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Thread #7 - We are crazy talkers here! Join in the fun!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general.  But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement. 

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice   

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Rdmickey, what are you doing here? Go love up Mr RDmickey

Mr. Rd is well worn out and taking a nap. I am ok with that, as I still need more later.  >:D
I'm sitting in front of the fireplace in the recliner with my cat and reading a little Outlander.
 
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Aww, at least Mr PA started the day off right.  :)I get the feeling I might have to start a sh!t list with you all for dissing my baby.  >:( >:( :P :P

Sorry hon. The man is fine, but it was just the wrong role for him.
 

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I was actually surprised. Dakota was actually very good. The movie was better than expected, hubs expected more s.e.x.   :D   Jaime......was soooo wrong for this and actually detracted from the movie.  *hides with booked*
   I thought she did a good job too and agree that Jaime just wasn't the right actor to play Christian.  i mean the schmex was still extremely hot but he just seemed awkward in the role.  He's nice looking, but just didn't have the right feel for Christian.   Did you guys see that the movie is rated down in the 3's on IMDB?  That is REALLY bad.   I'm really hoping they'll make the rest into films too! ;-)     

Also, I can't believe it was only an R rating!  That was the most sex I've ever seen in a movie by far.   
 

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Just watched that clip with the edward/bella paper dolls! HILARIOUS!
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According to Box Office Mojo, Fifty made $30,200,000 yesterday which is only okay for something that is supposed to be a blockbuster.  It's not going to do much in New England this weekend - We're under Blizzard warnings.  Its started snowing and will end early Monday so movie theaters aren't going to be seeing much business.  See Box Office Mojo chart for how movies did yesterday:

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I'm due to see 50 on Tuesday, twitter mates have been raving. 
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   I thought she did a good job too and agree that Jaime just wasn't the right actor to play Christian.  i mean the schmex was still extremely hot but he just seemed awkward in the role.  He's nice looking, but just didn't have the right feel for Christian.   Did you guys see that the movie is rated down in the 3's on IMDB?  That is REALLY bad.   I'm really hoping they'll make the rest into films too! ;-)     

Also, I can't believe it was only an R rating!  That was the most sex I've ever seen in a movie by far.
LOL! I looked at the reviews that the ratings are based on - All guys.  Not that they didn't have a point, most of the time.

EL should have let someone rewrite it a bit for the movie.  It never was well written, it was just very, um, addicting?  And the fact that she barely changed it when she took it from fanfiction to OF? She is really lucky SM didn't sue her.  Really lucky.  Some of those lines? Came directly from Twilight.  Which is totally acceptable in fanfiction, but not so acceptable when it's a movie of a former fanfiction..... ??? :NeenerNeener:

I think it's great that we all thought Dakota would ruin the movie and she actually is the one who saves it....  :D :D :D :D

And I loved the 50 Shades of Paper Twilight dolls.  :-*
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I know I've posted about this story before, but it was just linked on FB and I don't remember if any of the angst lovers have read it. I've only skimmed it out of curiosity and it still makes my chest ache just thinking about it. I prefer AH stories, and I honestly have no interest Rosalie's story so I can't really tell you if it's good or not. I do know that Edward and Rosalie are giant assholes in this, and the whole chest achy feeling comes from the thought of your spouse having lied to you for your entire relationship because he's really been in love with his "sister" and sleeping with her for the past century. SO FLOWERY. Love sick book Edward on steroids who can't live without Rosalie. IDK it's AU to the extreme and all knowledge of Twilight should be forgotten, because the entire plot contradicts everything that happened in Twilight since Edward and Rosalie apparently couldn't come clean about their relationship early on because she was supposed to be his "sister" you know even though she was changed with Edward in mind, in the books  :unamused: These secret relationship stories just don't make any sense to me because the entire plot baffles me. I wouldn't get married to some dude just for show when I don't have ANYTHING in the way of me being happy with someone I already love?? Like?? What kind of nonsense. The logic behind their excuse astounds me. Sorry for the rant.

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Ever wonder why Rosalie and Edward are so cold towards one another? Their story from the start; in keeping with the books, but based on the idea that they're both masterful liars. Love, lust, betrayal, desire, lies, darkness and breaking points.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 43 - Words: 413,898 - Reviews: 1117 - Favs: 526 - Follows: 344 - Updated: Feb 26, 2012 - Published: Aug 17, 2008 - Edward, Rosalie - Complete

^^^ almost half a million words?? nooo thank you.

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A four piece follow up to Breaking Points as requested by many. Prepare to be bludgeoned to death by the angst. How long can secrets really endure under the pressure of obsession? Set in the future during various time spans, this is the point at which it finally breaks.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 4 - Words: 89,355 - Reviews: 91 - Favs: 35 - Follows: 45 - Updated: Oct 26, 2014 - Published: Apr 27, 2014 - Edward, Rosalie - Complete
 
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This one also makes my stomach drop just thinking about it. I haven't been able to bring myself to re-read it since it was uploaded last year.

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Sometimes, the miracles we plead for come at a terrible price. AH, dark subject matter.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 19 - Words: 71,647 - Reviews: 3239 - Favs: 1,525 - Follows: 1,590 - Updated: Jun 4, 2014 - Published: May 14, 2014 - [Edward, Bella] - Complete

Apparently this story was written by wtvoc and jandco, who are masters of teen angst fanfiction and have even put out their first novel.

Failure to Navigate, by Kris and Jessie Leavitt. I won't even bother attempting to read it, because the synopsis sounds way too heavy for me.
 
