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Offline robsten143

Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #801 on: October 23, 2012, 12:24 AM »
I must say you guyz are so brave to read emmet/bella, jasper/bella stories..I cant even think about reading anything but edward/bella.Hell i always have hard time reading edward/bella stories where they are paired with someone else for little amount of time.  ;D
 

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« Reply #802 on: October 23, 2012, 01:47 AM »
I just finished reading Beautiful, Dirty, Rich by Kikiblue (anyone read it?) and it got me thinking about sex in High School fics...

How is it possible that all these teenagers have so much great sex?! I know it is fiction, but it really troubles me after a point. All the sex I had while at school was terrible, especially with boys my age. They definatelly didn't know what they were doing...

I understand when the main couple has a really good time in bed (it is fiction after all), but some high school fics are straight up ridiculous!! :P
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I just finished reading Beautiful, Dirty, Rich by Kikiblue (anyone read it?) and it got me thinking about sex in High School fics...

How is it possible that all these teenagers have so much great sex?! I know it is fiction, but it really troubles me after a point. All the sex I had while at school was terrible, especially with boys my age. They definatelly didn't know what they were doing...

I understand when the main couple has a really good time in bed (it is fiction after all), but some high school fics are straight up ridiculous!! :P

That's one i wasn't able to finish, reached only page 20 i think. I couldn't stand the thought of emmett and bella  having BJs before school, Emmett going at it with Rose at lunch... And all those other mixed pairings...Ewww, couldn't handle it.  :-\

Am all for a feisty Bella, but a s.l.u.t.t.y one like this? I had to pass. :(
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #804 on: October 23, 2012, 03:16 AM »
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I must say you guyz are so brave to read emmet/bella, jasper/bella stories..I cant even think about reading anything but edward/bella.Hell i always have hard time reading edward/bella stories where they are paired with someone else for little amount of time.  ;D

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I know, right? I always think of Emmett as Bella's brother. So them together is just wrong.  Kind of like Rose and Jasper  :P

But then I'm not quite ready for anything but Bella/Edward.  However, I'm not against mixing up some of the others  ;D

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Shitake mushroom! Emmett and Bella?! I'm not sure my heart could take it....I'm still trying to working myself up to venture into Jasper/Bella territory....Chippy you must tells us how you get on.

Agree, am not ready to crossover.  But am glad there are others who enjoy those pairings as I think Emmett and Jasper are good characters.

Now, how weird is it that Kellan and Jackson are not going abroad to promote BD2? Think it's sad they are not given the chance. Wish they could have gone with ashley and nikki, that would have been fun to see.
 

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That's one i wasn't able to finish, reached only page 20 i think. I couldn't stand the thought of emmett and bella  having BJs before school, Emmett going at it with Rose at lunch... And all those other mixed pairings...Ewww, couldn't handle it.  :-\

Am all for a feisty Bella, but a s.l.u.t.t.y one like this? I had to pass. :(

I agree..There is fine line between fiesty/badass and bitchy/slutty..Sometimes writers mix one with other & at the end create  annoying bella.same goes for edward..I love fics where he is cocky/arrogant/jerk/manwhore..Infact most of my fav fics have those type of edward.but at the same time edward has sweet/vulnerable/charming/protactive personality only for bella.Thats make it special.Do i make sense?  ;D
 

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« Reply #806 on: October 23, 2012, 03:37 AM »
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Agree, am not ready to crossover.  But am glad there are others who enjoy those pairings as I think Emmett and Jasper are good characters.

Now, how weird is it that Kellan and Jackson are not going abroad to promote BD2? Think it's sad they are not given the chance. Wish they could have gone with ashley and nikki, that would have been fun to see.

I have read few BD2 promotion article.and i think kellan is going with nikki to scotland for promotion.if i am not wrong than everyone is going somewhere except jackson.TBH i dont care about anyone except rob-kristen.I am only folowing thier promo tour & interviews. :NeenerNeener:
 

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I agree..There is fine line between fiesty/badass and bitchy/slutty..Sometimes writers mix one with other & at the end create  annoying bella.same goes for edward..I love fics where he is cocky/arrogant/jerk/manwhore..Infact most of my fav fics have those type of edward.but at the same time edward has sweet/vulnerable/charming/protactive personality only for bella.Thats make it special.Do i make sense?  ;D

Well, yeah, they were a little too slutty for my liking too, but I finished the fic anyway. Still, it is not the first fic with way to much "great, steamy, satisfying" sex in it. I mean, common!  :D

Still, I don't really mind non-canon couples, as long as a fic is well written.
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Re: Emmett/Bella fics
« Reply #808 on: October 23, 2012, 06:00 AM »
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I know, right? I always think of Emmett as Bella's brother. So them together is just wrong.  Kind of like Rose and Jasper  :P

But then I'm not quite ready for anything but Bella/Edward.  However, I'm not against mixing up some of the others  ;D


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I must say you guyz are so brave to read emmet/bella, jasper/bella stories..I cant even think about reading anything but edward/bella.Hell i always have hard time reading edward/bella stories where they are paired with someone else for little amount of time.  ;D

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Agree, am not ready to crossover.  But am glad there are others who enjoy those pairings as I think Emmett and Jasper are good characters.


