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Thread #5 - We are crazy talkers here! Join in the fun!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general.  But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement. 

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice   

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I've been catching up with some of the (shorter) fics that have been rec'd here recently and liked each of the following. Thank you ladies for the recs!

Nine Months - A Cullen Legacy Short story - pattyrose
Sweet, it fits nicely in the epilogue of TCL. Edward finally gets to experience pregnancy with Bella. It has been a while since I read TCL so I was pleased with the subtle refreshers included so there is no need to reread. It could probably stand on it's own, but that wouldn't be as fun.

Nine Months - A Cullen Legacy Short story - pattyrose
Former Congressman Edward Cullen has finally overcome the forces that tried to keep him away from Bella and their daughter, Elizabeth, and the three have settled into a life together. But when Bella becomes pregnant again, how will Edward deal with nine months of expectation, combined with a new campaign run? A short story based on The Cullen Legacy. Daily updates. Rated M.
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Curve Ball - staceleo
I thought this was funny. Snarky sarcastic funny. Edward's kind of a dork, but in a sweet way and Bella gives the story a nice edge. HS fic. A clipped writing style with short chapters. Haven't decided if I'll read the sequel of them in college.

Curve Ball - staceleo
Opposites attract don't they? Not in Bella Swan's world. Unfortunately, the Captain of the baseball team has other ideas. A short chapter tale written for mauigirl60.
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Awkwardly Yours - Vancouver-Canuck-Girl
Embarrassing funny for this very adorkable Edward. Glad I was never a 15-year-old male, but it was humorous reading his thoughts.

Awkwardly Yours - Vancouver-Canuck-Girl
High school Edward likes a girl named Bella, But he's not a smooth-talking kind of fella. He has his fair share of inserting foot into mouth, And inappropriate risings down south. But he's really kind of sweet, Even if he's sort of a geek.
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Professionally Personal - DH78
Short, but good. CEOward with tats. YUM!

Professionally Personal - DH78
Aspiring tattoo artist, Bella Swan works a nine-to-five job at Cullen Energy, Inc. When forced to work with the cold, elusive, and very hot CEO, she discovers they have something in common. Can she keep things professional personal? E/B Humor/Romance.
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Copy Room - Edward's Eternal
A nice quick story about a shy B&E, but with sexy times. I really liked this.

Copy Room - Edward's Eternal
Sometimes flippant words are really the truth spoken out loud. What happens when someone overhears you and decides to give you what you secretly want but never knew?
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OMG! I just read curve ball like a week ago and I can't remember a thing about it!  :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:

Sigh.... This ficnesia  (fanfic amnesia) is getting bad.....  :D :D :D :D
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Ladies, i have a stupid question. where is the spoiler button? I can't find it in  the Reply Box . Thank you
 
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Ladies, i have a stupid question. where is the spoiler button? I can't find it in  the Reply Box . Thank you

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Thank you so much.  I think something is wrong with my computer. i don't get italic, bold etc...  i used to but now i don't.
I wondered if it was because i spent the whole day deleting a bunch of stuffs trying to get rid of Conduit.com which i got from downloading De-FFNet-izer.   I also can't click on this spoiler button but  when i click on the Quote button i see your message.
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there are a lot of stories that I enjoyed reading but would never pay for. Unless they get totally rewritten.  Because I will put up with a lot of bad writing in a fanfic that I would never put up with in a real book.  ;D

I was just thinking the same thing yesterday after finishing Across the lines by Lost Twi Sisters (135 chapters). I like the story line but the story could be told in 30-40 chapters. It was just chapters after chapters after chapters of mind numbing S E X and mundane stuffs. and the Kicker is , after 135 chapters, the story is still unresolved.
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I see a sequel in the future. The sad thing is i will most probably read it so that i can get to the end of the story. >:(
 
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Thank you so much.  I think something is wrong with my computer. i don't get italic, bold etc...  i used to but now i don't.
I wondered if it was because i spent the whole day deleting a bunch of stuffs trying to get rid of Conduit.com which i got from downloading De-FFNet-izer.   I also can't click on this spoiler button but  when i click on the Quote button i see your message.

Yay I can use the Spoiler button now.  I had disable Java from running in my computer causing all sort of problem.
 

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I was just thinking the same thing yesterday after finishing Across the lines by Lost Twi Sisters (135 chapters). I like the story line but the story could be told in 30-40 chapters. It was just chapters after chapters after chapters of mind numbing S E X and mundane stuffs. and the Kicker is , after 135 chapters, the story is still unresolved.
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I see a sequel in the future. The sad thing is i will most probably read it so that i can get to the end of the story. >:(

I haven't read this yet, but there is a sequel already started called Beyond the Lines.
 
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I've been catching up with some of the (shorter) fics that have been rec'd here recently and liked each of the following. Thank you ladies for the recs!

Nine Months - A Cullen Legacy Short story - pattyrose
Sweet, it fits nicely in the epilogue of TCL. Edward finally gets to experience pregnancy with Bella. It has been a while since I read TCL so I was pleased with the subtle refreshers included so there is no need to reread. It could probably stand on it's own, but that wouldn't be as fun.

