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Offline Ellachanted

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Thread #3 - We are crazy talkers here!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of SavanaBlue's great contiuation....

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice   

Because we know drypen's watching    :googlyeyes:

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I've been following a story called 'A Prescription for Love' for a while now, but I think I'm going to have to flounce it (can you even flounce a WIP?) because it's just so try hard. The premise was great and I like the writing, but the story is dragging on and on. It's 250,000 words and there's just been another load of drama, even though the story is in a perfect place to be finished.

It's so annoying reading a story you know could have ended chapters earlier :P
I love Tufano's summaries, but her stories get annoying to me after a while.  I don't know if it's the SPaG errors or all the bullying she adds, but I've flounced the ones I've started.  And it's sad, because I really want them to be good.
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I love Tufano's summaries, but her stories get annoying to me after a while.  I don't know if it's the SPaG errors or all the bullying she adds, but I've flounced the ones I've started.  And it's sad, because I really want them to be good.

This is the one she is an overweight nurse? I heard about people flouncing it from all the bullying Bella suffers.
 
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Sorry to post another story on here but someone is looking for this story:





Looking for a fic a Bella and Edward one Bella and her brother jasper live in Phoenix with Renee and Phil Bella is raped by Jacob and she afraid of all men except jasper they move to forks coz it was too hard for Bella to be around Phil they then meet the Cullen's in forks Bella thinks she sees Jacob in forks and she freaks out and she gets close to Edward that is all I remember about it can anyone help

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Thank you. I'll go do that now :)
 

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I love Tufano's summaries, but her stories get annoying to me after a while.  I don't know if it's the SPaG errors or all the bullying she adds, but I've flounced the ones I've started.  And it's sad, because I really want them to be good.
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This is the one she is an overweight nurse? I heard about people flouncing it from all the bullying Bella suffers.
Yeah, I was close to flouncing back near the beginning. EVERYONE is horrible to her - colleagues, her father - and not just snide remarks, genuinely horrible and abusive behaviour. Not the kind of thing I like to read, especially not for chapters on end.
 
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Yeah, I was close to flouncing back near the beginning. EVERYONE is horrible to her - colleagues, her father - and not just snide remarks, genuinely horrible and abusive behaviour. Not the kind of thing I like to read, especially not for chapters on end.

I have her on alert, but I can't remember why I'm not reading any of her stuff. I think I found the writing a bit childish. But I may be mixing her with someone else.
 
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Just read this:

"Cause he's not aloud to do that."

 :bravo_2: :bravo_2: :bravo_2: :bravo_2:
 
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An Angel in Hell by AgoodWITCH

Bella, arrives at MASH 8076, as the new nurse working alongside her fellow dr's & nurses during the Korean War. She catches the eye of Capt. Edward Masen & he sees in her the angel who can make their hell worthwhile. Entry for 2010 Age of Edward Contest
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Drama - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 18 - Words: 102,640 - Reviews: 262 - Favs: 195 - Follows: 215 - Updated: 04-17-13 - Published: 09-10-10 - Status: Complete - id: 6314791

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just finished  :)
 

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I have eventually finished this one. 
It is really long and is a complete re-write of Twilight.  The writing is decent and although there are some errors, they are not enough to put you off.

It is definitely one of the better vamp fics I have read if you can deal with the length of the story.

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Everlasting Why
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A student of social work & her troubled client. Longing to help him, she suspects & soon learns there is far more beneath the surface than she could have ever guessed. & perhaps her motives for helping are more complicated than she's willing to admit. AU
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Supernatural - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 41 - Words: 171,428 - Reviews: 2,248 - Favs: 852 - Follows: 839 - Updated: 12-02-12 - Published: 11-01-11 - Status: Complete - id: 7515357
 
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I have eventually finished this one. 
It is really long and is a complete re-write of Twilight.  The writing is decent and although there are some errors, they are not enough to put you off.

It is definitely one of the better vamp fics I have read if you can deal with the length of the story.

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Everlasting Why
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A student of social work & her troubled client. Longing to help him, she suspects & soon learns there is far more beneath the surface than she could have ever guessed. & perhaps her motives for helping are more complicated than she's willing to admit. AU
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Supernatural - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 41 - Words: 171,428 - Reviews: 2,248 - Favs: 852 - Follows: 839 - Updated: 12-02-12 - Published: 11-01-11 - Status: Complete - id: 7515357
If you think that one's long, you'd cry at the 632,000 word story I bookmarked the other day! It'll be a miracle if I ever get around to reading it, as usually looking at the word count is enough to make me close the tab again :D

I read Impact (mentioned here a while ago, around 750,000 words) and enjoyed it, but in honestly I probably skimmed half the chapters because it was so technical. Another example of a story being needlessly dragged out :-[
 
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If you think that one's long, you'd cry at the 632,000 word story I bookmarked the other day! It'll be a miracle if I ever get around to reading it, as usually looking at the word count is enough to make me close the tab again :D

I read Impact (mentioned here a while ago, around 750,000 words) and enjoyed it, but in honestly I probably skimmed half the chapters because it was so technical. Another example of a story being needlessly dragged out :-[

I never look at the word count.  I do look at the number of chapters - I only realise it is a long one when I am still reading the same chapter after 20 minutes! 

I don't like drabble fics where there are about 10 words per chapter though - they piss me off.
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Damn, after sweating through a 3 hour blackout, eating some cupcakes now sure sounds great.

What a great saturday so far despite the power outage... Kids and i woke up at 10:30...ordered pizza, mojos and pasta for lunch (Shakey's, do you have that in europe or oz?)... all 3 of us leaving the bed only to eat or use the bathroom...reading/playing with our ipads ... what a way to rest from a busy work week... Now thinking where to order our dinner  :)

No Shakey's here - perhaps in Sydney or Melbourne, but definitely not in little old Rock-Vegas!