If any of you guys decide to try non-canon there are some excellent fics out there! I'm not sure I'll ever read an Emmett/Bella one, as I think of them as brother and sister also but I LOVE Jasper/Bella and even some Paul/Bella. Since I crossed over into Jasper fics, I've read exclusively those....Edward isn't interesting to me right now for some reason. I'm sure I'll read E/B again but for right now I'm loving the change :)

 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #809 on: October 23, 2012, 06:57 AM »
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Well, yeah, they were a little too slutty for my liking too, but I finished the fic anyway. Still, it is not the first fic with way to much "great, steamy, satisfying" sex in it. I mean, common!  :D

Still, I don't really mind non-canon couples, as long as a fic is well written.
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Well, yeah, they were a little too slutty for my liking too, but I finished the fic anyway. Still, it is not the first fic with way to much "great, steamy, satisfying" sex in it. I mean, common!  :D

Still, I don't really mind non-canon couples, as long as a fic is well written.
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I just finished reading Beautiful, Dirty, Rich by Kikiblue (anyone read it?) and it got me thinking about sex in High School fics...

How is it possible that all these teenagers have so much great sex?! I know it is fiction, but it really troubles me after a point. All the sex I had while at school was terrible, especially with boys my age. They definatelly didn't know what they were doing...

I understand when the main couple has a really good time in bed (it is fiction after all), but some high school fics are straight up ridiculous!! :P

I tried reading BDR,l I got 10 pages in and thought, "this story will rot my brain and send me running to bible classes". Flounced. I'm now reading Just Wait, in this story Bella also sleeps around but it is not done in a "everyone else does it so so shall I" there are deeper issues under her behaviour.  Now don't get me wrong I totally believe in sexual freedom (there shouldn't be one rule for boys and another for girls) and I don't judge people's morality by how many people they sleep with but sometimes in Fan Fic most of the High School sexcapades  just comes off as there for shock value.... 
 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #810 on: October 23, 2012, 07:17 AM »
 I am now reading out of sight, out of mind by simaril. Have to admit, this is the first vamp fanfic i've read. I prefer human fanfics but i'm liking this so far. Thanks for the rec Ella!

I know a lot of you are reading or have started Diva Diaries and will really try to read that next (i chose to read the real life of EA Masen over that) once i convince myself i can go through another long story. EP was great but emotionally draining! Maybe am just getting too old so my attention span is getting shorter so i have been consciously reading those that are 500 pages or less  ;)
 

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« Reply #811 on: October 23, 2012, 07:52 AM »
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I tried reading BDR,l I got 10 pages in and thought, "this story will rot my brain and send me running to bible classes". Flounced. I'm now reading Just Wait, in this story Bella also sleeps around but it is not done in a "everyone else does it so so shall I" there are deeper issues under her behaviour.  Now don't get me wrong I totally believe in sexual freedom (there shouldn't be one rule for boys and another for girls) and I don't judge people's morality by how many people they sleep with but sometimes in Fan Fic most of the High School sexcapades  just comes off as there for shock value....
I think some writers put so many lemons in the story because the feel they have to or it's expected. Then they go a little crazy.   :P
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« Reply #812 on: October 23, 2012, 08:14 AM »
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I think some writers put so many lemons in the story because the feel they have to or it's expected. Then they go a little crazy.   :P

I understand the use of lemons, but I refuse to believe teenagers have so much "quality" sex... I find it hilarious!
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« Reply #813 on: October 23, 2012, 08:39 AM »
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I understand the use of lemons, but I refuse to believe teenagers have so much "quality" sex... I find it hilarious!
LOL!  I guess what I meant was that if they wrote HS relationships like they really are? Yeah, closer to the original Twilight stories. :D

Readers want hawt sex, not the real stuff.  Isn't that why we call it fiction?  Though I did read one where Mike thought he was God's gift to women & all the girls who'd been with him said bad things behind his back about how awful it was ;)
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« Reply #814 on: October 23, 2012, 09:08 AM »
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LOL!  I guess what I meant was that if they wrote HS relationships like they really are? Yeah, closer to the original Twilight stories. :D

Readers want hawt sex, not the real stuff.  Isn't that why we call it fiction?  Though I did read one where Mike thought he was God's gift to women & all the girls who'd been with him said bad things behind his back about how awful it was ;)

That's sounds more like my kind of experience on teen sex: Guys brag, girls have to do everything by themselves until they get to college :P

Fiction is fiction and I like smut as much as the next person, but some authors definatelly over do it... (Or maybe I'm just jealous!  :D)
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« Reply #815 on: October 23, 2012, 11:48 AM »
Ok, so I'm reading The Ex Factor right now (my second fanfic) and I'm not sure that I'm loving it as much as I did Out of Sight Out of Mind.   I've made it up to where they are getting ready for the New Years Eve party.   It's been good, but it just seems soooo wordy.   Most books I had been reading before would be like "5 hours" according to my kindle paperwhite and this says it is something like 30+ hours.   Is it really that long?  I don't know how to transfer # of words (that it shows on the fanfic page) to "reality" with # of pages.   I keep thinking maybe my kindle has it measured incorrectly because according to it I"m nowhere even near half way through with it yet.     Should I keep reading?  Does it get better?