Curve Ball - staceleo
I thought this was funny. Snarky sarcastic funny. Edward's kind of a dork, but in a sweet way and Bella gives the story a nice edge. HS fic. A clipped writing style with short chapters. Haven't decided if I'll read the sequel of them in college.

Awkwardly Yours - Vancouver-Canuck-Girl
Embarrassing funny for this very adorkable Edward. Glad I was never a 15-year-old male, but it was humorous reading his thoughts.

Professionally Personal - DH78
Short, but good. CEOward with tats. YUM!

Copy Room - Edward's Eternal
A nice quick story about a shy B&E, but with sexy times. I really liked this.

Cool! I also read the same things the past few weeks, in order of how i read them:
Right before my eyes   Lovedforeternity - ok, quarterbackward
Glycerine   Livie79 - loved it, actorward
Curve Ball   Staceleo - funny but got tiring for me
Awkwardly yours   Vancouver canuck girl - super freaking funny, loved it!
The five times we never met   TheFicChick - short and ok
He shoots, she scores   Witchyvampiregirl - ok, hockeyward
Bad fauxmance   Stella luna sky - pretending to be gay edward, ok
Professionally personal   Dh78 - hot, loved it
Nine months - a Cullen legacy short story   Pattyrose - i loved the Cullen legacy and loved this as well, great to read epov
Copy Room   Edward's Eternal - hot, loved it

Still undecided what to read next... Either Altered Measure by kicthmill (musicward) or Love and Big Green bag by red koolaid (actorward)

Thanks again to all who rec'd these...been reading the most recently rec'd here rather than my own TBR list. Am just happy that more new fics are being completed  :)
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I haven't read this yet, but there is a sequel already started called Beyond the Lines.

Thanks, Tricklem.  I am off to check out Beyond the lines. Maybe if i read it as a wip, it would not feel like the S E X / story is unending.  When i start a story i need to have closure, in this case the bad guy had to be caught or die.
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Thanks, Tricklem.  I am off to check out Beyond the lines. Maybe if i read it as a wip, it would not feel like the S E X / story is unending.  When i start a story i need to have closure, in this case the bad guy had to be catch or die.

I just skimmed the last update to see what you were all talking about - 3 sex scenes, and reference to 4 more orgasms on a flight to Greece in one chapter.

PWP is all well and good, but not for 147 + chapters. All that clit-pinching gets a little painful after a while!
 

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I just skimmed the last update to see what you were all talking about - 3 sex scenes, and reference to 4 more orgasms on a flight to Greece in one chapter.

PWP is all well and good, but not for 147 + chapters. All that clit-pinching gets a little painful after a while!

 :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

So true, so true....
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I just skimmed the last update to see what you were all talking about - 3 sex scenes, and reference to 4 more orgasms on a flight to Greece in one chapter.

PWP is all well and good, but not for 147 + chapters. All that clit-pinching gets a little painful after a while!

 :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
my problem is that i am the type that will stay on a runaway train just to see how bad the wreck can get. I really need to get off this train. I think i will wait for the sequel to finish and just skim the last chapter to get the ending. Going to read facing the inevitable instead.
 

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:D :D :D :D :D :D :D
my problem is that i am the type that will stay on a runaway train just to see how bad the wreck can get. I really need to get off this train. I think i will wait for the sequel to finish and just skim the last chapter to get the ending. Going to read facing the inevitable instead.
There was a discussion on the FB page for one of the stories I for which I beta about lemons. I mentioned I tend to skim them after a point, as I get bored. 

Didn't go over well with my writer.  I told her I do read her lemons, though sometimes when I find myself skimming? I have to remember that I need to read them and then I go back and start at the top. 

My other two stories don't have lemons. Or not so far....
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:D :D :D :D :D :D :D
my problem is that i am the type that will stay on a runaway train just to see how bad the wreck can get. I really need to get off this train. I think i will wait for the sequel to finish and just skim the last chapter to get the ending. Going to read facing the inevitable instead.

I am exactly the same. Last year, I made the disastrous decision to read my TBR in alphabetical order and came across some truly dreadful fics, however I could only bring myself to flounce one - and it turned out it was written by a 12/13 year old!

I didn't even make it through the A's!

I can count on one hand how many fics I have flounced over the years - I keep cheering for the underdog and hoping they'll improve.

It's a terrible affliction for a fanfic addict to have!  :-[

I'm reading Gravity #2 - Sin & Innocence. I don't have a lot of time to read at this time of year. By the time I crawl into bed, I can barely keep my eyes open so I'll be reading this one for a while.

I wish I hadn't started it - I need light and fluffy at the moment!

Make sure you take a look at the You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login. I am a validator for the submission. There are only 4 posted so far, but there are some lovely fics coming in.

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I've been catching up with some of the (shorter) fics that have been rec'd here recently and liked each of the following. Thank you ladies for the recs!

Nine Months - A Cullen Legacy Short story - pattyrose
Sweet, it fits nicely in the epilogue of TCL. Edward finally gets to experience pregnancy with Bella. It has been a while since I read TCL so I was pleased with the subtle refreshers included so there is no need to reread. It could probably stand on it's own, but that wouldn't be as fun.

