Author Topic: LOCKED Twific discussion and recommendations ADULT ONLY -OVER 18 ONLY- LOCKED (Read 461577 times)

Ellachanted · « **on:** October 02, 2012, 01:40 PM »

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Booked · « **Reply #3541 on:** December 27, 2012, 07:15 AM »

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I loved it, too!

Although I did get a bit irritated when
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And Walking Disaster is out in April...Travis' POV. I believe Warner Brothers picked it up to make it into a movie

Totally agree with you! I was, what?? Why?? But i really love Travis... And Kellan kyle (thoughtless, effortless)... Those bad boys make me *sigh*.

Am so robsessed, until the last few pages, it didn't really sink in to me that travis had very short hair
“Ridiculous grin on Travis’ face, a stark contrast from his shaved head, inked arms and bulging muscles.”
Just merrily fantasized away, picturing him in those tattoed manips posted by rdmickey with gorgeous just fckd hair

lucylu0508 · « **Reply #3542 on:** December 27, 2012, 07:17 AM »

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Totally agree with you! I was, what?? Why?? But i really love Travis... And Kellan kyle (thoughtless, effortless)... Those bad boys make me *sigh*.

Am so robsessed, until the last few chapters, it didn't really sink in to me that travis had a buzz cut (forget the actual term used) but obviously he didn't have the just fckd hair of Rob. Just merrily fantasized away, picturing him in those tattoed manips posted by rdmickey with a gorgeous head of hair

Oooh, I have Thoughtless, Effortless on my TBR list

And I totally skipped the physical description of Travis and subb'd Jasper for it. But kept all the inky work b/c yummy

Booked · « **Reply #3543 on:** December 27, 2012, 07:28 AM »

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Oooh, I have Thoughtless, Effortless on my TBR list

And I totally skipped the physical description of Travis and subb'd Jasper for it. But kept all the inky work b/c yummy

Great! Do move up Thoughtless and Effortless in your TBR if you're still in the mood for some more college aged stories. I wonder who they'll cast as Travis? Any word on who will finally play Christian? Hmm, so many hot guys to chose from, hope the final choices won't be too disappointing.

lucylu0508 · « **Reply #3544 on:** December 27, 2012, 07:35 AM »

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Great! Do move up Thoughtless and Effortless in your TBR if you're still in the mood for some more college aged stories. I wonder who they'll cast as Travis? Any word on who will finally play Christian? Hmm, so many hot guys to chose from, hope the final choices won't be too disappointing.

No real word or idea on who is going to play Travis...I think there's a lot of speculation on Channing Tatum but IDK.

Christian? Is that from FSoG?

Booked · « **Reply #3545 on:** December 27, 2012, 07:47 AM »

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No real word or idea on who is going to play Travis...I think there's a lot of speculation on Channing Tatum but IDK.

Christian? Is that from FSoG?

Yup, Mr. Grey himself.

Channing Tatum, hmmm, that could work for Travis. He's got the body for it! Sexiest man of 2012 indeed

Oh dear, it's almost midnight and have only had 3 hours sleep from last night. Looks like i will need to put an alarm to make sure i stop reading Easy at 1 am so i could still function at work tom. First 2 chapters had me hooked... Thanks for the rec!

Avrildulac · « **Reply #3546 on:** December 27, 2012, 08:07 AM »

I haven't read it yet but this story just completed:

Edward's Xmas Headache
Author: silverblossoms PM
Bella is a runaway bride whose best friend Alice has spirited her away to the family island to hide, what happens when Alice's older brother Edward ends up on the same island while hiding from a very persistent Tanya
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Humor - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 19 - Words: 18,537 - Reviews: 549 - Favs: 248 - Follows: 304 - Updated: 12-26-12 - Published: 12-20-12 - Status: Complete - id: 8813738

Ellachanted · « **Reply #3547 on:** December 27, 2012, 08:15 AM »

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I haven't read it yet but this story just completed:

Edward's Xmas Headache
Author: silverblossoms PM
Bella is a runaway bride whose best friend Alice has spirited her away to the family island to hide, what happens when Alice's older brother Edward ends up on the same island while hiding from a very persistent Tanya
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Humor - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 19 - Words: 18,537 - Reviews: 549 - Favs: 248 - Follows: 304 - Updated: 12-26-12 - Published: 12-20-12 - Status: Complete - id: 8813738

It's a quick read. Cute but weird in a way. Like she wanted to throw all the stuff you want to see in a story into it. But I did enjoy it.

