Author Topic: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Three - ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY (Read 943958 times)

Ellachanted · « **on:** March 12, 2013, 10:46 AM »

Thread #3 - We are crazy talkers here!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW!

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of SavanaBlue's great contiuation....

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice

Because we know drypen's watching

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Eacalltheway · « **Reply #4121 on:** May 21, 2013, 07:56 PM »

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Rob got his balls back!!!

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Is it my poor eyesight, or is Rob's truck reminiscent of the pos that Bella drove. Not the same make/model obviously just that it's old and paint is peeling, y'know, crappy looking.

Good for him moving on, it'll be good to see him dating

Eacalltheway · « **Reply #4122 on:** May 21, 2013, 08:06 PM »

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You know you have too many tumblr posts when it takes 20 minutes to find the gif you are looking for. I have almost 20,000 !

Ella, I found you a c cup one.

What is his left hand palming? In the top pic

rdmickey1989 · « **Reply #4123 on:** May 21, 2013, 08:15 PM »

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What is his left hand palming? In the top pic

If memory serves it was his toothpick.

Booked · « **Reply #4124 on:** May 21, 2013, 08:16 PM »

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okay still in the same story. I'm a little slow...

First, Esme says she has the jest of the conversation. Since she was talking about the argument Bella and Edward had, I'm thinking it wasn't supposed to funny. Sigh.

Then Alice shows up in a sequenced gown. Really? Where was it in the sequence? Or may there were multiple versions she was going to switch through?

I really was enjoying this story, but it is beta'd and yet, well they are spelled correctly.

Probably doesn't help that I'm a bit grumpy tonight. $:-\$

I finally finished this last night and i liked it despite all the SPaGs.

however, as Ella pointed out, some of the SPaGs are funny. Not just the common mistakes like me/my but really the wrong use of the words bec it sounds the same:

"I was quickly losing my patients." - there was nothing to lose in the first place bec bella is a writer
"All I'm saying is when I asked him why you would be that upset with him he told me the jest of the story." - she was upset because he told her a joke?

this reminds me of another actorward i read last year with way more SPAGs: Out of Her League by Victoria Sara Cullen
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Again, i still liked both stories but won't be re-reading them anytime soon

I quickly jumped to the one shot rec'd here earlier this month and highly rec it too:
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rdmickey1989 · « **Reply #4125 on:** May 21, 2013, 08:22 PM »

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The fingers! The fingers! Sigh....

Oh he has magical fingers that can do so many things. GAH

Ellachanted · « **Reply #4126 on:** May 21, 2013, 08:25 PM »

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You know you have too many tumblr posts when it takes 20 minutes to find the gif you are looking for. I have almost 20,000 !

Ella, I found you a c cup one.

AAAAHHHHHH!!!!!

Thank you!!!!

The fingers just makes me died.

Ellachanted · « **Reply #4127 on:** May 21, 2013, 08:31 PM »

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I finally finished this last night and i liked it despite all the SPaGs.

however, as Ella pointed out, some of the SPaGs are funny. Not just the common mistakes like me/my but really the wrong use of the words bec it sounds the same:

"I was quickly losing my patients." - there was nothing to lose in the first place bec bella is a writer
"All I'm saying is when I asked him why you would be that upset with him he told me the jest of the story." - she was upset because he told her a joke?

this reminds me of another actorward i read last year with way more SPAGs: Out of Her League by Victoria Sara Cullen
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Again, i still liked both stories but won't be re-reading them anytime soon

I offered to beta the sequel. I told her since I was going to read it anyway, I might as well fix the errors. She said English isn't her first language so her stuff is filled with SPaG errors so she gives her current beta's a workout LOL! She was very nice. I will be helping out.

So hopefully the sequel won't have the errors.

Some of them are pretty funny.

Booked · « **Reply #4128 on:** May 21, 2013, 08:33 PM »

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Is it my poor eyesight, or is Rob's truck reminiscent of the pos that Bella drove. Not the same make/model obviously just that it's old and paint is peeling, y'know, crappy looking.

Good for him moving on, it'll be good to see him dating

I think that's the truck he bought from craigslist. He buys second hand stuff bec he likes to save and to haggle. Such a down to earth guy

Booked · « **Reply #4129 on:** May 21, 2013, 08:35 PM »

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I offered to beta the sequel. I told her since I was going to read it anyway, I might as well fix the errors. She said English isn't her first language so her stuff is filled with SPaG errors so she gives her current beta's a workout LOL! She was very nice. I will be helping out.

So hopefully the sequel won't have the errors.

Some of them are pretty funny.

Yipee! I definitely would read the sequel and outtakes she promised so i "followed" her in fanfiction last night.
Now it makes more sense since english is not her first language.

Am assuming the same applies to her previous betas

rdmickey1989 · « **Reply #4130 on:** May 21, 2013, 08:35 PM »

A few fingerporn vids...

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She loves fingerporn too. So follow her on tumblr.

