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Thread #3 - We are crazy talkers here!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of SavanaBlue's great contiuation....

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice   

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Agree on the acting and attitude, that's what turned me off her.  :(

She did look great in that pic, also this one

Both Rob & Taylor were always very polite to the paps.  She flips them off & can't seem to complete a sentence without bumbling around.  Makes her come across as a rude idiot.  There's too many actresses out there to have to want to watch someone like that.  And she can dress up well.  Those are my thoughts. 
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I noticed that the author took Animate Me down  :'(

I have it in my TBR list , but I remember somebody here said that
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And why did she take it down? Is she going to publish t?

I really enjoyed Animate Me and also Dodge and Burn. Work of Art still on TBR.
 
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Shhhhh - busy looking at what Rob is doing with his tongue...

Damn astro get out of my head.  That man has an oral fixation.  That tongue is always doing something.  >:D
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I really enjoyed Animate Me and also Dodge and Burn. Work of Art still on TBR.
Work of Art was a really good story.  That said, I did have some problems with stuff in it.  But it has an HEA. Though the angst causing stuff annoyed me a bit. They really weren't a couple until maybe 3/4 of the way through?

But overall I would rec it. ;)
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So now I'm getting ads for lawyers.  Do you think they could get the charges dropped on posting nonsensical words like Actorward?  Because that's what got me put in jail last time. :D :D :D :D

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Work of Art was a really good story.  That said, I did have some problems with stuff in it.  But it has an HEA. Though the angst causing stuff annoyed me a bit. They really weren't a couple until maybe 3/4 of the way through?

But overall I would rec it. ;)

I tried to read Work of Art but I gave up, I don't remember why. And I liked Dodge and Burn.
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I tried to read Work of Art but I gave up, I don't remember why. And I liked Dodge and Burn.
Probably why I almost quit it
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But I seem to remember it was well written and I did read the whole thing.  ;)
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So I just noticed I got smote!

I guess I must have p*ssed someone off..... Cool!  :D :D :D :D

I am too nice most of the time.  :-X
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So I just noticed I got smote!

I guess I must have p*ssed someone off..... Cool!  :D :D :D :D

I am too nice most of the time.  :-X

Are you guys aware of the new robsten drama? Spreading the gossip here.


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She says she slept with rob. And he is bad in bed.

THE DREAM IS OVER!!!!
 
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I tried to read Work of Art but I gave up, I don't remember why. And I liked Dodge and Burn.

Dodge and burn is the last one, right? Where they are older?
I didn't read it cause there was no chance of green eyed babies. Lol
 
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So I just noticed I got smote!

I guess I must have p*ssed someone off..... Cool!  :D :D :D :D

I am too nice most of the time.  :-X

Who would smite you?  You are nothing but friendly and helpful.   ???
 
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So I just noticed I got smote!

I guess I must have p*ssed someone off..... Cool!  :D :D :D :D

I am too nice most of the time.  :-X

You are nice!  Ignore the smite because the source is either an idiot or overly sensitive. 

Okay - I'm reading a published book (well, it could be self-published) and she keeps using the term "chocked" in a context that seems to mean having your mouth kept  open with some type of instrument.  The dictionary I checked did not have the word at all.  I've seen the word used as a misspelling of choked, but not in the context used in this book.  Is this word commonly used in some other country/culture? The writer does not seem to be unfamiliar with the English language.  Am I missing something?  Or am I justified in my wrath at this author's failure in the use of correct English?  Admittedly, the book is otherwise literate.  This particular word really gets my knickers in a twist.
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Are you guys aware of the new robsten drama? Spreading the gossip here.


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She says she slept with rob. And he is bad in bed.

THE DREAM IS OVER!!!!
There was a Dream? 

So this girl meets Rob in a club, has sex with him and tries to get money out of him. 

Thinking he was drunk, it didn't work well, she thought she could blackmail him, his people told her to get lost and she sold the story.   :P ::)



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Are you guys aware of the new robsten drama? Spreading the gossip here.


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She says she slept with rob. And he is bad in bed.

THE DREAM IS OVER!!!!
Just in case anyone can't be bothered to read through the barely legible tweets, she essentially claims she met Rob in a club where he told her she looked younger than 28, and that he and Kristen were friends with benefits only. She then slept with him, apparently he was terrible, and then afterward she asked him for money to keep it quiet. He refused for obvious reasons and she then decided to sell her woe-is-me story so she could pay rent on her apartment.

A riveting tale, of course.
 
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You are nice!  Ignore the smite because the source is either an idiot or overly sensitive. 

