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Thread #5 - We are crazy talkers here! Join in the fun!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general.  But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement. 

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice   

Because we know drypen's watching    :googlyeyes:

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Here are some.

Awaken
By: Edward's Eternal
A brilliant aloof composer, hiding from the world. An unexpected meeting. How will he react ? Can she help him change his vision on life ?
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Edward, Bella - Chapters: 50 - Words: 154,689 - Reviews: 4,537 - Favs: 1,659 - Follows: 1,049 - Updated: Jul 22, 2012 - Published: Oct 25, 2011 - Status: Complete - id: 7494523
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Little Green and Easybella
By: BettiGefecht
She only remembers a silent kid, he doesn't remember her at all. When they meet again years later, they feel a connection that isn't of this world - - - ExB; AH; Rated M. Autism; age gap; unconditional love.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Edward, Bella - Chapters: 38 - Words: 137,423 - Reviews: 5,532 - Favs: 2,856 - Follows: 3,194 - Updated: Oct 15, 2013 - Published: Oct 20, 2010 - id: 6412470
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Little Green and Easybella isn't complete.

A World Without Sound
By: The Romanticidal Edwardian
AU, BxE. My name is Bella Swan; good at sign language and karate. My best friend is deaf, and you know what? It doesn't matter. Won twice at Twilight Awards, and has been nominated more. Please review!
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Friendship - Bella, Edward - Chapters: 22 - Words: 105,849 - Reviews: 7,606 - Favs: 8,646 - Follows: 2,439 - Updated: Sep 28, 2008 - Published: Jun 1, 2008 - Status: Complete - id: 4292727
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Blind
By: Jayeliwood
AU,OOC, All human. Disability doesn't mean you're not able. Can Edward get over his disability and himself to find true happiness with someone who cares deeply for him. Will he do anything to become whole for her? Winner of 3 Twilightawards best author!
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Drama - Bella, Edward - Chapters: 50 - Words: 155,946 - Reviews: 7,106 - Favs: 6,168 - Follows: 1,416 - Updated: Aug 7, 2008 - Published: Jun 11, 2008 - Status: Complete - id: 4317210
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Pieces of Time
By: Jayeliwood
Sequel to Blind. Edward and Bella start a whole new life together but not without it's challenges. Now complete!
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Drama - Bella, Edward - Chapters: 56 - Words: 139,812 - Reviews: 7,251 - Favs: 3,763 - Follows: 2,142 - Updated: Jul 20, 2009 - Published: Aug 7, 2008 - Status: Complete - id: 4454158
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Visually Challenged
By: Shiloh2010
Bella Swan appeared to be the perfect teenager. She never gets into trouble and is always focused on her dream of following in her father's footsteps and becoming a lawyer. What happens when she starts falling for the towns visually challenged recluse and starts seeing life in a new light? How will her strict parents react?
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Drama - Bella, Edward - Chapters: 20 - Words: 46,127 - Reviews: 732 - Favs: 368 - Follows: 675 - Updated: Feb 16 - Published: Nov 24, 2012 - id: 8734633
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Visually Challenged is not complete.

Thanks! I've actually read all of these except the last one... not sure I want to get sucked into a WIP! ;D

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On the other hand, I accidentally started reading From the Cup of Duty by LadyExcalibur2010 and am really enjoying it.  It's not deep, but I'm on Chapter 10 and I'm much happier reading it than CW&IA. 

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From the Cup of Duty
By: LadyExcalibur2010
Edward is a ruler in need of an heir. Isabella Swan comes from fruitful stock. A marriage made in heaven, right? Well...not quite yet. Sometimes duty brings an unexpected gift. Rated M for future lemons.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Edward, Bella - Chapters: 23 - Words: 75,939 - Reviews: 4,873 - Favs: 4,851 - Follows: 2,717 - Updated: Aug 4, 2011 - Published: May 3, 2011 - Status: Complete - id: 6961284

Read this one a couple weeks ago. I liked it pretty well. Mostly just a cute, fluffy story to enjoy.
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I think it's been a while since I've read anything that could remotely be called brilliant :P

I've been stuck in Vampward mode lately, and they are always a mixed bag.  My current read I won't rec unless you love Vampward. Bella is a little too sweet and innocent for me. Edward is sweet, but a normal 17 year old. Knows it all, yet doesn't have a clue.  ;)

I wanna hear the rec....  ^-^
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I wanna hear the rec....  ^-^
I did say I wasn't sure I would rec this.  It is almost like a bunch of one-shots thrown together for a story.  Or a few short stories where a couple of stories run through a few chapters. There are also some SPAG errors. 

