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Thread #3 - We are crazy talkers here!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of SavanaBlue's great contiuation....

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice   

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It's a shame I don't know when your birthday is.. ;) :D

end of October, you have lots of time...  ;) :-*
 
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So...I'm reading a Jasper/Bella fic that is just...atrocious with the amount of errors in it but so help me, I cannot stop reading it. Normally I would have flounced by page 2, it's that bad but the story line is good sooo....

That said, some of the mistakes are just...w.t.f. I just read this one and  :D :D

"I find nothing more calming than that. My menstruations elicited a purr from her and the sound turned..."

I know what the author meant, I can decipher all of her mistakes but really? Confusing ministrations for menstruation?

And the really sad part? She claims that there is a beta.
 
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^-^ That's very sweet of you to say! Thanks so much :-*
Obviously 2am gave you the link, but another couple of people here write also if you wanted to check out the PTS talent pool ;) SavvyB (who's very missed around here!) has a fic that's currently on hiatus: You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login 107yearoldvirgin who recently began posting around here is a prolific Twific writer. And of course there's Astro, who regales us with tales of her and a Diva Cup :D :D Unfortunately she hasn't got around to posting that on FFn just yet, though.
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Mystery, suspense, drama, love, history.  An amazing AH Edward/Bella fic set at the turn of the last century.
 

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I am still reading S and S as I can't remember how it ends and this one just made me LOL.

My one leg automatically lifted to wrap around his waist and bring him closer to me.

What happened to the other leg???

This is a published book so I would assume it has been edited? 

 
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So...I'm reading a Jasper/Bella fic that is just...atrocious with the amount of errors in it but so help me, I cannot stop reading it. Normally I would have flounced by page 2, it's that bad but the story line is good sooo....

That said, some of the mistakes are just...w.t.f. I just read this one and  :D :D

"I find nothing more calming than that. My menstruations elicited a purr from her and the sound turned..."

I know what the author meant, I can decipher all of her mistakes but really? Confusing ministrations for menstruation?

And the really sad part? She claims that there is a beta.
I read one that had really bad SPaG a couple of weeks ago.  Like a fool I read to the end because I wanted to know what happened.  Now I can't even remember what it was, I just x'd it off my list and went on to something better.  All I can remember is it was a Jasper fic.  I usually flounce the really bad stuff, but I stuck with that one all the way through and then wondered why the hell I read it. :-[
 
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This is a published book so I would assume it has been edited?

You know what they say about assumptions! 
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  This has been a running theme for me today.   :banghead:
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I am still reading S and S as I can't remember how it ends and this one just made me LOL.

My one leg automatically lifted to wrap around his waist and bring him closer to me.

What happened to the other leg???

This is a published book so I would assume it has been edited?
Hopefully still on the floor so she doesn't fall over?

Though when I think about it, she is very flexible  :D :D :D   

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I am still reading S and S as I can't remember how it ends and this one just made me LOL.

My one leg automatically lifted to wrap around his waist and bring him closer to me.

What happened to the other leg???

This is a published book so I would assume it has been edited?

 :D :D

S and S?

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I read one that had really bad SPaG a couple of weeks ago.  Like a fool I read to the end because I wanted to know what happened.  Now I can't even remember what it was, I just x'd it off my list and went on to something better.  All I can remember is it was a Jasper fic.  I usually flounce the really bad stuff, but I stuck with that one all the way through and then wondered why the hell I read it. :-[

Maybe I'm reading the one you did...it's pretty bad.
 
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You know what they say about assumptions! 
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  This has been a running theme for me today.   :banghead:

I'm sorry you've had a bad day.  If calling me a
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helps - go for it!     :D

I hope tomorrow is better.   :-*
 
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:D :D

S and S?


Seduction and Snacks - used to be The Vagina Monologues.  I might end up leaving it for a while as there a lot of errors.
 
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I'm sorry you've had a bad day.  If calling me a
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helps - go for it!     :D

I hope tomorrow is better.   :-*

Thanks. The first week of work after being off for a few days is always awful.  Don't forget that I included myself in that bit of name calling. 
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:D :D
Maybe I'm reading the one you did...it's pretty bad.
Since I remember the SPaG being about menstrations I think you are reading the same one Hathor read LOL!

I remember thinking at the time the writer and beta probably were not native English speakers.  But considering my husband's horrible spelling, it could be our awful school systems.

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Seduction and Snacks - used to be The Vagina Monologues.  I might end up leaving it for a while as there a lot of errors.

