Author Topic: Flounced Fics (Twilight fanfiction) (Read 281244 times)

Matron · « **on:** January 14, 2013, 04:02 PM »

Ok folks, list em here. Fics that you have flounced, and why you flounced them. Help keep others apprised of the good, the bad, and the badly edited.

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deranged_dreamer · « **Reply #481 on:** March 30, 2013, 10:06 AM »

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For me it depends... There's a two shot about Edward being an escort that I like. Paper Flowers... I think that's it have you read it?
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nah. i keep away from those. i dont know, i tried reading a few, but i think its awful.

i wonder if the writers and readers are all fantasizing about escorts its like reading slash.
even if you joined in they wouldnt want you there. they are not thiking about you to get it up.

ajamm · « **Reply #482 on:** March 31, 2013, 10:01 AM »

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nah. i keep away from those. i dont know, i tried reading a few, but i think its awful.

i wonder if the writers and readers are all fantasizing about escorts its like reading slash.
even if you joined in they wouldnt want you there. they are not thiking about you to get it up.

Ehh, I haven't read many only about three

But my favorite is the one I mentioned. They end up together... and Edward gives up his job. I think the whole concept of the chapter is smut!

S. · « **Reply #483 on:** March 31, 2013, 10:48 AM »

I flounced this story:
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Lily is Bella's daughter. She is a small kid and she talks like an adult and the author's writing style is strange. And of course Edward saw her for the first time and he already fell in love and he forgot that in the previous chapter he couldn't live without his daughter and wife (they were killed in a car accident).

ajamm · « **Reply #484 on:** March 31, 2013, 11:35 AM »

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I flounced this story:
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Lily is Bella's daughter. She is a small kid and she talks like an adult and the author's writing style is strange. And of course Edward saw her for the first time and he already fell in love and he forgot that in the previous chapter he couldn't live without his daughter and wife (they were killed in a car accident).

Finally somebody sees the light! I can't for the live of me understand how it is that this story has more than 300 reviews. I've read longer and better stories that have half the reviews this story has!

AnywaysI only read three chapters.... so maybe maybe it got better then. Who knows

S. · « **Reply #485 on:** March 31, 2013, 11:40 AM »

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Finally somebody sees the light! I can't for the live of me understand how it is that this story has more than 300 reviews. I've read longer and better stories that have half the reviews this story has!

AnywaysI only read three chapters.... so maybe maybe it got better then. Who knows

Ypu read 3 chapters of CFOW?

I only managed to read one and a half chapter. I couldn't read it. Terrible story.

yassa · « **Reply #486 on:** April 01, 2013, 12:34 PM »

I flounced The Red Line by WinndSinger and Harkham`s Case by Scarlettplay recently.
Reason: both are overly dramatic and so totally unbelieveable and unrealistic that I just couldn't do it. The ideas are good in both stories and parts are well-written, but both authors go totally overboard and that destroys everything.

Chilibabe · « **Reply #487 on:** April 01, 2013, 12:47 PM »

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I flounced The Red Line by WinndSinger and Harkham`s Case by Scarlettplay recently.
Reason: both are overly dramatic and so totally unbelieveable and unrealistic that I just couldn't do it. The ideas are good in both stories and parts are well-written, but both authors go totally overboard and that destroys everything.

I agree with you on Harkham's Case. I read it as a WIP but stopped. It was just too much. Sad, because it was such a good idea...

ajamm · « **Reply #488 on:** April 01, 2013, 12:55 PM »

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I flounced The Red Line by WinndSinger and Harkham`s Case by Scarlettplay recently.
Reason: both are overly dramatic and so totally unbelieveable and unrealistic that I just couldn't do it. The ideas are good in both stories and parts are well-written, but both authors go totally overboard and that destroys everything.

The Red Line left me so traumatized. I swear I had a nightmare or two starting Victoria or that bitch that I don't remember her name .

S. · « **Reply #489 on:** April 09, 2013, 07:52 AM »

Summer Breeze by BriannaMarley
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Her writing style is weird. This story has 15 chapters. In first Bella has an accident and then in 2-14 we read about her in hospital and she has operation and then in chapter 15 we have sequel. There is nothing about her recovery. She simply cut off in the middle of the story and wrote a sequel taking place 5 years later.

