Hiya Astro, I found out where on the Gold coast my family is.  Hervey Bay - practically your neighbours!

So I've been gone for a few days (5 days) and I expected there to be a new thread. But there were only ten pages.

What happened to all that posting ladies?

Anyways, so I'm catching up... and I read about this BAtB... by the way if somebody could explain to me what it is and where can I find it or something. I read the word customward, and my heart almost stopped. 

So if anybody can tell me... please 

Wow! Do they have a spare bedroom? I'll share a room for a view like that!

Even better - are there any single men whose room I can share???

Haha I don't actually know about spare rooms but the only single male is only 14 - sorry!

Alice has a secret. She's kept her best friend, Bella Swan, away from her family for a reason. But when Bella comes face to face with Alice's twin brother, due to circumstances beyond her control, will Bella heed Alice's warning to stay away, or will she do something very, very stupid.

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In a nutshell...

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Lots of lemons

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It's dark and creepy and disturbing and just so very good!

If you can ignore SPaG!

You can see why Savvy has written the ending and not me! Ignore my very bad summary and just read the fic!

And then wait for Savvy to upload...

This annoyed me as well, he's been around for how long, spent how many years beside the brothers, he cannot be that naive?

That might have been where I stopped reading, can't remember exactly because it's been a while. It was right after Carlisle called Aro to speak with Alice and he told her she and edward were hunting.

Thank you! I am here to entertain - tip your waitress!

It's those damn timezones! Somehow, I am ahead of the rest of you but I am always playing catchup on here! How does that work!

BTW - I know I said that I was going to find the next great unknown twific, but I started reading A Drink With The Girls/A Beer With The Guys by Carano. You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login

I am really enjoying it! Light and fluffy and a total no-brainer but it's really good - elements of Sex & The City.

I went a little cold on Carano after More but this has gotten me back on board.

My only criticism is that I flagfic'ed both stories and have to jump between the two stories - but the link above is to Carano's blog and her pdf there has them both combined in the correct reading order. I wish I had discovered that before now! I am up to Chapter 21 of 25! 

I'm with you on the flounce pussy thing but I can't believe you can't read CW&IA!!! After some if the crappy fics I read during my A-fic phase, I would have been delighted to have something like CW&IA to read!!!

JUST GROW A SET AND READ IT!!!

Yep, shouty caps! DO IT!!!

Forbidden is not P2P. Same subject matter, but in Forbidden, the relationship between the siblings develops throughout the plot. In IA, it seems to be pure lust. The author has obviously done a lot of research (at times, the fic reads like a uni report), but the character development just isn't there and there are inconsistencies in plot - it jumps around a lot.
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I thought Forbidden was well worth the read. IA, nope.

I agree. I've been re editing IA for some time. There are some inconsistencies throughout. The plot is rushed and/or underdeveloped etc. and I've condensed and re worded a lot of information regarding her term paper.

IA was written over two years ago. Sometimes I feel as though I should have never entertained the idea of being a writer as the task ended up being well above my head and expertise. I can't guarantee I am an expert now (leaning heavily towards not even close or never) but I do have a better grasp on the fundamentals. I hope. It's not abandoned. I'm just giving it the attention it should have had in the beginning. 
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