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This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general.  But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement. 

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

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I've been gearing myself up for tailward for a while now... maybe it's time!
Do it!!! [emoji12]

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Started Written in the Stars!  I already love the tail and he hasn't even used it yet.
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Tailward....you will love it.  :)

Got hubs to the airport today, and he really didn't want to go.  If he said it once, he said it a thousand times this weekend. He will be gone a couple of weeks this time, but he is going back to Brazil, where he got the news of our son's bad accident 7 months ago. He has been travelling for years now,  every week, somewhere new, but I swear it seems harder for him to leave every time. He wants to drag me with him, but I too have to work.                       It is hard when grabs both sides of my face and as he leans in for a kiss, he asks for me to beg him to stay. It made my heart hurt. *sniffles*  :'(

I read a few of the May to December Romance Contest and then watched the entire 8 episodes of Outlander.......again. Maybe it is my gloom mood. Sigh .....

Back to the long days and nights again this week. I hope everyone has a great week.
*Hugs* I can't imagine how hard that must be [emoji17]

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That's why I was confused when you said how good it was! For all her books she an OK writer a best....Archer's Voice and Stringer were OK but Leo and Leo's Chance? Not so much....

I want to read a fic next....the question is which one? Then I'll read another book.

Branching Inward is one of my favorites:
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HE'S HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTT >:D >:D >:D


OMG I`m trying to work here!!!! How, how can I focus now  :57: :57: :33:

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Tailward....you will love it.  :)

Got hubs to the airport today, and he really didn't want to go.  If he said it once, he said it a thousand times this weekend. He will be gone a couple of weeks this time, but he is going back to Brazil, where he got the news of our son's bad accident 7 months ago. He has been travelling for years now,  every week, somewhere new, but I swear it seems harder for him to leave every time. He wants to drag me with him, but I too have to work.                       It is hard when grabs both sides of my face and as he leans in for a kiss, he asks for me to beg him to stay. It made my heart hurt. *sniffles*  :'(

I read a few of the May to December Romance Contest  and then watched the entire 8 episodes of Outlander.......again. Maybe it is my gloom mood. Sigh .....

Back to the long days and nights again this week. I hope everyone has a great week.

Sorry it`s so hard for you!
As for May to December Romance Contest   - there are really some good entries there! One of my favs is with 52-year old ( :o) REALLY hot Edward and the other one with pubownerward.

I`m really not into alienward but with all your talk about Written In The Stars I`m tempted to give it a try...
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Sorry it`s so hard for you!
As for May to December Romance Contest   - there are really some good entries there! One of my favs is with 52-year old ( :o) REALLY hot Edward and the other one with pubownerward.

I`m really not into alienward but with all your talk about Written In The Stars I`m tempted to give it a try...

You should read it. I read it as a wip. I never thought I would like it either, but you will love the tail. Very unique story, nothing like I have ever read.

Give the links to the ones you have read in the contest. I read through the descriptions, and picked these two to read yesterday.

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Edward is a top-notch attorney who has watched Bella grow from a child into a woman. When friendship gives way to lust, what harm can one kiss possibly do? Some SPAG here, just FYI.

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Juggling two jobs and a full-time schedule of classes, college student Bella hadn't had the time to figure out just how sexy she was. Her boss, Edward knew it, but was it right of him to show her?

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Give the links to the ones you have read in the contest. I read through the descriptions, and picked these two to read yesterday.

My favorites frm May To December Romance Contest mantioned in my previous post are:

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A lovelorn girl. A lonesome cowboy. An anonymous donation and a pink jade butterfly. Sometimes love doesn't just fall into your lap. Sometimes you need a healthy dose of luck to find it.
Beautiful, beautiful story. Unexpected and amazingly written.

The other one I liked is also Oblivious. Great story.

I hope that maybe authors will decide to continue them once the contest is finished as they definitely have potential.

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My favorites frm May To December Romance Contest mantioned in my previous post are:

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A lovelorn girl. A lonesome cowboy. An anonymous donation and a pink jade butterfly. Sometimes love doesn't just fall into your lap. Sometimes you need a healthy dose of luck to find it.
Beautiful, beautiful story. Unexpected and amazingly written.

The other one I liked is also Oblivious. Great story.

I hope that maybe authors will decide to continue them once the contest is finished as they definitely have potential.

Yes I agree, I like Oblivious as well.

I did open and skimmed Star Shaped Heart. Is it Edward and Bella ??


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Yes I agree, I like Oblivious as well.

I did open and skimmed Star Shaped Heart. Is it Edward and Bella ??

