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Thread #4 - We are crazy talkers here!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general.  But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement. 

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice   

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #5081 on: September 19, 2013, 01:41 PM »
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Thief of hearts by Pattyrose

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The Geheime Vernietiging

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Are my favs of that genre


Forgot one. Camisado by sophz456

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Whoop! Whoop! TOH still my favourite FBI fic but I'll give Camisado a go....anyone die in that?  :D OK, I'm going to stop; I think I'm so tired I'm punch drunk, which is crap, really, because what's the fun in that...
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #5082 on: September 19, 2013, 01:49 PM »
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Well, she already broke one of my rules - starting tons of fics before completing any...  :-\

On my black list...  ;)
And the oldest is from May. I was thinking the same thing. A couple look interesting, but I won't touch them until they are done. 

So I really don't get this "domestic discipline" crap.  If my husband tried that? Yeah, I'd give him some domestic discipline.  Now kinky spanking? Yeah, I get that.  ;)
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Re: Goodnight, Noises Everywhere
« Reply #5083 on: September 19, 2013, 01:49 PM »
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Thanks Lucylu  :-* In which one of these does someone die? You can't have apocalypse without some character death..anyone know?  :D I'm kinda into a bit of death at the moment, I don't mind if it's E or B as long as one of them bites it! Even as I write this I can imagine the shutters that's going through most of you ladies  :D :D :D

Demaris, I'm shuttering  :o.
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Thanks for this rec! It was so great, I really enjoyed it.  I had a real hard time putting it down.   :-*

I guess I should go back to Touching Solitude now....  It is a slow moving story.  Good, but a little slow.  I'm enjoying it, but thinking it should be done by now.  There just isn't a lot of excitement to make the slow movement forward good.   :P

I had the same problem with Touching Solitude after the first half--too much literary realism for my taste. In the end, though, I liked the fic overall. I like how she kept the story mostly cannon except dropped them into the early twentieth century. It seemed a more fitting setting for the characters.
 
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Offline Chilibabe

Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #5084 on: September 19, 2013, 01:53 PM »
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So I really don't get this "domestic discipline" crap.  If my husband tried that? Yeah, I'd give him some domestic discipline.  Now kinky spanking? Yeah, I get that.  ;)

Yes, I have a huge problem with that lifestyle too. I just don't understand it. We never spanked/slapped/whatever our kids, we are a no physical punishment household. And, my hubby and I are partners, equals. I don't see any equality in a dd relationship.

So, don't like, don't read  ;)
 
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Re: Goodnight, Noises Everywhere
« Reply #5085 on: September 19, 2013, 01:56 PM »
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Thanks Lucylu  :-* In which one of these does someone die? You can't have apocalypse without some character death..anyone know?  :D I'm kinda into a bit of death at the moment, I don't mind if it's E or B as long as one of them bites it! Even as I write this I can imagine the shutters that's going through most of you ladies  :D :D :D
I'm shuttering as we speak :D :D :D
No really, I don't mind character death as long as it isn't E or B, unless they die together.  Then it's sort of an HEA.  But other characters? Yeah, they can bite it. CaraNo had an outtake to Bloody Kisses a couple days ago. So great.  I loved that story.  And I think most of the characters died in it. :)
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Re: LINK Ava Claire - His Submissive series
« Reply #5086 on: September 19, 2013, 02:37 PM »
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:D :D :D That's so bad!  :D :D :D

And such a contrast to the books I'm currently reading--I'm just starting book 5 of Ava Claire's You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login series. This woman knows how to write a spanking! So far so good, only 7 parts left to go...

I have these...not started them, are they very long?....
 
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Re: LINK Ava Claire - His Submissive series
« Reply #5087 on: September 19, 2013, 02:41 PM »
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I have these...not started them, are they very long?....

No, they're quite short. There's no way I would have been able to read it as the parts came out. So far, it's like reading one book of 12 long chapters.
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Re: LINK Ava Claire - His Submissive series
« Reply #5088 on: September 19, 2013, 02:51 PM »
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No, they're quite short. There's no way I would have been able to read it as the parts came out. So far, it's like reading one book of 12 long chapters.
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Coolio! Thanks LL... :-*
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #5089 on: September 19, 2013, 03:30 PM »
What a messed up story... (messed up in a good - read it! way)


Fortune's Fool
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Edward is a bartender at a college town bar where Bella studies. They meet and the connection is instant. Edward has a very unfortunate past and is hiding many secrets, but he is not able to stay away from Bella. M for language, substance abuse and lemons
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 21 - Words: 84,016 - Reviews: 188 - Favs: 132 - Follows: 68 - Updated: 01-13-12 - Published: 12-05-11 - Status: Complete - id: 7611227
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Ok, I hated that Edward at first, I was even team Jacob for a while here, but it is ExB HEA and in a good, believable way. I thought Bella was annoying, but admired her in the end.

