Author Topic: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Three - ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY (Read 943814 times)

Ellachanted · « **on:** March 12, 2013, 10:46 AM »

Thread #3 - We are crazy talkers here!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW!

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of SavanaBlue's great contiuation....

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice

Because we know drypen's watching

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keypad · « **Reply #4741 on:** May 28, 2013, 06:09 PM »

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Tease!! Sent you a PM.

given the style of writing of Hoover, I think I would be willing to read Hopeless despite the warning of a dark theme.

Yay! My very first PM. I feel so special.

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Somebody please tell me I am not going out of my mind.

I am reading Seduction and Snacks by TJ (Tara) Sivec and know I have read it before as a fic.

Every single book I have read in the past fortnight has had twific written all over it!

I guess I really am a twific addict - I'd better stick to what I know huh?

Are you liking S&S so far? I was so disappointed in that one, but it seems most people liked it.

ajamm · « **Reply #4742 on:** May 28, 2013, 09:27 PM »

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It was jtmd24's The Vagina Monologues.

Wasn't this going to have a sequel? I remember I added it to my author's alert list and my favorites.

ficfangirl · « **Reply #4743 on:** May 28, 2013, 09:29 PM »

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Wasn't this going to have a sequel? I remember I added it to my author's alert list and my favorites.

The sequel was never written as fanfic. I don't remember if she published a sequel.

Booked · « **Reply #4744 on:** May 28, 2013, 09:32 PM »

Still in a quest for a good actorward, will read this next.

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He's a cocky man-whoring movie star. She's a media heiress engaged to another man. When Bella is in town finalizing her wedding plans she meets one of the men on her "Top 5." Rated M for a reason, very OOC.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 28 - Words: 158,902 - Reviews: 1177 - Updated: 2-9-11 - Published: 9-17-09 - Edward & Bella - Complete
And the outtake
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Though I feel a bit weirded out that Bella is with Emmett at first...but the first chapter looks very promising.

Matron · « **Reply #4745 on:** May 28, 2013, 09:39 PM »

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The sequel was never written as fanfic. I don't remember if she published a sequel.

There are three published works, I don't know how far the fanfics go. Seduction & Snacks covers them getting back together, book 2 is about them learning to live together as a family, and book 3 is a spin off of sorts, of what I assume was originally the Emmett and Rosalie characters, Drew and Jenny. I didn't read the last one.

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Ellachanted · « **Reply #4746 on:** May 28, 2013, 09:47 PM »

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Still in a quest for a good actorward, will read this next.

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He's a cocky man-whoring movie star. She's a media heiress engaged to another man. When Bella is in town finalizing her wedding plans she meets one of the men on her "Top 5." Rated M for a reason, very OOC.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 28 - Words: 158,902 - Reviews: 1177 - Updated: 2-9-11 - Published: 9-17-09 - Edward & Bella - Complete
And the outtake
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Though I feel a bit weirded out that Bella is with Emmett at first...but the first chapter looks very promising.

I started to read it but the whole freebie thing kind of bothered me.

And I can probably get past it if it turns out to be good. So let me know if you like it.

Chilibabe · « **Reply #4747 on:** May 28, 2013, 10:09 PM »

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There are three published works, I don't know how far the fanfics go. Seduction & Snacks covers them getting back together, book 2 is about them learning to live together as a family, and book 3 is a spin off of sorts, of what I assume was originally the Emmett and Rosalie characters, Drew and Jenny. I didn't read the last one.

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Good morning!

Did you like the published version? I really liked the fanfic, but couldn't get into the book. Somehow the style felt different, the jokes more forced... don't know...

Chilibabe · « **Reply #4748 on:** May 28, 2013, 10:45 PM »

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Grabbing the wine I took a deep breath before filling my lungs with the red liquid.

So he drowned himself with wine? Or is that a real sentence that does make sense?

Booked · « **Reply #4749 on:** May 28, 2013, 10:54 PM »

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I started to read it but the whole freebie thing kind of bothered me.

And I can probably get past it if it turns out to be good. So let me know if you like it.

Will do

. I was also hesitant about the free pass concept (no way in hell will i allow my boyfriend, fiance or husband to even kiss someone else) but will try to keep an open mind when i continue reading tonight. It is fiction and i may tend to live vicariously through these books

Just hope the author handles it well or I might be tempted to flounce.

