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Thread #4 - We are crazy talkers here!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general.  But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement. 

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice   

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4521 on: September 09, 2013, 01:56 PM »
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Don't mind me my phone is being crazy
My work computer just decided to start freaking out.  It was working so well.   >:(

I guess I will have to read for a while..... :D :D :D
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Re: Surrogate by Twi-girl09
« Reply #4522 on: September 09, 2013, 02:15 PM »
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:D :D :D :D :D

I hope you can flounce this one.....

NO! I read the whole thing! (stupid no flounce gene!) The story was so bad, the plot so implausible that I wanted to know how she was going to round it up, it was car crash twific...in the end she gave up...no word of a lie, the epilogue A/N says:

I have decided to finish this story, I know it's sudden and I apologise, but it is just going on and on and it will soon get boring. I loved writing this and I will continue writing, but this story needs to end. Thanks so much for the love and support.


I'm not sure if this is her first story but unlike Patty's first foray I can see no glimmer of hope she's going to get any better....If anyone has read her other story and can say otherwise I'd be really,really interested to hear....
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4523 on: September 09, 2013, 02:18 PM »
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My work computer just decided to start freaking out.  It was working so well.   >:(

I guess I will have to read for a while..... :D :D :D
Technology, drives me crazy but I would freak out without it.
 
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Re: Surrogate by Twi-girl09
« Reply #4524 on: September 09, 2013, 02:32 PM »
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NO! I read the whole thing! (stupid no flounce gene!) The story was so bad, the plot so implausible that I wanted to know how she was going to round it up, it was car crash twific...in the end she gave up...no word of a lie, the epilogue A/N says:

I have decided to finish this story, I know it's sudden and I apologise, but it is just going on and on and it will soon get boring. I loved writing this and I will continue writing, but this story needs to end. Thanks so much for the love and support.


I'm not sure if this is her first story but unlike Patty's first foray I can see no glimmer of hope she's going to get any better....If anyone has read her other story and can say otherwise I'd be really,really interested to hear....
I love that I can read the first chapter and last chapter and be good.  And really? Though I say I don't flounce? I do.  I know if I go to something else, I probably won't be back.  Even though I tell myself I will.  It will never happen. 

Okay, that's not true, I do go back from some stories.  Just not the boring ones, or badly written ones.
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4525 on: September 09, 2013, 02:35 PM »
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Technology, drives me crazy but I would freak out without it.
I know! I was right in the middle of a spreadsheet when it kept refreshing the screen and the mouse quit working.  I'd swear it had a virus, but really, it's just getting warm and the network is getting slow.  The combination results in a very slow computer that won't let me do anything. 

I finally got it to copy some files to the server so I can work on my home computer.  Thank goodness for the virtual network....  ;D
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4526 on: September 09, 2013, 02:51 PM »
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I know! I was right in the middle of a spreadsheet when it kept refreshing the screen and the mouse quit working.  I'd swear it had a virus, but really, it's just getting warm and the network is getting slow.  The combination results in a very slow computer that won't let me do anything. 

I finally got it to copy some files to the server so I can work on my home computer.  Thank goodness for the virtual network....  ;D

Good thing you can work from your home computer. If our computers at work go down it feels like the end of the world. It makes my job a million times harder  :o
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4527 on: September 09, 2013, 02:56 PM »
Shattered Hearts
Author: Greye Granger  PM
Bella knows what it's like to be alone, and when the only person she's ever really loved commits the ultimate betrayal, she turns to the man who's wife has stolen her husband. E/B. RATED M. TATTWARD. BPOV.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Angst - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 16 - Words: 42,667 - Reviews: 1,613 - Favs: 1,111 - Follows: 1,488 - Updated: 04-23-13 - Published: 02-06-13 - Status: Complete - id: 8984313


Anyone read this?

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4528 on: September 09, 2013, 03:04 PM »
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Shattered Hearts
Author: Greye Granger  PM
Bella knows what it's like to be alone, and when the only person she's ever really loved commits the ultimate betrayal, she turns to the man who's wife has stolen her husband. E/B. RATED M. TATTWARD. BPOV.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Angst - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 16 - Words: 42,667 - Reviews: 1,613 - Favs: 1,111 - Follows: 1,488 - Updated: 04-23-13 - Published: 02-06-13 - Status: Complete - id: 8984313


Anyone read this?

