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Flounced Fics (Twilight fanfiction)
« on: January 14, 2013, 04:02 PM »
Ok folks, list em here. Fics that you have flounced, and why you flounced them. Help keep others apprised of the good, the bad, and the badly edited. :-*

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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #81 on: January 17, 2013, 08:11 AM »
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My most recent flounce is My Mate, My Love by BobbisMomma

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When Edward see's his mate nothing matters but her. He will do anything for her and will give up anything for her.. For his life is now all about her. NO ONE better think badly about her. NO ONE better get in his way. Nothing will stop him from claiming what is his.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 10 - Words: 94,417 - Reviews: 168 - Favs: 174 - Follows: 167 - Updated: 12-16-12 - Published: 07-29-12 - Status: Complete - id: 8373109

Got sucked in from the summary and was met with bad grammar, bad story flow and ridiculous characters. All of characters are above and beyond normal that it's laughable. I stuck with it till the end but I regret doing so.

Possessiveward MUST be writtne properly for me to enjoy.
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #82 on: January 17, 2013, 09:07 AM »
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I haven't read this yet. I don't know how I feel about Edward being a chef. It's like the yoga instructor. Not for me.

My God, yes. I think it's because, for me at least, those roles are too.....nice (?) for him. At least for the characterization of those roles. I need E to be an asshole lol
 
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #83 on: January 17, 2013, 09:13 AM »
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My God, yes. I think it's because, for me at least, those roles are too.....nice (?) for him. At least for the characterization of those roles. I need E to be an asshole lol
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #84 on: January 17, 2013, 09:55 AM »
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My God, yes. I think it's because, for me at least, those roles are too.....nice (?) for him. At least for the characterization of those roles. I need E to be an asshole lol

I legit love you... are you my sista from another mista?
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #85 on: January 17, 2013, 10:25 AM »
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I always hated that Meyer didn't complete Midnight Sun, so I hunted some fics up. But just like with Twilight, I love the beginning parts, the falling in love, but I always start to tune out once James and co come into play, which is happening once again. It SHOULDN'T happen, because Edward's part is where things finally splits off and I get some new info, but my mind is wandering.

Also, anyone that complains about Meyer's writing needs to read something like this- half written by Meyer (because this one has all the original MS included) and half written by someone else. At least Meyer is good with spelling. This woman keeps using "Teethe", and she's not talking about what a baby does! Bella brushing her teethe, Edward not wanting her too close to his Teethe. Who DOES that?? There are lots of other spelling errors, it's teethe that sticks out because it's happened a LOT.
 
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #86 on: January 17, 2013, 10:41 AM »
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Summary:Bella's brother Emmett has lots of friends, only one though that Bella sees as more than just a family friend. Bella/Edward OOC. M for lemons and language
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Humor - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 17 - Words: 73,822 - Reviews: 231 - Favs: 408 - Follows: 322 - Updated: 01-25-12 - Published: 07-11-11 - Status: Complete - id: 7167970

This another fic I flounced the other week as the writing was pretty immature, there were parts that were wrote in text "speak" i.e: I'll b there 4 it instead of I'll be there for it.
Putting this in a text is okay, but not in a fic and the author has a serious obsession with tumblr as she kept mentioning it.
I love tumblr as much as the next person (for obvious reasons  ;) ) but I don't need to read a couple of pages of how Bella and her friends goes on tumblr to see funny pics every few chapters.  :)
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #87 on: January 17, 2013, 10:44 AM »
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You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login] My Brother's Freinds by TheSparksSoApparent[/url]
Summary:Bella's brother Emmett has lots of friends, only one though that Bella sees as more than just a family friend. Bella/Edward OOC. M for lemons and language
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Humor - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 17 - Words: 73,822 - Reviews: 231 - Favs: 408 - Follows: 322 - Updated: 01-25-12 - Published: 07-11-11 - Status: Complete - id: 7167970

This another fic I flounced the other week as the writing was pretty immature, there were parts that were wrote in text "speak" i.e: I'll b there 4 it instead of I'll be there for it.
Putting this in a text is okay, but not in a fic and the author has a serious obsession with tumblr as she kept mentioning it.
I love tumblr as much as the next person (for obvious reasons  ;) ) but I don't need to read a couple of pages of how Bella and her friends goes on tumblr to see funny pics every few chapters.  :)

i hate text speak. "shutter"
 
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #88 on: January 17, 2013, 10:54 AM »
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i hate text speak. "shutter"
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #89 on: January 17, 2013, 11:40 AM »
The other topic reminded me of yet another fic I flounced recently.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.

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I understand the idea behind the story, but it is a very heavy theme that needs a very skilled writer. Bella (and pretty much everyone else) seemed very naive and badly conceived as a character.
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #90 on: January 17, 2013, 11:47 AM »
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I haven't read this yet. I don't know how I feel about Edward being a chef. It's like the yoga instructor. Not for me.