Astro2009 · « **Reply #4750 on:** May 29, 2013, 02:40 AM »

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Did you watch this?

It has just been advertised as starting this weekend here and I don't know whether to bother or not.

I was watching the show that was on immediately before The Americans with the intention of hitting the record button on my DVR.

When I woke up, it was almost over! I have turned into my mother

Looks like I'll be adding it to my list of shows to download too.

laurendeplume · « **Reply #4751 on:** May 29, 2013, 02:52 AM »

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So he drowned himself with wine? Or is that a real sentence that does make sense?

I can't criticise mistakes like that one, as I've managed to write Edward with about 4 hands before - 2 in his hair, and then 2 by his knees. Not sure he'd be quite so dreamy then

ajamm · « **Reply #4752 on:** May 29, 2013, 02:53 AM »

I'm reading this You are not allowed to view links. Register or Loginand it's crazy! Its definitely something else, apparently some people thought Edward was retarded in this fic, but the author clarified that he is not retarded.

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Author: Twiddler83
Summary? This crack-fic doesn't need a summary ... because it's about me ... Batman. AH - ExB - EPOV Drabble Fic Rated M
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Humor - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 40 - Words: 17,646 - Reviews: 1,225 - Favs: 158 - Follows: 180 - Updated: 05-20-13 - Published: 03-14-13 - Status: Complete - id: 9100466

I'm not finished yet but it's okay for some giggles.

Astro2009 · « **Reply #4753 on:** May 29, 2013, 02:56 AM »

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no way in hell will i allow my boyfriend, fiance or husband to even kiss someone else

You have a boyfriend, a fiance AND a husband but you won't let them even kiss anyone anyone else?

Greedy!!!

laurendeplume · « **Reply #4754 on:** May 29, 2013, 03:00 AM »

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You have a boyfriend, a fiance AND a husband but you won't let them even kiss anyone anyone else?

Greedy!!!

You can take the beta out of the Google document..

Astro2009 · « **Reply #4755 on:** May 29, 2013, 03:02 AM »

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I can't criticise mistakes like that one, as I've managed to write Edward with about 4 hands before - 2 in his hair, and then 2 by his knees. Not sure he'd be quite so dreamy then

Holy shit!!! Imagine those fingers . . . doubled!

Chilibabe · « **Reply #4756 on:** May 29, 2013, 03:02 AM »

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I can't criticise mistakes like that one, as I've managed to write Edward with about 4 hands before - 2 in his hair, and then 2 by his knees. Not sure he'd be quite so dreamy then

Imagine Edward with more hands to tease...

So it IS a mistake? I thought perhaps it is a figure of speech I didn't know...

laurendeplume · « **Reply #4757 on:** May 29, 2013, 03:05 AM »

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Imagine Edward with more hands to tease...

So it IS a mistake? I thought perhaps it is a figure of speech I didn't know...

Hmm.. maybe I'm on to something with a 4 handed Edward..

It's not a figure of speech I've ever heard of. I think it was just bad phrasing, probably.

Chilibabe · « **Reply #4758 on:** May 29, 2013, 03:13 AM »

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Hmm.. maybe I'm on to something with a 4 handed Edward..

It's not a figure of speech I've ever heard of. I think it was just bad phrasing, probably.

A little smutshot with a 4 handed Alienward? Yes please!

And perhaps a little crackfick about Bella, Vampward and their "funtimes" with their own sparkly Cup during "those times of the months"? Title could be "Breakfast at Bella's" or "Shots for Vamps"...

(those diva cup talks invaded my dreams...)

Astro2009 · « **Reply #4759 on:** May 29, 2013, 03:21 AM »

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A little smutshot with a 4 handed Alienward? Yes please!

And perhaps a little crackfick about Bella, Vampward and their "funtimes" with their own sparkly Cup during "those times of the months"? Title could be "Breakfast at Bella's" or "Shots for Vamps"... (those diva cup talks invaded my dreams...)

Eeeewww!!

Astro2009 · « **Reply #4760 on:** May 29, 2013, 03:25 AM »

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So he drowned himself with wine? Or is that a real sentence that does make sense?

I think it's meant to paint the picture of inhaling the wine, but is just not well-written.

Not everyone is as talented as our Lauren.

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