Interesting that there are lots of errors in the published version.  My memory of jtmd24's fanfic writing is that it was pretty clean and well-written.  Am I remembering incorrectly?
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Thanks. The first week of work after being off for a few days is always awful.  Don't forget that I included myself in that bit of name calling.


I know - I was just trying to make you feel better.   ;D

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Interesting that there are lots of errors in the published version.  My memory of jtmd24's fanfic writing is that it was pretty clean and well-written.  Am I remembering incorrectly?

It's been a long while since I read the fic but, little things like heal instead of heel jump out and annoy me.  It is well written and I am enjoying it, I just expected it to be more professional?
 
I don't assume anymore - I expect!

 
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Hi, I'm D and I am desperate.  I have been looking for a few kinds of fics and have had very little luck.  What I want are missing secne and or other povs.  I would love an expanded moment of when Jessica gives Bella her coat back at school.  What was she thinking?!  Anything on the days after Edward came back, there had too have been loads of gossip, and anything with others observations of E/B.  One more, I wonder are there any stories with E/B taking Reneseme out as her P's?  Thank for any help and you guys rock, I really do love this place :-*
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I know - I was just trying to make you feel better.   ;D  THANK YOU!

It's been a long while since I read the fic but, little things like heal instead of heel jump out and annoy me.  It is well written and I am enjoying it, I just expected it to be more professional?
 
I don't assume anymore - I expect!

I've been amazed at how poorly edited books have become.  It's not just the little publishing houses like TWCS.  YA fiction is notorious for being poorly edited.  I'll admit that the smutty books I've been spending time reading don't even seem to be proofed, much less edited.  But I believe the same sloppiness is being seen in more highbrow publications.  Maybe it's due to all the cost cutting taking place in the publishing world due to lower volumes as people turn to the internet. 
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I've been amazed at how poorly edited books have become.  It's not just the little publishing houses like TWCS.  YA fiction is notorious for being poorly edited.  I'll admit that the smutty books I've been spending time reading don't even seem to be proofed, much less edited.  But I believe the same sloppiness is being seen in more highbrow publications.  Maybe it's due to all the cost cutting taking place in the publishing world due to lower volumes as people turn to the internet.

That is sad but unfortunately, probably true. 

I have read a lot of books in the past few weeks and it seems like the the proof-reading was non-existent.

Having said that, I am seriously contemplating writing to my local newspaper to offer myself up as a spell-checker.  Making spelling mistakes on the front page is ridiculous.  My grammar skills are not fantastic but, spelling mistakes bug the heck out of me.

O.K....deep breath - rant over.   :P
 
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Hi, I'm D and I am desperate.  I have been looking for a few kinds of fics and have had very little luck.  What I want are missing secne and or other povs.  I would love an expanded moment of when Jessica gives Bella her coat back at school.  What was she thinking?!  Anything on the days after Edward came back, there had too have been loads of gossip, and anything with others observations of E/B.  One more, I wonder are there any stories with E/B taking Reneseme out as her P's?  Thank for any help and you guys rock, I really do love this place :-*
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Let me think about this. I enjoy reading these as well.  They are usually one shots of an event in someone else's POV - that's what you are looking for, right? I just don't remember a lot of the titles and finding them in my thousands of stories is always fun!
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That is sad but unfortunately, probably true. 

I have read a lot of books in the past few weeks and it seems like the the proof-reading was non-existent.

Having said that, I am seriously contemplating writing to my local newspaper to offer myself up as a spell-checker.  Making spelling mistakes on the front page is ridiculous.  My grammar skills are not fantastic but, spelling mistakes bug the heck out of me.

O.K....deep breath - rant over.   :P

LOL Rickell rant all you want as long as I agree with you  :D :-*
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I've been amazed at how poorly edited books have become.  It's not just the little publishing houses like TWCS.  YA fiction is notorious for being poorly edited.  I'll admit that the smutty books I've been spending time reading don't even seem to be proofed, much less edited.  But I believe the same sloppiness is being seen in more highbrow publications.  Maybe it's due to all the cost cutting taking place in the publishing world due to lower volumes as people turn to the internet.

I don't know much about "real" books, because I mostly read ebooks, but it seems they are not as good edited as the paper versions, like nobody cares too much about them still... too bad...

I started reading English books because I was fed up with the poorly translations. I mean, is it really that hard to translate a series of books and at least try to keep names, brands etc the same? Or have some knowledge about the lifestyle / culture the author writes about?  >:(
 
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