long ass reads.
 
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Offline CrisiMarie

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #54 on: January 16, 2013, 11:37 AM »
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I hope whoever flounced Cullenary Coupling comes back and says why she flounced it, cause I was really interested in this one. I actually LIKE long ass reads.

To me it was just too weird. It started off as a normal story where she's human with him a vamp and them getting married. That lasted about 11 chapters. After that it got really weird to me. All of a sudden she's not really human. I believe, if I remember correctly, she's a distant relation to Marcus. Then next thing you know they are holding conversations with spirits of her grandmother or something. Might even be some sort of God. They get married and he's trying to trick her into thinking they slept together but didn't. It was just too much for me. I should really try to push through it but it just kept losing me.
 
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Offline Matron

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #55 on: January 16, 2013, 11:39 AM »
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To me it was just too weird. It started off as a normal story where she's human with him a vamp and them getting married. That lasted about 11 chapters. After that it got really weird to me. All of a sudden she's not really human. I believe, if I remember correctly, she's a distant relation to Marcus. Then next thing you know they are holding conversations with spirits of her grandmother or something. Might even be some sort of God. They get married and he's trying to trick her into thinking they slept together but didn't. It was just too much for me. I should really try to push through it but it just kept losing me.

I'll probably still give it a try, someday when I'm all caught up on my regular reads. Thanks for though, I'll let you know what I think when I get to it.
 
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Offline Matron

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #56 on: January 16, 2013, 12:29 PM »
Ok, my first flounce to add to this thread- Gynazole by MrsTheKing.

Someone requested this in another thread, it was linked to, so I skimmed the beginning. First of all, Bella is so uncomfortable with "woman" stuff, she goes so far as to order all her tampons and stuff online! (I'm guessing she's also a virgin?) Then she ends up with a yeast infection, and Edward is the MOST inappropriate pharmacist ever. Yes, it was his first day, but damn!

And the author is one of those who consistently uses "defiantly" when she means "definitely".

I got to the meeting with her guidance counselor at college, who sits in a bean bag chair, calls her Bellar, and seems to be a blithering idiot, and flounced. I like funny little fluffy fics, but this one just comes across as badly written and stupid.
 
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Offline eveneven

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #57 on: January 16, 2013, 02:49 PM »
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Ok, my first flounce to add to this thread- Gynazole by MrsTheKing.

Someone requested this in another thread, it was linked to, so I skimmed the beginning. First of all, Bella is so uncomfortable with "woman" stuff, she goes so far as to order all her tampons and stuff online! (I'm guessing she's also a virgin?) Then she ends up with a yeast infection, and Edward is the MOST inappropriate pharmacist ever. Yes, it was his first day, but damn!

And the author is one of those who consistently uses "defiantly" when she means "definitely".

I got to the meeting with her guidance counselor at college, who sits in a bean bag chair, calls her Bellar, and seems to be a blithering idiot, and flounced. I like funny little fluffy fics, but this one just comes across as badly written and stupid.

I was wondering, why the story had so many reviews, it was supposed to be funny, but for me, it was just weird... :cry:
 
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Offline eveneven

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #58 on: January 16, 2013, 02:59 PM »
Devil's Pitchfork by 1Blue25 - this was a really good story with unique plot and orginal universe the author created. But it ended suddenly and many things were left unresolved, I felt so cheated.  :angry:
 
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Offline deranged_dreamer

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #59 on: January 16, 2013, 03:01 PM »
i´ve read so many fics. i cant remember if i flounced them or not anymore.  :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
 
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Offline Matron

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #60 on: January 16, 2013, 03:16 PM »
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i´ve read so many fics. i cant remember if i flounced them or not anymore.  :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:


Me too. I tried to look through my read ones, but got bored, lol. I figure we can post the ones that stick out in our minds, and new flounces. Every little bit helps. :)
 
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