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I know I've posted about this story before, but it was just linked on FB and I don't remember if any of the angst lovers have read it. I've only skimmed it out of curiosity and it still makes my chest ache just thinking about it. I prefer AH stories, and I honestly have no interest Rosalie's story so I can't really tell you if it's good or not. I do know that Edward and Rosalie are giant assholes in this, and the whole chest achy feeling comes from the thought of your spouse having lied to you for your entire relationship because he's really been in love with his "sister" and sleeping with her for the past century. SO FLOWERY. Love sick book Edward on steroids who can't live without Rosalie. IDK it's AU to the extreme and all knowledge of Twilight should be forgotten, because the entire plot contradicts everything that happened in Twilight since Edward and Rosalie apparently couldn't come clean about their relationship early on because she was supposed to be his "sister" you know even though she was changed with Edward in mind, in the books  :unamused: These secret relationship stories just don't make any sense to me because the entire plot baffles me. I wouldn't get married to some dude just for show when I don't have ANYTHING in the way of me being happy with someone I already love?? Like?? What kind of nonsense. The logic behind their excuse astounds me. Sorry for the rant.

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Ever wonder why Rosalie and Edward are so cold towards one another? Their story from the start; in keeping with the books, but based on the idea that they're both masterful liars. Love, lust, betrayal, desire, lies, darkness and breaking points.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 43 - Words: 413,898 - Reviews: 1117 - Favs: 526 - Follows: 344 - Updated: Feb 26, 2012 - Published: Aug 17, 2008 - Edward, Rosalie - Complete

^^^ almost half a million words?? nooo thank you.

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A four piece follow up to Breaking Points as requested by many. Prepare to be bludgeoned to death by the angst. How long can secrets really endure under the pressure of obsession? Set in the future during various time spans, this is the point at which it finally breaks.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 4 - Words: 89,355 - Reviews: 91 - Favs: 35 - Follows: 45 - Updated: Oct 26, 2014 - Published: Apr 27, 2014 - Edward, Rosalie - Complete
I've seen this one.  It is not on my TBR list, as I am with you on this.  If Rose was turned for Edward? Why they heck would they have to hide it.  Now maybe if Rose was in love with Edward but he didn't love her?  That I could get.

So lots of angst for no reason at all. 

Now if you want an angsty story with a questionable HEA?  Read CaraNo's latest.  I read the end. Okay more than the end. 

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If you woke up and had to relive a part of your life over and over, how would you break the cycle? And what if you don't even know you're going on repeat? E/B Drabble. Pre-written.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 28 - Words: 13,376 - Reviews: 2267 - Favs: 484 - Follows: 545 - Updated: Feb 12 - Published: Feb 9 - Edward, Bella - Complete

You probably don't want to read if you don't do angst.  :'(
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I've seen this one.  It is not on my TBR list, as I am with you on this.  If Rose was turned for Edward? Why they heck would they have to hide it.  Now maybe if Rose was in love with Edward but he didn't love her?  That I could get.

So lots of angst for no reason at all. 

Now if you want an angsty story with a questionable HEA?  Read CaraNo's latest.  I read the end. Okay more than the end. 

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If you woke up and had to relive a part of your life over and over, how would you break the cycle? And what if you don't even know you're going on repeat? E/B Drabble. Pre-written.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 28 - Words: 13,376 - Reviews: 2267 - Favs: 484 - Follows: 545 - Updated: Feb 12 - Published: Feb 9 - Edward, Bella - Complete

You probably don't want to read if you don't do angst.  :'(

You should spoil me and tell me what happens, so I can decide if I want to read or not :) CaraNo usually has HEA
 
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You should spoil me and tell me what happens, so I can decide if I want to read or not :) CaraNo usually has HEA
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So yeah, questionable HEA.  But definitely sad. 
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^^^ that sounds like the plot of a movie I've seen. That sounds like a HEA for Edward :(
 
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? :NeenerNeener:

I think it's great that we all thought Dakota would ruin the movie and she actually is the one who saves it....  :D :D :D :D


My thoughts exactly!!!!!
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So yeah, questionable HEA.  But definitely sad. 

OMG that is a terrible plot.
 
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^^^ that sounds like the plot of a movie I've seen. That sounds like a HEA for Edward :(
Well, it's the best he can get given the circumstances.   :-\
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OMG that is a terrible plot.
Well, I didn't read the whole story, just a bit at the beginning and a bit at the end. There was a lot of discussion on FB on it, so I had to check it out.  CaraNo does usually write well, so I would normally recommend it.  Though she does do comedy better than angst.
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Well, I didn't read the whole story, just a bit at the beginning and a bit at the end. There was a lot of discussion on FB on it, so I had to check it out.  CaraNo does usually write well, so I would normally recommend it.  Though she does do comedy better than angst.

Yeah, she has some great stuff. Tho she is too kinky for me sometimes. Her poly fics. No way. I'm a Bella and Edward girl.
 
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Yeah, she has some great stuff. Tho she is too kinky for me sometimes. Her poly fics. No way. I'm a Bella and Edward girl.
I've never read any of her poly.  I usually just stick to the B/E stories....
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I've never read any of her poly.  I usually just stick to the B/E stories....
Me neither, or her slash.
 
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So lots of angst for no reason at all. 

Pretty much! I can elaborate now that I'm sitting, but canon Edward was a giant creeper to me, so take canon Edward and have him and Rosalie harboring this secret affair and you have the worst plot ever. IDK I like when authors try and give Rosalie more depth, but it's usually ALWAYS written as an affair fic with Edward and I don't wanna read that. Or she's been in love with Edward for so long and then everyone else is included but they seem really ooc. I might try and find some AH Rosalie/Emmett stories because I love Emmett.

I think my biggest problem is that I just like the blueprint for Twilight fan fiction. Canon characters are alright but then you'll see a million stories with Alice as Bella's energetic pixie bff/ Rose as her tough as steel friend.
 
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