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This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general.  But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement. 

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

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I noticed he frowned every time he looked directly at the camera. He also had a package of Claritin, an allergy drug, in his hands. Looked like he was trying to read the directions.  So his bad mood could be the paps or a  headache. 

Though I do wonder why they still follow him around so much.  I guess I shouldn't complain. I get pictures. ;)

I don't think I'd be happy if I had someone standing in front of me taking pictures of every step I took (and blinding me with flashbulbs).  Probably yelling, too.  I think actors should be allowed to have a life without having their footsteps dogged. 
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I've actually told Edwards Eternal that I love her writing but can't read the stories where Bella has blue eyes. 

I kind of get it. I have boring blue eyes and think brown eyes are great. So maybe if I had boring brown eyes I would think having blue eyes would be great. And really?  Up until Edward?  A red-headed guy with green eyes?  Yeah, so not my idea of exciting. But maybe a guy with brown hair and red and gold highlights?  ;D

I always test out EE's before reading. I was able to read Awaken (?) where Edward is blind. She only mentioned once that Bella had blue eyes so I could ignore it. But I am with you on checking it out. She gives Edward blue eyes a lot too.  >:(

I think I would do that more if i was more well known in the fandom or if I reviewed on a more consistent basis.  But I'm just a face in the crowd. If anything, the blue eye'd Bella issue is one of my more mild fandom pet peeves.
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I've actually told Edwards Eternal that I love her writing but can't read the stories where Bella has blue eyes. 

I kind of get it. I have boring blue eyes and think brown eyes are great. So maybe if I had boring brown eyes I would think having blue eyes would be great. And really?  Up until Edward?  A red-headed guy with green eyes?  Yeah, so not my idea of exciting. But maybe a guy with brown hair and red and gold highlights?  ;D
I always test out EE's before reading. I was able to read Awaken (?) where Edward is blind. She only mentioned once that Bella had blue eyes so I could ignore it. But I am with you on checking it out. She gives Edward blue eyes a lot too.  >:(

I think so many people said things to her that she doesn't mention "blue eyes" as often in her stories where she gives Bella blue eyes.
 
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I noticed he frowned every time he looked directly at the camera. He also had a package of Claritin, an allergy drug, in his hands. Looked like he was trying to read the directions.  So his bad mood could be the paps or a  headache. 

Though I do wonder why they still follow him around so much.  I guess I shouldn't complain. I get pictures. ;)

It has been an allergy nightmare in New York lately - dry, windy and Spring blooming season - hope it doesn't spoil his birthday.
 
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It has been an allergy nightmare in New York lately - dry, windy and Spring blooming season - hope it doesn't spoil his birthday.

I think it might not be more than New York.  With the drought in CA, everything is bloomi ng and at once.  I know many people who are having a hell of a time with allergies.

And I should have led off with this, but it takes alot of courage, Ella, to just come out and say what you did.  I expect a firestorm from your comments, though I do think there are many who feel as you do.
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I think so many people said things to her that she doesn't mention "blue eyes" as often in her stories where she gives Bella blue eyes.
Well, it is technically not a fan fiction if you change the main characters' physical description.  There is a little bit of play with the vampires because you could go with their original human description or their vampire description. I'm also okay with stuff that can change. Such as hair color can be dyed. But it should be dyed and not natural. People get fat or lose weight or work out and get muscles. But you don't change height.  Unless you are a shapeshifter. :P

Also, I am currently reading a story where Bella swears in every sentence. I think they get this from the stories of Kristen because original Bella never swore. It is starting to get old. I realize there are people who swear a lot. And I have no problem with it where it makes sense. But I  am about to flounce because I am getting tired of it. It is not a well written story anyway. Just an Actorward that's been on my list forever.  At 22, she is a B*tch with a heart of gold. Yeah, maybe if she was 40 and worked the streets. She teaches dance and works with kids.  Sigh.  I really want to like it. But this is the 3rd time I've tried reading it. :P
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I think it might not be more than New York.  With the drought in CA, everything is bloomi ng and at once.  I know many people who are having a hell of a time with allergies.

And I should have led off with this, but it takes alot of courage, Ella, to just come out and say what you did.  I expect a firestorm from your comments, though I do think there are many who feel as you do.
I'm getting braver over on Facebook. I actually have had people agree with a lot of my comments.  But I try to be a little more polite there because there are some really crazy ones in the twific fanbase. Though usually?  If you argue for canon, they take it better.  ;)
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Well, it is technically not a fan fiction if you change the main characters' physical description.  There is a little bit of play with the vampires because you could go with their original human description or their vampire description. I'm also okay with stuff that can change. Such as hair color can be dyed. But it should be dyed and not natural. People get fat or lose weight or work out and get muscles. But you don't change height.  Unless you are a shapeshifter. :P