I'm on the second one - the first is really short, kind of a BD alternate. 

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Part 1 of 3 of Vampire Bella Trilogy. Begins after Eclipse and follows Edward and Bella as they make it through their wedding and Bella's change. Rated M for adult material.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 28 - Words: 43,809 - Reviews: 593 - Favs: 1,512 - Follows: 279 - Updated: Sep 18, 2008 - Published: Nov 23, 2007 - Complete

I'm now reading
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Part 2 of 3 of Vampire Bella Trilogy. This story is the sequel to The Fairytale Continues. It follows Bella in her first year as a vampire. Rated M for adult material.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 62 - Words: 162,772 - Reviews: 1742 - Favs: 1,334 - Follows: 363 - Updated: Sep 18, 2008 - Published: Dec 5, 2007 - Complete

There's also some short stories and one shots that are referred to in the story.  I actually stopped and read one because they kept referring to it - where they guys go to Vegas.  But it doesn't really make sense unless you read it after the chapters where it fits.  If that makes any sense.   Someone over on the Vampward Lovers Facebook really loved her stuff (My-Bella) so I gave it a go.  Just good enough to keep going but I want to shake Bella.  She acts like a little child sometimes.  Not a whiny brat child but a scared of her shadow wimpy kid. She's a vamp.  And there are some weird things that seem sort of stupid.

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Anyway.  I'm still reading.  I liked Eternally Damned much better:
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By: twiXlite
Edward is THE ultimate vampire. The original. What happens when a visit to the Volturi causes him to pay the Cullens' a visit? Will he find them a threat to the world he's spent an eternity shaping or will he leave them be and let them live in peace?
Rated: Fiction M - English - Supernatural/Romance - Edward, Bella - Chapters: 36 - Words: 173,728 - Reviews: 4,484 - Favs: 4,796 - Follows: 2,587 - Updated: Apr 30, 2013 - Published: Apr 27, 2009 - Status: Complete - id: 5023928

Bella starts out quiet but soon absorbs Edward's confidence.  Bella has some interesting powers she didn't know she had until she meets Edward.  Edward is badass.  I really like him.  Take no prisoners.  And he can't be killed. So he has no fear.  It's interesting. Trying to remember if there were SPaG errors.  Probably.  But it didn't matter.   ;D

It was really good.  I'll probably reread it and think "What the heck was I thinking when I said this was great?" That happens a lot to me.....  :D :D :D :D
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I'm 3/5ths of the way through.  It's taken me months to get this far and all I really want to do is go back and read The Misapprehension of Bella Swan to wash the memory of this clusterfck out of my head. 

Sorry to those who LOVE CW&IA.  Feel free to ignore me or tell everyone what you loved about the story.

I can relate to this situation so much. I've got 3 or 4 stories on my ipad that I'm halfway through but just can't bring myself to finish.
 

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I started reading cup of duty just to give myself a break from FD&KK. It's surprisingly good. I love Edward's character in this one. Bit of a typical, bumbling, screw it all and go with the flow guy. I gotta laugh at him.

I read the Vampire Bella Trilogy by My-Bella.... god, years ago. Those were some of the first Twilight fics I started reading. They really weren't that bad. A different thing to get used to, but I kinda liked how she took SM's twisted and kinda dorky version of vampires and made it her own a bit. And I like the power she gave Bella (since it was written before BD).

She wrote another one, AH/AU. Bella and Emmett were brother and sister and lost their parents. I think Em taught or coach football at a local school. Bella was a musician I think. Anyways... she came home from school, met the gang, fell in love with Edward, got married...... yadda yadda yad. Normal meet, fall in love, live happily ever after. She wrote a sequal for that one too, but I never finished it. My-Bella's writing is good, and not grade schoolish, but it is reeeeaaaalllllly long. Long chapters, long stories. They're ones you need to read on a rainy day, snow-bound school day, or hours long car ride stories.
 
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Here are some.

