A Delicate Line by DarkNNerdyYou are not allowed to view links.
Register or LoginI didn't flounce, read the entire thing. And was PISSED with the ending. This is labeled as suspense/humor and while there are some funny parts this fic is horror/tragedy. Hands down.There were too many plot lines left unresolved...almost all were unresolved. And she kills off who the reader is lead to believe is Bella....though it's NEVER stated who the hell died. And the manner in which Bella died (if it was her) was a total This is one of the first fics where I've been truly disappointed by the ending after such a good build up for 100K words.
Anything by this author. I just can't...I'm sorry. When I once reviewed and suggested getting a beta, or at least a pre-reader who could help with her English, I got such a nasty response (more like a rant) and then she pulled the story anyway. It gave me whiplash! You are not allowed to view links.
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Register or LoginSins of My PastAuthor: content1 PMBella was left by Edward to clean up the ruins of her life after his betrayal. What happens when Edward finds out that not all was as it seems. What are the consequences of his sins and what will he do to get her back? I heard lot about this fic before but recently in other thread some one mentioned it so tried.Needless to say after 4 chapter i flounced it. infact if you read in 1st paragraph of second chapter ,You can easily say that writing of this story is completely immuture & stupid & unrealisitcs. Characters are so unnatural that i dont have words. Sorry but you are not allowed to view spoiler contents.P.S:- its has 88 somthing chapter, after reading 4 chapter i wanted kill someone I dont know how can anyone read 88 chapter of this mindless story.I guess others can read since it has like 10 k reviews. P.P.S:- bella having edward's baby & than their reunion after years kind of stories are always cringeworthy. Hardly any author does justice to concept.anything close to perfect i have read is Secret & lies. even SAL has some flaw still it is well-develop story.
I flounced that as well.So nice to see that some people think the same as I do.
I'm going with anything written by mamasutra. Don't get me wrong I don't think that she is a terrible writer , however, all she writes about is cheating and it's mostly Edward ALWAYS cheating on Bella. I actually wrote her a message because she recently wrote a story that was flagged edward&bella edward&leah. Of course Edward is cheating on Bella with Leah (which btw makes my stomach roll but to each it's own). I asked her to please mark a story Edward & Leah, so I know to stay away from it. I personally just took her off my alerts because honestly I don't mind a cheating story. But really that's all she writes. And after a while how many stories can a person really read about cheating from the same author it's like all the same.
Ok I'm glad because I thought it was just me.
No, I kept trying to give her stories a chance but they're too depressing.
me too. I tried to read 1 of her story than i read somewhere that its not HEA for EB. Seriously you start 1st chapter with edward cheating than last chapter they are with diff partner. What is the point of such story?its only angst,angst & angst.Her story pull me into depression mood everytime i try to read.So i just avoid it.
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