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I've read it some time ago.
Definitely not one of my favorites.

I didn't care for any of the characters...
 
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Re: Surrogate by Twi-girl09
« Reply #4529 on: September 09, 2013, 03:06 PM »
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NO! I read the whole thing! (stupid no flounce gene!) The story was so bad, the plot so implausible that I wanted to know how she was going to round it up, it was car crash twific...in the end she gave up...no word of a lie, the epilogue A/N says:

I have decided to finish this story, I know it's sudden and I apologise, but it is just going on and on and it will soon get boring. I loved writing this and I will continue writing, but this story needs to end. Thanks so much for the love and support.


I'm not sure if this is her first story but unlike Patty's first foray I can see no glimmer of hope she's going to get any better....If anyone has read her other story and can say otherwise I'd be really,really interested to hear....

Demaris, you'll be so pleased to know that, despite the epilogue a/n...there is a sequel to Surrogate!  :cheer:

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Of course, as soon as you mentioned it, I scurried over to ff.net, did a superfast skim of the chapters and saw both the a/n and that there was a sequel..

And the sequel is complete at 22 chapters.  :D :D :D

Continuation of 'Surrogate'. Bella now has two children and her life is falling apart, this is how she deals with it all.
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4530 on: September 09, 2013, 03:12 PM »
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Good thing you can work from your home computer. If our computers at work go down it feels like the end of the world. It makes my job a million times harder  :o

I know what you mean about work computers.  I returned from holiday last week to a whole new windows based system.  After working for the past too many years on a green and black it was a serious shock. 

Everything I did automatically no longer worked and you have to use the mouse constantly.  It has added hours to my work week and that is after I can finally log on.  Bloody I.T. trying to fix things that aren't really broken!

On another note, as I know it pissed a lot of you off - my Daughter has had a really good start to her last year at primary school and is enjoying it so far - she is a lot more confident in herself and her abilities and has the backing and permission from myself and my hubby to kick the sh!t if necessary ( not likely, but, I live in hope!)
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4531 on: September 09, 2013, 03:13 PM »
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I've read it some time ago.
Definitely not one of my favorites.

I didn't care for any of the characters...

So far this Bella is very weak.
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4532 on: September 09, 2013, 03:28 PM »
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Shattered Hearts
Author: Greye Granger  PM
Bella knows what it's like to be alone, and when the only person she's ever really loved commits the ultimate betrayal, she turns to the man who's wife has stolen her husband. E/B. RATED M. TATTWARD. BPOV.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Angst - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 16 - Words: 42,667 - Reviews: 1,613 - Favs: 1,111 - Follows: 1,488 - Updated: 04-23-13 - Published: 02-06-13 - Status: Complete - id: 8984313


Anyone read this?

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I read it a while ago. I remember it being okay and predictable.  Nothing noteworty but it was very short!
 
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Re: Surrogate by Twi-girl09
« Reply #4533 on: September 09, 2013, 03:29 PM »
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Demaris, you'll be so pleased to know that, despite the epilogue a/n...there is a sequel to Surrogate!  :cheer:

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Of course, as soon as you mentioned it, I scurried over to ff.net, did a superfast skim of the chapters and saw both the a/n and that there was a sequel..

And the sequel is complete at 22 chapters.  :D :D :D

Continuation of 'Surrogate'. Bella now has two children and her life is falling apart, this is how she deals with it all.
OMG!  :-[ :banghead: Jesus H Christ! Why would you tell me that? Does it count as flouncing if I don't read the sequel, because if that's the case then I have just flounced my first story, there is nothing on God's green earth that would make me go back into that putrid piece of crap..
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What more the author can say when she flounced her own story I have no idea! :D :D  BTW Did you at least also skim the story?  :poo: isn't it?
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4534 on: September 09, 2013, 03:32 PM »
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I read it a while ago. I remember it being okay and predictable.  Nothing noteworty but it was very short!

It's getting better. Getting some reactions out of Bella.
 
