Thank you guys so much for reading my prologue. I know I have really bad grammar. I am more of a math expert than a English one, but with the help of my English major friend I think I do just fine. I planning on publishing it on smashword.com when it is finish!! I just wanted to know if you guys like the story so far. I am in college and I have finals next week, but after I'm done I'm going to be writing the rest of my story. If you guys really like it then I post the rest when I am finish!!!!
You guys wrote nice feedback, even you jessadia. It wasn't too harsh!!!!