Author Topic: Flounced Fics (Twilight fanfiction) (Read 287016 times)

Matron · « **on:** January 14, 2013, 04:02 PM »

Ok folks, list em here. Fics that you have flounced, and why you flounced them. Help keep others apprised of the good, the bad, and the badly edited.

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L watts · « **Reply #61 on:** January 16, 2013, 04:06 PM »

These two:

Fall to Ruin One Day by sleepyvalentina (great writer)
-- flounced when Carlisle turns out to be Edward's half brother. Really?

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Stolen-Secrets-and-Shattered-Dreams, by FoxxyJ (really liked this one for many chapters)
-- flounced when Bella prostitutes herself (nasty gross sex). I don't care how bad Charlie's hospital bills were.

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deranged_dreamer · « **Reply #62 on:** January 16, 2013, 04:08 PM »

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Stolen-Secrets-and-Shattered-Dreams, by FoxxyJ (really liked this one for many chapters)
-- flounced when Bella prostitutes herself (nasty gross sex). I don't care how bad Charlie's hospital bills were.

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i second that. i actually dont like any fic with prostitution on it.
it always seems they are trying to make it ok, that it is not a big deal.
big ole prude here

lucylu0508 · « **Reply #63 on:** January 16, 2013, 07:56 PM »

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Stolen-Secrets-and-Shattered-Dreams, by FoxxyJ (really liked this one for many chapters)
-- flounced when Bella prostitutes herself (nasty gross sex). I don't care how bad Charlie's hospital bills were.

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I flounced this one as well....Bella prostituting herself sealed the deal for me (and with Mike?

).

I also got bored as hell with it.

lucylu0508 · « **Reply #64 on:** January 16, 2013, 08:42 PM »

Amor Prohibido » by ecaniaga reviews
Set straight after Bella's change. Jasper helps Bella adjust to newborn life and feelings begin to develop. But what happens to the future, when the past collides with the present in a violent clash? Rated M for later chapters JasperxBella *Now Complete*
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 52 - Words: 113,980 - Reviews: 1213 - Updated: 9-7-08 - Published: 6-28-08 - Bella & Jasper - Complete

I cannot believe the number of reviews this has. After i was able to get past the EXTREMELY excessive amount of ! that were in the first couple of pages, i ended up flouncing because of the terrible grammar and spelling. I mean....rap instead of wrap? I'm picturing Bella busting out with a Nicki Minaj rap and she hugs Jasper. That was the last thing i read.

Ellachanted · « **Reply #65 on:** January 16, 2013, 08:58 PM »

I always wonder if it counts as a flounce when I get distracted and forget I'm reading something.

Oooo was that a bunny??

Um yeah, stupid ADD

Because I have flounced a lot of stories if that is the case....

Though sometimes? If I find them again? yeah, I finish them. Or get distracted again

Right now I'm trying to read It Isn't Stalking If You Don't Get Caught
Edward, Emmett and Jasper travel across the border to meet starlets Bella, Alice and Rosalie at a fan convention. What antics will these fanboys come up with as they prepare to meet the girls of their dreams? Collab. btw. JustForkIt & Little Miss Whitlock
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 40 - Words: 209,597 - Reviews: 1170 - Updated: 11-23-11 - Published: 8-2-09 - Complete
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It's supposed to be funny - well making fun of stalking fans - but so far, I'm just bored. Not my idea of humor, I guess. And I'm on chapter 3, but I may be moving on soon.

Matron · « **Reply #66 on:** January 16, 2013, 09:02 PM »

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I always wonder if it counts as a flounce when I get distracted and forget I'm reading something. Oooo was that a bunny??

Um yeah, stupid ADD

Because I have flounced a lot of stories if that is the case....