Also, I am currently reading a story where Bella swears in every sentence. I think they get this from the stories of Kristen because original Bella never swore. It is starting to get old. I realize there are people who swear a lot. And I have no problem with it where it makes sense. But I  am about to flounce because I am getting tired of it. It is not a well written story anyway. Just an Actorward that's been on my list forever.  At 22, she is a B*tch with a heart of gold. Yeah, maybe if she was 40 and worked the streets. She teaches dance and works with kids.  Sigh.  I really want to like it. But this is the 3rd time I've tried reading it. :P

I agree. When I read EE's early work, I said as much in a review (probably more than one) and her response was less than nice, so now I prescreen all her stories before reading.  It is sad because she writes well, I just think if she wants a blue eyed character it should not be Bella.  Rosalie, Alice, Tanya... they could all be blue-eyed since we don't know their human eye color, but I think she knows that more people read Bella/Edward stories than other combos so she gives Bella blue eyes even if it turns some of us off.
 
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Well, it is technically not a fan fiction if you change the main characters' physical description.  There is a little bit of play with the vampires because you could go with their original human description or their vampire description. I'm also okay with stuff that can change. Such as hair color can be dyed. But it should be dyed and not natural. People get fat or lose weight or work out and get muscles. But you don't change height.  Unless you are a shapeshifter. :P

Also, I am currently reading a story where Bella swears in every sentence. I think they get this from the stories of Kristen because original Bella never swore. It is starting to get old. I realize there are people who swear a lot. And I have no problem with it where it makes sense. But I  am about to flounce because I am getting tired of it. It is not a well written story anyway. Just an Actorward that's been on my list forever.  At 22, she is a B*tch with a heart of gold. Yeah, maybe if she was 40 and worked the streets. She teaches dance and works with kids.  Sigh.  I really want to like it. But this is the 3rd time I've tried reading it. :P

Idealogically, I agree with you, but then again, there needs to be a discussion about what is actually canon, fanon or even headcanon.  At this point in the Twiverse, some have it confused.  I'll go easy. Rosalie is described as tall, statuesque, blonde. The illustrated guide has her at about 5'10".  Nikki Reed is about 5'4", same as Kristen (and Ashley Greene for that matter).  I'm not even sure that I can see Nikki Reed as Rosalie. Alice also (atleast in my head) needs to be shorter.  That said, I do hope to get such helpful feedback if I ever get off my ass and write.

And I am morbidly curious as to the fic.
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Idealogically, I agree with you, but then again, there needs to be a discussion about what is actually canon, fanon or even headcanon.  At this point in the Twiverse, some have it confused.  I'll go easy. Rosalie is described as tall statuesque blonde. The illustrated guide has her at about 5'10".  Nikki Reed is about 5'4", same as Kristen (and Ashley Greene for that matter).  I'm not even sure that I can see Nikki Reed as Rosalie. Alice also (atleast in my head) needs to be shorter.  That said, I do hope to get such helpful feedback if I ever get off my ass and write.

And I am morbidly curious as to the fic.
It is called Just Got Lucky by Authenticstar. I downloaded it a long time ago. I don't think it is still on ffnet.  Though it may be here.

The other weird thing she does is that Bella and Alice are twins who grew up in Seattle and were from the area. But they throw out Spanish comments like they are native speakers. I never lived in Seattle, but my sister did. And when I would visit?  Spanish was not a big language there. Not like Southern California. I thought maybe she was from another country, but she says on her profile she is from the US.

I am with you on the whole mess up of characters in the movie. Though other than the height?  I thought Ashley Greene did a good job of Alice. 
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It is called Just Got Lucky by Authenticstar. I downloaded it a long time ago. I don't think it is still on ffnet.  Though it may be here.

The other weird thing she does is that Bella and Alice are twins who grew up in Seattle and were from the area. But they throw out Spanish comments like they are native speakers. I never lived in Seattle, but my sister did. And when I would visit?  Spanish was not a big language there. Not like Southern California. I thought maybe she was from another country, but she says on her profile she is from the US.

I am with you on the whole mess up of characters in the movie. Though other than the height?  I thought Ashley Greene did a good job of Alice.


Noted.  And I like Ashley Green as Alice, too. I feel she did a very good job.


And what the hell? I live in Northern California and while we do have some people who speak Spanish, it's no where near as common place as it is down in SoCal.
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Noted.  And I like Ashley Green as Alice, too. I feel she did a very good job.


