Author Topic: Flounced Fics (Twilight fanfiction) (Read 221484 times)

Matron · « **on:** January 14, 2013, 04:02 PM »

Ok folks, list em here. Fics that you have flounced, and why you flounced them. Help keep others apprised of the good, the bad, and the badly edited.

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Maggie · « **Reply #101 on:** January 17, 2013, 05:24 PM »

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I have a killer migraine so that may be impairing my thinking ability right now but MPW?

MafiaPrinceWard

lucylu0508 · « **Reply #102 on:** January 17, 2013, 05:25 PM »

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MafiaPrinceWard

ahhhhh, EP!

Thanks, bb

. I hadn't heard that one for EP yet.

savanablue · « **Reply #103 on:** January 17, 2013, 05:26 PM »

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I have a killer migraine so that may be impairing my thinking ability right now but MPW?

MafiaPrinceward... that's EP's E

Ellachanted · « **Reply #104 on:** January 17, 2013, 08:31 PM »

LOL! I think this is why we have to say WHY we flounce a fic....

I totally love Sweetward, though I don't mind a well written possessiveward (did I even spell that right?) But there are others who won't touch either. And so far I flounced The Perfect Wife because Charlie feeling up his daughter just grossed me out. I haven't been able to start EP yet, because I don't think I'm ready for Mafiaward.

Though I think we can all agree that bad writing is just bad! *can I shudder here or do I need to "shutter"*

Matron · « **Reply #105 on:** January 17, 2013, 08:33 PM »

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LOL! I think this is why we have to say WHY we flounce a fic....

I totally love Sweetward, though I don't mind a well written possessiveward (did I even spell that right?) But there are others who won't touch either. And so far I flounced The Perfect Wife because Charlie feeling up his daughter just grossed me out. I haven't been able to start EP yet, because I don't think I'm ready for Mafiaward.

Though I think we can all agree that bad writing is just bad! *can I shudder here or do I need to "shutter"*

If you shutter you'll have Astro on your ass.

Ellachanted · « **Reply #106 on:** January 17, 2013, 09:05 PM »

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If you shutter you'll have Astro on your ass.

it's funny, I can put up with a lot of spelling & grammar errors, but Bella shuttering drives me batshit crazy. Unless she's a photographer. Or closing up a house before a hurricane. Yeah. $:-\$

Caro · « **Reply #107 on:** January 17, 2013, 09:19 PM »

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I love this fic. I've read it so many times. Just love

Fair enough, how dull would things be if we all liked the same stuff?

robsten143 · « **Reply #108 on:** January 18, 2013, 12:32 AM »

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LOL! I think this is why we have to say WHY we flounce a fic....

I totally love Sweetward, though I don't mind a well written possessiveward (did I even spell that right?) But there are others who won't touch either. And so far I flounced The Perfect Wife because Charlie feeling up his daughter just grossed me out. I haven't been able to start EP yet, because I don't think I'm ready for Mafiaward.

Though I think we can all agree that bad writing is just bad! *can I shudder here or do I need to "shutter"*

well thank god i am nowhere near this story.

lucylu0508 · « **Reply #109 on:** January 18, 2013, 05:03 AM »

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it's funny, I can put up with a lot of spelling & grammar errors, but Bella shuttering drives me batshit crazy. Unless she's a photographer. Or closing up a house before a hurricane. Yeah. $:-\$

Oh shuttering drives me insane also. Thankfully I haven't seen that mistake often anymore....used to see it all the time.

Pretty much any mix up of any heterographs drive me absolutely crazy. I started (then promptly flounced) a fic last night where the author kept using two for too and you're for your. These make me cringe and im usually flouncing.

Maggie · « **Reply #110 on:** January 18, 2013, 05:45 AM »

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LOL! I think this is why we have to say WHY we flounce a fic....

