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Thread #4 - We are crazy talkers here!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general.  But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement. 

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice   

Because we know drypen's watching    :googlyeyes:

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It didn't bother me that they were smoking weed or drinking.  That's normal for teens.  But not angsty. Just boring to me. When I was a teen, I used to hang with my older sister & her friends.  I sat and watched as they smoked weed & drank beer.  I didn't like either.  But the music was good.  And my parents let her go if she took me because she was the responsible one LOL!

Probably if I read more, it may have gotten better.  But if it hasn't grabbed me by the 3rd chapter, I'm looking for something new.

Well in this case they where
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I mean I don't mind if they smoke weed, also it bother me that they weren't teenagers they where "grown ups", I just couldn't get pass that  :(

As for the rest of it, at one point it felt like PWP
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I FLOVE Biffy (that sounds dirty  ;) :P ) - my fave songs of theirs are Bubbles and Get F*cked Stud.  :)

God and Satan is another favorite also. The crowds they draw are incredible and their live performances ive hunted down on YouTube are just amazing
 
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Well in this case they where
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I mean I don't mind if they smoke weed, also it bother me that they weren't teenagers they where "grown ups", I just couldn't get pass that  :(

As for the rest of it, at one point it felt like PWP
Now that would bother me the most - PWP for a whole story is just boring. I've flounced for that a lot.  Doing coke? Unless it fits with the story line? Yeah it would bother me if Bella or Edward were doing it. I think some writers think to themselves "what's the angstiest thing I could have happen to them ....and they add it all. 
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I love grungy looking guys. I have a bit of a thing for Simon Neil, the lead singer of Biffy Clyro.



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Yes, yes, yes!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE this dude.

And Many of Horror is a fav song of mine. Amazing.

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I FLOVE Biffy (that sounds dirty  ;) :P ) - my fave songs of theirs are Bubbles and Get F*cked Stud.  :)

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God and Satan is another favorite also. The crowds they draw are incredible and their live performances ive hunted down on YouTube are just amazing

Wow ladies!  Thanks for introducing me to this great band, and the beautiful Simon Neil.  So, if you were to recommend one album by Biffy Clyro which would it be?
 :-*
 
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Offline Peonie

Oh my god how much I've missed this place!!!  :loudcry: :loudcry:

And how much has happened.......part four!!!  :djparty:

Finally I can say that I'm on vacationn!!!!!! I've passed the exam that had given me problems in the last months! Girls... happy doesn't even cover the way I feel!  :love: I had to pass it and now I can do the rest of the exams that this one was bloccking! :) I've decided to postpone  the next one in september so I can breath a little :)

Hope everyone is good!! kisses and hugs to all of you!!!  :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*
 
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« Reply #646 on: June 28, 2013, 11:11 AM »
"I love you, okay? Do you believe me?"
She nodded in my hands, a single rear trickling down her cheek. "I believe you."

Not a pleasant image.  :D (For those not in the U.S., we call someone's butt their rear, as in rear end).
 
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Offline ajamm

This OS is so good!

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Author: DTCPS

"Part of me thinks you like having me standing on the sidelines, my feelings fastened to you as you twirl and bend and hit the ground." Shakespeare reading Edward and elite gymnast Bella have some reckoning to do.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction T - English - Romance - Bella & Edward - Words: 12,654 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 46 - Follows: 22 - Published: 05-24-13 - Status: Complete - id: 9323401

And it only has 25 reviews. >:(
 
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Offline lamelurker

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It's not marked as complete, but it is. Highly recommend.

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What If
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Edward is a successful defense attorney living in LA. He lives a lonely, predictable life. But one day, he wakes up in an unfamiliar house, in an unfamiliar room with Bella laying next to him. Will he ever want to wake up from this dream? AH EPOV
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Drama/Romance - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 31 - Words: 211,785 - Reviews: 2,545 - Favs: 2,697 - Follows: 2,168 - Updated: 07-17-11 - Published: 01-25-10 - id: 5694977

Thanks for the rec, I enjoyed it. It got a little long in the middle, but I stuck with it and am glad I did. A must for lovers of time travel fics!
 
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Offline Loopy

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Wow ladies!  Thanks for introducing me to this great band, and the beautiful Simon Neil.  So, if you were to recommend one album by Biffy Clyro which would it be?
 :-*
I'd say a good album of theirs to start with is Only Revolutions. It's probably the most mainstream album of theirs and there are plenty of songs on there you can sing along with.  :P
So it's probably a good one to start with.
 