Read it, stay with it, tell me what you think.

 :-*


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Re: Goodnight, Noises Everywhere
« Reply #5090 on: September 19, 2013, 05:07 PM »
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I'm kinda into a bit of death at the moment, I don't mind if it's E or B as long as one of them bites it! Even as I write this I can imagine the shutters that's going through most of you ladies  :D :D :D

Have you read Awake in the Infinite Cold by quothme
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Sometimes the fruit is forbidden for a reason. A mélange of Twilight and How to Be, with an Artward who so carefully and so softly sneaks under her skin and into her soul. Not your typical E/B romance. Complete.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Drama - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 22 - Words: 78,819 - Reviews: 2,946 - Favs: 2,608 - Follows: 1,089 - Updated: 04-11-10 - Published: 10-13-09 - Status: Complete - id: 5440286


Or
Incubus Anomoly by elusivetwilight
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Incubus: a sex demon that visits women in the deep dark of the night. Edward relies on his special gifts to consume his prey. What happens when he meets the one woman immune to his unique abilities? M for dark lemons and dark themes
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Angst - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 28 - Words: 157,262 - Reviews: 5,924 - Favs: 3,558 - Follows: 2,533 - Updated: 11-15-10 - Published: 11-29-09 - Status: Complete - id: 5544988


They're both really good and definitely have what you're looking for! 
 
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Offline lucylu0508

Re: Goodnight, Noises Everywhere
« Reply #5091 on: September 19, 2013, 05:37 PM »
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Thanks Lucylu  :-* In which one of these does someone die? You can't have apocalypse without some character death..anyone know?  :D I'm kinda into a bit of death at the moment, I don't mind if it's E or B as long as one of them bites it! Even as I write this I can imagine the shutters that's going through most of you ladies  :D :D :D

Hmmm....I don't think either die in the couple that I've read so far. At least they don't in Rekindled Ashes or Exposed
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But I'm on the same page as you, I never mind character death. As long as the fic isn't mislabeled (I read one once that said Suspense/Humor when in reality it was Horror/Tragedy. I see Humor and I'm looking for funny bits. Not a gory death...though I don't mind that and actually seek it out sometimes (weird, I know but I love the heartache)

Now, it's been some time since I've read this one and I hope it's as decent/good as I remember but this fic is a favorite for the heartache:
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Well, she already broke one of my rules - starting tons of fics before completing any...  :-\

On my black list...  ;)

There's a non canon author that does this...32 fics started and one is complete.

And I apologize in advance if this post is all over the place and doesn't make a whole lot of sense...it's been one of those days.
 
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Re: Goodnight, Noises Everywhere
« Reply #5092 on: September 19, 2013, 05:39 PM »
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Have you read Awake in the Infinite Cold by quothme
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Awake in the Infinite Cold
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Sometimes the fruit is forbidden for a reason. A mélange of Twilight and How to Be, with an Artward who so carefully and so softly sneaks under her skin and into her soul. Not your typical E/B romance. Complete.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Drama - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 22 - Words: 78,819 - Reviews: 2,946 - Favs: 2,608 - Follows: 1,089 - Updated: 04-11-10 - Published: 10-13-09 - Status: Complete - id: 5440286


They're both really good and definitely have what you're looking for!

I read this one...the ending was good
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but I struggled to get through the majority of it for some reason.
 
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Re: LINK Ava Claire - His Submissive series
« Reply #5093 on: September 19, 2013, 05:59 PM »
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No, they're quite short. There's no way I would have been able to read it as the parts came out. So far, it's like reading one book of 12 long chapters.
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Added to never ending list. Sounds like His to Command series by Opal Carew. Originally published as 6 separate chp and then re-released as a novella.

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Whoop! Whoop! TOH still my favourite FBI fic but I'll give Camisado a go....anyone die in that?  :D OK, I'm going to stop; I think I'm so tired I'm punch drunk, which is crap, really, because what's the fun in that...