Cuffs
By: Chanse Lowell
AH BxE EPOV D/s What does it mean to be a Dom, and what is he looking for in a sub? How will his world change when he actually finds the woman he's been looking for? And is he ready to commit everything to one sub that practically takes him to his knees? What will he do to have her and keep her as his own? There's a moment when you know what's right for you.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance - Bella, Edward - Chapters: 20 - Words: 86,722 - Reviews: 558 - Favs: 500 - Follows: 423 - Updated: Jun 4, 2013 - Published: May 18, 2013 - Status: Complete - id: 9303867
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Breaking Blood on Alabaster
By: Chanse Lowell
AH ExB 1899 New York City, a young widow has bills and responsibilities. What will she do to the owner of the New York Times when he refuses to sign her weekly wages? Will she drag him to the lower east side and teach him a lesson, or tease him with her body? All good ideas, only she hadn't planned on this man taking absolute control. BDSM themes, blood lust and fisticuffs ensue.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance - Bella, Edward - Chapters: 21 - Words: 86,207 - Reviews: 435 - Favs: 191 - Follows: 246 - Updated: Jul 22, 2013 - Published: Jun 8, 2013 - Status: Complete - id: 9371008
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Bella is the dom and Edward is the sub in Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips.

Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
By: Krazyk85
Ladies man, Edward Cullen, is forever changed when he meets Bella Swan. When she ignores him relentlessly, he discovers the one possible way to get her attention. Can he be the sub that this Domme will want to keep? All EPOV, lemons- Subward/Domella Fic
Rated: Fiction M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Edward, Bella - Chapters: 49 - Words: 339,404 - Reviews: 1,636 - Favs: 1,130 - Follows: 858 - Updated: Jun 29, 2012 - Published: Jul 8, 2010 - Status: Complete - id: 6122874
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So I have a soft spot for fics where Bella or Edward are blind/deaf/mute/autistic/disabled/etc. Does anyone have any good suggestions?

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Seeing Bella
By: sherryola
Alice has a vision of a girl with no vision. She will either save Edward from his life of lonely brooding, or she will destroy him with his destruction of her. Can Bella discover the Cullen family secret if she can't see? Canon vamps and couples. AU
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance - Bella, Edward - Chapters: 50 - Words: 366,996 - Reviews: 3,844 - Favs: 2,214 - Follows: 1,382 - Updated: Apr 1, 2012 - Published: Dec 22, 2010 - Status: Complete - id: 6579398
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The Blizzard
By: sheviking
Bella is walking home during a blizzard and stumbles on a homeless man on the ground. Despite her better judgment she decides to save him from the cold, and the night turns into something she never expected. ON TEMP. HIATUS.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Drama - Bella, Edward - Chapters: 27 - Words: 168,232 - Reviews: 9,208 - Favs: 7,323 - Follows: 7,493 - Updated: Mar 11, 2013 - Published: Mar 23, 2010 - id: 5838482
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Edward is mute in The Blizzard.

Judging Books
By: Savage7289
Debutante Bella is planning to follow Dad's footsteps. A chance meeting at a stop light with a beautiful boy on a bicycle gives her a new outlook on life. Is she willing to risk living life to the fullest with this fascinating, but damaged, young man?
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Drama - Edward, Bella - Chapters: 5 - Words: 45,164 - Reviews: 1,467 - Favs: 2,238 - Follows: 1,407 - Updated: Nov 9, 2010 - Published: Sep 14, 2010 - Status: Complete - id: 6324659
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Win Some, Lose Some
By: Savage7289
Disorder has always been an issue for me - I just can't stand the unexpected. Everything in my life has been turned upside down, and I have no one to turn to. Do I? Quick Fic. EPOV. M
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Edward, Bella - Chapters: 75 - Words: 108,875 - Reviews: 15,015 - Favs: 2,896 - Follows: 2,274 - Updated: Aug 22, 2012 - Published: Mar 13, 2012 - Status: Complete - id: 7922076
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Warning: There is attempted rape in Win Some, Lose Some. Edward saves Bella in time.
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Hey guys
Any suggestions for good BDSM fanfics ?
With Domward ?