Edward isn't a chef in this story.  The author just uses their name and the play on words in a misleading fashion. It's really about how Edward's attraction to Bella was really all about her smell and that's it... until it's not.  Again, it's extreme in length and goes off on an other worldly tangent that doesn't help the plot.

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What if Edward lied to everyone, & it really was all about Bella's scent? AU of entire TS on how, why, & when ExB fell in love using a completely different plot. Romance, hilarity, mystery and angst. Rated M. Canon Couples. Dark Edward, Lots of Snark
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Mystery - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 83 - Words: 1,207,586 - Reviews: 2,318 - Favs: 862 - Follows: 513 - Updated: 09-21-11 - Published: 11-29-08 - Status: Complete - id: 4684117
 
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #91 on: January 17, 2013, 01:01 PM »
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I legit love you... are you my sista from another mista?

I love that someone else loves the same type of Edward. And has a serious aversion to sweetward and fluff....avoided at all costs over here lol.

ETA: fixed a typo, effing autocorrect
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #92 on: January 17, 2013, 01:04 PM »
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I love that someone else loves the same type of Edward. And gas a serious aversion to sweetward and fluff....avoided at all costs over here lol.

Yep! The more a sshole, jerkface, possessive, dickward the better. Mixed with angst *salivates* I wanna fic like this!
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« Reply #93 on: January 17, 2013, 01:18 PM »
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Yep! The more a sshole, jerkface, possessive, dickward the better. Mixed with angst *salivates* I wanna fic like this!

Shit, possessiveward (and of course possessive Jasper) are my weakness.

Now I want a heartfail w dickward
 
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #94 on: January 17, 2013, 01:22 PM »
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I started reading EP because so many people rec'ed it, but I only reached Chapter 15. I'm not sure what exactly went wrong, I think I got afraid of the length mostly. Sometimes stories don't stick with me.

I'm trying sooo hard to finish this fic. I've skipped a couple of chapters and I take long breaks between them, because the angst and the style of writing makes everything seem so depressing. I think it's time to say goodbye!  :D

I wouldn't blame you in the least.
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #95 on: January 17, 2013, 03:32 PM »
Lose The One You Love
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San Francisco lawyer, Bella Swan, struggles to cope with the loss of her long-term boyfriend, Riley. Lonely and grief-stricken, she loses herself in a string of one-night stands, convinced she'll never find love again. Museum curator, Edward Cullen, may be the man to change Bella's mind. Could he be her second chance for love?
 
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Angst - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 26 - Words: 127,779 - Reviews: 593 - Favs: 255 - Follows: 382 - Updated: 01-17-13 - Published: 08-02-12 - id: 8385542
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i couldnt stand how this bella treated edward anymore. what a bi.tch!!!!
not to mention her "grief" was self imposed. shit or get off the pot already.
 
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« Reply #96 on: January 17, 2013, 03:35 PM »
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Lose The One You Love
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Author: Discordia81 PM
San Francisco lawyer, Bella Swan, struggles to cope with the loss of her long-term boyfriend, Riley. Lonely and grief-stricken, she loses herself in a string of one-night stands, convinced she'll never find love again. Museum curator, Edward Cullen, may be the man to change Bella's mind. Could he be her second chance for love?
 
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Angst - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 26 - Words: 127,779 - Reviews: 593 - Favs: 255 - Follows: 382 - Updated: 01-17-13 - Published: 08-02-12 - id: 8385542
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i couldnt stand how this bella treated edward anymore. what a bi.tch!!!!
not to mention her "grief" was self imposed. shit or get off the pot already.

Oooooh thanks! I was eyeing this one. Now I shall flick it :)
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« Reply #97 on: January 17, 2013, 03:36 PM »
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I wouldn't blame you in the least.

:( I love this fic. I've read it so many times. Just love  :sparklyheart:
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #98 on: January 17, 2013, 03:42 PM »
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:( I love this fic. I've read it so many times. Just love  :sparklyheart:

I love it too.  I agree that I was apprehensive to start it, but once I bought an ereader I dove right in, and as long as it is; I read it more times than I can remember.  This is my favorite fic ever.
 
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« Reply #99 on: January 17, 2013, 03:44 PM »
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I love it too.  I agree that I was apprehensive to start it, but once I bought an ereader I dove right in, and as long as it is; I read it more times than I can remember.  This is my favorite fic ever.

Mmhmm, I love MPW... one of the best E's written.
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« Reply #100 on: January 17, 2013, 05:23 PM »
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Mmhmm, I love MPW... one of the best E's written.

I have a killer migraine so that may be impairing my thinking ability right now but MPW?
 
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