Nine Months - A Cullen Legacy Short story - pattyrose
Former Congressman Edward Cullen has finally overcome the forces that tried to keep him away from Bella and their daughter, Elizabeth, and the three have settled into a life together. But when Bella becomes pregnant again, how will Edward deal with nine months of expectation, combined with a new campaign run? A short story based on The Cullen Legacy. Daily updates. Rated M.
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Curve Ball - staceleo
I thought this was funny. Snarky sarcastic funny. Edward's kind of a dork, but in a sweet way and Bella gives the story a nice edge. HS fic. A clipped writing style with short chapters. Haven't decided if I'll read the sequel of them in college.

Curve Ball - staceleo
Opposites attract don't they? Not in Bella Swan's world. Unfortunately, the Captain of the baseball team has other ideas. A short chapter tale written for mauigirl60.
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Awkwardly Yours - Vancouver-Canuck-Girl
Embarrassing funny for this very adorkable Edward. Glad I was never a 15-year-old male, but it was humorous reading his thoughts.

Awkwardly Yours - Vancouver-Canuck-Girl
High school Edward likes a girl named Bella, But he's not a smooth-talking kind of fella. He has his fair share of inserting foot into mouth, And inappropriate risings down south. But he's really kind of sweet, Even if he's sort of a geek.
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Professionally Personal - DH78
Short, but good. CEOward with tats. YUM!

Professionally Personal - DH78
Aspiring tattoo artist, Bella Swan works a nine-to-five job at Cullen Energy, Inc. When forced to work with the cold, elusive, and very hot CEO, she discovers they have something in common. Can she keep things professional personal? E/B Humor/Romance.
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Copy Room - Edward's Eternal
A nice quick story about a shy B&E, but with sexy times. I really liked this.

Copy Room - Edward's Eternal
Sometimes flippant words are really the truth spoken out loud. What happens when someone overhears you and decides to give you what you secretly want but never knew?
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I've read Copy Room last week it was really good, the other fics are on my list! :)

Yesterday I've finished Pistols and Petticoats by saltire884 and it was really good!! I reccomand it  ;)
 

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I finished reading Altered Measures and i really enjoyed it. It centered mostly on their relationship/dealing with becoming parents. I like her writing, i had a wonderful time reminiscing when my kids were infants. Cuddling cute little babies, the joy you feel when they laugh at you, doing their "firsts" of everything. The changing of the diaper scene was funny and oh so true! This was a fluffy read, just the right amount of lemons and angst.  :)
 

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I finished reading Altered Measures and i really enjoyed it. It centered mostly on their relationship/dealing with becoming parents. I like her writing, i had a wonderful time reminiscing when my kids were infants. Cuddling cute little babies, the joy you feel when they laugh at you, doing their "firsts" of everything. The changing of the diaper scene was funny and oh so true! This was a fluffy read, just the right amount of lemons and angst.  :)

Thanks for that. I was wary of reading that, because I've read enough pretend drama with unwanted pregnancies... But when you say it's mostly fluffy, I'll put it n top of my tbr!  :-*
 
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Rev PrincessRachael - Heat
« Reply #2158 on: November 24, 2013, 02:54 PM »
Oh, I just finished Heat! It was so good! I really didn't think I would like it as I've never been interested in reading any of the wolf stories, but with Edward as the Alpha, I decided to give it a shot. So sad I can't post a glowing review as PrincessRachael has pulled all her stories from FFN. I couldn't find it when I just searched PTS, but I checked and Ella's got it in her Google drive if you need a copy. I read it pretty quickly, and PrincessRachael lived up to her potential after My Mate and My Power. There was a lot of heat and action between our shifting B&E. A definite rec from me. Now what next...

PrincessRachael - Heat
Edward is an Alpha wolf of a dying pack in a world where she-wolves no longer exist. The responsibilities of too many lives rest on his shoulders and he's running out of time. Edward/Bella. Graphic lemons, violence, sensitive themes. Mature.
 

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Re: Rev PrincessRachael - Heat
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Oh, I just finished Heat! It was so good! I really didn't think I would like it as I've never been interested in reading any of the wolf stories, but with Edward as the Alpha, I decided to give it a shot. So sad I can't post a glowing review as PrincessRachael has pulled all her stories from FFN. I couldn't find it when I just searched PTS, but I checked and Ella's got it in her Google drive if you need a copy. I read it pretty quickly, and PrincessRachael lived up to her potential after My Mate and My Power. There was a lot of heat and action between our shifting B&E. A definite rec from me. Now what next...

PrincessRachael - Heat
Edward is an Alpha wolf of a dying pack in a world where she-wolves no longer exist. The responsibilities of too many lives rest on his shoulders and he's running out of time. Edward/Bella. Graphic lemons, violence, sensitive themes. Mature.

I have to agree.  I was a little on the fence, but I did read it and totally loved it!   :iagree:
 

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I went to the Dr.'s the other day for my ultrasound appointment and they were able to tell us if we are having another girl or a boy. Mini will be having a little brother! Mini-mister as Astro calls him  :)

 

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