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Thread #6 - We are crazy talkers here! Join in the fun!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general.  But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement. 

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice   

Because we know drypen's watching    :googlyeyes:

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This one I know is a fanfiction writer! I've read this story as a Twific ( though again I can't remember the name) Which one is she? Anyone?

Jennifer Lane - Streamline
Seems like Leo Scott has it all: looks, brains, and athletic talent. He’s captain of his high school swim team with a bright future in college and beyond. But Leo has secrets. His mother’s crippling car accident has devastated his family and left Leo to deal with his father’s abuse, battered and alone.

Leo’s girlfriend Audrey Rose is poised for her own share of success. As one of Florida’s top high school swimmers, Audrey dreams of college swimming stardom. But there’s an obstacle to her glorious rise to the top. Her number-one supporter--her father--is in prison for murder.

Part murder mystery, part tale of young love in a military family, this gripping story takes readers on a journey from Pensacola to Annapolis. Leo and Audrey must band together to rise above the adversity they encounter and find their true selves in the process. When everything’s on the line . . . streamline.
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YES!!! Found it!!! It's called Swimming against the tide by pbswimmer. It's in the index.
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....It's a hot mess to be honest, one I would have liked to have flunked but it's odd that no one picked up on it having been published? And if this isn't the same author then someone has been very, very naughty as the stories are practically identical though she's done some shuffling around and editing in the P2P version.   

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Edward and Bella are seventeen year-old swimmers whose families create waves in their lives. The story begins when they are high-school seniors and continues into their first year of college. It is a military murder mystery, a story of healing from dysfunction and uncovering hidden strengths. Edward and Bella are a romantic couple from the start, and their love makes them persevere through the painful realities of their families. Welcome to drool-worthy.
Swimward and his gal Swimella.
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Yeah - she published it some time ago - only reason I didn't pick up on it is because I never read Swimming Against the Tide - she pulled it before I got into AU-Human fics.  The one I did read by her was a New Moon called Mimeteh.



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So tell us did you learn anything good or interesting during this enlightening  :D :D :D  conversation? Please do share with the rest of the class.  :D :D :D  If they know of better ways to get rid of pubic hair, we need to know.  :D :D :D

Nah, except for that 4 blade razor thing. The guy that doesn't dye was mentioning peeling the hair off his balls  :o :P  but i never got around to asking what product he used bec we were all laughing out loud at the bar we were at. Seriously, peeling?!? WTF!!  :D :D

After a few hours, one of the wives also arrived. I showed her the jared leto video. So the guys wanted to see it too. They were impressed with the size  ;) and someone commented about hand jobs like what jared seemed to be giving himself on stage. In all honesty, I said "handjobs are too much work and tiring so i would rather give a blow job", the other wife solemnly agreed with me. we of course got high fives and toasts from the guys.   :D :D :D
 
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Yeah - she published it some time ago - only reason I didn't pick up on it is because I never read Swimming Against the Tide - she pulled it before I got into AU-Human fics.  The one I did read by her was a New Moon called Mimeteh.



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Thank you! So, I'm. Not. Going. Mad  :NeenerNeener:
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Edward really needs to dump Tanya in Wisp. I can't wait to read the part where he does!
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I want him to dump her, but first I want him to see what a b**** she has been to Wisp.
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I really want him to see how horrible she has been to Wisp as well. I hope the author writes that in the story.
We should really start a "Dump The Ho" campaign.  >:D >:D  :D :D

 
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We should really start a "Dump The Ho" campaign.  >:D >:D  :D :D

To who???   :D :D :D

Writer?   :D :D


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To who???   :D :D :D

Writer?   :D :D


:)
LOL! Tanya in Wisp by Cris.
 :D :D :D :D :D
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I'm sure that some are aware, but she's also getting a strong reaction on Facebook as well.  I trust Cris, though.  That said, I do want an HEA, though it would not surprise me to have the story end up more gray.
One of the rare few....
 
