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Thread #4 - We are crazy talkers here!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general.  But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement. 

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

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he creeps me out sooooooooooo much.

I know he is considered hot. but there is something disturbing about him. maybe he is a psychopath.  :o
he just gives me this vibe... if you see him in an alley run the other direction. I don't know.

Which is why I think he'd be great!  :D  I could totally see him going all dom on Bella, oh I mean Anastasia. I honestly don't think of him as hot per se, but I can see his appeal when he works on the Vampire Diaries.
 
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I won't believe any casting stories on that movie til contracts are signed and shooting has started. I think ever guy and gal under 30 has been tossed into the fray on this one.
I heard the movie was in post production and was going to be released soon.  Which made no sense to me. But it looked like an announcement from the movie studio.  If it was true, they picked the actors a long time ago. 

Really, though? I just can't see this as much of a movie. And definitely not more than one movie.  Unless it is p0rn.  And then you could have MFHD do the job. Booked will love it!   :D :D :D :D

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I heard the movie was in post production and was going to be released soon.  Which made no sense to me. But it looked like an announcement from the movie studio.  If it was true, they picked the actors a long time ago. 

Really, though? I just can't see this as much of a movie. And definitely not more than one movie.  Unless it is p0rn.  And then you could have MFHD do the job. Booked will love it!   :D :D :D :D

I hope it's not more than one film. The screenwriter has one hell of a job to do! As long as they put some of the Jack stuff in early on, there's enough of a story arc for a good film (maybe 2, but it would be stretching it).

But speaking of PWP, I'm suffering a bit with A Life Extraordinary. I don't know why there are so many lemons! There's a good story underneath it all, but it requires a lot of skimming. ergh.
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I hope it's not more than one film. The screenwriter has one hell of a job to do! As long as they put some of the Jack stuff in early on, there's enough of a story arc for a good film (maybe 2, but it would be stretching it).

But speaking of PWP, I'm suffering a bit with A Life Extraordinary. I don't know why there are so many lemons! There's a good story underneath it all, but it requires a lot of skimming. ergh.
Well, yeah, there is that with Jack and the kidnapping at the end.  And the Bella um I mean Ana saving Ed - Christian...sigh, yeah, I can't get it straight.....

But if they want it anything less than X rated, they have to fade to black a lot.....

Isn't ALE the second in the set? So they are both full of lemons?  I was thinking of starting that or EP.  Though frankly I got to chapter 2 of EP and was ready to quit.  Not my cup of tea at all. I don't like reading stuff that makes me angry.  And mistreating women like that makes me very angry.  People like that should be drawn and quartered. 

Okay sorry.  See, this is why I don't read these kinds of stories.  Give me the happy, humorous fluff any day.  Or a blow up the bad guys. (see I don't even want them in jail) Sigh  :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :021:

Please excuse my violent tendencies.....  :-*
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I looked on IMDB.  The date must have been wrong in the thing I saw.  It is in preproduction right now and is scheduled for release Aug 2014.  So they have a year I guess. 

I will probably wait until it is in the discount bin of DVDs.  Or on the movie channels.  I really don't go to the movies much.  The last one I saw in the theater was Eclipse I think.  And that was only because it was my favorite of the books.  :P
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Well, yeah, there is that with Jack and the kidnapping at the end.  And the Bella um I mean Ana saving Ed - Christian...sigh, yeah, I can't get it straight.....

But if they want it anything less than X rated, they have to fade to black a lot.....

Isn't ALE the second in the set? So they are both full of lemons?  I was thinking of starting that or EP.  Though frankly I got to chapter 2 of EP and was ready to quit.  Not my cup of tea at all. I don't like reading stuff that makes me angry.  And mistreating women like that makes me very angry.  People like that should be drawn and quartered. 

Okay sorry.  See, this is why I don't read these kinds of stories.  Give me the happy, humorous fluff any day.  Or a blow up the bad guys. (see I don't even want them in jail) Sigh  :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :021:

Please excuse my violent tendencies.....  :-*

FSoG, yes, there will be a lot of lemons to cut and rearrangement of the actual plot to make an interesting film.

LYLS and ALE, yes lots of lemons in part 2 also. For me, too many. But I think I can see where the story is going, so I'm willing to skim and continue.

I hope you don't give up on EP! The first hundred or so pages are the hardest.
 
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FSoG, yes, there will be a lot of lemons to cut and rearrangement of the actual plot to make an interesting film.

LYLS and ALE, yes lots of lemons in part 2 also. For me, too many. But I think I can see where the story is going, so I'm willing to skim and continue.

I hope you don't give up on EP! The first hundred or so pages are the hardest.
Is that when it quits being a "slave" story?  Because I think I will only continue if someone kills Charlie really soon. 

