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Offline Ellachanted

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ADULT ONLY DISCUSSION HERE SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO WAIT! DON'T LOOK IF YOU'RE EASILY OFFENDED :18only: :18only: :18only: :18only:

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Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice  :-*

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Offline RIP Jax Teller

Re: UL A Downright Disgrace by velvetglo
« Reply #1781 on: November 16, 2012, 01:53 AM »
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Here's my theory - she has been pumped so full of botox since she was 16 that she has no expression - hence her acting style and range, personality, etc.  :sign0099:


Well, that certainly explains alot, I don't know why I didn't realise that before  :D
 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1782 on: November 16, 2012, 02:48 AM »
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Well, that certainly explains alot, I don't know why I didn't realise that before  :D

I have all sorts of awesome theories. I could be the next Albert Einstein . . . if Albert Einstein developed Theories of Trivial Crap!

Here's another - Testosterone kills brain cells.

Think about it.

I don't know anyone that can disprove this one. The nicest 8 year old boy turns into a moron once puberty hits, and it's just downhill from there. How else can you explain:

 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1783 on: November 16, 2012, 03:03 AM »
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I'm not a fan of older woman/younger guy either, no matter the story type. I've only found a couple I really liked.

Tips for better living by adorablecullens is  very sweet story of a younger edward/older bella.  Take a look  You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login :)
 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1784 on: November 16, 2012, 04:01 AM »
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LOL!  This seems to come up fairly regularly.  :D :D :D. It's hard because I really don't think many realize it's a contraction when they speak it :P

All the more reason to send them back to Primary School! A little bit of a year 3 grammar lesson could go a long way it seems...

At the same time we teach them about contractions we could teach them that 'alot' is not a word it is in fact two 'a lot', you don't say 'abit' or 'alittle' so you don't say 'alot' either. Unless you add an 'l' and make it allot and then it magically becomes a verb means to divide or to distribute, then it is one word. 

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I don't mind so long as it is consensual AND there is an equal balance of power in the relationship.

I liked The Rookie by LyricalKris (You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login), struggled a bit with Art After 5/Counterpoint by sleepyvalentina and Age of Consent by littlesecret84

I've not read The Rookie, but it is on my TBR list. Art After 5 and Counterpoint are actually two that I have been able to read where Bella is older than Edward.

I also came across another on that is on my TBR list. It's older Bella and Actor Edward. I haven't read it yet, so I can't say if it's any good or not.

Hide In Plain Sight by FangMom
Edward is an actor, hounded by paparazzi and fans. His financial advisor Jacob invites Edward to stay with him and his family in Houston. Can Edward hide in plain sight and will his relationship with Jacob's wife Bella tear a close-knit family apart?

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations - BD P2 movie
« Reply #1785 on: November 16, 2012, 04:55 AM »
About the movie (haven't seen yet, but commenting on the spoiler)

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I have a couple of rec's :)

Refuge in Darkness » by Anlynne reviews
It has been two years since Edward left Bella in the forest. Now, everything is about to change...
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 23 - Words: 47,955 - Reviews: 425 - Updated: 1-4-10 - Published: 10-14-09 - Jasper & Bella - Complete

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This is shorter and I really enjoyed it.

And I started this one yesterday and am really loving it so far :)

A Different Direction » by GemmaLisax reviews
I think I am happy; I have a perfect boyfriend, a perfect best friend and maybe even the chance of forever. Problem is, I didn't realise I was viewing life through a blindfold until it was roughly ripped off. AU & vamps galore, rated M for a reason
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 25 - Words: 164,645 - Reviews: 1529 - Updated: 11-27-10 - Published: 6-22-10 - Bella & Jasper - Complete

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations - BD P2 movie
« Reply #1786 on: November 16, 2012, 05:24 AM »
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About the movie (haven't seen yet, but commenting on the spoiler)

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations - BD P2 movie
« Reply #1787 on: November 16, 2012, 06:09 AM »
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Jesus, I'm so glad you posted this. My anxiety would have been through the roof had I not seen this lol

From the trailer I saw, the battle scene looks pretty good, effects wise
 

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Re: UL A Downright Disgrace by velvetglo
« Reply #1788 on: November 16, 2012, 08:03 AM »
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Well, that certainly explains alot, I don't know why I didn't realise that before  :D

I also wonder why her mouth is constantly hanging open. . . Did the botox paralyze her mouth that way?
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Worship- Older Bella
« Reply #1789 on: November 16, 2012, 08:43 AM »
I'm a bit...conflicted, in regards to this story. Initially I was blown away by Beegurl13's writing; the opening chapters were really expressive, emotional and, to be honest, somewhat shocking. But as the story continued, the chapters became longer and the quality of the writing took a bit of a nose-dive, and though it was till a good read, it was no longer great.

I've battled with where I stand in regards to the moral issues within this story. I've finally decided that the betrayal of a person that you should be genetically programmed deep in your DNA to protect can never be explained away; Bella can not be redeemed by love this time, not in my eyes. So that question, on the thread, yesterday? Whether we forgive Bella and Edward anything and everything? I have to change my reply, the answer is "no".

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Re: Worship- Older Bella
« Reply #1790 on: November 16, 2012, 09:22 AM »
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I'm a bit...conflicted, in regards to this story. Initially I was blown away by Beegurl13's writing; the opening chapters were really expressive, emotional and, to be honest, somewhat shocking. But as the story continued, the chapters became longer and the quality of the writing took a bit of a nose-dive, and though it was till a good read, it was no longer great.

I've battled with where I stand in regards to the moral issues within this story. I've finally decided that the betrayal of a person that you should be genetically programmed deep in your DNA to protect can never be explained away; Bella can not be redeemed by love this time, not in my eyes. So that question, on the thread, yesterday? Whether we forgive Bella and Edward anything and everything? I have to change my reply, the answer is "no".