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I'm sure that some are aware, but she's also getting a strong reaction on Facebook as well.  I trust Cris, though.  That said, I do want an HEA, though it would not surprise me to have the story end up more gray.
Well, she did that future take with them as a couple. And Tanya is not right for Edward any way you look at it. Edward is too nice for her. Although she has "changed", she really hasn't. I think he is just hanging with her because it is easy, not because they have a future.

It's just getting to the point Bella can be a partner for Edward is going to take some leaps ahead in time. And she may need to move in with someone else or it will be weird.
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Well, she did that future take with them as a couple. And Tanya is not right for Edward any way you look at it. Edward is too nice for her. Although she has "changed", she really hasn't. I think he is just hanging with her because it is easy, not because they have a future.

It's just getting to the point Bella can be a partner for Edward is going to take some leaps ahead in time. And she may need to move in with someone else or it will be weird.

Tanya did not change in a good way. She just got better at hiding her true personality from Edward. I hope Edward finds out that she hasn't changed and dumps her.
 
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Heeeellloooo!
Can we remember that some of us have yet to begin to read Wisp, I've had to scroll through all the posts between my last one and this one just in case I stumble onto plot information I don't want!

Thanks Lovelies  :-*
 
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Hi guys, astro replied to my email and she sends her regards to everyone. She's been busy with work. Her dad is doing well. Her trip to several states in the US was wonderful. She went to Port Angeles for 2 days and went to Forks for 1 day. I envy her  :P

Hey demaris, loopy, she's planning on a trip to england next year. Should we start collecting funds for bail money in case you guys meet up?  :D :D

 
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I started reading this story yesterday, I'm up to chapter 8 and am really enjoying it.  Edward and Bella are actors. It is well written and has very few SPG errors.  Worth checking out.

Dreams and Fantasies by Michaelmas54

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Being the subject of other people's dreams and fantasies is not all its cracked up to be as Edward soon finds out, but will the experience change him for the better? A story with a good dose of humor, a helping of angst, plenty of drama and a lot of love, with some Shakespeare thrown in for good measure. Rec'd by FicSisters TLS & ADF. NOW COMPLETE.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 24 - Words: 113,968 - Reviews: 861 - Favs: 242 - Follows: 444 - Updated: Sep 13 - Published: Jun 6 - Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper - Complete

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Well, she did that future take with them as a couple. And Tanya is not right for Edward any way you look at it. Edward is too nice for her. Although she has "changed", she really hasn't. I think he is just hanging with her because it is easy, not because they have a future.

It's just getting to the point Bella can be a partner for Edward is going to take some leaps ahead in time. And she may need to move in with someone else or it will be weird.
That future take did give me hope that there is a HEA for Edward and Bella which is what we all want, I just think that he needs to dump the ho sooner rather than later.  :D :D
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Heeeellloooo!
Can we remember that some of us have yet to begin to read Wisp, I've had to scroll through all the posts between my last one and this one just in case I stumble onto plot information I don't want!

Thanks Lovelies  :-*
Now I'm just tempted to be a right bitch and post loads of spoilers.  :P :P :D :D :D
But I won't as I don't wanna spoil it for anyone else.  :D :D :D  :-* :-*
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Hi guys, astro replied to my email and she sends her regards to everyone. She's been busy with work. Her dad is doing well. Her trip to several states in the US was wonderful. She went to Port Angeles for 2 days and went to Forks for 1 day. I envy her  :P

Hey demaris, loopy, she's planning on a trip to england next year. Should we start collecting funds for bail money in case you guys meet up?  :D :D
Glad that Astro had a great time on her US trip as I know she had been planning it for ages.
That's great news about her Dad as well.
I don't know if the UK can handle Astro, so maybe it would be a great idea for us all to start saving now.  :P :P :D :D
 
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Hi guys, astro replied to my email and she sends her regards to everyone. She's been busy with work. Her dad is doing well. Her trip to several states in the US was wonderful. She went to Port Angeles for 2 days and went to Forks for 1 day. I envy her  :P