Edward is deeply embedded into the mob for years and completely deserted by the FBI.  Bella joins and makes it her mission to go in and get him out. He has no idea she is coming. She won't take no for an answer.

 I read it as a wip yrs ago. I thought it was good. I fear the sequel is abandoned. It's been almost 2 yrs and the last I talked with the author she was all bummed because her brother joined the military and she was scared to death. She was from London and dropped off the planet 2 years ago. Twitter, everywhere really and I miss her. 2 years later still no updates. It will be fine to stop at the first book and back in the day, I enjoyed it. I don't remember if there was SPAG,  I do good to remember the plot after many fics later.

For visual stimulation here is a vid for the fic. I know I will never embed this thing. Sorry Astro I didn't use it enough to retain how to do it.

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And a review on it written by Fictionators back in 2010. I utterly suck at reviews. Well I suck several things , but some I do well. Twsss.  :D

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #5094 on: September 19, 2013, 06:13 PM »
Funny typo:


'Thanks,' he mumbled almost snatching them out of her hand.

He walked towards the door without looking at me.

'Paul?' I called.

He spun around immediately and looked at me his face shining with hope, 'Yeah?'

'I would love to hang out with you sometime.'

He beamed at me before running out the door.

I laughed under my breath at his erotic behaviour.

*I'm thinking she meant to say ‘erratic'  :D  :D

I have seen a lot of mistakes similar to this lately in the fics I have been reading.

 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #5095 on: September 19, 2013, 06:50 PM »
Damn.  He looks just as good in slowmo....



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Re: Goodnight, Noises Everywhere
« Reply #5096 on: September 19, 2013, 07:24 PM »
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Have you read Awake in the Infinite Cold by quothme
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Awake in the Infinite Cold
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Sometimes the fruit is forbidden for a reason. A mélange of Twilight and How to Be, with an Artward who so carefully and so softly sneaks under her skin and into her soul. Not your typical E/B romance. Complete.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Drama - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 22 - Words: 78,819 - Reviews: 2,946 - Favs: 2,608 - Follows: 1,089 - Updated: 04-11-10 - Published: 10-13-09 - Status: Complete - id: 5440286

While I thought this fic was really good and would definitely recommend, I thought it was mislabeled the way lucylu0508 mentions. I think Romance/Tragedy would be more appropriate.
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« Reply #5097 on: September 19, 2013, 07:46 PM »
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Added to never ending list. Sounds like His to Command series by Opal Carew. Originally published as 6 separate chp and then re-released as a novella.

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Think of it as an exchange! :D I just downloaded Carew's series. Thanks!
 
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Offline Avrildulac

Re: Goodnight, Noises Everywhere
« Reply #5098 on: September 19, 2013, 08:01 PM »
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While I thought this fic was really good and would definitely recommend, I thought it was mislabeled the way lucylu0508 mentions. I think Romance/Tragedy would be more appropriate.

It's definitely a tragedy!
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #5099 on: September 19, 2013, 08:19 PM »
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You think that is bad, I have just started and stopped reading a fic in which Edward has just meet Bella and given her a mighty spanking :-

""What am I Bella?" Crouching in front of me inches from my face.

"My mate my lover" I said softly, still crying.

"What else?" he demanded.

"My vampire daddy, very soon" He held my face now so I had to look in his eyes.

"Yes, what does that mean?"

"You are my alpha, and I am you baby girl"

"Correct, what did daddy tell you about us?"

"That I was to be good, and you would give me lots of nice things, and we would do lots of wonderful things, travel, be lovers, and married too" I hope this was what he wanted me to say.

"And" he asked very sternly."

"You would be spanking my bottom, for as long we existed, if I was naughty"

"Have I been?" Still holding my face but gently now.

"Yes" a slap to my bottom, "Yes daddy""

And that wa s one of the better scenes.   ???

 :D :D :D

This made me laugh.

I'd like to know why there are so many daddykink fics out there.

Is that like a thing people like? :P

Ugh. At least the really bad ones make me laugh. :D

 
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« Reply #5100 on: September 19, 2013, 08:35 PM »
hi if you have any stories similar to all together now by fireflyatnight
or tides of fate by Sparkling Twilight it would be great let me know
also theres one about edward and bella in highshool where bella is new and edward emmett and jasper share rose and alice
please let me know thanks
 
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