Yes, it is Edward and Bella (I think it`s one of the contest`s conditions) and it`s totally unexpected and different from all the other entries I read. I think it`s my numer one. Read it, I`m interested if anyone else will like it as I do.

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Tailward....you will love it.  :)

Got hubs to the airport today, and he really didn't want to go.  If he said it once, he said it a thousand times this weekend. He will be gone a couple of weeks this time, but he is going back to Brazil, where he got the news of our son's bad accident 7 months ago. He has been travelling for years now,  every week, somewhere new, but I swear it seems harder for him to leave every time. He wants to drag me with him, but I too have to work.                       It is hard when grabs both sides of my face and as he leans in for a kiss, he asks for me to beg him to stay. It made my heart hurt. *sniffles*  :'(

I read a few of the May to December Romance Contest and then watched the entire 8 episodes of Outlander.......again. Maybe it is my gloom mood. Sigh .....

Back to the long days and nights again this week. I hope everyone has a great week.

Im sorry. I guess he is afraid something might happen while he is away.
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Yes, it is Edward and Bella (I think it`s one of the contest`s conditions) and it`s totally unexpected and different from all the other entries I read. I think it`s my numer one. Read it, I`m interested if anyone else will like it as I do.

Oh I just went and looked at it, I was thinking about Dragonfly Dreams....it starts off with Jasper.
Might read that tonight when I need a break from DIA.


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Got hubs to the airport today, and he really didn't want to go.  If he said it once, he said it a thousand times this weekend. He will be gone a couple of weeks this time, but he is going back to Brazil, where he got the news of our son's bad accident 7 months ago. He has been travelling for years now,  every week, somewhere new, but I swear it seems harder for him to leave every time. He wants to drag me with him, but I too have to work.                       It is hard when grabs both sides of my face and as he leans in for a kiss, he asks for me to beg him to stay. It made my heart hurt. *sniffles*  :'(

Awww, reading this made my heart hurt for you too...  :'(

Hope things get better and he travels less to be with you more.  :-*


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Hello everyone! I'm pretty sure I've posted about this story before, but every update kills me. So many people say it's better to read certain stories when they're still a work in progress, and I definitely feel that way about this one. Months will go by without an update, so you have time to let your feelings settle and your heart isn't as heavy as it would be if you just read one huge chunk of angst within a few hours.

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I'm still technically married. I still technically wear my wedding ring. It's on a chain around my neck. With his. He still won't sign the divorce papers. I still don't want him to.

I think the O/S she had of it for an angst contest with Bella and Edward is still up somewhere. I still have the two of them in my head when I'm reading each new update she posts. Honestly I can say I've never read a story like this, granted I won't even bother if I know it's going to end in heartbreak. But this is so realistic. Most fanfiction and books will take this plot and focus on rebuilding the family, but these characters are so damaged I don't ever see that happening for them. She just updated yesterday and there's a bit on how shady people can get when there's a custody battle going on.

I don't seem to get updates for this story....she's changed it from Edward Bella, right? For what I can remember it's really good. Can you let me know oncs it's complete? Though knowing IReen it'll be a while....


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Started Written in the Stars!  I already love the tail and he hasn't even used it yet.

I floved Written in The Stars...tail and all...

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You should read it. I read it as a wip. I never thought I would like it either, but you will love the tail. Very unique story, nothing like I have ever read.

Give the links to the ones you have read in the contest. I read through the descriptions, and picked these two to read yesterday.

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Edward is a top-notch attorney who has watched Bella grow from a child into a woman. When friendship gives way to lust, what harm can one kiss possibly do? Some SPAG here, just FYI.

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Juggling two jobs and a full-time schedule of classes, college student Bella hadn't had the time to figure out just how sexy she was. Her boss, Edward knew it, but was it right of him to show her?

Can you believe I started DIA again last night? What is this the 5th time?

Was it you RDM or Astro that used to combine all the entries into one doc and then post/email it? That used to be soooo handy, I can never be bothered otherwise....

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Oh I just went and looked at it, I was thinking about Dragonfly Dreams....it starts off with Jasper.
Might read that tonight when I need a break from DIA.

I'm so happy!  :13: I thought you'd completely given up on DIA? Sorry to hear you're gloomy Lovely but dinnae fash yersel we're here to cheer you up! And if not this, maybe?













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Hello everyone! I'm pretty sure I've posted about this story before, but every update kills me. So many people say it's better to read certain stories when they're still a work in progress, and I definitely feel that way about this one. Months will go by without an update, so you have time to let your feelings settle and your heart isn't as heavy as it would be if you just read one huge chunk of angst within a few hours.

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I'm still technically married. I still technically wear my wedding ring. It's on a chain around my neck. With his. He still won't sign the divorce papers. I still don't want him to.