Though sometimes? If I find them again? yeah, I finish them. Or get distracted again

Right now I'm trying to read It Isn't Stalking If You Don't Get Caught
Edward, Emmett and Jasper travel across the border to meet starlets Bella, Alice and Rosalie at a fan convention. What antics will these fanboys come up with as they prepare to meet the girls of their dreams? Collab. btw. JustForkIt & Little Miss Whitlock
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 40 - Words: 209,597 - Reviews: 1170 - Updated: 11-23-11 - Published: 8-2-09 - Complete
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It's supposed to be funny - we
ll making fun of stalking fans - but so far, I'm just bored. Not my idea of humor, I guess. And I'm on chapter 3, but I may be moving on soon.

Yeah I've wandered off of a few too, I don't think that's a flounce. A flounce is when you'd have chucked it at a wall if it were a paperback.

RIP Jax Teller · « **Reply #67 on:** January 16, 2013, 09:07 PM »

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I always wonder if it counts as a flounce when I get distracted and forget I'm reading something. Oooo was that a bunny??

Um yeah, stupid ADD

Because I have flounced a lot of stories if that is the case....

Though sometimes? If I find them again? yeah, I finish them. Or get distracted again

Right now I'm trying to read It Isn't Stalking If You Don't Get Caught
Edward, Emmett and Jasper travel across the border to meet starlets Bella, Alice and Rosalie at a fan convention. What antics will these fanboys come up with as they prepare to meet the girls of their dreams? Collab. btw. JustForkIt & Little Miss Whitlock
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 40 - Words: 209,597 - Reviews: 1170 - Updated: 11-23-11 - Published: 8-2-09 - Complete
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It's supposed to be funny - well making fun of stalking fans - but so far, I'm just bored. Not my idea of humor, I guess. And I'm on chapter 3, but I may be moving on soon.

I think I read two chapters of that, um yeah...I don't flounce many fics but this one just.....no couldn't keep reading.

Ellachanted · « **Reply #68 on:** January 16, 2013, 09:12 PM »

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Yeah I've wandered off of a few too, I don't think that's a flounce. A flounce is when you'd have chucked it at a wall if it were a paperback.

Okay, then I rarely flounce. Maybe Mamasutra's stuff.

Mostly? I just get easily bored and someone rec's something or a WIP I'm reading updates? Yeah, I'm gone.

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I think I read two chapters of that, um yeah...I don't flounce many fics but this one just.....no couldn't keep reading.

Glad I'm not the only one...I kept wanting to read it, but .....

summergirl1976 · « **Reply #69 on:** January 16, 2013, 10:08 PM »

THANKS for starting this thread.This gives me the chance to safe my reading time for the good stories!

Steffi

Loopy · « **Reply #70 on:** January 17, 2013, 01:36 AM »

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I made it to chapter 2!

I'm glad I'm not the only one who gave up on it.

aLmOsT_nOrMaL · « **Reply #71 on:** January 17, 2013, 01:54 AM »

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I know that i'm def'y in the minority here but i flounced Emancipation Proclamation. It was a good fic,i just got bored with the repetitive POV's.

I started reading EP because so many people rec'ed it, but I only reached Chapter 15. I'm not sure what exactly went wrong, I think I got afraid of the length mostly. Sometimes stories don't stick with me.

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I really, really disliked this fic., although I appear to be one of the few it has oiver 4k reviews.

Cracks in the Pavement BY VampiresHaveLaws

Life is never perfect, the cracks always appear. "My Polaroid would show the face of a girl who has forgotten how to truly smile." Even the strongest of dreams can fail to become enough.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Angst/Romance - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 20 - Words: 148,909 - Reviews: 4,739 - Favs: 2,350 - Follows: 2,359 - Updated: 08-30-12 - Published: 02-21-11 - Status: Complete - id: 6765479

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I'm trying sooo hard to finish this fic. I've skipped a couple of chapters and I take long breaks between them, because the angst and the style of writing makes everything seem so depressing. I think it's time to say goodbye!

savanablue · « **Reply #72 on:** January 17, 2013, 07:23 AM »

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I always wonder if it counts as a flounce when I get distracted and forget I'm reading something. Oooo was that a bunny??

Um yeah, stupid ADD

Because I have flounced a lot of stories if that is the case....