I totally love Sweetward, though I don't mind a well written possessiveward (did I even spell that right?) But there are others who won't touch either. And so far I flounced The Perfect Wife because Charlie feeling up his daughter just grossed me out. I haven't been able to start EP yet, because I don't think I'm ready for Mafiaward.

Though I think we can all agree that bad writing is just bad! *can I shudder here or do I need to "shutter"*

Yeah, That was a horrible one, couldn't get past the part when he was watching her change and asking her not to be shy!!!

WTF?

laurendeplume · « **Reply #111 on:** January 18, 2013, 06:32 AM »

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Yeah, That was a horrible one, couldn't get past the part when he was watching her change and asking her not to be shy!!! WTF?

You didn't read past that part in A Perfect Wife? Good thing, you'd have been scarred by the rest of it if you thought that was bad. To this day I wish I hadn't read it.

Ellachanted · « **Reply #112 on:** January 18, 2013, 06:35 AM »

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Yeah, That was a horrible one, couldn't get past the part when he was watching her change and asking her not to be shy!!! WTF?

But what's funny is this story is a favorite of a number of people here. I sometimes wonder if I skip the first so many chapters & get to the Edward part, if there is actually a good story in there.....

Ellachanted · « **Reply #113 on:** January 18, 2013, 06:36 AM »

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You didn't read past that part in A Perfect Wife? Good thing, you'd have been scarred by the rest of it if you thought that was bad. To this day I wish I hadn't read it.

LOL! Okay, maybe not

deranged_dreamer · « **Reply #114 on:** January 18, 2013, 11:26 AM »

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You didn't read past that part in A Perfect Wife? Good thing, you'd have been scarred by the rest of it if you thought that was bad. To this day I wish I hadn't read it.

that is why i ask to be spoiled in agnst filed fics.
if i know there is going to have rape i can get mentally prepared. it makes a lot of difference for me.

Matron · « **Reply #115 on:** January 18, 2013, 11:34 AM »

Has anyone else read An Angel Closes Her Eyes by tg10781? I haven't flounced it yet, I was just skimming the beginning to see what kind of a story it is, but it's already starting out with the dreaded to/too mistake, so I need to know if it'll be worth finishing, or just mark it was bad.

laurendeplume · « **Reply #116 on:** January 18, 2013, 11:53 AM »

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Has anyone else read An Angel Closes Her Eyes by tg10781? I haven't flounced it yet, I was just skimming the beginning to see what kind of a story it is, but it's already starting out with the dreaded to/too mistake, so I need to know if it'll be worth finishing, or just mark it was bad.

It was okay but nothing amazing. If the mistakes bother you that much I'd say it's not worth reading.

deranged_dreamer · « **Reply #117 on:** January 18, 2013, 12:01 PM »

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Has anyone else read An Angel Closes Her Eyes by tg10781? I haven't flounced it yet, I was just skimming the beginning to see what kind of a story it is, but it's already starting out with the dreaded to/too mistake, so I need to know if it'll be worth finishing, or just mark it was bad.

cant remember if i read it. sorry

Chilibabe · « **Reply #118 on:** January 18, 2013, 12:10 PM »

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It was okay but nothing amazing. If the mistakes bother you that much I'd say it's not worth reading.

Exactly

L watts · « **Reply #119 on:** January 18, 2013, 01:24 PM »

Whoa! I just INSTA-flounced a story uploaded on the "More than 152" thread, because of the sloppy prose. First, the reader meets Bella, who has what sounds like double-jointed teeth.

Big, milk chocolate eyes, small button nose, pouty pink glossed lips - her front teeth peaked out and bit down on her lower lip....

Then her smell:

I caught the faint smell of freesias and strawberries... and cinnamon buns and everything that was good in this life plus... something else all wrapped up into one. The scent almost brought me to my knees. and made me picture some kind of Glade-Spray threeway.

It was Reluctance by eye ree.

laurendeplume · « **Reply #120 on:** January 18, 2013, 01:48 PM »

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double-jointed teeth

..double jointed teeth?
What?

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