I'm reading a story from the Fandom for Mental Health compilation by an author I've read many times. She is a very good writer and usually the only complaint I have is that some of her Bellas have blue eyes (as she does in this fic) but what is absolutely driving me crazy is her Edward keeps calling Bella "girl". It just doesn't make sense or flow, it seems awkward. I think "girl" is an odd choice for a term of endearment - baby, sweetheart - not girl?? I'm finding it distracting and not in a good way.Anyone else have an opinion?
I could see girl, like "Hey Girl" between to girlfriends, but from a boyfriend or significant other?? I am with you that it doesn't make sense. It doesn't convey any love or feeling beyond friendship and it is just wrong from a guy.
Does he like her? That is a little strange to me also
Yes, they just became a couple and that's his "pet" name for her. Baby, honey, sweetheart or some cute name - okay, but girl? No, just no.I still haven't finished the story, I read a couple of pages and stop. Not her best.
I read Emotion's Right on Target and started reading the sequel Dead on Target, but as is my custom I peaked at the end to ensured an HEA for E&B and saw mention of a 3rd in the series. Anyone know if she wrote that before she P2P these?
That A/N also said she wasn't going to start posting the 3rd Target story until she finished Better Luck Next Time and Madame Bella. Since she didn't finish those two prior to pulling her stories, presumably she did not start posting the 3rd Target story.
Thanks FFG. That's too bad. Hmm, not sure if I am gonna keep reading this then. If there was a 3rd intended there will probably be unresolved issues at the end.
I get the impression that there are unresolved issues. You might need to wait for the published version!
I am stuck, and not sure what to read next... help! If you liked these, share some of your similar faves. Some of my faves: Light in the Darkness by jenrarMasen Manor by drotunoSeeing Bella by SherryolaDistractions by windchymesThis Life by CaraNowide awake Impact by nise7465Dreamscapes by Zoe1078 (yes I am a jacob lover too)Darkest Before the Dawn by CatMastersBella's Guitar by AmandaForksMultiverse by GeorgeGlassThe List by Cullen, LauraThe Cannabean Betrothal by ItzMegan73breathe again by YsarTranscendence by Savage7289Written in the Stars by Bryan, LissaBeyond Time by TKeglOnly Human by Amethyst JacksonIn the Blink of an Eye by thatwritrOthers I liked:Nomad by EibbilI Saw You Coming by saritadreamingUnexpected Circumstances by Savage7289alsoHere's my fanfic GR shelf: You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login
You have a few of my favs on here but I would also add: The Gravity Series by DrotunoRain must Fall by DrotunoTides of Fate by Sparklingtwilight Unplanned Perfection by Littlecat358The Cottage by kitkat681Take the Ice by Bellamarie117Several stories by mathissonand too many more to name LOL.
I am stuck, and not sure what to read next... help! If you liked these, share some of your similar faves. Some of my faves: Light in the Darkness by jenrarMasen Manor by drotunoSeeing Bella by SherryolaDistractions by windchymesThis Life by CaraNowide awake Impact by nise7465Dreamscapes by Zoe1078 (yes I am a jacob lover too)This Life by CaraNowide awake Impact by nise7465Bella's Guitar by AmandaForksMultiverse by GeorgeGlassThe List by Cullen, LauraThe Cannabean Betrothal by ItzMegan73breathe again by YsarTranscendence by Savage7289Written in the Stars by Bryan, LissaBeyond Time by TKeglOnly Human by Amethyst JacksonIn the Blink of an Eye by thatwritrOthers I liked:Nomad by EibbilI Saw You Coming by saritadreamingUnexpected Circumstances by Savage7289alsoHere's my fanfic GR shelf: You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login
Read These Masen Manor by drotunoSeeing Bella by SherryolaThis Life by CaraNowide awake Impact by nise7465This Life by CaraNowide awake Impact by nise7465The Cannabean Betrothal by ItzMegan73Transcendence by Savage7289Written in the Stars by Bryan, LissaUnexpected Circumstances by Savage7289I liked them Rec:The American Vampire series by just4haleBonne Foi by Amethest JacksonThe Angel series by drotuno