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*calls to my ghostwriter* "Oh Savy!"

I don't write. I am not artistic. I am not creative.

Sexy Edward the security man touched my titty. It was good.
Then I woke up and it was all a dream.
The end.

Thoughts?

How about:

Sexy Edward the security man touched my titty. It was so f_ucking good.
Then I woke up and it was all a dream. he was still between my legs with his wand where it belonged
The end.

Holy shit! I made it rhyme too!  *pat on the back for being extra cheesy*

You do realize you will have a lot of beta's here ready to help, right?

I do and I will probs, no no will be asking one of you for your help in fixing my schtuff up

*calls to my ghostwriter* "Oh Savy!"

I don't write. I am not artistic. I am not creative.

Sexy Edward the security man touched my titty. It was good.
Then I woke up and it was all a dream.
The end.

Thoughts?

Hmmmm....

I bit back the groan that was building in my throat and threatened to fall from my mouth. The way he was looking up at me and the way his eyes, those goddamn green eyes, setting my body on fire. Eyes that called to me like a water starved girl, roamed down my leg to my five inch heel that was currently propped on his thigh. I swear I heard him growl as he gripped my calf, sliding his hand up to my knee while placing my foot back on solid ground. By the time he stood up, I was panting like a b*tch in heat. It scared me because this reaction was from one brief touch, and on my leg at that!

Hmmm, I could write this baby 

Hmmmm....

I bit back the groan that was building in my throat and threatened to fall from my mouth. The way he was looking up at me and the way his eyes, those goddamn green eyes, setting my body on fire. Eyes that called to me like a water starved girl, roamed down my leg to my five inch heel that was currently propped on his thigh. I swear I heard him growl as he gripped my calf, sliding his hand up to my knee while placing my foot back on solid ground. By the time he stood up, I was panting like a b*tch in heat. It scared me because this reaction was from one brief touch, and on my leg at that!

Hmmm, I could write this baby 

Whew! *swipes brow and fans self* Is it just me or is it hot in here??   

Yes, I would read that 

A Hockeyward story just completed:

He Shoots, She Scores: The Full Story by WitchyVampireGirl
See how it all started. What did Bella do once she laid eyes on Edward Cullen to make sure he was hers. Watch as shy Bella stops at nothing to get her man. All Human, canon couples, a bit OOC.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Humor - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 30 - Words: 156,237 - Reviews: 1,373 - Favs: 340 - Follows: 561 - Updated: 01-22-13 - Published: 06-28-12 - Status: Complete - id: 8264586

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Haven't read it yet...

It's ok.

Whew! *swipes brow and fans self* Is it just me or is it hot in here??   

Yes, I would read that 

Lol, I have a whole movie going on in my brain about how this would go. Astro would probably kick my a$$ if I did this first before finishing up that other thing. 

This pic is not a manip??

That is really rob?

Well, it is a manip because there aren't 2 Robs (darn it!) but it looks like him.  I'm wondering if it was from that early Vanity Fair photo shoot where he was with a bunch of half dress women?

If it is a manip, then it is really good.

Agreed, not sure what to do about this one.

Flounce flounce flounce.

I didn't even start it. From what I read on ADF was enough to put me off.

That's  not for me. I'm a simple girl.

I haven't watched it. But it just doesn't look like him.
That's probably what: the hair.

Nope. It's an awesome manip though 

It  has to be a manip. Rob doesn't have that much chest hair. Did we all not watch Cosmopolis?

Unless he waxed and totes lost a craptonne of man points.

He does have chest hair, but it normally looks blondish and only shows in certain angles.

He also isn't normally that tanned, so it could be a filter.

my premise? there is a mole.  I guess I need to look at those pics from New Moon again, but....

And I didn't see Cosmopolis.... But I've wondered if he shaves a bit because in the V of his shirts? he sometimes looks hairier than he does in the movies.