Oh, and lots of lemons. Just saying. It also needs some proof reading but since it's short & sweet, it didn't bother me too much.

lucylu0508 · « **Reply #3548 on:** December 27, 2012, 08:15 AM »

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Yup, Mr. Grey himself.

Channing Tatum, hmmm, that could work for Travis. He's got the body for it! Sexiest man of 2012 indeed

Oh dear, it's almost midnight and have only had 3 hours sleep from last night. Looks like i will need to put an alarm to make sure i stop reading Easy at 1 am so i could still function at work tom. First 2 chapters had me hooked... Thanks for the rec!

Ahhh, yes, I've not read Fifty so Idk about who would be a good fit for Christian. Channing could def'y work, though he seems to be cast for all roles like this. Maybe an unknown would be better

Easy is addicting, isn't it? The opening had me hooked

2muchrubbish · « **Reply #3549 on:** December 27, 2012, 10:01 AM »

In spite of the holidays that just passed, I got a number of fic update emails - Merry Christmas to me!. The updates to these 2 fics were good in their own way:

Chop and Change by Krazyk85
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Summary: While trying to steal his car, runaway, Bella, meets Edward. A man
with his own vices and rap sheet. Taking her under his wing, teaching her the
way to truly boost cars, they embark on a journey of crime fitting of Bonnie
and Clyde. ExB, Lemons, Violence, Guns, and Fun. HEA. BPOV.

I like this author because you know going in that there will never be any cheating, some angst, always a HEA even when it doesn't seem like it could ever be, and citrus citrus citrusy citrus. This last update was great, because while I love reading about possessive and jealous Edwards, it's nice to see Bella get jealous too.

here's the excerpt:
"Unbelievable," I muttered, hiding my blush behind my hands.

"Sorry, I didn't mean to interrupt," she said, but I could hear the snicker in her voice. "I'll…you know what, never mind."

I wanted to die.

"Oh, no, Char," Edward said, thoroughly amused by our predicament, "it's too NOT ALLOWED late now, you might as well ask."

She laughed. "Yes, I suppose you're right. I was just curious about what you would like us to do about Jasper and Emmett."

"Oh, man, I NOT ALLOWED forgot about those assholes. Can you text them for me and let them know that shit went astray and to get the fuck out of the country as soon as possible?"

"Absolutely, Edward…" There was something about the way she spoke to him that made me take notice. Peering through my parted fingers, I watched her lean over her seat and grasp hold of Edward's hand, giving it a soft stroke and a gentle squeeze. "We're family."

It was instant.

The strong and powerful ping of jealousy shot through me, pumping and pulsating in my veins. I felt it deep in my bones. A prickly and uncomfortable sensation that irritated my skin, manifesting into this violent hatred for this woman, who continued to touch my Edward...

Mine!

My eyes narrowed with animosity, burrowing an expansive hole into her skull with my imagination. I relished that vision, eliminating my problem with one squeeze of my trigger.

Caressing.

Smiling.

Muscles strained past comfort, the seconds ticked by slowly as I waited for Charlotte to remove her hand before I acted on my murderous thoughts.

Embracing.

Laughing.

My fingers twitched and yearned for a solution, the persistent voice in my head got louder and more enraged...

Mine. Mine. Mine. Mine. Mine. Mine. Mine. Mine.

That loathing deep inside of me burned and burned until I couldn't NOT ALLOWED take it anymore and I just snapped.