Though sometimes? If I find them again? yeah, I finish them. Or get distracted again

Right now I'm trying to read It Isn't Stalking If You Don't Get Caught
Edward, Emmett and Jasper travel across the border to meet starlets Bella, Alice and Rosalie at a fan convention. What antics will these fanboys come up with as they prepare to meet the girls of their dreams? Collab. btw. JustForkIt & Little Miss Whitlock
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 40 - Words: 209,597 - Reviews: 1170 - Updated: 11-23-11 - Published: 8-2-09 - Complete
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It's supposed to be funny - well making fun of stalking fans - but so far, I'm just bored. Not my idea of humor, I guess. And I'm on chapter 3, but I may be moving on soon.

I wanted to read this but when I was on Twitter, the author said some nasty stuff and pushed it on other people. Can't read no matter what. And before I stick my foot in my mouth, it's JustForkIt... correct?

savanablue · « **Reply #73 on:** January 17, 2013, 07:25 AM »

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I really, really disliked this fic., although I appear to be one of the few it has oiver 4k reviews.

Cracks in the Pavement BY VampiresHaveLaws

Life is never perfect, the cracks always appear. "My Polaroid would show the face of a girl who has forgotten how to truly smile." Even the strongest of dreams can fail to become enough.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Angst/Romance - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 20 - Words: 148,909 - Reviews: 4,739 - Favs: 2,350 - Follows: 2,359 - Updated: 08-30-12 - Published: 02-21-11 - Status: Complete - id: 6765479

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I was rec'd this one. I think I read it *scratches head* like recently. I can't remember though. Snort, does that mean I flounced?

limomx2 · « **Reply #74 on:** January 17, 2013, 07:28 AM »

This thread is interesting.. I almost spit my coffee out a few times with what some of you ladies wrote. I have flounced a few fics but the one that really sticks in my head is

The Dominants Creed. Just could not get past the first few chapters.

savanablue · « **Reply #75 on:** January 17, 2013, 07:31 AM »

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This thread is interesting.. I almost spit my coffee out a few times with what some of you ladies wrote. I have flounced a few fics but the one that really sticks in my head is

The Dominants Creed. Just could not get past the first few chapters.

I read that one a long time ago. Honestly, I don't remember it I also forget that not everyone here has been reading fic the same amount of time as others. I can't even remember the author

limomx2 · « **Reply #76 on:** January 17, 2013, 07:47 AM »

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I read that one a long time ago. Honestly, I don't remember it I also forget that not everyone here has been reading fic the same amount of time as others. I can't even remember the author

ExiledEddie is the author. I t was pulled from FF. I just could not get past the errors...

CullenHarry · « **Reply #77 on:** January 17, 2013, 07:49 AM »

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I've tried so many times to read this one and just can't do it. First 11 chapters were great then the entire story changed and just gave me a major headache.

I think it's the "Heart of darkness" story arc that kills it. It's just so damn long winded.

savanablue · « **Reply #78 on:** January 17, 2013, 08:00 AM »

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ExiledEddie is the author. I t was pulled from FF. I just could not get past the errors...

Ah, yes. I liked her other fic but I read them so long ago.

savanablue · « **Reply #79 on:** January 17, 2013, 08:01 AM »

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I think it's the "Heart of darkness" story arc that kills it. It's just so damn long winded.

I haven't read this yet. I don't know how I feel about Edward being a chef. It's like the yoga instructor. Not for me.

CullenHarry · « **Reply #80 on:** January 17, 2013, 08:04 AM »

My most recent flounce is My Mate, My Love by BobbisMomma

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When Edward see's his mate nothing matters but her. He will do anything for her and will give up anything for her.. For his life is now all about her. NO ONE better think badly about her. NO ONE better get in his way. Nothing will stop him from claiming what is his.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 10 - Words: 94,417 - Reviews: 168 - Favs: 174 - Follows: 167 - Updated: 12-16-12 - Published: 07-29-12 - Status: Complete - id: 8373109

Got sucked in from the summary and was met with bad grammar, bad story flow and ridiculous characters. All of characters are above and beyond normal that it's laughable. I stuck with it till the end but I regret doing so.

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