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Ellachanted · « **Reply #4131 on:** May 21, 2013, 08:36 PM »

So I started this today and have almost finished it. It is different. There are twists. And people are different from what you are expecting. But it is good. So I will rec it It is a twist on Grimm's Fairy Tales - more alongh the lines of Once Upon a Time rather than Disney...

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A Sort of Fairy Tale by Staceleo
A pampered prince in need of redemption. A bitter maiden in search of long lost passion. Can forgiveness and love lead to happily ever after? A modern day fairy tale. AU. Romance/Drama/Horror
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 21 - Words: 58,360 - Reviews: 904 - Updated: 5-21-13 - Published: 12-7-12 - Bella & Edward - Complete

rdmickey1989 · « **Reply #4132 on:** May 21, 2013, 09:00 PM »

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What is his left hand palming? In the top pic

I totally misread your question. He is autographing inflatable boobs.

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ajamm · « **Reply #4133 on:** May 21, 2013, 09:11 PM »

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So I started this today and have almost finished it. It is different. There are twists. And people are different from what you are expecting. But it is good. So I will rec it It is a twist on Grimm's Fairy Tales - more alongh the lines of Once Upon a Time rather than Disney...

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A Sort of Fairy Tale by Staceleo
A pampered prince in need of redemption. A bitter maiden in search of long lost passion. Can forgiveness and love lead to happily ever after? A modern day fairy tale. AU. Romance/Drama/Horror
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 21 - Words: 58,360 - Reviews: 904 - Updated: 5-21-13 - Published: 12-7-12 - Bella & Edward - Complete

How is it horror ? Are there bad parts?

I wanna read it, but I don't watch horror movies, I'm not sure I want to read about it. $:-\$

Alex734 · « **Reply #4134 on:** May 21, 2013, 10:24 PM »

So I have been looking for a story that I read a while ago that is called "The Quiet Couple". So if anybody has it could you please pass it along!

The story is about Bella/Edward and Rosalie/Emmett have a child each and they go to high school. Its kind of based on the Greasers era. Alice is new to the school and dates Jasper, but hes cheating on her with Tanya. BxE and RxEm don't talk to anybody but themselves and ExEm's gang. They hate JacobxJasper because they tried to rape BxR.

Those are some of the key points, so if anybody could help me find it then it would be greatly appreciated. THANK YOU!!

Ellachanted · « **Reply #4135 on:** May 21, 2013, 10:31 PM »

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How is it horror ? Are there bad parts?

I wanna read it, but I don't watch horror movies, I'm not sure I want to read about it. $:-\$

Yeah, there is some horror. But there is an HEA for Edward and Bella.

I don't normally watch horror movies but I used to read a lot of Stephen King. Let's just say....

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I don't think it is worse than anything you might have seen in the Twilight movies. Okay, maybe a little?

Ellachanted · « **Reply #4136 on:** May 21, 2013, 10:40 PM »

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So I have been looking for a story that I read a while ago that is called "The Quiet Couple". So if anybody has it could you please pass it along!

The story is about Bella/Edward and Rosalie/Emmett have a child each and they go to high school. Its kind of based on the Greasers era. Alice is new to the school and dates Jasper, but hes cheating on her with Tanya. BxE and RxEm don't talk to anybody but themselves and ExEm's gang. They hate JacobxJasper because they tried to rape BxR.

Those are some of the key points, so if anybody could help me find it then it would be greatly appreciated. THANK YOU!!

If you are looking for a particular story, you should post this on the 152 thread. That's were we post "help me find this" posts. The ladies over there are pretty good at recognizing stories.

Here is more for the "what do you suggest I read?" "Hey, this is a great story!" "OMG! This author can't write worth beans!"

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Astro2009 · « **Reply #4137 on:** May 22, 2013, 01:37 AM »

A quick pimp . . .

Amazing new fic by lellabeth - we know her as . . .

. . . Laurendeplume!

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December 22 is the only day I let myself think of you. I don't know if you remember, but I'd do anything to forget.

Booked · « **Reply #4138 on:** May 22, 2013, 01:47 AM »

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How is it horror ? Are there bad parts?

I wanna read it, but I don't watch horror movies, I'm not sure I want to read about it. $:-\$

Same here! I don't watch scary movies or tv shows. walking dead? Never saw an episode and quickly changes the channel even if it is just an ad for it. $:-\$
Probably why i also don't read much paranormal stuff.

Booked · « **Reply #4139 on:** May 22, 2013, 01:51 AM »

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A quick pimp . . .

Amazing new fic by lellabeth - we know her as . . . . . . Laurendeplume!

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December 22 is the only day I let myself think of you. I don't know if you remember, but I'd do anything to forget.

Congrats Lauren! can't wait to read it!

Eacalltheway · « **Reply #4140 on:** May 22, 2013, 03:40 AM »

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I totally misread your question. He is autographing inflatable boobs.

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That boy is toying with us. He is totaling grabbing that boob. Mr mischief maker....naughty boy.

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