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Well now I'm curious what she did that's so unforgivable!
 

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Re: Worship- Older Bella
« Reply #1791 on: November 16, 2012, 09:42 AM »
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Well now I'm curious what she did that's so unforgivable!

 :D :D In which case my job here is done! I really want to hear what other members feel about this story and Bella's actions....
 

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Re: UL A Downright Disgrace by velvetglo
« Reply #1792 on: November 16, 2012, 01:06 PM »
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I also wonder why her mouth is constantly hanging open. . . Did the botox paralyze her mouth that way?
 :D

I like that theory  :D
I just thought it was because she was stunned by the handsomeness (is that word?) that is Rob.
 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1793 on: November 16, 2012, 03:01 PM »
Sorry I haven't been chatting much.  Been in a reading slump so I'm resorting to reading O/S until something catches my eye.  I think I've flounced the last 10 I've tried to read.  Blah...

I'm going to see BD2 next week so I haven't been reading the spoilers.  Thanks for posting them that way :)
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1794 on: November 16, 2012, 03:29 PM »
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Well, I'm reading Worship at the moment and for the life of me I can't even imagine what going to happen in this story!  ???
The end is great - I think it was one of the epilogues I really loved.  There is some hard times in between though.  I read it as a WIP, so I just remember it being good.  I don't notice grammar & spelling errors as much in a WIP for some reason.   ;D
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Re: UL A Downright Disgrace by velvetglo
« Reply #1795 on: November 16, 2012, 03:43 PM »
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I like that theory  :D
I just thought it was because she was stunned by the handsomeness (is that word?) that is Rob.
Or shocked at the things he is saying?  It has been one of the things I've loved about him in the past - He comes out with the most out there comments & the interviewers are Wah?? And of course, I'm laughing so hard because I look at his face while he's saying these things and realize he is totally joking, but he does it with such a straight face.  I guess growing up on Monty Python helps.  :D :D :D

Though he is pretty hot  :fire: :fire: :57:
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« Reply #1796 on: November 16, 2012, 03:50 PM »
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Sorry I haven't been chatting much.  Been in a reading slump so I'm resorting to reading O/S until something catches my eye.  I think I've flounced the last 10 I've tried to read.  Blah...

I'm going to see BD2 next week so I haven't been reading the spoilers.  Thanks for posting them that way :)
You'll have to come back into the light for a while I guess.  Just not enough good Jasper/Bella stories out there. 

I realized the other day that I had a bunch of Actorward stories to read.  I thought I had read them all, but realized reading the first chapter and getting distracted by another story does not equate to reading a whole story.   :-[ :-[

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« Reply #1797 on: November 16, 2012, 04:11 PM »
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You'll have to come back into the light for a while I guess.  Just not enough good Jasper/Bella stories out there. 

I realized the other day that I had a bunch of Actorward stories to read.  I thought I had read them all, but realized reading the first chapter and getting distracted by another story does not equate to reading a whole story.   :-[ :-[

LOL - I read all pairings (except wolves).  The last great one I read was an Emmett/Bella.  I read Edward/Bella, too.  Some of my faves are E/B.

I just want one where there is a good plot, lots of UST and not too juvenile.  I know there's tons out there, I just haven't been finding any.

Was it Matron who reads a lot of m/m real books?  Have you read anything by Elizabeth Lister?  She writes ff as PandoraGalacia You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login  I just read some PWP from her that was, well, H.O.T.  It was E/B/Jas :)

You held out your hand, and I took it without stopping to make sense of what I was doing. For the first time in almost a century, I felt hope.

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Re: UL A Downright Disgrace by velvetglo
« Reply #1798 on: November 16, 2012, 04:11 PM »
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Or shocked at the things he is saying?  It has been one of the things I've loved about him in the past - He comes out with the most out there comments & the interviewers are Wah?? And of course, I'm laughing so hard because I look at his face while he's saying these things and realize he is totally joking, but he does it with such a straight face.  I guess growing up on Monty Python helps.  :D :D :D

Though he is pretty hot  :fire: :fire: :57:
Who? John Cleese? Not really my type  :D :D  Honestly I'd love to know how much time Robbie Boy spends in the UK now, the last few times I seen him he seems very La La Land to me as a Brit.

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LOL - I read all pairings (except wolves).  The last great one I read was an Emmett/Bella.  I read Edward/Bella, too.  Some of my faves are E/B.

I just want one where there is a good plot, lots of UST and not too juvenile.  I know there's tons out there, I just haven't been finding any.
I've just finished Slaves to the Moon by Skeezon, that has all the requirements you mentioned. Have you read it?
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Re: UL A Downright Disgrace by velvetglo
« Reply #1799 on: November 16, 2012, 04:28 PM »
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I've just finished Slaves to the Moon by Skeezon, that has all the requirements you mentioned. Have you read it?

No I haven't, maybe I'll give it a go :)
You held out your hand, and I took it without stopping to make sense of what I was doing. For the first time in almost a century, I felt hope.

Jasper Whitlock, Eclipse
 

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Re: UL A Downright Disgrace by velvetglo
« Reply #1800 on: November 16, 2012, 04:31 PM »
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No I haven't, maybe I'll give it a go :)
Sorry forgot the link..it's not too long so you've got nothing to lose.. :)

This story is so well written it's made me do a happy dance  :dance: You have a reluctant bad-boy tattward, a dissociative disengaged Bella, murder, amnesia and witness protection, a thug with a heart Emmett, a guilty conflicted Alice and a whole lot of something something Jasper. All in all a really good engaging read!

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