Question of the day: why can't authors give good description of their story for readers?? Check this summary: Summary: “Perfect balance is like a razor’s edge; it can be found only in the Self.” – Sri Sri Ravi Shankar.

Have you read Shields of Power?  You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login

Bella already knew about Vampires and has her own power.  It is good, but does have writing issues (grammar/spelling)

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Bella is a time traveler. Sort of. She always ends up in something related to Edward.  It is good. There is a bit of an angsty twist.

There are probably more we've talked about in this thread.

I've been doing some browsing in other fandoms recently.  I read a story recently that was, overall, pretty decent and the SPaGs were relatively inoffensive except for one that really jerked me out of the moment.

The woman, in the throes of passion, was called wonton (instead of wanton).  Sorry, but the Chinese food reference just doesn't do it for me.  I guess some people have food fetishes and might find that hot, but it's not my thing.

When you could still cut & paste copy from fanfiction.net, I used to keep a running, personal excerpt list of some hilarious malapropisms.

I figured that although they took me right out of the story, at least I could always have a good chuckle.

Love, love, love absurdity.

So, your fortune cookie: "She who shares the wonton desires of others will never be hungry for belly laughter herself." 

I wish they did that too! I hate reading a fic and then finding out its a vamp story, which I dont like reading. I love my AH

And you can cut and paste, but only on the mobile version of FFnet.  If you click that little icon that looks like a battery near the top, it gives you the mobile version.  Or you can replace the www with m.

Vamp Story?  *ears perk up*  Is it any good?  Do you have a link?   

Thank you!  I'm going to look at it now....