And if I can find an easier to read version.  Because the one I put on my Kindle was the "picture" one.  Some PDFs are good and some are just pictures of what was on the page.  A good PDF can be adjusted by a PDF reader.  But a picture PDF can never be changed.  And this has print so tiny I need a magnifying glass to read it.   Okay, not really.  But close. 

Maybe if I read it like a WIP it won't be so bad..... ;D
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FSoG, yes, there will be a lot of lemons to cut and rearrangement of the actual plot to make an interesting film.

LYLS and ALE, yes lots of lemons in part 2 also. For me, too many. But I think I can see where the story is going, so I'm willing to skim and continue.

I hope you don't give up on EP! The first hundred or so pages are the hardest.

How do you make a D/s film without sex? But more to the point how do you make a film of a book that only sold so many copies off of the back of all the sex, without the sex?? Which is why I say 'don't'....

All the of Lolashoes trilogy have a hella lot of lemons, but I still loved them and I'm not one for gratuitous lemons...I'm reading Schism on my kindle at the moment, love this take on the canon story....and again I say if you like Vampward Grasping Darkness is the fic to read.

Ella, you should continue to read EP it is worth the perseverance through the 'horror' chapters.

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How do you make a D/s film without sex? But more to the point how do you make a film of a book that only sold so many copies off of the back of all the sex, without the sex?? Which is why I say 'don't'....

All the of Lolashoes trilogy have a hella lot of lemons, but I still loved them and I'm not one for gratuitous lemons...I'm reading Schism on my kindle at the moment, love this take on the canon story....and again I say if you like Vampward Grasping Darkness is the fic to read.

Ella, you should continue to read EP it is worth the perseverance through the 'horror' chapters.
See, I am with you on the "Why bother" when talking about a movie of FSOG.  The main reason it sold was the sex was hot.  Though I disagree about the D/S part.  Bella didn't end up agreeing to be a sub, so most of the books were about the fact she wouldn't let him control her and the problems he had dealing with it.  That's what I liked about the story.  Yeah, the hot sex was good too. 

Okay, I will continue with EP.  Maybe I can skim through the beginning so I won't get so angry.   :-X

It's funny, but reading a WIP? I don't mind a lot of lemons.  It's just when you read it all at once that the lemons get to be too much. And I think a lot of writers added so many lemons because as a WIP you wanted happy readers and that's what the readers wanted to see.  At least that makes sense to me.  If you were writing a regular book, you would probably not do a lemon every chapter, even in a romance.  Some would be full lemons and some would be fade to blacks.

Unless you are SM - and then it is all fade to black......  :D :D :D :D :D
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Has anyone read Secret Sex by Erinbatt?



Edward and Bella have a little secret...or so they think. A friendship that evolves into a very sweet love story. If only anyone knew about it... AH / Canon pairings.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 50 - Words: 366,052 - Reviews: 5,969 - Favs: 4,504 - Follows: 3,463 - Updated: 12-27-12 - Published: 03-10-10 - Status: Complete - id: 5806017
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How do you make a D/s film without sex? But more to the point how do you make a film of a book that only sold so many copies off of the back of all the sex, without the sex?? Which is why I say 'don't'....

All the of Lolashoes trilogy have a hella lot of lemons, but I still loved them and I'm not one for gratuitous lemons...I'm reading Schism on my kindle at the moment, love this take on the canon story....and again I say if you like Vampward Grasping Darkness is the fic to read.

Ella, you should continue to read EP it is worth the perseverance through the 'horror' chapters.

Loved Grasping Darkness, can't wait for Hungry Light to update and finish!

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See, I am with you on the "Why bother" when talking about a movie of FSOG.  The main reason it sold was the sex was hot.  Though I disagree about the D/S part.  Bella didn't end up agreeing to be a sub, so most of the books were about the fact she wouldn't let him control her and the problems he had dealing with it.  That's what I liked about the story.  Yeah, the hot sex was good too. 

I'm with you that FSoG/MotU isn't a D/S story. The people who call it that are the same ones who call The Sleeping Beauty Trilogy a BDSM story, which it definitely isn't.
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Has anyone read Secret Sex by Erinbatt?



Edward and Bella have a little secret...or so they think. A friendship that evolves into a very sweet love story. If only anyone knew about it... AH / Canon pairings.
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Yep. Go for it
 
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Yep. Go for it

I am already on chapter 24, and im really liking it. There is just a lot of lemons. I wanted to make sure that the rest of the story has a plot. Thanks  :-*
 
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I am already on chapter 24, and im really liking it. There is just a lot of lemons. I wanted to make sure that the rest of the story has a plot. Thanks  :-*

I've read it a while ago. Can't remember much. But I didn't flounce it.
And I normally remember if there is something I don't like.
 
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Loved Grasping Darkness, can't wait for Hungry Light to update and finish!

