Yes there is plot. Manchu, as he is nicknamed, I have threatened if she won't rent him, I'm gonna kidnap him.  I won't give it away, but you do need to push through the pron. it's all Bella is capable of at the moment and he has such swoon worthy qualities. The author gives you a small morsel of him each chp.

Just my kind of man thus far.

I really liked her other fic. So I was disappointed it was just pron.
I'll try it again, maybe wait a couple more chapters.

I know right?
If the fic was written by I man I could understand. But for a women to think that this is ok, not only that, she wrote that that was the perfect first date.

No wonder I'm single.

Wait! Did he have sex with her in the club?  If he didn't, that makes her special, right??  Of course it was the perfect first date.  No wonder you are still single.  *looks for sarcasm sign & realizes there isn't one*   

They were about to when James came in. Bella's says he wasn't surprise to see Edward there getting busy, that's when he tells her about the other women.
I think the have sex in the car.

Oooo sex in the car on a first date.  Yeah, definitely hot.  Okay, I do have to admit if I were a um few years younger and more flexible? I might do Edward in the car on the first date.  But probably not after he told me about all the other girls he f*cked in the club 2 min previously

Yes there is plot. Manchu, as he is nicknamed, I have threatened if she won't rent him, I'm gonna kidnap him.  I won't give it away, but you do need to push through the pron. it's all Bella is capable of at the moment and he has such swoon worthy qualities. The author gives you a small morsel of him each chp.

Just my kind of man thus far.

I really like Edward in this one.  It's Bella that needs a good kick in the a$s.

Wait! Did he have sex with her in the club?  If he didn't, that makes her special, right??  Of course it was the perfect first date.  No wonder you are still single.  *looks for sarcasm sign & realizes there isn't one*   

They were about to when James came in. Bella's says he wasn't surprise to see Edward there getting busy, that's when he tells her about the other women.
I think the have sex in the car.

Awwww - this fic sounds just like a fairytale!

 

I decided to leave the homeless fics for a bit  and read something that's been on my TBR list for ages.
So I'm reading You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login by capitalab and it's a good read but there are times when I want to beat the sh*t out of Edward  and tell him to man up as he's really depressing.
I love angst and this has plenty of it, but every chapter that is Epov - it just seems to be Edward going on and on about what a crap Dad he was/is. 
This has started to get on my nerves a little but I did look at the end so I know there is a HEA in sight. 

I saw this today and thought I would share it with you ladies.

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I know!  I love these! 

Aren't you on twitter?


Wo else has twitter here?

Me.  limomx2_kim

I already follow you!

LOl yeah I know but you asked who has a twitter acct so i just answered.  You did not say that you have not followed yet.      

I just finished reading Pocket Change by aWhiteBlankPage and am highly recommending it. 
The summary is a bit vague

"I know of three kinds of change: the kind that jangles around in your pocket, the kind that happens slowly, every moment of every day, and the kind that blows you away in an instant."

It's told from alternate POVs and both Bella and Edward are broken and tormented but the story is so lovely and written very well. And an HEA. 

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