Okay - I'm reading a published book (well, it could be self-published) and she keeps using the term "chocked" in a context that seems to mean having your mouth kept  open with some type of instrument.  The dictionary I checked did not have the word at all.  I've seen the word used as a misspelling of choked, but not in the context used in this book.  Is this word commonly used in some other country/culture? The writer does not seem to be unfamiliar with the English language.  Am I missing something?  Or am I justified in my wrath at this author's failure in the use of correct English?  Admittedly, the book is otherwise literate.  This particular word really gets my knickers in a twist.
In England, we use 'chocker' when something is full. Maybe she's turned it into a past participle? It would make sense to say 'her mouth was chocked with such and such' when it was filled with something, for example.
 
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You are nice!  Ignore the smite because the source is either an idiot or overly sensitive. 

Okay - I'm reading a published book (well, it could be self-published) and she keeps using the term "chocked" in a context that seems to mean having your mouth kept  open with some type of instrument.  The dictionary I checked did not have the word at all.  I've seen the word used as a misspelling of choked, but not in the context used in this book.  Is this word commonly used in some other country/culture? The writer does not seem to be unfamiliar with the English language.  Am I missing something?  Or am I justified in my wrath at this author's failure in the use of correct English?  Admittedly, the book is otherwise literate.  This particular word really gets my knickers in a twist.
Thank you!  :-*

Well, my husband works with planes and they wedge chocks under the tires to keep it from moving.  Maybe it's a BDSM term for something that keeps your mouth from closing?   ???
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Who would smite you?  You are nothing but friendly and helpful.   ???

Thank you!  :-*

I get grumpy once in a while. 
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You are nice!  Ignore the smite because the source is either an idiot or overly sensitive. 

Okay - I'm reading a published book (well, it could be self-published) and she keeps using the term "chocked" in a context that seems to mean having your mouth kept  open with some type of instrument.  The dictionary I checked did not have the word at all.  I've seen the word used as a misspelling of choked, but not in the context used in this book.  Is this word commonly used in some other country/culture? The writer does not seem to be unfamiliar with the English language.  Am I missing something?  Or am I justified in my wrath at this author's failure in the use of correct English?  Admittedly, the book is otherwise literate.  This particular word really gets my knickers in a twist.


chock  (chk)
n.
1. A block or wedge placed under something else, such as a wheel, to keep it from moving.
2. Nautical A heavy fitting of metal or wood with two jaws curving inward, through which a rope or cable may be run.
tr.v. chocked, chockĀ·ing, chocks
1. To fit with or secure by a chock: The plane's wheels were chocked and chained down.
2. Nautical To place (a boat) on chocks.
adv.
As close as possible: had to stand chock up against the railing.
[Possibly from Old North French choque, log, from Gaulish *tsukka, stump, of Germanic origin.]


You can chock you door, chock a wheel (so your bike, car doesn't roll away while you change your tire) but I've never heard it used in the context of someone's mouth!
 
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Just in case anyone can't be bothered to read through the barely legible tweets, she essentially claims she met Rob in a club where he told her she looked younger than 28, and that he and Kristen were friends with benefits only. She then slept with him, apparently he was terrible, and then afterward she asked him for money to keep it quiet. He refused for obvious reasons and she then decided to sell her woe-is-me story so she could pay rent on her apartment.

A riveting tale, of course.

I find it very amusing. There is also all this drama about an ex bf and his sister.
 :D :D :D :D


I'm betting this is not true, just something to mess up with the robsten stans. But how much time does this girl have?

If it is true, ROb, there is an entire fandom that would not charge you for sex. The opposite.
 
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Thank you!  :-*

Well, my husband works with planes and they wedge chocks under the tires to keep it from moving.  Maybe it's a BDSM term for something that keeps your mouth from closing?   ???
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chock  (chk)
n.
1. A block or wedge placed under something else, such as a wheel, to keep it from moving.
2. Nautical A heavy fitting of metal or wood with two jaws curving inward, through which a rope or cable may be run.
tr.v. chocked, chockĀ·ing, chocks
1. To fit with or secure by a chock: The plane's wheels were chocked and chained down.
2. Nautical To place (a boat) on chocks.
adv.
As close as possible: had to stand chock up against the railing.
[Possibly from Old North French choque, log, from Gaulish *tsukka, stump, of Germanic origin.]


You can chock you door, chock a wheel (so your bike, car doesn't roll away while you change your tire) but I've never heard it used in the context of someone's mouth!

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In England, we use 'chocker' when something is full. Maybe she's turned it into a past participle? It would make sense to say 'her mouth was chocked with such and such' when it was filled with something, for example.

Thank you, ladies, you've taught me something today.  I guess I'll hold off on the wrath for now.  While I don't think it's a great term for what she's trying to say, I can now see how it MIGHT be permissible.
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