I think maybe part of the problem I'm having with it is that Edward and Bella aren't together and it's hard for me to get used to seeing them with other people.  Maybe I just need to keep reading until they work out their differences and get back together?  Surely they will! LOL

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I must say you guyz are so brave to read emmet/bella, jasper/bella stories..I cant even think about reading anything but edward/bella.Hell i always have hard time reading edward/bella stories where they are paired with someone else for little amount of time.  ;D
I'm new to fanfic and feel the same way.   I'm reading The Ex Factor right now and there is a bit of "heat" between Alice and Edward and I just can't wrap my head around it.  LOL     Oh and also with Jasper and Bella and it just seems so wrong!   I think I'm going to stick to canon pairings after I read this one and then branch out later on when I'm ready to take that leap.  ;-)

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I am now reading out of sight, out of mind by simaril. Have to admit, this is the first vamp fanfic i've read. I prefer human fanfics but i'm liking this so far. Thanks for the rec Ella!
   I read OOS OOM as my first fanfic and REALLY liked it.  There was one section of the story that I thought they stretched out a little too long, but I won't mention details so as not to spoil it for you.   Definitely loved the story!   
 

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« Reply #816 on: October 23, 2012, 12:00 PM »
I don't know WHY Bella/Jasper has hit me like it has, I just know it has, and I'm loving it. I'm still sticking regular B/E stories in there, but I always find my mind wandering now to Bella/Jasper.
 

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« Reply #817 on: October 23, 2012, 12:02 PM »
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I don't know WHY Bella/Jasper has hit me like it has, I just know it has, and I'm loving it. I'm still sticking regular B/E stories in there, but I always find my mind wandering now to Bella/Jasper.

um...same here. I'm not even doing B/E stories right now, I'm that hooked on Jasper and Bella. What are you reading now?
 

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« Reply #818 on: October 23, 2012, 12:03 PM »
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Ok, so I'm reading The Ex Factor right now (my second fanfic) and I'm not sure that I'm loving it as much as I did Out of Sight Out of Mind.   I've made it up to where they are getting ready for the New Years Eve party.   It's been good, but it just seems soooo wordy.   Most books I had been reading before would be like "5 hours" according to my kindle paperwhite and this says it is something like 30+ hours.   Is it really that long?  I don't know how to transfer # of words (that it shows on the fanfic page) to "reality" with # of pages.   I keep thinking maybe my kindle has it measured incorrectly because according to it I"m nowhere even near half way through with it yet.     Should I keep reading?  Does it get better?

I think maybe part of the problem I'm having with it is that Edward and Bella aren't together and it's hard for me to get used to seeing them with other people.  Maybe I just need to keep reading until they work out their differences and get back together?  Surely they will! LOL
 I'm new to fanfic and feel the same way.   I'm reading The Ex Factor right now and there is a bit of "heat" between Alice and Edward and I just can't wrap my head around it.  LOL     Oh and also with Jasper and Bella and it just seems so wrong!   I think I'm going to stick to canon pairings after I read this one and then branch out later on when I'm ready to take that leap.  ;-)
   I read OOS OOM as my first fanfic and REALLY liked it.  There was one section of the story that I thought they stretched out a little too long, but I won't mention details so as not to spoil it for you.   Definitely loved the story!

Hey  kimkimkim

The Ex-factor has longest chapter..like 30 word page in 1 chapters..Its longest story i have ever read.. But it was so well-written with all drama & interesting chracters that i couldnt put it down..  :-*

You said you are at  chapter where they are getting ready at new year party..I suggest , keep reading because it will  be better for edward-bella  from these chapters..
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& yeah there is lot of uncanon pairing in begining..It was really difficult for me too..But i never stopped for some reason.& trust me writer make up to all these heartache beautifully with all folowing chapters.

I was very imprssed with the author of The Ex factor..There are multiple POV.So many things going on with every characters life..But Focus always remain on EB. :bravo_2:
 

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« Reply #819 on: October 23, 2012, 12:06 PM »
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um...same here. I'm not even doing B/E stories right now, I'm that hooked on Jasper and Bella. What are you reading now?

Right now I'm doing my mandatory B/E story with Breakfast at Tiffanys, will be finished with it soon, then I'll be hunting my next B/J fic, haven't decided what it'll be yet. I'll browse my calibre and see what catches my eye, got a rec for a good vamp one?

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« Reply #820 on: October 23, 2012, 12:11 PM »
*sighs*

I just started re reading PoF because I forgot half the story line. To say I was turned off is an understatement.

Jaxon22 is such a good writer but there were tooooo many lemons  :thumbsdown:

I have never flounced a fic because of too many lemons, but this fic was overkill. Damn shame  :(
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