And what the hell? I live in Northern California and while we do have some people who speak Spanish, it's no where near as common place as it is down in SoCal.
I also grew up in the Bay Area and I agree.  There were pockets of Spanish speakers. But they were definitely not the largest non-English speaking population.
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I'm getting braver over on Facebook. I actually have had people agree with a lot of my comments.  But I try to be a little more polite there because there are some really crazy ones in the twific fanbase. Though usually?  If you argue for canon, they take it better.  ;)

Ella, I stay off facebook other than to lurk on very rare occasions.  What have you done over there to stir up controversy?
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I have a facebook page but I have no clue why because I'm never there.  There are about 10 members of InDeath.net hanging out on my page - at least 3 of them moderators who should be over on the InDeath site instead of where I'm not.   Someone this morning in a pm asked where one mod was because she hadn't been on and I just said "Go to my facebook page - she's always there whenever I happen to go to over."  We were expecting her to show up on our sports thread because she hates Tom Brady and the Patriots with a passion but all has been quiet.   As to allergies - if Rob is having a problem, he's got my sympathy because for the past two days I've felt like hell.   There wasn't any pollen on this street on Sunday (plenty 35 miles inland because my mother and aunt are having problems) but then we had a thundershower roll through and a ton of rain and Monday when I went out front to pick up the mail, the parking lot was blooming pollen.  Today its made it to the driveway and the porch and I keep clearing my throat and have had a sinus headache - the Tylenol Sinus has upset my stomach which it doesn't usually do.   I've kept the windows closed which isn't hard to do because its been in the 60's with a sea breeze and inside the house and I are both chilly.  Life is fun - not.  And yes CharReader - whatever twigs was wearing, it did indeed look like a droopy diaper now that you mention it.   And yeah - her looking lost would also fit - out of place, off in another world - absent minded maybe?   When my work place was down the street and I walked to work, people would think it was funny that I looked like I was a  million miles away - a friend saw me coming one day and stopped where she was curious as to whether I'd see her or not - I didn't - I walked into her.   These days its safer to know what is going on - I'm sick of the grocery store and people on cell phones running into me with their carts.   If you want a personal conversation with someone, go home.  If you can't remember what brand you were supposed to pick up then by all means call home  but good grief.
 
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I think it might not be more than New York.  With the drought in CA, everything is bloomi ng and at once.  I know many people who are having a hell of a time with allergies.

Last week was horrible for me over in Europe too.  I had horrible sinus headaches and couldn't figure out what was causing them until I walked outside and saw the pollen coating everything.
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I also grew up in the Bay Area and I agree.  There were pockets of Spanish speakers. But they were definitely not the largest non-English speaking population.

I also grew up in the Bay Area in an area with a good number of Spanish speakers, and I studied Spanish in high school, amongst friends we would occasionally use a Spanish phrase since everyone studied Spanish.  I have since lived in a Spanish speaking country and improved my Spanish so now that I live in a German speaking country, I still hear Spanish whenever it is spoken around me, and will speak it more readily to my kids.  So it could just be that the author has a friend in Seattle who speaks Spanish or something.
 
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I finished Where We Fell by Amber Johnson and it was excellent!  It's short, but just long enough to not feel rushed.

Can't believe none of us have watched the uncensored 50SoG yet.    I need to remedy that this weekend.   
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I know you all probably think I'm crazy when I talk about the change in Rob's (and Twig's) body language recently, but look at this timeline.  I only noticed when looking at this that the change seems to coincide with engagement rumors.

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Its not downloading for me but I have to agree that something happened after loose lips friend of hers opened his mouth on April Fools' Day.   None of his friends if you notice has confirmed, his family hasn't confirmed and actually she stopped referring to her family since then in interviews and they haven't confirmed or been heard from.  She's supposed to be on a world tour by the way - what happened with that?  I don't imagine sitting on Jean Paul Gautier's lap endeared her to a whole lot of people either.   Oh yes by the way CharReader, I finally saw the rest of the pics on Robsessed from yesterday.   Did you notice that for someone who isn't interested in the paps that she was looking in their direction across the street - and Rob was still glaring and she finally at one point took off her glasses so she wouldn't presumably be able to see them.
   On another note - for anyone who saw American Idol - Yes to Nick for winning - Scott Borchetta has just taken over his life.
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I finished Where We Fell by Amber Johnson and it was excellent!  It's short, but just long enough to not feel rushed.

Can't believe none of us have watched the uncensored 50SoG yet.    I need to remedy that this weekend.

I haven't even watched the regular version yet, lol! Always a kid around, hard to get time to watch.
 
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Its not downloading for me but I have to agree that something happened after loose lips friend of hers opened his mouth on April Fools' Day.   None of his friends if you notice has confirmed, his family hasn't confirmed and actually she stopped referring to her family since then in interviews and they haven't confirmed or been heard from.  She's supposed to be on a world tour by the way - what happened with that?  I don't imagine sitting on Jean Paul Gautier's lap endeared her to a whole lot of people either.   Oh yes by the way CharReader, I finally saw the rest of the pics on Robsessed from yesterday.   Did you notice that for someone who isn't interested in the paps that she was looking in their direction across the street - and Rob was still glaring and she finally at one point took off her glasses so she wouldn't presumably be able to see them.
   On another note - for anyone who saw American Idol - Yes to Nick for winning - Scott Borchetta has just taken over his life.
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She has shows in Brooklyn Sunday, Monday, and Tuesday so that's why they are in New York. 
 
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