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Re: Twilight Fanfiction - Discussion and Recommendations 2017 version
« Reply #201 on: February 19, 2017, 04:56 PM »
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I think there's a forward slash missing in the last bracket section. It should look like:
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Thank you that worked. Do yo know how to make is smaller?
 
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction - Discussion and Recommendations 2017 version
« Reply #202 on: February 19, 2017, 05:16 PM »
Hi all! Hoping somone cal help me! I just downloaded Tara Sue Me's three fics and wanted to double check what order I should read them in? Thanks for the help  :) <3
 
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction - Discussion and Recommendations 2017 version
« Reply #203 on: February 19, 2017, 05:28 PM »
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Thank you that worked. Do yo know how to make is smaller?

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Hi all! Hoping somone cal help me! I just downloaded Tara Sue Me's three fics and wanted to double check what order I should read them in? Thanks for the help  :) <3
The Submissive
The Dominant
The Training
(FYI: After she published those, she added more books to the original trilogy).
 
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction - Discussion and Recommendations 2017 version
« Reply #204 on: February 19, 2017, 05:35 PM »
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The Submissive
The Dominant
The Training
(FYI: After she published those, she added more books to the original trilogy).

Well shoot I guess I'll have to read those then but after I read the fanfictions first of course haha. Thanks for your help!!
 
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction - Discussion and Recommendations 2017 version
« Reply #205 on: February 19, 2017, 06:10 PM »
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Well shoot I guess I'll have to read those then but after I read the fanfictions first of course haha. Thanks for your help!!

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Is your photo of Jace? I just read City of Bones, which I liked and jumped into City of Ashes, but only got about half way through before I started something else. Does it get better? Part of me wants to tough it out because I want the reward.
 
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction - Discussion and Recommendations 2017 version
« Reply #206 on: February 19, 2017, 06:16 PM »
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Thank you that worked. Do yo know how to make is smaller?
It the first [ img ]  I think if you add something like img=100 it will make it smaller. 


I just read a couple of cute OS from TallulahBelle. -
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Working retail during the Holidays leaves Bella Swan with an addiction for a hot cup of Peppermint Mocha. When the maker of the perfect mocha becomes ill, who will fill her steaming cup?
Rated: Fiction T - English - Humor/Romance - Bella, Edward - Words: 7,258 - Reviews: 136 - Favs: 441 - Follows: 149 - Published: Jan 20, 2013 - Status: Complete - id: 8928656

It was really cute.  Food seems to give Bella verbal vomit.

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Bella is looking forward to Spring Break as it means time spent with her personal mocha-making Chefward, and the new spring menu at the Coffee Nook. Sequel to "Peppermint Mocha." Written for Fandom for Philippines.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,139 - Reviews: 52 - Favs: 201 - Follows: 76 - Published: Feb 14, 2014 - Bella, Edward - Complete

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Bella is a powerful telekinetic, escaped from a government research facility. With her is Edward, her guardian angel, sent to earth to protect her. Can they find safety? Can Bella love this extraordinary creature? OOC/AU, Rated M.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 42 - Words: 184,527 - Reviews: 3222 - Favs: 2,349 - Follows: 1,225 - Updated: Feb 11, 2012 - Published: Dec 1, 2011 - Bella, Edward - Complete

It is a little SciFi and a little fantasy.  But really good.  Edward is an angel.  E/B have an HEA.  Not all the characters make it though.  :(

Okay, some good Vampwards -
Broken Angel - I actually like the 2nd, 3rd, and 4th books better than the first.  A lot of that is because Jacob is abusive at the beginning. And Bella and Edward have to work through a lot of issues dealing with his leaving.  But it starts with him coming back after 2 years rather than right away.  You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login

Drotuno also wrote Masen Manor - Bella saw her dad get killed and her throat was slashed.  She doesn't speak.  Edward is a "ghost" at her new school.  You will love Leah who is a gypsy who can tell the future. Rose and Emmett are humans.  Really satisfying part near the end. Edward is very sweet.
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I'm trying to remember some of the other ones I've read recently.  They are probably in my posts.  I usually mention Vampward.

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Re: Twilight Fanfiction - Discussion and Recommendations 2017 version
« Reply #207 on: February 19, 2017, 06:55 PM »
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No problem. The original trilogy is one of my favorite series. I haven't read the published versions yet, as I was waiting for it to complete, but I think it's going to be ongoing since book 10 is expected in August. You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login

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Is your photo of Jace? I just read City of Bones, which I liked and jumped into City of Ashes, but only got about half way through before I started something else. Does it get better? Part of me wants to tough it out because I want the reward.
Yes the pics are of Dominic Sherwood as Jace. I have the first 4 books in the series but haven't actually read them yet. I haven't been able to pull myself away from Edward & Bella long enough. My son borrowed City of Bones so, once he is done, maybe I will be able to get into reading it. I watched the movie based on City of Bones, and it was ok, but I really love the Netflix series based on the books called Shadow Hunters. I am anxiously waiting for Tuesday so that I can watch the next episode.
 