Love those

Thanks in advance  :-*

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Coming Attractions
By: BoysNBooksRBetter
Edward is a member of a popular BDSM club in Port Angeles and looking for a new submissive to perform scenes with there. Will Bella turn out to be everything he's looking for, or much more than he expected? Rated M for frequent lemons. BPOV and EPOV. Mature. All human.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Drama - Edward, Bella - Chapters: 29 - Words: 124,013 - Reviews: 855 - Favs: 831 - Follows: 795 - Updated: Oct 2, 2013 - Published: Jul 10, 2012 - Status: Complete - id: 8307150
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Full Exposure
By: BoysNBooksRBetter
Edward and Bella belong to an exclusive BDSM club in Port Angeles and have been dating for almost a year. What will happen when their D/s lifestyle is threatened with exposure? SEQUEL to Coming Attractions! BPOV and EPOV. All human, AU, rated M for Lemons.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Drama/Romance - Bella, Edward - Chapters: 25 - Words: 122,172 - Reviews: 610 - Favs: 367 - Follows: 660 - Updated: Mar 19 - Published: Oct 2, 2013 - id: 9734063
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Full Exposure is a work in progress.
 
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I started reading cup of duty just to give myself a break from FD&KK. It's surprisingly good. I love Edward's character in this one. Bit of a typical, bumbling, screw it all and go with the flow guy. I gotta laugh at him.

I read the Vampire Bella Trilogy by My-Bella.... god, years ago. Those were some of the first Twilight fics I started reading. They really weren't that bad. A different thing to get used to, but I kinda liked how she took SM's twisted and kinda dorky version of vampires and made it her own a bit. And I like the power she gave Bella (since it was written before BD).

She wrote another one, AH/AU. Bella and Emmett were brother and sister and lost their parents. I think Em taught or coach football at a local school. Bella was a musician I think. Anyways... she came home from school, met the gang, fell in love with Edward, got married...... yadda yadda yad. Normal meet, fall in love, live happily ever after. She wrote a sequal for that one too, but I never finished it. My-Bella's writing is good, and not grade schoolish, but it is reeeeaaaalllllly long. Long chapters, long stories. They're ones you need to read on a rainy day, snow-bound school day, or hours long car ride stories.
Yes, My-Bella's writing isn't bad. I just think canon Bella had a bit more backbone, I guess.  Though she is improving. ;)

Though they do go site-seeing rather than sightseeing. I guess it works. Central Park is a site one goes to see LOL! :D :D :D
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Yes, My-Bella's writing isn't bad. I just think canon Bella had a bit more backbone, I guess.  Though she is improving. ;)

Though they do go site-seeing rather than sightseeing. I guess it works. Central Park is a site one goes to see LOL! :D :D :D

I'm not sure that Central Park is a site worth seeing but ok....
One of the rare few....
 
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I think it's been a while since I've read anything that could remotely be called brilliant :P

I've been stuck in Vampward mode lately, and they are always a mixed bag.  My current read I won't rec unless you love Vampward. Bella is a little too sweet and innocent for me. Edward is sweet, but a normal 17 year old. Knows it all, yet doesn't have a clue.  ;)

I love a bit of vampward.  What are you reading?
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Here are some more.

Coming Attractions
By: BoysNBooksRBetter
Edward is a member of a popular BDSM club in Port Angeles and looking for a new submissive to perform scenes with there. Will Bella turn out to be everything he's looking for, or much more than he expected? Rated M for frequent lemons. BPOV and EPOV. Mature. All human.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Drama - Edward, Bella - Chapters: 29 - Words: 124,013 - Reviews: 855 - Favs: 831 - Follows: 795 - Updated: Oct 2, 2013 - Published: Jul 10, 2012 - Status: Complete - id: 8307150
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Full Exposure
By: BoysNBooksRBetter
Edward and Bella belong to an exclusive BDSM club in Port Angeles and have been dating for almost a year. What will happen when their D/s lifestyle is threatened with exposure? SEQUEL to Coming Attractions! BPOV and EPOV. All human, AU, rated M for Lemons.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Drama/Romance - Bella, Edward - Chapters: 25 - Words: 122,172 - Reviews: 610 - Favs: 367 - Follows: 660 - Updated: Mar 19 - Published: Oct 2, 2013 - id: 9734063
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Full Exposure is a work in progress.

