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So, I am in Dallas this week for a class. It is very humid here compared to where I live. The heat is about the same though. Hopefully the class is interesting.

God, Dallas is dry as the desert compared to Houston!
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God, Dallas is dry as the desert compared to Houston!
LOL! I'm sure it is. ;)
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So I just finished Emotion Masen's Washed Away. Didn't realize it was an Actorward. Though really? He could have been almost anything.  It's pulled but can be found You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login

It was interesting. But for some stupid reason, she decided to write it as a drabble. Only it's not a drabble story. I think it was a way to get lots of reviews maybe?  But when a lemon takes 3 "chapters"? Yeah, it is not a drabble. It is a messed up story.  So, it's about
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As I said, it was okay. I don't know if it was the subject matter or the drabble format that made me not want to read it again. The format was really annoying.  It was like she wrote a chapter and chopped it all up.  Then it sounded like (from the AN's) "hey, I'm going to be giving you 9 chapters today! Aren't I great?"  But for any other author,  it would all be one chapter.

Ohe and Bella had blue eyes. Though it was only mentioned once. Though it still bugs me.  I think I complained about this before with her.  :P

But if you don't mind these things, it was a good story.
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I'm in the midst of a Edward's Eternal marathon.  It started when it was announced she was going to pull My Nightingale.  So I decided I'd go back and read all the stories I hadn't read as WIPs.  I think I might be re-reading some, as well.  I like her writing since her stories tend to be low angst with really sweet Edwards.  The Bellas can be a little clingy and unreasonably fearful, but that's okay because it gives Edward a chance to be really sweet and protective.
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I'm in the midst of a Edward's Eternal marathon.  It started when it was announced she was going to pull My Nightingale.  So I decided I'd go back and read all the stories I hadn't read as WIPs.  I think I might be re-reading some, as well.  I like her writing since her stories tend to be low angst with really sweet Edwards.  The Bellas can be a little clingy and unreasonably fearful, but that's okay because it gives Edward a chance to be really sweet and protective.
I usually like her stories except she also makes her Bella's blue eyed.  It is just wrong. LOL!
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I usually like her stories except she also makes her Bella's blue eyed.  It is just wrong. LOL!

I agree, but she doesn't do it in every story.
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I agree, but she doesn't do it in every story.
This is true. And she usually doesn't mention it more than once or twice.  Though she once changed Edward's eyes to blue. And that was really wrong. 

Though not as bad as that one writer who had Edward tanned with black hair and black/dark brown eyes.   :D :D
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I am all about some Edward, but for some reason craving a good Bella/Jake story-- what's your fave?
 
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I am all about some Edward, but for some reason craving a good Bella/Jake story-- what's your fave?

I'm definitely a B&E girl, but I did read one poly story that is worthwhile and has a desirable Jake. It can be quite graphic so I read it on ao3, but it is available on FFN too (where it is probably edited). It's primarily an angsty HS fic with lots of trouble -- sex, drugs, alcohol, a little bit of violence -- and completely OOC. For some reason this fic stuck with me, even though this is not my usual inclination. There's a prequel also if you read it on ao3, but involves Jasper.

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Acting Out
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AU-human: Edward, Bella and Jake are juniors in Forks. Very NC-17 with Edward and Jake both bi, but not PWP - there's plot, angst, humor and romance as these messed-up kids figure out their three-way relationship. You'll like Jake here - trust me!
Rated: Fiction M - English - Angst/Romance - Bella, Edward - Chapters: 29 - Words: 129,996 - Reviews: 752 - Favs: 900 - Follows: 397 - Updated: Sep 18, 2009 - Published: Dec 11, 2008 - Status: Complete - id: 4711015
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I am all about some Edward, but for some reason craving a good Bella/Jake story-- what's your fave?

Folks over on the wolfpack thread might be a better resource for these types of stories.  You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login
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I'm not down with blue eyed Bellas (usually).
One of the rare few....
 
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I usually like her stories except she also makes her Bella's blue eyed.  It is just wrong. LOL!

That used to bother me too, but then I started reading a bunch of scifi/fantasy twific and features became more malleable. I'm in the midst of reading Star Crossed by tufano79 and Bella's people have amphibious traits, including breathable spots along the body and she has blue eyes. I'm now more in the 'whatever' category, though I like there to be a reason to break away from canon, and I'm more protective of Edward's features. For example, there is no reason to give Edward brown/black hair or grey/blue eyes in an AH contemporary fic.  That does bother me.
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That used to bother me too, but then I started reading a bunch of scifi/fantasy twific and features became more malleable. I'm in the midst of reading Star Crossed by tufano79 and Bella's people have amphibious traits, including breathable spots along the body and she has blue eyes. I'm now more in the 'whatever' category, though I like there to be a reason to break away from canon, and I'm more protective of Edward's features. For example, there is no reason to give Edward brown/black hair or grey/blue eyes in an AH contemporary fic.  That does bother me.
While I love Sci Fi in general (Twi needs more sci fi), there's still almost no reason to give Bella blue, green or whatever eyes, unless you're going even more Mary Sue/self insert.
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While I love Sci Fi in general (Twi needs more sci fi), there's still almost no reason to give Bella blue, green or whatever eyes, unless you're going even more Mary Sue/self insert.
Yes, this.  It is one thing to give Bella gills or whatever, but another to change eye color.  Hair can be dyed.  So the stories where Bella gets blonde highlights?  I can deal with, going totally blonde? Not so much. 