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction - Discussion and Recommendations 2017 version
« Reply #208 on: February 19, 2017, 10:48 PM »
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I read Kulti a few days ago and I don't care what anyone says for me Sal was Bella and Kulti was Edward, I refuse to acknowledge they are their own characters especially because I read the one shots.

Anyways that got me thinking are there any fics out that have Edward or Bella from other parts of the world?
 
I have read a lot of fanfic and I don't recall any fic that had a character that was from other part of the world besides the usual.

And by usual I mean brittish, aussie etc...


Have you read Brazilian Chocolate by AwsomeSauce76?  I haven't read it yet, but it features a Brazilian Bella.

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There is also This Side of the Equator by jaxington.  In this one Edward is British, but he and Bella first meet in Chile, and then again lator when he moves to Forks as an exchange student in the class that Bella is teaching.

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Re: Twilight Fanfiction - Discussion and Recommendations 2017 version
« Reply #209 on: February 20, 2017, 05:25 AM »
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Bella is a powerful telekinetic, escaped from a government research facility. With her is Edward, her guardian angel, sent to earth to protect her. Can they find safety? Can Bella love this extraordinary creature? OOC/AU, Rated M.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 42 - Words: 184,527 - Reviews: 3222 - Favs: 2,349 - Follows: 1,225 - Updated: Feb 11, 2012 - Published: Dec 1, 2011 - Bella, Edward - Complete

It is a little SciFi and a little fantasy.  But really good.  Edward is an angel.  E/B have an HEA.  Not all the characters make it though.  :(

Okay, some good Vampwards -
Broken Angel - I actually like the 2nd, 3rd, and 4th books better than the first.  A lot of that is because Jacob is abusive at the beginning. And Bella and Edward have to work through a lot of issues dealing with his leaving.  But it starts with him coming back after 2 years rather than right away.  You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login

Drotuno also wrote Masen Manor - Bella saw her dad get killed and her throat was slashed.  She doesn't speak.  Edward is a "ghost" at her new school.  You will love Leah who is a gypsy who can tell the future. Rose and Emmett are humans.  Really satisfying part near the end. Edward is very sweet.
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I'm trying to remember some of the other ones I've read recently.  They are probably in my posts.  I usually mention Vampward.

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Loved Mason manner, and read the first in the angels series, was debating on continuiung but don't remember why I didn't.
Will def try The Better Angels

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Is your photo of Jace? I just read City of Bones, which I liked and jumped into City of Ashes, but only got about half way through before I started something else. Does it get better? Part of me wants to tough it out because I want the reward.
Original fanfic trio is def one I enjoyed a lot, but haven't tried to read the published versions.

I liked the books of City of Bones series, but couldn't stay with the show Shadow Hunters although liked more than the movie
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction - Discussion and Recommendations 2017 version
« Reply #210 on: February 20, 2017, 01:57 PM »
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Thank you that worked. Do yo know how to make is smaller?


You need to put a space then "width=350" in the first square brackets after the "img":

 [ img width=350]http://then the link then the second set of square brackets[ /img]

Remove the space between [ img and [ /. I had to put it otherwise it won't show, it was trying to read it as a picture
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« Reply #211 on: February 20, 2017, 11:22 PM »
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Loved Mason manner, and read the first in the angels series, was debating on continuiung but don't remember why I didn't.
Will def try The Better Angels
Do read the rest of the series.  The 1st book was always my least favorite of the series. 
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction - Discussion and Recommendations 2017 version
« Reply #212 on: February 20, 2017, 11:32 PM »
Ella, did your area get hit hard by the rain?

I've also started the Angel series. I'm about halfway through the first story.
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« Reply #213 on: February 21, 2017, 05:00 AM »
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Do read the rest of the series.  The 1st book was always my least favorite of the series.

Will do, thanks girl
 
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« Reply #214 on: February 21, 2017, 09:45 AM »
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Ella, did your area get hit hard by the rain?

I've also started the Angel series. I'm about halfway through the first story.
I'm visiting my parents in northern California. There was some flooding in the area, but not where they live fortunately. There's been some crazy weather in Texas too - but you are okay?  What I was hearing was in western Texas only?

I'm a big Vampward fan, so I loved the Angel series. It gets better after she is turned. Plus her Bella is a lot stronger and more like Bella from Gravity. I actually enjoy Bella and Jasper's friendship in the series.  Though sometimes the rest of the family treating her like the "baby" can get annoying. Considering she turns out to be the strongest of them all in a way.
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« Reply #215 on: February 21, 2017, 11:32 AM »
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I'm visiting my parents in northern California. There was some flooding in the area, but not where they live fortunately. There's been some crazy weather in Texas too - but you are okay?  What I was hearing was in western Texas only?