I have skimmed these but I cannot say I like them that much. 
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I have skimmed these but I cannot say I like them that much. 
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:iagree: :iagree: :iagree:

Though strangers are better than family. Having sex in front of family is weird. And well, yuk!
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I started reading cup of duty just to give myself a break from FD&KK. It's surprisingly good. I love Edward's character in this one. Bit of a typical, bumbling, screw it all and go with the flow guy. I gotta laugh at him.

I read the Vampire Bella Trilogy by My-Bella.... god, years ago. Those were some of the first Twilight fics I started reading. They really weren't that bad. A different thing to get used to, but I kinda liked how she took SM's twisted and kinda dorky version of vampires and made it her own a bit. And I like the power she gave Bella (since it was written before BD).

She wrote another one, AH/AU. Bella and Emmett were brother and sister and lost their parents. I think Em taught or coach football at a local school. Bella was a musician I think. Anyways... she came home from school, met the gang, fell in love with Edward, got married...... yadda yadda yad. Normal meet, fall in love, live happily ever after. She wrote a sequal for that one too, but I never finished it. My-Bella's writing is good, and not grade schoolish, but it is reeeeaaaalllllly long. Long chapters, long stories. They're ones you need to read on a rainy day, snow-bound school day, or hours long car ride stories.

Another abbreviation that's going over my head... *le sigh* Story of being  a newbie. So, FD&KK?

Thx  :-*
 
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:iagree: :iagree: :iagree:

Though strangers are better than family. Having sex in front of family is weird. And well, yuk!

It's treble yuk with a large WTF attached.
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Another abbreviation that's going over my head... *le sigh* Story of being  a newbie. So, FD&KK?

Thx  :-*

Femme Docs & Kevlar Knights - very good Fic.
 
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I'm stuck.  I've been reading Clipped Wings and Inked Armor FOREVER (at least that's what it feels like).  Of course, it's so repetitive, that I run off and read a Kristen Ashley book or two to get away from it, which means it takes even LONGER to get through it.  I loved The Misapprehension of Bella Swan, but CW&IA is just so, so, so...meh!  I can't really recommend it unless you really like a whiney Edward and (really whiney) Bella who unrealistically expect the other person to magically fix all their issues, while clinging tenaciously to the belief that they are unlovable and worthless (oh, and that fabulous sex will cure everything, but steadfastly refuse to discuss any real issues with anyone).  If that's your gig, then you should love this story. 

I'm 3/5ths of the way through.  It's taken me months to get this far and all I really want to do is go back and read The Misapprehension of Bella Swan to wash the memory of this clusterfck out of my head. 

Sorry to those who LOVE CW&IA.  Feel free to ignore me or tell everyone what you loved about the story.

I've often wondered about those two stories. I keep putting off reading them.  I did finally pick up Cannabean Betrothal yesterday though and I'm at about chapter 13? I think. Pretty good. Better than I expected (I didn't expect much at all if I'm being honest). But, it does bother me quite a bit that Edward & Charlie feel that less info to Bella is better. I'd be pissed at being in the dark so much. 
 
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I've often wondered about those two stories. I keep putting off reading them.  I did finally pick up Cannabean Betrothal yesterday though and I'm at about chapter 13? I think. Pretty good. Better than I expected (I didn't expect much at all if I'm being honest). But, it does bother me quite a bit that Edward & Charlie feel that less info to Bella is better. I'd be pissed at being in the dark so much.
Misapprehension of Bella Swan is great. I put off reading it then someone gave a bit more info. It is very funny. Don't remember any angst, unless you count the angst Bella has when she sees the size of his member. :D :D :D :D

It is Hockeyward. I may have to read it again.  ;)
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Femme Docs & Kevlar Knights - very good Fic.

Ah. Thank You! Everyone's been talking about this one too! Maybe it's just me and not the fact that i'm a newb.  ;D ;D
 
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Okay need to complain about a couple things. I'm a member of a few FB fanfic groups that I really like. But I'm really getting annoyed with all the authors that post new story updates on ALL of them. Pic one and post it there. Why do I have to see it on every group page. I want recs from readers not authors trying to get you to read their stuff. 

Edwards Eternal. She writes great stories. But every Bella has blue eyes. That is not Bella. I end up flouncing. But the stories look good. Just so frustrating. Especially as I keep forgetting she does this. I get excited and start to read and BAM! Blue eyes. :P

Okay, thanks for letting me vent.  ;D
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