Author Topic: LOCKED Twific discussion and recommendations ADULT ONLY -OVER 18 ONLY- LOCKED (Read 461871 times)

Ellachanted · « **on:** October 02, 2012, 01:40 PM »

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DeDe's Over It. · « **Reply #2621 on:** December 10, 2012, 03:48 PM »

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WOOT!

Inside Man finally completed!

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*Jumping up and down and clapping* Whoop! Whoop!

I dream of the day when I read the same post for Dusty....And just like that; my party is over

laurendeplume · « **Reply #2622 on:** December 10, 2012, 04:08 PM »

INSIDE MAN?! I HAVE WAITED SO LONG FOR THIS DAY

Now I only hope whoever told me they flounced was wrong in their flouncing-ness. It's just gone midnight here, let's see how late I have to stay up to finish it...

Edit: 3rd chapter in and 'Just let me remain ignorantly bliss.' Er.. what? Please let this be a one time mistake

Ellachanted · « **Reply #2623 on:** December 10, 2012, 04:13 PM »

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What should the criteria be? I definitely think the amount of time she "whimpers" should be included....

Wait, you may need to specify type of "whimpers" because there has definitely been whimpering during lemon scenes and I'm pretty sure they were happy whimpers

That said? I never finished Stay. And I love Actorward. I may go back and finish it later, but I think I got bored and something better came along.

Also, much as I love Tom Cruise? The rumor is he bats for the other team. Then again, there may be some swinging both ways involved.

savanablue · « **Reply #2624 on:** December 10, 2012, 04:24 PM »

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*Jumping up and down and clapping* Whoop! Whoop!

I dream of the day when I read the same post for Dusty....And just like that; my party is over

I've given up on Dusty. I don't know what's going on and why it's taking so long to update.

savanablue · « **Reply #2625 on:** December 10, 2012, 04:26 PM »

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Wait, you may need to specify type of "whimpers" because there has definitely been whimpering during lemon scenes and I'm pretty sure they were happy whimpers

That said? I never finished Stay. And I love Actorward. I may go back and finish it later, but I think I got bored and something better came along.

Also, much as I love Tom Cruise? The rumor is he bats for the other team. Then again, there may be some swinging both ways involved.

*snorts* this is probably why the divorce was done so fast. He didn't want any of this coming to light *snickers*

DeDe's Over It. · « **Reply #2626 on:** December 10, 2012, 04:30 PM »

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Wait, you may need to specify type of "whimpers" because there has definitely been whimpering during lemon scenes and I'm pretty sure they were happy whimpers

That said? I never finished Stay. And I love Actorward. I may go back and finish it later, but I think I got bored and something better came along.

Also, much as I love Tom Cruise? The rumor is he bats for the other team. Then again, there may be some swinging both ways involved.

I take on board you point about the whimper. I might have to flounce Stay, it is developing into a direly immature tale. Which is a shame really because it started really well but as soon as they got together it just skidded downhill.

I've heard that rumour via a vis Mr Cruise, but who cares, I can fantasise about who the hell I like, regardless of the direction of his bat swings!

lucylu0508 · « **Reply #2627 on:** December 10, 2012, 04:36 PM »

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Wait, you may need to specify type of "whimpers" because there has definitely been whimpering during lemon scenes and I'm pretty sure they were happy whimpers

That said? I never finished Stay. And I love Actorward. I may go back and finish it later, but I think I got bored and something better came along.

Also, much as I love Tom Cruise? The rumor is he bats for the other team. Then again, there may be some swinging both ways involved.

I never finished Stay either....I got to the lemon (IIRC it was on the stairs? lol) and then flounced lol

Ellachanted · « **Reply #2628 on:** December 10, 2012, 04:39 PM »

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I take on board you point about the whimper. I might have to flounce Stay, it is developing into a direly immature tale. Which is a shame really because it started really well but as soon as they got together it just skidded downhill.

I've heard that rumour via a vis Mr Cruise, but who cares, I can fantasise about who the hell I like, regardless of the direction of his bat swings!

LOL! Yes! For someone I will never meet? Yeah, bat swings don't really matter

Sigh...I hate when something starts out good & gets lame. It's funny, because Stay was pretty popular. Well, to each her own

Ellachanted · « **Reply #2629 on:** December 10, 2012, 04:41 PM »

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I never finished Stay either....I got to the lemon (IIRC it was on the stairs? lol) and then flounced lol

Um...there was a lemon??

DeDe's Over It. · « **Reply #2630 on:** December 10, 2012, 05:06 PM »

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I never finished Stay either....I got to the lemon (IIRC it was on the stairs? lol) and then flounced lol

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Um...there was a lemon??