I'm a big Vampward fan, so I loved the Angel series. It gets better after she is turned. Plus her Bella is a lot stronger and more like Bella from Gravity. I actually enjoy Bella and Jasper's friendship in the series.  Though sometimes the rest of the family treating her like the "baby" can get annoying. Considering she turns out to be the strongest of them all in a way.

Glad to hear all is well.  Same here.  There are some places that were hit by tornadoes and I was a little worried due to all the lightning that was associated with the storm system as it came across Texas.  However, by the time it reached us, the electrical and tornado component had calmed down.  We had a full wet day, but no flooding, no high winds, no real problems.  It was a nice change since we've had quite a bit of area flooding over the last couple of years.

I've been on a drotuno kick lately, but I have not yet finished the first story in the Angel series.  It's okay so far.  I'm also reading a couple of HP stories which have more of my attention at the moment.  But I skip around since I'm also re-reading Master of the Universe, mostly because there's so much about the "getting back together" portion of the story that I don't remember.
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« Reply #216 on: February 21, 2017, 01:47 PM »
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I've been on a drotuno kick lately, but I have not yet finished the first story in the Angel series.  It's okay so far.  But I skip around since I'm also re-reading Master of the Universe, mostly because there's so much about the "getting back together" portion of the story that I don't remember.

I am actually re-reading MoTU, didn't think I would but wanted to after seeing the movie.

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I'm a big Vampward fan, so I loved the Angel series. It gets better after she is turned. Plus her Bella is a lot stronger and more like Bella from Gravity. I actually enjoy Bella and Jasper's friendship in the series.  Though sometimes the rest of the family treating her like the "baby" can get annoying. Considering she turns out to be the strongest of them all in a way.
Okay, its been awhile, can you give me quick summary of the 1st if you don't mind? I have read a lot in between
 
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction - Discussion and Recommendations 2017 version
« Reply #217 on: February 21, 2017, 07:19 PM »
I'm trying to read Full Chroma by suddenlysandi and dear god.... i like the plot but trying to read it it's like somebody trowing stuff at me and trying to catch everything. There's a lot going on, I'm not sure if I should keep reading.

Yep that got too crazy too fast.
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« Reply #218 on: February 21, 2017, 08:47 PM »
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Glad to hear all is well.  Same here.  There are some places that were hit by tornadoes and I was a little worried due to all the lightning that was associated with the storm system as it came across Texas.  However, by the time it reached us, the electrical and tornado component had calmed down.  We had a full wet day, but no flooding, no high winds, no real problems.  It was a nice change since we've had quite a bit of area flooding over the last couple of years.

I've been on a drotuno kick lately, but I have not yet finished the first story in the Angel series.  It's okay so far.  I'm also reading a couple of HP stories which have more of my attention at the moment.  But I skip around since I'm also re-reading Master of the Universe, mostly because there's so much about the "getting back together" portion of the story that I don't remember.
I don't really like the 1st part of MoTU. 
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That's my take on it. 

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I am actually re-reading MoTU, didn't think I would but wanted to after seeing the movie.
Okay, its been awhile, can you give me quick summary of the 1st if you don't mind? I have read a lot in between

Broken Angel summary - contains spoilers
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That's probably a very brief highlight of it.  I guess I like it because it feels like a continuation of the original. Bella and Edward are always together once the get back together at the beginning. And there are a lot of fun family times like karaoke, bets, cheating at games, etc.... This continues into the second one that picks up a few years later with new adventures. There is a war kind of thing in the second. Don't want to give too much away.  Bella and Edward discover their connection is more than a normal connection making it difficult for them to be apart. This becomes a big thing in the third story. Edward decides he wants to be a doctor again, but the hours end up being a problem.  The fourth one is totally different in that it is pretty much all about a "haunted" house they buy.

Drotuno adds characters that you end up loving as much as the Cullens.    ;D
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I'm trying to read Full Chroma by suddenlysandi and dear god.... i like the plot but trying to read it it's like somebody trowing stuff at me and trying to catch everything. There's a lot going on, I'm not sure if I should keep reading.

Yep that got too crazy too fast.
I find I either love her stories or find them totally annoying. They are definitely different. And sometimes really hard to follow.  I haven't read Full Chroma yet. And? There may be a reason for it.
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« Reply #220 on: February 21, 2017, 09:57 PM »
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I don't really like the 1st part of MoTU. 
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That's my take on it. 

The thing that bugs me about the first part of MOTU is that Edward keeps talking about how he can be trusted not to push her more than she can take.  But he totally ignores all of his own rules, common sense, and shows he CAN'T be trusted not to push her more than she can take.
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