"Why don't you NOT ALLOWED take your God damn—"

"Ah, fuck!" Edward interrupted me, clasping a strong hold on the sleeve of my coat and dragging me across the seat. I was still telling Charlotte where she could put her hand when he flung me out of the car like a rag doll, into the frigid and bitter weather.

"Let go of me!" I kicked and struggled, trying to break free. "NOT ALLOWED..."

My foot caught the edge of the seat and I fell out, face first into his awaiting chest, buried deep in a mixture of leather and cotton. He wrapped his arms around me, holding me still. I was warm and he smelled good, but it was a ploy to keep me in line.

2muchrubbish · « **Reply #3550 on:** December 27, 2012, 10:14 AM »

The second fic is called Expectations and Other Moving Pieces by chrometurtle.
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Summary: Everything I had done in my life seemed to lead up to this moment.
The moment when I found myself bound inextricably to a man I didn't love,
trapped in a life I didn't want. And if I left him, I would be entirely
alone.

This fic would have me by the balls if I had any. Started back in 2009 and it's still going with today's update of Chapter 44 that tore me up. Expectations is not an easy read and Bella is not easy to like or be sympathetic towards, but in all honestly, you just shake your head at Edward too because he didn't go into their relationship/marriage blind. She was upfront and honest that her love, her feelings were for her best friend, Jacob. Edward just wanted her so much that he persuaded her to marry him knowing her true feelings for him (none to minimal at best) and for Jacob (first love. true love?).

Anyway, I read the update with a growing feeling of dread with every sentence until I groaned "noooooo!" at the end.

I don't generally read WIPs unless they have a regular update schedule with authors that always complete their stories. But this one grabbed me back in 2009 and I can't not read.

Update ended with this excerpt and now I'm dying with anticipation.

He sighed. "I can't see either one of us getting out of this unharmed."

I could feel him leaning on his hand to look at me.

I kept my eyes fixed to the ceiling.

"Of course not. This is going to break us." A bubble of mad, drunken laughter threatened to burst from me, exploding out like the pain I could feel burning over every inch of my skin. "It's going to be the bloodiest NOT ALLOWED massacre you've ever seen."

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Avrildulac · « **Reply #3551 on:** December 27, 2012, 10:20 AM »

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I finally finished Dusty. Stories about addiction always leave me so frustrated and upset and ending to this just about killed me (and my phone which I have been reading it on!).

I love Teambella and Yellowglue but there were quite a few too many SPaG errors and proof reading needed to be better - especially when they dinned at the diner table.

Great fic, excellent plot - and it's one of those that sticks with you.

Just finished Dusty too. It is a great read and I highly rec it to everyone. It's a bit long but I never wanted to flounce. I did take some breaks to read some shorter stories because at times it was so tragic that I needed a break. If nothing else, hope always remains.

savanablue · « **Reply #3552 on:** December 27, 2012, 10:21 AM »

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The second fic is called Expectations and Other Moving Pieces by chrometurtle.
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Summary: Everything I had done in my life seemed to lead up to this moment.
The moment when I found myself bound inextricably to a man I didn't love,
trapped in a life I didn't want. And if I left him, I would be entirely
alone.

This fic would have me by the balls if I had any. Started back in 2009 and it's still going with today's update of Chapter 44 that tore me up. Expectations is not an easy read and Bella is not easy to like or be sympathetic towards, but in all honestly, you just shake your head at Edward too because he didn't go into their relationship/marriage blind. She was upfront and honest that her love, her feelings were for her best friend, Jacob. Edward just wanted her so much that he persuaded her to marry him knowing her true feelings for him (none to minimal at best) and for Jacob (first love. true love?).

Anyway, I read the update with a growing feeling of dread with every sentence until I groaned "noooooo!" at the end.

I don't generally read WIPs unless they have a regular update schedule with authors that always complete their stories. But this one grabbed me back in 2009 and I can't not read.

Update ended with this excerpt and now I'm dying with anticipation.

He sighed. "I can't see either one of us getting out of this unharmed."

I could feel him leaning on his hand to look at me.

I kept my eyes fixed to the ceiling.