And what is a mojo?

I was thinking it's  a mojito - but why would your children be having mojitos for lunch? Mummy maybe, but not the kids!

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Oh geez, definitely getting my ass of the bed and making myself a dessert after reading this in Geek Love

We gave a moment of silence, contemplating the Trifecta before us. Two cups of steaming coffee-straight from the Fauxbucks insta-serve machine, a bowl of microwaved (now liquid) Hershey's chocolate, and a plate of peanutbutter-filled cookie sandwiches.
Bella sighed deeply. She always did when faced with the Trifecta, but this sigh had undertones of genuine tension. Taking a cookie sandwich, she scooped an impressive amount of chocolate on to it. Raising the devilish dessert to her mouth, her eyes closed in appreciation
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And they said reading isn't fattening  ;D

I just watched this week's Survivor Fans V Favourites (this week's here - it might be 6 months behind the rest of the world!) but they had the food auction and there was a massive bowl of peanut butter (which I will always think of as peanut paste!).

Not only was it strangely erotic, but I might now also be eating a sliced Granny Smith apple spread with crunchy peanut paste!

I'm mourning the eviction of Malcolm from the tribe! :'(



I'm also mourning that I've used my entire 50GB monthly d/l limit so my internet has been slowed to 256kbps - so it's click, have a coffee, click, shave my legs, click, read a book...for me until 2 May! ???

Damn my downloading addiction!!!
 
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Urghh, now you're just being mean and rubbing it in about me not being able to drink for a while.  :( :D
Ohhhh, how I miss the days when I would go to the freezer and get out some Grey Goose to have with dinner.  :D

Dinner...lunch...breakfast...

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My hubby officially hates you hun - sorry.  :(
Since seeing this pic - I've been nagging him to bake me cupcakes and bless him, he did.  :dance:
Just not 104 though.  :D

Yay - another man that I repel. I seem to excel at that!

So while you're lamenting that you can't drink for a while, I'm lamenting that I'm not doing anything to even get me in that condition!

See the grass isn't always greener  ;)

I hope you thanked your husband appropriately.

And I hope you thanked him so good that he no longer hates me!
 
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An Angel in Hell by AgoodWITCH

Bella, arrives at MASH 8076, as the new nurse working alongside her fellow dr's & nurses during the Korean War. She catches the eye of Capt. Edward Masen & he sees in her the angel who can make their hell worthwhile. Entry for 2010 Age of Edward Contest
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Drama - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 18 - Words: 102,640 - Reviews: 262 - Favs: 195 - Follows: 215 - Updated: 04-17-13 - Published: 09-10-10 - Status: Complete - id: 6314791

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just finished  :)

Different war, I know, but this reminded me that I am desperately waiting for You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login to finish.

1968 Vietnam. E&B both captains and doctors at the U.S. Army 99th Evacuation Hospital and R&R location. They have a one-night stand before Bella's first day on assignment, and then have to figure out how to work together. Bella fights sexism. Jacob fights racism. Edward widower, kind of old-fashioned. Jasper chauvinistic, but cleans up well. Alice strong, only slightly quirky. 100% AH, with some spirituality and mysticism.  Most characters slightly to completely OOC (especially in the case of Jasper), but hopefully still enjoyable. NC-17 for sex and language and drug use, plus references to rape and murder and torture.

I read the first few chapters back in 2011 but stopped when I realised that it had stopped updating. Does anyone know what's going on with this fic?
 
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I've been reading stories by DH78 aka DiamondHeart78.  She wrote Evening the Score, which I enjoyed very much.  But, I've been reading some of her other stories.  They've been fairly quick reads, light on the angst.  Be warned, they're unbeta'd, but the mistakes, for the most part, are not too annoying.  If you're looking for something quick, with sweet Edwards (particularly Half Full and Teacher of the Year), I recommend that you try them.

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An Angel in Hell by AgoodWITCH

Bella, arrives at MASH 8076, as the new nurse working alongside her fellow dr's & nurses during the Korean War. She catches the eye of Capt. Edward Masen & he sees in her the angel who can make their hell worthwhile. Entry for 2010 Age of Edward Contest
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Drama - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 18 - Words: 102,640 - Reviews: 262 - Favs: 195 - Follows: 215 - Updated: 04-17-13 - Published: 09-10-10 - Status: Complete - id: 6314791

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just finished  :)

What did you think of it?
Its on my next fic list. That means the last update still is on my inbox.
 

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I've been reading stories by DH78 aka DiamondHeart78.  She wrote Evening the Score, which I enjoyed very much.  But, I've been reading some of her other stories.  They've been fairly quick reads, light on the angst.  Be warned, they're unbeta'd, but the mistakes, for the most part, are not too annoying.  If you're looking for something quick, with sweet Edwards (particularly Half Full and Teacher of the Year), I recommend that you try them.

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 :iagree: Do you know what happened to Bella of Victoria?
 
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:iagree: Do you know what happened to Bella of Victoria?

She talks about working on it in lots of her author notes, but she doesn't seem to be making much progress.  She claims she's going to work on it after she finishes Professionally Personal which is almost complete.
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:iagree: Do you know what happened to Bella of Victoria?

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She talks about working on it in lots of her author notes, but she doesn't seem to be making much progress.  She claims she's going to work on it after she finishes Professionally Personal which is almost complete.

She just gave birth to a baby boy. I don't think he is one month old yet.

 
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She just gave birth to a baby boy. I don't think he is one month old yet.

Hopefully, she's spending her spare time sleeping then.  We probably won't hear from her for awhile.  Thanks for the info D-D.
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