I think the O/S she had of it for an angst contest with Bella and Edward is still up somewhere. I still have the two of them in my head when I'm reading each new update she posts. Honestly I can say I've never read a story like this, granted I won't even bother if I know it's going to end in heartbreak. But this is so realistic. Most fanfiction and books will take this plot and focus on rebuilding the family, but these characters are so damaged I don't ever see that happening for them. She just updated yesterday and there's a bit on how shady people can get when there's a custody battle going on.

I don't seem to get updates for this story....she's changed it from Edward Bella, right? For what I can remember it's really good. Can you let me know oncs it's complete? Though knowing IReen it'll be a while....

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Started Written in the Stars!  I already love the tail and he hasn't even used it yet.

I floved Written in The Stars...tail and all...

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You should read it. I read it as a wip. I never thought I would like it either, but you will love the tail. Very unique story, nothing like I have ever read.

Give the links to the ones you have read in the contest. I read through the descriptions, and picked these two to read yesterday.

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Edward is a top-notch attorney who has watched Bella grow from a child into a woman. When friendship gives way to lust, what harm can one kiss possibly do? Some SPAG here, just FYI.

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Juggling two jobs and a full-time schedule of classes, college student Bella hadn't had the time to figure out just how sexy she was. Her boss, Edward knew it, but was it right of him to show her?

Can you believe I started DIA again last night? What is this the 5th time?

Was it you RDM or Astro that used to combine all the entries into one doc and then post/email it? That used to be soooo handy, I can never be bothered otherwise....

I'm so happy!  :13: I thought you'd completely given up on DIA? Sorry to hear you're gloomy Lovely but dinnae fash yersel we're here to cheer you up! And if not this, maybe?



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Hello ladies and gent.
Back from an amazing weekend in Scotland. God I've completely fallen in love with the place...I'm moving; up the road and a world away.

Want pics !!!!!!

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Was it you RDM or Astro that used to combine all the entries into one doc and then post/email it? That used to be soooo handy, I can never be bothered otherwise....
It was Astro....

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I'm so happy!  :13: I thought you'd completely given up on DIA? Sorry to hear you're gloomy Lovely but dinnae fash yersel we're here to cheer you up! And if not this, maybe?



I guess after hubs tried to tear my heart out this weekend, I figured Jamie could as well.  :'( :'( :'(
Trying againnnnnnnnnnnn


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Want pics !!!!!!
It was Astro....

I guess after hubs tried to tear my heart out this weekend, I figured Jamie could as well.  :'( :'( :'(
Trying againnnnnnnnnnnn

I didn't take very many....I have to always make the crucial decision between music and photos as far a space is concerned on my phone...Music always wins! but Mr PA did, I'll get some from him, he's flying to Durban tonight until the 13th but will get him to email them.  I went to Culloden on Sunday (alone, left Mr PA on the slopes ) became fast bosom pals with the director of visitor's centre (flashed my NUJ pass  :D), they have just reopened having done some renovations, but it was so cold I couldn't tramp around looking for the Clan Fraser stone, which I really wanted to see, but I did have a bit of a cry... :'(   You'll get why once you get to the end of DIA! I'm going back as soon as I can, (on my own)  I'm in love with the Highlands and the people, so many red-heads, I was like a pig in sh!t. :P



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« Reply #577 on: February 02, 2015, 09:54 AM »
I read Sideline Collision while on the train coming back to London (boo!) There is something which bugged me with the Epi...I'm wondering if one of you lovely ladies in the US could clear it for me? Bella and Edward both start out as Sophomores, Edward promises Jasper that he'll enter the Draft in his Junior year and not his senior if Jasper does him a favour
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... how is it then by the Epi, and the draft, Edward is graduating with his MBA (which I thought was a post graduate degree, as it is in the UK) and Bella still has a few months to go and graduating in the December?  It's like a annoying bee buzzing around my head.....

And another question on Nolebucgrl; I'm thinking maybe of reading WWF next but I've also got a copy where someone kindly amalgamated WWF and WWS together, I think it's chapter for chapter...should I read it like that or separately as intended?
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And another question on Nolebucgrl; I'm thinking maybe of reading WWF next but I've also got a copy where someone kindly amalgamated WWF and WWS together, I think it's chapter for chapter...should I read it like that or separately as intended?

I would read them together, which I did when they were both WIPs.  It's a little repetitive, and they'll be some chapters you can skim because of the repetitiveness, but I think it works better together.
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I would read them together, which I did when they were both WIPs.  It's a little repetitive, and they'll be some chapters you can skim because of the repetitiveness, but I think it works better together.

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