Well so far I'm on chapter 18 of 38 and there's been a half a cup of lemonade, no lemon. It might be popular (5000+ reviews) but Bella is getting right on my tit (as we'd say in London, don't ask me why...) I'm tempted to perversely keep going just to see how bad it can get, but that would mean a lot more swearing out loud (*whispers* I called Bella the C word that should never be uttered, ever.) and ranting on here....

savanablue · « **Reply #2631 on:** December 10, 2012, 05:20 PM »

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Well so far I'm on chapter 18 of 38 and there's been a half a cup of lemonade, no lemon. It might be popular (5000+ reviews) but Bella is getting right on my tit (as we'd say in London, don't ask me why...) I'm tempted to perversely keep going just to see how bad it can get, but that would mean a lot more swearing out loud (*whispers* I called Bella the C word that should never be uttered, ever.) and ranting on here....

Shhiiiiiit! I may need to re read again. I know I read it when I was a fic newbie so my tastes weren't as discerning as they are today

DeDe's Over It. · « **Reply #2632 on:** December 10, 2012, 05:26 PM »

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Shhiiiiiit! I may need to re read again. I know I read it when I was a fic newbie so my tastes weren't as discerning as they are today

Don't get me wrong, it was more, "You silly C," rather than the harsher " You C!" but still, she's bumfcuk stupid at times...

savanablue · « **Reply #2633 on:** December 10, 2012, 05:28 PM »

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Don't get me work, it was more, "You silly C," rather than the harsher " You C!" but still, she's bumfcuk stupid at times...

I legit don't remember this fic being that bad

I think at the time I was reading the fics with lots of reviews... learned my lesson on that front.

savanablue · « **Reply #2634 on:** December 10, 2012, 05:37 PM »

Has anyone read Merciless by lmraven?

There are two versions, the cleaned up version on FF and the MA version on TWCS. It seems good based on the summary but there are 20 chapters on FF and 17 on TWCS $:-\$

DeDe's Over It. · « **Reply #2635 on:** December 10, 2012, 05:40 PM »

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Has anyone read Merciless by lmraven?

There are two versions, the cleaned up version on FF and the MA version on TWCS. It seems good based on the summary but there are 20 chapters on FF and 17 on TWCS $:-\$

Is it Edwella? Never heard of it....

savanablue · « **Reply #2636 on:** December 10, 2012, 05:44 PM »

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Is it Edwella? Never heard of it....

It is.

Summary...

10 years ago, he made the biggest mistake of his life by leaving her. Now, a cold and ruthless, emotionally dark multi-billionaire, he will do everything in his power to make her his again. He will be merciless. All Human/OOC. Over 18, please.

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I think it may touch on BDSM

lucylu0508 · « **Reply #2637 on:** December 10, 2012, 05:44 PM »

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Shhiiiiiit! I may need to re read again. I know I read it when I was a fic newbie so my tastes weren't as discerning as they are today

Same as you, I read this as a wip and wasn't quite so picky..... I don't remember this one being that bad tho but it has been a looong time and many fics ago. I do remember it being pretty boring which is why I only stuck around for the lemon, I had invested so much time with the ust to flounce until I got to that one lol

There WAS a lemon, right? Or am I totally confusing this fic with another one?

savanablue · « **Reply #2638 on:** December 10, 2012, 05:45 PM »

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Same as you, I read this as a wip and wasn't quite so picky..... I don't remember this one being that bad tho but it has been a looong time and many fics ago. I do remember it being pretty boring which is why I only stuck around for the lemon, I had invested so much time with the ust to flounce until I got to that one lol

There WAS a lemon, right? Or am I totally confusing this fic with another one?

LOL, I have no idea

Uhhh, maybe? *scratches head*

DeDe's Over It. · « **Reply #2639 on:** December 10, 2012, 06:07 PM »

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Same as you, I read this as a wip and wasn't quite so picky..... I don't remember this one being that bad tho but it has been a looong time and many fics ago. I do remember it being pretty boring which is why I only stuck around for the lemon, I had invested so much time with the ust to flounce until I got to that one lol

There WAS a lemon, right? Or am I totally confusing this fic with another one?

Yeah, there was a lemon on the stairs you're right, just passed that part. This fic was written in 08/09 I just think that as I'm quite new-ish to Twificdom I've read more evolved Bellas, Bellas that have probably been written more recently? I don't know; I do know though that this chick just aggravates me, if it wasn't for her the fic would be fine. Do you remember how she allows her employee Jessica to talk to her? Why? Who? When? Where, would that happen?! And then wind shifts and, yeah, you guessed it, she cries!

Booked · « **Reply #2640 on:** December 10, 2012, 06:19 PM »

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Has anyone read Merciless by lmraven?

There are two versions, the cleaned up version on FF and the MA version on TWCS. It seems good based on the summary but there are 20 chapters on FF and 17 on TWCS $:-\$

Is this a complete fic at 20 chapters? Summary seems simlar to Friday's at Noon and Fifty Shades which I both loved...

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