Ellachanted · « **Reply #490 on:** April 09, 2013, 09:43 AM »

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Summer Breeze by BriannaMarley
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Her writing style is weird. This story has 15 chapters. In first Bella has an accident and then in 2-14 we read about her in hospital and she has operation and then in chapter 15 we have sequel. There is nothing about her recovery. She simply cut off in the middle of the story and wrote a sequel taking place 5 years later.

I've got a few of hers on my TBR list but I haven't been able to read them for some reason. I guess I will move this one down to the bottom (the when I'm desperate and don't mind bad writing)
Thanks

deranged_dreamer · « **Reply #491 on:** April 16, 2013, 06:06 AM »

Under my Skin
Author: Missjude PM
Edward is an artist, his family is the most important thing in his life. Bella is hiding behind her books, she doesn't have much of a family and is in a bad relationship. Both of their lives will take a new direction where they will face both good and bad.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Family - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 33 - Words: 88,395 - Reviews: 1,131 - Favs: 403 - Follows: 706 - Updated: 04-12-13 - Published: 12-21-12 - id: 8819514

They just met and they are swing they love each other.

The flow of the story is just off, maybe because English is not the author first language.
Their relationship is too fast, not developed, the characters are also not developed. They don't know anything about each other. And it is supposed to be love not lust.

Loopy · « **Reply #492 on:** April 16, 2013, 06:49 AM »

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Under my Skin
Author: Missjude PM
Edward is an artist, his family is the most important thing in his life. Bella is hiding behind her books, she doesn't have much of a family and is in a bad relationship. Both of their lives will take a new direction where they will face both good and bad.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Family - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 33 - Words: 88,395 - Reviews: 1,131 - Favs: 403 - Follows: 706 - Updated: 04-12-13 - Published: 12-21-12 - id: 8819514

They just met and they are swing they love each other.

The flow of the story is just off, maybe because English is not the author first language.
Their relationship is too fast, not developed, the characters are also not developed. They don't know anything about each other. And it is supposed to be love not lust.

I was following this - I think I won't any more as I love a bit of UST between them before they fall in love.

S1203 · « **Reply #493 on:** April 17, 2013, 11:16 AM »

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I tried so hard with this one and even though there were parts I liked, I just couldn't.

Wow, thank you! I was seriously thinking that I am freak because I also couldn`t read this fic...

Illusionofhappiness · « **Reply #494 on:** April 29, 2013, 06:17 AM »

I have flounced Diamond in the Rough. It was going so well but it keeps going and going and going....

deranged_dreamer · « **Reply #495 on:** April 29, 2013, 06:18 AM »

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I have flounced Diamond in the Rough. It was going so well but it keeps going and going and going....

Can you link it for us, please?
Thanks

Illusionofhappiness · « **Reply #496 on:** April 29, 2013, 06:26 AM »

Sorry about that. You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login This is was my first attempt at posting, when mentioning a story do I need to always post a link?

laurendeplume · « **Reply #497 on:** April 29, 2013, 06:33 AM »

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Sorry about that. You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login This is was my first attempt at posting, when mentioning a story do I need to always post a link?

It's good to, so that way we can all see the story you're talking about

I haven't read the story you're talking about and don't plan to anytime soon.. a million words?!

deranged_dreamer · « **Reply #498 on:** April 29, 2013, 06:33 AM »

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Sorry about that. You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login This is was my first attempt at posting, when mentioning a story do I need to always post a link?

You don't have to. But you didn't even post the authors name so that can get confusing.
But it is easier. I also like to post the summary, so It's easier to recall the fic.

Cause this one, for example, the name was familiar. When I read the summary I knew it wasn't something I normally read. As I avoid bdsm fics.

Welcome.

Maggie · « **Reply #499 on:** April 29, 2013, 06:34 AM »

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I have flounced Diamond in the Rough. It was going so well but it keeps going and going and going....

I'd flounce that just from the spelling mistakes in the summary

Bella is coming from a bad marriage that haunts her. After recieveing her Masters in Psychology she begins to embrace her submissive nature, she fines herself drawn to Edward's Dominating charater. He wants to help her fine a place of peace at his feet.

deranged_dreamer · « **Reply #500 on:** April 29, 2013, 06:35 AM »

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It's good to, so that way we can all see the story you're talking about I haven't read the story you're talking about and don't plan to anytime soon.. a million words?!

We don't do word counts here. So it's really weird for me when people talk about it. I have no idea if a million words is too much or not.

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