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Offline Chilibabe

Summaries can be bad, but should at least be readable, right?

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Bella was sufering Edward left when 1 day she got over it not knowing how. Th next day she finds herself in Volterra N Aro asks her 2 join. She accept. Wht happens when Edward N his fam go 4 a visit N they see her after 50 years? How will she react? R&R
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 12,703 - Reviews: 53 - Updated: 10-22-10 - Published: 3-16-09 - Bella & Edward

 :o :o :o
 :D :D :D :D
 

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Summaries can be bad, but should at least be readable, right?

Rebirth » reviews
Bella was sufering Edward left when 1 day she got over it not knowing how. Th next day she finds herself in Volterra N Aro asks her 2 join. She accept. Wht happens when Edward N his fam go 4 a visit N they see her after 50 years? How will she react? R&R
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 12,703 - Reviews: 53 - Updated: 10-22-10 - Published: 3-16-09 - Bella & Edward

 :o :o :o
 :D :D :D :D

Just reading that summary broke my brain, I'd hate to try out the actual fic!
 
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Summaries can be bad, but should at least be readable, right?

Rebirth » reviews
Bella was sufering Edward left when 1 day she got over it not knowing how. Th next day she finds herself in Volterra N Aro asks her 2 join. She accept. Wht happens when Edward N his fam go 4 a visit N they see her after 50 years? How will she react? R&R
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 12,703 - Reviews: 53 - Updated: 10-22-10 - Published: 3-16-09 - Bella & Edward
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Just reading that summary broke my brain, I'd hate to try out the actual fic!

 :D
I'm with Matron, I think I lost IQ points trying to read that.
 
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I'd say a good album of theirs to start with is Only Revolutions. It's probably the most mainstream album of theirs and there are plenty of songs on there you can sing along with.  :P
So it's probably a good one to start with.


Thanks! Just bought the CD on amazon.com and am now ripping it to my iPad so I can listen to it!
 
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Summaries can be bad, but should at least be readable, right?

Rebirth » reviews
Bella was sufering Edward left when 1 day she got over it not knowing how. Th next day she finds herself in Volterra N Aro asks her 2 join. She accept. Wht happens when Edward N his fam go 4 a visit N they see her after 50 years? How will she react? R&R
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 12,703 - Reviews: 53 - Updated: 10-22-10 - Published: 3-16-09 - Bella & Edward

 :o :o :o
 :D :D :D :D


This Is very bad... so so bad. And she still asks to read and review . :D :D :D

Did a twelve year old write this?

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This Is very bad... so so bad. And she still asks to read and review . :D :D :D

Did a twelve year old write this?

She actually has 53! reviews.  I wonder what wnderful things they say about her writing.  :D
 
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She actually has 53! reviews.  I wonder what wnderful things they say about her writing.  :D

It's probably from her beta!
 
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It's probably from her beta!


 :D :D :D

 
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Drypen,

After being told time and time again that you need to stay in bed and rest, we no choice but to issue this warrant on your behalf.  You have contaminated the hot tub and endanger all those in it by drooling into it and scaring all the prisoners to their cells afraid that you are contagious.  You have bitten your mother in law and some think that is was not from your medication.  You must remain in your bed for the safety of all PTS Members.  We can hope that Bubba will take good care of you as he did with your husband..

To show you to error of your ways, you bail is set at $50.

Help! Help! They are going to tape me to the bed so I have to rest! There is a hot tub full of hotties to snuggle with! Bail me out so I can duct tape MIL and Philo to a chair somewhere! They said I bit the old bat but have provided no proof what-so-ever!!! I've never bitten any of you and plenty have asked.  ;D

Even $5 would help tons. GET ME OUT so I can get my revenge against the ogre and his mother.  :evil:
 

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Finally I can say that I'm on vacationn!!!!!! I've passed the exam that had given me problems in the last months! Girls... happy doesn't even cover the way I feel!  :love: I had to pass it and now I can do the rest of the exams that this one was bloccking! :) I've decided to postpone  the next one in september so I can breath a little :)

Well done you!

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Help! Help! They are going to tape me to the bed so I have to rest! There is a hot tub full of hotties to snuggle with! Bail me out so I can duct tape MIL and Philo to a chair somewhere! They said I bit the old bat but have provided no proof what-so-ever!!! I've never bitten any of you and plenty have asked.  ;D

Even $5 would help tons. GET ME OUT so I can get my revenge against the ogre and his mother.  :evil:

I donated $10 last night (my time) because no one I knew was in jail.

Work your mod magic and claim it as bail money!
 
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