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LINK Lissa Bryan - Dark Goddess
« Reply #4535 on: September 09, 2013, 03:40 PM »
I just finished a good one. Original premise. Well executed. I'd say strong Bella, but that's a bit of an understatement--she's a goddess. Actually she's a vampire that was awoken from hibernation. It's a Jake, Edward, Bella story and I read the E/B romance version (I think on TWCS it's a love triangle), which has hefty doses of humor and the supernatural. I really enjoyed reading this. Not her best work, but worth the read.

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Author: Lissa Bryan
A free-spirited archaeologist & a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They're try to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU/Rated M
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Adventure - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 33 - Words: 154,588 - Reviews: 2,727 - Favs: 1,388 - Follows: 1,257 - Updated: 11-24-12 - Published: 03-28-12 - Status: Complete - id: 7967399
 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4536 on: September 09, 2013, 03:58 PM »
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I have been reading all of these posts about cloud and metadata and backups and just thought I'd add my two cents to this fascinating discussions on technology...

Duh... I like pretty pictures!


Lol, I was exactly the same and then looking at this pic I totally forgot everything that I read anyway.  :P
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I haven't tried those, if it doesn't get better in a few weeks, then I'll have to figure where to get one in Austria.
   
We are planning on telling people soon, so at least I will now have a reason for why I don't feel good.  (Yes I told the book club I lurk in before I told people in real life)
Congratulations hun.  :-* :-*
I know how you feel as this pregnancy I'm still suffering from bad morning sickness even though I'm 17 weeks - it doesn't seem to be letting up this time.
But my other 3 pregnancies I found dry crackers or rice cakes seemed to help.
I know they're not that appetising but it might be worth a try.  :-*
 
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Re: Calibre - moving the library
« Reply #4537 on: September 09, 2013, 05:35 PM »
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Can you move it out of Dropbox?  I'm wondering if the problem is the fact you moved it there.  Maybe if you put it back in the old location and then move the library while in Calibre.  There is an option to move the library to a new location.  I have done this a few times without a problem.  But I've always done it while in Calibre.  So it knows where to look. 

Tell me if that works.  If not, then I can load dropbox on my other computer and play with it.

I've tried to move to move the file back out of dropbox and to my docs. I know it's something I'm doing wrong but it's like I'm just not computing this. I actually have a bit of time now that the kids are heading to bed so I'm going to mess around with it some more.

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LOL! I think she was referring to the term "CashCow" which is something that brings in more money to those who own the "product".  So Robsten may have been a CashCow for Summit or the Twilight Franchise, since they bring in good PR for the movies and DVDs. 

Otherwise, I can't see why they would use the term cow when they appear to be a fan...   ???

Oh duuuuhhhh lmao. I'm such a literal person that I saw the references to a cow and just took it as that, essentially calling her a cow  :D Your explanation def'y makes more sense lol
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4538 on: September 09, 2013, 05:35 PM »
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On another note, as I know it pissed a lot of you off - my Daughter has had a really good start to her last year at primary school and is enjoying it so far - she is a lot more confident in herself and her abilities and has the backing and permission from myself and my hubby to kick the sh!t if necessary ( not likely, but, I live in hope!)

Happy to hear she is enjoying school again. Hope the bully/bullies learned their lesson and won't resort to their old ways.

Hopefully, the entire incident will make your daughter stronger and build her character even more.
 :-*
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4539 on: September 09, 2013, 05:38 PM »
I really liked the Dark Goddess by Lissa Bryan.  I haven't read her other stuff, but I've heard good things about her other stories. 

It was definitely different though.  ;)
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Re: Surrogate by Twi-girl09
« Reply #4540 on: September 09, 2013, 05:57 PM »
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OMG!  :-[ :banghead: Jesus H Christ! Why would you tell me that? Does it count as flouncing if I don't read the sequel, because if that's the case then I have just flounced my first story, there is nothing on God's green earth that would make me go back into that putrid piece of crap..
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What more the author can say when she flounced her own story I have no idea! :D :D  BTW Did you at least also skim the story?  :poo: isn't it?

It's not the worst I've read (need I remind you of pink-tutu-wearing masturbating Charlie?) but yeaah, it is a pretty big pile of steaming  :poo:

I'll skim the sequel and let you know what you might be missing  ;)
 
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