"Of course not. This is going to break us." A bubble of mad, drunken laughter threatened to burst from me, exploding out like the pain I could feel burning over every inch of my skin. "It's going to be the bloodiest NOT ALLOWED massacre you've ever seen."

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I love this fic but must start over. There was such a long time between updates due to personal reasons for her, that I forget what's happening. Looking forward to that though

Annnd I tried to read Easy last night but got lost and crazy in Goodreads. I shall try again today

savanablue · « **Reply #3553 on:** December 27, 2012, 10:22 AM »

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Just finished Dusty too. It is a great read and I highly rec it to everyone. It's a bit long but I never wanted to flounce. I did take some breaks to read some shorter stories because at times it was so tragic that I needed a break. If nothing else, hope always remains.

I'm bittersweet with Dusty. Wanted it to end but didn't at the same time. It was a terrific read though

Avrildulac · « **Reply #3554 on:** December 27, 2012, 10:24 AM »

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I'm bittersweet with Dusty. Wanted it to end but didn't at the same time. It was a terrific read though

I would love to hear the rest of that phone conversation. I mean we know who's on the phone, so it's all good right?

savanablue · « **Reply #3555 on:** December 27, 2012, 10:29 AM »

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I would love to hear the rest of that phone conversation. I mean we know who's on the phone, so it's all good right?

Based on their history... *sighs* I want an outtake or 5

2muchrubbish · « **Reply #3556 on:** December 27, 2012, 10:34 AM »

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I would love to hear the rest of that phone conversation. I mean we know who's on the phone, so it's all good right?

Because of the way it ended, I've been wondering if someone will write a future fic of Dusty and Bliss if TB23 and yellowglue don't. I don't think TB23 or YG would condone it, but that doesn't mean someone wouldn't.

Now, me, I'm ok with the ending because then I can imagine that Dusty is definitely the caller and everything ends HEA with a lot more lemons and less angst after what they went through. I don't want angsty, throat clenching, head-ache from tense reality reigning anymore on the Dusty wagon in my world

savanablue · « **Reply #3557 on:** December 27, 2012, 10:42 AM »

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Because of the way it ended, I've been wondering if someone will write a future fic of Dusty and Bliss if TB23 and yellowglue don't. I don't think TB23 or YG would condone it, but that doesn't mean someone wouldn't.

Now, me, I'm ok with the ending because then I can imagine that Dusty is definitely the caller and everything ends HEA with a lot more lemons and less angst after what they went through. I don't want angsty, throat clenching, head-ache from tense reality reigning anymore on the Dusty wagon in my world

I liked the ending and I applaud the "lack of lemons" This fic was journey, now I would like to read the outcome and what happened with Dusty. Need a definite futuretake.

lucylu0508 · « **Reply #3558 on:** December 27, 2012, 10:43 AM »

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I love this fic but must start over. There was such a long time between updates due to personal reasons for her, that I forget what's happening. Looking forward to that though

Annnd I tried to read Easy last night but got lost and crazy in Goodreads. I shall try again today

I just joined Goodreads when Matron made the fanfic group but damn. I've been sucked into listopia for DAYS now. One list leads to another to another....

Before I know it, I have 20 tabs open and I'm searching different sites for books I've seen. I'm addicted.

savanablue · « **Reply #3559 on:** December 27, 2012, 10:44 AM »

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I just joined Goodreads when Matron made the fanfic group but damn. I've been sucked into listopia for DAYS now. One list leads to another to another....

Before I know it, I have 20 tabs open and I'm searching different sites for books I've seen. I'm addicted.

Yep! It's a friggin loop. I look for books, I read up on them, then I see what's recommended and look for those as well *sigh* Too many books, so little time

lucylu0508 · « **Reply #3560 on:** December 27, 2012, 10:46 AM »

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Yep! It's a friggin loop. I look for books, I read up on them, then I see what's recommended and look for those as well *sigh* Too many books, so little time

I see one book, notice the lists that said book is found on. Click on the lists and on we go. I'm really really loving Goodreads.

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