Hey demaris, loopy, she's planning on a trip to england next year. Should we start collecting funds for bail money in case you guys meet up?  :D :D
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Now I'm just tempted to be a right bitch and post loads of spoilers.  :P :P :D :D :D
But I won't as I don't wanna spoil it for anyone else.  :D :D :D  :-* :-*Glad that Astro had a great time on her US trip as I know she had been planning it for ages.
That's great news about her Dad as well.
I don't know if the UK can handle Astro, so maybe it would be a great idea for us all to start saving now.  :P :P :D :D

Tempted?  ;D  :D :D

Absolutely! I am going to email her and tell her! It'd be fantastic to see her. Loopy you can come down from to the big smoke darling.

Ohhhhhh...excited; though I could do without Jasper, easy..
The Cell
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Bella wakes up in a room with no clue where she is or how she got there. She's all alone with her thoughts and fears - or is she? AU/OOC, ?, rated M for language & situations.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Horror - Bella, Edward, Jasper - Words: 219 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 27 - Published: 2h ago - id: 10691735

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Ohhhhhh...excited; though I could do without Jasper, easy..
The Cell
By: dariachenowith
Bella wakes up in a room with no clue where she is or how she got there. She's all alone with her thoughts and fears - or is she? AU/OOC, ?, rated M for language & situations.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Horror - Bella, Edward, Jasper - Words: 219 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 27 - Published: 2h ago - id: 10691735
Didn't she write The Elusive Mr. Cullen?  I'd read this if I knew it was going to be an HEA for Bella and Edward.  But knowing her? It will be an HEA for
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Tempted?  ;D  :D :D

Absolutely! I am going to email her and tell her! It'd be fantastic to see her. Loopy you can come down from to the big smoke darling.

Ohhhhhh...excited; though I could do without Jasper, easy..
The Cell
By: dariachenowith
Bella wakes up in a room with no clue where she is or how she got there. She's all alone with her thoughts and fears - or is she? AU/OOC, ?, rated M for language & situations.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Horror - Bella, Edward, Jasper - Words: 219 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 27 - Published: 2h ago - id: 10691735
Yes only tempted, I'm not that mean (I hope).  :P :P

I don't know if London can handle me, every time I've been I get in trouble.  :D :D

You read my mind about The Cell - liking it so far but Jasper.  :banghead: :banghead:
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Didn't she write The Elusive Mr. Cullen?  I'd read this if I knew it was going to be an HEA for Bella and Edward.  But knowing her? It will be an HEA for
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Yeah she did write The Elusive Mr. Cullen, which actually makes me think that it would probably end like you say.  :(
But I'm gonna keep reading until it's obvious who's HEA it is.
 
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I don't know if London can handle me, every time I've been I get in trouble.  :D :D


Loopy, as far as I can tell, you don't even have to leave home to get in trouble (broken french doors ring any bells?).
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Didn't she write The Elusive Mr. Cullen?  I'd read this if I knew it was going to be an HEA for Bella and Edward.  But knowing her? It will be an HEA for
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I really loved the Elusive Mr Cullen, I though tit was a really clever bit of story telling and pretty unique....I had no idea until the very end the twist it would have. She recently finished Letters to Master You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login which I have yet to read, actually come to think of it I've not read a fic in.....well, ages!  :o

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Yes only tempted, I'm not that mean (I hope).  :P :P

I don't know if London can handle me, every time I've been I get in trouble.  :D :D
Of course you're not! Just kidding  :-*

I don't think London can handle you hence why I'm asking you to come down! What fun!

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Loopy, as far as I can tell, you don't even have to leave home to get in trouble (broken french doors ring any bells?).

 :D :D :D
 
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Hey has anyone read Words with Friends & the companion piece, Words with Strangers by Nolebucgrl? Just wanted to know if it was any good.
 
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