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Twific Discussions and Recommendations part Deux
« on: January 05, 2013, 07:47 AM »
ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW!  :18only: :18only: :18only: :18only:

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lotso pages. Continuation of Ellachanteds brilliance:::

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice   

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I'm reading this and it's annoying me so much how Edward talks to Bella during s.e.x.

Then I read her profile, she is 17 yo.

Why the hell would a 17 yo would be writing about being called a bit.ch and s.lut during s.ex?

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I read this yesterday and I agree with you.  Also hands round the throat is a big no no for me.
The age of the author does not surprise me as the writing seemed immature.

You're farther than me. Am only at Chapter 4 now. I thought it was interesting based on the first chapter. Agree, I was a bit disappointed when i read the se.x scene. How could HS kids do that?! And to find out the writer was so young makes me more shocked. But will stick it out and hope the story gets better. This is one of those fics i will have to skip the se.x scenes  :(
 
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Re: Twific Discussions and Recommendations part Deux
« Reply #6022 on: February 18, 2013, 06:17 AM »
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Good for you d_d! You've made me so proud!

I bookmarked this fact sheet (attached) a few years ago when I changed a light-bulb and then couldn't get out of bed the next day. I had to literally crawl to school, which luckily was just next door (I was living in a school residence at the time). I actually taught my class lying on the floor with my feet up against the wall because the pain of sitting and standing was too intense. At the time, I was teaching in a little one-teacher school with only 16 kids and we couldn't get a replacement teacher because of how far away we were from anything.

Anyway, I thought you might find it helpful.

Thanks for that info astro! :-* :-*

So... i only stayed for 20 minutes on the threadmill. My pilates instructor said i should start with 10 min and increase the time as i see there is no pain.
Plus i stretched, something i hate to do.

There wasnt any pain. i was bored!!!! Its always like this after a long period of being inactive. Even tho i was watching a sitcom.
I had to climb two flights of stairs the other day and i was sooooooooooo out of breath. That was embarrasing and worrisome.

Hopefully tomorrow after pilates i can do another 20 min.
And keep increasing the time and speed.


 
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Re: Twific Discussions and Recommendations part Deux
« Reply #6023 on: February 18, 2013, 06:51 AM »
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That was me. It only gets better. Normally sequels are not as good, not the case here. they are all great

Well Thank you so much DD.   :-* :-* :-*
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I'm reading this and it's annoying me so much how Edward talks to Bella during s.e.x.

Then I read her profile, she is 17 yo.

Why the hell would a 17 yo would be writing about being called a bit.ch and s.lut during s.ex?

Ps: this have nothing to do with the whole gender discussion. As I mentioned before I'm not going to defend women just because she is a woman.
LOL! We were saying women should not put other women down based on their looks. Behavior? Yup! That's always been up for comment.  It just started with my mis-interpretation of SAF as pertaining to her looks, rather than her sucky attitude. Because, though most of us can't change our looks, much, we can all change our attitude.

So go ahead and comment away about a writer's stupid decision to have Edward call Bella nasty names in bed. ;D
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Have i mentioned i am effing glad i finally reached the end?

Yeah, what i thought would be an interesting read turned into meh.. it had its moments but it was just so so...am hoping she continues to write though as she matures as i want her to fulfill the promise i saw of an engaging, humorous writer when i started this fic.

Now off to start Major Misconduct, finally, since i am in a HS fic mood  :)
 

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LOL! We were saying women should not put other women down based on their looks. Behavior? Yup! That's always been up for comment.  It just started with my mis-interpretation of SAF as pertaining to her looks, rather than her sucky attitude. Because, though most of us can't change our looks, much, we can all change our attitude.

So go ahead and comment away about a writer's stupid decision to have Edward call Bella nasty names in bed. ;D

He also asked her to come to daddy.
 :wtf:

I would be complaining if the opposite was going on, if bella was calling edward nasty names in bed.
 Its just, why the hell would that turn you on?

maybe im just a prude, it wasnt the first time i read it in a fic.

its a vicious cycle, women are mean to women cause women are mean to women who are mean to women......

but i would call a guy a slut as much as i would call a girl if they were behaving as such.
anyway, this is like politics, religion everyone has a different opinion.
 
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Have i mentioned i am effing glad i finally reached the end?

Yeah, what i thought would be an interesting read turned into meh.. it had its moments but it was just so so...am hoping she continues to write though as she matures as i want her to fulfill the promise i saw of an engaging, humorous writer when i started this fic.

Now off to start Major Misconduct, finally, since i am in a HS fic mood  :)

that one is a lot better.
 
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Re: Twific Discussions and Recommendations - Major Misconduct
« Reply #6028 on: February 18, 2013, 09:40 AM »
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that one is a lot better.

Oh hell yeah!! Am really digging this fic!! UST, sweet and fluffy... I promise myself, 1 more chapter and i will really go to bed or i will be a zombie at work tom...

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Wait, should i be reading this instead as it is in EPOV (which i lerv) or do i read alternately between the 2?

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EDIT: oh shite, won't be going to bed anytime soon. Couldn't resist and decided to read the 2 alternately...now have to read until EPOV is caught up.... what a sweet hockeyward!
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Re: Twific Discussions and Recommendations - Major Misconduct
« Reply #6029 on: February 18, 2013, 10:03 AM »
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Oh hell yeah!! Am really digging this fic!! UST, sweet and fluffy... I promise myself, 1 more chapter and i will really go to bed or i will be a zombie at work tom...