There are just some things that should not change.   >:(   ;D
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« Reply #996 on: July 14, 2016, 10:34 AM »
Hello everyone.
I will start by apologizing for the non-fitting and vague title of this post. I am sorry but I can't find a good one (could you help me please?)
Anyway, I am currently looking for fanfictions where Bella and Edward are in a relationship where Bella suffers from domestic violence (married or dating). For instance, I've read "the words of and abused wife", which I really like, but unfortunately it wasn't finished and I just can't find a similar story..
I am quite fond of HEA (but it is ok if the story isn't finished, whether it is in progress or if the author doesn't plan on finishing it) and Edward repenting.
Thank you so much for you very appreciated help!
 
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Yes, this.  It is one thing to give Bella gills or whatever, but another to change eye color.  Hair can be dyed.  So the stories where Bella gets blonde highlights?  I can deal with, going totally blonde? Not so much. 

There are just some things that should not change.   >:(   ;D

It sounds like you mind less if the author changes her personality than her physical appearance, which parallels chatter I've seen elsewhere. I was reading a rather in-depth AN in response to a scathing review, which tumbled into other reviews, etc. The complaint was originally that she was tired of reading Bellas that aren't beautiful landing gorgeous Edwards. The author's defense -- Bella is beautiful, but she doesn't see herself that way (I think she was more voluptuous than usual) -- was overshadowed by reviewers challenging the 'rightness' of changing Bella's beauty. It was kind of funny to lurk over. I think it's complicated by Meyer's vagueness in the original. Just how attractive is Bella? Yeah, eye of the beholder and all that, but really: she calls herself plain Jane and has two super hotties tripping over themselves to gain her attention (though both of them see the world through skewed perceptions). Then there's all the attention of her classmates (though that could be just the newness factor). And now I am pontificating on this stupid unanswerable question. Ugh. :violent-smiley-007:

Anyway, my remark is simply that it seems that readers have fewer issues with changing core values/personality traits than physical appearance. And that is (benignly) strange to me.
 
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Re: Looking for fanfictions
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Hello everyone.
I will start by apologizing for the non-fitting and vague title of this post. I am sorry but I can't find a good one (could you help me please?)
Anyway, I am currently looking for fanfictions where Bella and Edward are in a relationship where Bella suffers from domestic violence (married or dating). For instance, I've read "the words of and abused wife", which I really like, but unfortunately it wasn't finished and I just can't find a similar story..
I am quite fond of HEA (but it is ok if the story isn't finished, whether it is in progress or if the author doesn't plan on finishing it) and Edward repenting.
Thank you so much for you very appreciated help!

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Especially, Always on My Mind and When Does it End?

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Re: Looking for fanfictions
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Hello everyone.
I will start by apologizing for the non-fitting and vague title of this post. I am sorry but I can't find a good one (could you help me please?)
Anyway, I am currently looking for fanfictions where Bella and Edward are in a relationship where Bella suffers from domestic violence (married or dating). For instance, I've read "the words of and abused wife", which I really like, but unfortunately it wasn't finished and I just can't find a similar story..
I am quite fond of HEA (but it is ok if the story isn't finished, whether it is in progress or if the author doesn't plan on finishing it) and Edward repenting.
Thank you so much for you very appreciated help!
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What Happens in Vegas, Doesn't Always Stay There
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Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there. Awesome banner by: Astrid GreenEyes
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Drama - Bella, Edward - Chapters: 30 - Words: 154,721 - Reviews: 3,587 - Favs: 1,268 - Follows: 1,478 - Updated: Jun 4 - Published: Feb 24 - Status: Complete - id: 11808148

I don't read too many of these.
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It sounds like you mind less if the author changes her personality than her physical appearance, which parallels chatter I've seen elsewhere. I was reading a rather in-depth AN in response to a scathing review, which tumbled into other reviews, etc. The complaint was originally that she was tired of reading Bellas that aren't beautiful landing gorgeous Edwards. The author's defense -- Bella is beautiful, but she doesn't see herself that way (I think she was more voluptuous than usual) -- was overshadowed by reviewers challenging the 'rightness' of changing Bella's beauty. It was kind of funny to lurk over. I think it's complicated by Meyer's vagueness in the original. Just how attractive is Bella? Yeah, eye of the beholder and all that, but really: she calls herself plain Jane and has two super hotties tripping over themselves to gain her attention (though both of them see the world through skewed perceptions). Then there's all the attention of her classmates (though that could be just the newness factor). And now I am pontificating on this stupid unanswerable question. Ugh. :violent-smiley-007:

Anyway, my remark is simply that it seems that readers have fewer issues with changing core values/personality traits than physical appearance. And that is (benignly) strange to me.
No, I don't necessarily mean that.  I like it when Bella is close to canon, but I can deal with changes like she is more outgoing, weighs a lot more than Kristen Stewart, or has tattoos. 

As far as looks go? Bella doesn't think she is pretty.  And it is questionable whether she is that good looking based on Edward, because the mating instinct changes his impression of her.  But, the other HS guys think she is good looking.  So I think of her as the Mary Anne - that girl next door that is nice looking but not model looking Ginger.  Or Stephanie Meyer - you notice she has brown hair and brown eyes. ;D

And?  For some reason?  The eye color is kind of a thing for me. Both hers and Edward's.  But Edward can have green or topaz and I'm okay.  Alright, red and black work if her is vampire. LOL!  The rest?  I'm okay with changes that fit the new story.  Though I still haven't been able to read Tailward.   ::) :NeenerNeener:

And? I find I don't read a lot of stories because they aren't quite what I'm looking for, like my Edward would never cheat on his Bella - and Bella wouldn't cheat on Edward.  And I don't mind a bit of a bad boy, but not an evil Edward or Bella.

I think if you change the characters too much? It is no longer fanfiction other than the names.  But this is my opinion and really? It only matters to me in choosing what to read.  I try very hard not to write reviews complaining about things like this..... :P 
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