I'm with you that FSoG/MotU isn't a D/S story. The people who call it that are the same ones who call The Sleeping Beauty Trilogy a BDSM story, which it definitely isn't.

I do believe HL has finished, awhile ago actually.

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See, I am with you on the "Why bother" when talking about a movie of FSOG.  The main reason it sold was the sex was hot.  Though I disagree about the D/S part.  Bella didn't end up agreeing to be a sub, so most of the books were about the fact she wouldn't let him control her and the problems he had dealing with it.  That's what I liked about the story.  Yeah, the hot sex was good too. 

Okay, I will continue with EP.  Maybe I can skim through the beginning so I won't get so angry.   :-X

It's funny, but reading a WIP? I don't mind a lot of lemons.  It's just when you read it all at once that the lemons get to be too much. And I think a lot of writers added so many lemons because as a WIP you wanted happy readers and that's what the readers wanted to see.  At least that makes sense to me.  If you were writing a regular book, you would probably not do a lemon every chapter, even in a romance.  Some would be full lemons and some would be fade to blacks.

Unless you are SM - and then it is all fade to black......  :D :D :D :D :D

I'd say FSOG is a D/s story with a difference...I can't really remember it very well, what with all the other fics I've now read but in my recollection Bella (or whatever she's now called) might not have agreed to the spanking but didn't she sign off on all the rules? And she was certainly 'submissive' to Christian, wasn't she? I'd venture to say that she was more a 'sub' than not in behavioural characteristics (which has nothing to do with the 'scenes') What I do remember is that she got totally on my nerves and I wanted to insert a backbone into her without anesthesia..


I wanted to ask, in the Twilight books can anyone remember how many times did Bella and Edward actually go to that bloody meadow? It is now my pet peeve. No matter where in the world a twi fic takes place they always somehow find a damn meadow!!! I flounced that fic where Bella is taken to another planet to help propagate this alien species ( Edward had a tail) but I wonder if there's a meadow in that?
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I do believe HL has finished, awhile ago actually.

You made my day! I DL'd HL in April when it updated Ch 9, but is still marked in-progress. I didn't read the A/N, which says it's finished! Happy days, happy days! I'm going to take a much needed ALE break for this.

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I wanted to ask, in the Twilight books can anyone remember how many times did Bella and Edward actually go to that bloody meadow? It is now my pet peeve. No matter where in the world a twi fic takes place they always somehow find a damn meadow!!! I flounced that fic where Bella is taken to another planet to help propagate this alien species ( Edward had a tail) but I wonder if there's a meadow in that?

I started skimming as soon as I read 'the most beautiful, circular...'

(I hope you didn't flounce Lissa Bryan's Written in the Stars, I thought that story was great. Maybe another scifi one...)
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I've read it a while ago. Can't remember much. But I didn't flounce it.
And I normally remember if there is something I don't like.

Thanks  :-* I'm definitely going to finish it ill just skim through the lemons.
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I do believe HL has finished, awhile ago actually.
I wanted to ask, in the Twilight books can anyone remember how many times did Bella and Edward actually go to that bloody meadow? It is now my pet peeve. No matter where in the world a twi fic takes place they always somehow find a damn meadow!!! I flounced that fic where Bella is taken to another planet to help propagate this alien species ( Edward had a tail) but I wonder if there's a meadow in that?

Just jumping in quickly (because I am hard at work  :D), but every time I read a meadow scene, I vom a little in my mouth. They could be on a cruise ship, or in the middle of Antarctica, or on the darkside of the moon, and there would still be some bloody meadow!

Perhaps in fanfic world, that meadow is a metaphor - like in Friends, when Monica talks about her virginity being her "precious flower".  :D :D :D
 
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I wanted to ask, in the Twilight books can anyone remember how many times did Bella and Edward actually go to that bloody meadow? It is now my pet peeve. No matter where in the world a twi fic takes place they always somehow find a damn meadow!!! I flounced that fic where Bella is taken to another planet to help propagate this alien species ( Edward had a tail) but I wonder if there's a meadow in that?

This is true. I do appreciate how Wide Awake used the gazebo as their "meadow" and High Anxiety has the tree house. I mean, it's not the same concept, but plays a similar role.
 
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FSoG the movie
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I heard the movie was in post production and was going to be released soon.  Which made no sense to me. But it looked like an announcement from the movie studio.  If it was true, they picked the actors a long time ago. 

Really, though? I just can't see this as much of a movie. And definitely not more than one movie.  Unless it is p0rn.  And then you could have MFHD do the job. Booked will love it!   :D :D :D :D

I love movies and since i loved FSoG, i will definitely be watching it  :)

My cousin and i already "asked" MFHD if he would star in it and he just "laughed"...via twitter... Remember, this reads from the bottom going up to make sense  :D


This was the first time MFHD replied to me, way back in January, so you can all imagine how I was jumping and screaming like a banshee  ;D :D
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