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Wait, should i be reading this instead as it is in EPOV (which i lerv) or do i read alternately between the 2?

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EDIT: oh shite, won't be going to bed anytime soon. Couldn't resist and decided to read the 2 alternately...now have to read until EPOV is caught up.... what a sweet hockeyward!

Shoot! I've read major Misconduct and I didn't know there was a whole EPOV fic to accompany it....Boobs I'll have to go back and read it now. Thanks Booked for flagging this up.
 
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Re: Twific Discussions and Recommendations - Major Misconduct
« Reply #6030 on: February 18, 2013, 10:05 AM »
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Oh hell yeah!! Am really digging this fic!! UST, sweet and fluffy... I promise myself, 1 more chapter and i will really go to bed or i will be a zombie at work tom...

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Wait, should i be reading this instead as it is in EPOV (which i lerv) or do i read alternately between the 2?

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EDIT: oh shite, won't be going to bed anytime soon. Couldn't resist and decided to read the 2 alternately...now have to read until EPOV is caught up.... what a sweet hockeyward!

i dont know what to say. cause i read both as a wip. so i dont know and dont remember if you could just read epov. maybe she says something on an author note.
 
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Re: Twific Discussions and Recommendations part Deux
« Reply #6031 on: February 18, 2013, 10:15 AM »
D_D I was checking out your list for a new fic to read and found Theories of Bellativity by kikki7 - I was really enjoying this until I realised it was incomplete and hasn't updated since October.   :banghead:

I am on the hunt for a new one now!
 
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Re: Twific Discussions and Recommendations part Deux
« Reply #6032 on: February 18, 2013, 10:19 AM »
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D_D I was checking out your list for a new fic to read and found Theories of Bellativity by kikki7 - I was really enjoying this until I realised it was incomplete and hasn't updated since October.   :banghead:

I am on the hunt for a new one now!

i know!!!!!! but it was such a good story.
:/

i sometimes remove those that were abandoned from my favourites, but i left some that i still hope to be completed
 
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Re: Twific Discussions and Recommendations part Deux
« Reply #6033 on: February 18, 2013, 10:50 AM »
 OK - I've narrowed it down to 3 that I am pretty sure I haven't read.  Opinions would be appreciated.   ;D

The Golden Giants Tour » by walkingwithgiants

The Cellar » by iambeagle

The Butterfly Effect » by LyricalKris
 

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Re: Twific Discussions and Recommendations part Deux
« Reply #6034 on: February 18, 2013, 11:02 AM »
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OK - I've narrowed it down to 3 that I am pretty sure I haven't read.  Opinions would be appreciated.   ;D

The Golden Giants Tour » by walkingwithgiants

The Cellar » by iambeagle

The Butterfly Effect » by LyricalKris

I LOVED The Butterfly Effect.  It's one of my favorites!   :thumbsup:
 
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Re: Twific Discussions and Recommendations part Deux
« Reply #6035 on: February 18, 2013, 11:03 AM »
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OK - I've narrowed it down to 3 that I am pretty sure I haven't read.  Opinions would be appreciated.   ;D

The Golden Giants Tour » by walkingwithgiants

The Cellar » by iambeagle

The Butterfly Effect » by LyricalKris

The cellar is awesome. easy reading.
The golden Giants Tour is good. easy reading.

My problem with the Butterfly effect was
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Re: Twific Discussions and Recommendations part Deux
« Reply #6036 on: February 18, 2013, 11:16 AM »
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D_D I was checking out your list for a new fic to read and found Theories of Bellativity by kikki7 - I was really enjoying this until I realised it was incomplete and hasn't updated since October.   :banghead:

I am on the hunt for a new one now!
That one has been on my watch list for a long time....  I'm guessing it isn't finished enough to read?   :P
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Re: Twific Discussions and Recommendations part Deux
« Reply #6037 on: February 18, 2013, 11:18 AM »
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OK - I've narrowed it down to 3 that I am pretty sure I haven't read.  Opinions would be appreciated.   ;D

The Golden Giants Tour » by walkingwithgiants

The Cellar » by iambeagle

The Butterfly Effect » by LyricalKris
Loved the Golden Giants Tour - mostly fluff. 

I started the Cellar but got distracted - I was looking for something to read & downloaded a bunch to my Nook, so though I heard good things about it, it wasn't what i was looking for at the time.
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Re: Twific Discussions and Recommendations part Deux
« Reply #6038 on: February 18, 2013, 11:19 AM »
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Loved the Golden Giants Tour - mostly fluff. 

I started the Cellar but got distracted - I was looking for something to read & downloaded a bunch to my Nook, so though I heard good things about it, it wasn't what i was looking for at the time.

their are both fuff.

Only Butterfy have some angst
 
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Re: Twific Discussions and Recommendations part Deux
« Reply #6039 on: February 18, 2013, 11:29 AM »
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That one has been on my watch list for a long time....  I'm guessing it isn't finished enough to read?   :P

I don't honestly know.  I got to chapter 8 of 28 before realising.  I will definitely read when complete though.
 
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Re: Twific Discussions and Recommendations part Deux
« Reply #6040 on: February 18, 2013, 11:30 AM »
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That one has been on my watch list for a long time....  I'm guessing it isn't finished enough to read?   :P
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I don't honestly know.  I got to chapter 8 of 28 before realising.  I will definitely read when complete though.

there are minor loose ends. probably one more chapter and an epilogue left.
 
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