Okay, I'm giving up. Sorry to all those who loved this story, but I'm flouncing. Nothing happens in this fic except B&E fall in love. That's it. And since that happened in the first half of this fic, nothing has been happening except a reiteration of that love chapter after chapter. I just don't care anymore. If you are looking for an all fluff story that is technically written well but with absolutely no drama or angst, this is for you. "My precious little perv" "My Jezebel" I love you. I love you. Isn't he so perfect?  She's so perfect. UGH!

And if any more tears flow out of this girl's eyes because of his perfection, she's going to die of dehydration. Seriously.

Couldn't agree with you anymore. I was so pissed off when I read that part of the book. I was seething.

I flounce this one after chapter 4 or 5, when Bella meets the King and Queen (?) and they act like the most adoring in-laws. I know there are many who adore this story, but t could have been so much better and believable. Honestly, it was a bit boring at some points...  I didn't even got to Angela, but I'm intrigued now, someone please spoil it for me?

Thank you for spoiler! I wanted to read it but now I will just delete it from my tbr list and find something better. The very thought of Edward and Angela together makes me sick.

What are reasons y'all will flounce a fic?  I have flounced a few in my time. Generally due to really bad spelling or a general need of a beta.  I do have a few pet peeves that if a fic has too many of them I  will flounce.

The use of their, there, they're wrong.
Two, too & to as well.

A big pet peeve is when people make Emmett's last name McCarthy. It is McCarty. I don't know why that one bothers me so badly but it does. Once or twice isn't too bad but when every time they mention him they call him Emmett McCarthy... it drives me batty.  LOL

The fic I'm reading right now, I'm only 44% through it and I'm considering flouncing. Not for any of these reasons but, because after being friends with each other all summer long Edward & Bella finally got together and they are overdoing it with the baby, sweetheart & honey names... every single time they refer to each other. Like they don't have a name anymore.  It just seems overkill.  Granted, I could just be PMSing and just need to step away from the book but at the same time I'm wondering if it will continue on for the remaining 56% of the book and if so... I can't deal with that crap. 

Anyone want to spoil me and let me know if Illegal Contact by GreenEyedGirl17 You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login is going to continue being sappy or will normal out once their relationship as a couple is more established?

Thoughts on the story?

Agreed! I can't stand it when they do the Mason thing too.  I haven't flounced for that. But it does bother me.

I'm really liking the plot idea of Illegal Contact. But, so far they have been together one night and it is honey this, baby that.  It just seems a bit overkill.  Maybe I should just put this fic off to the side for a week and then come back and finish it.  Though, I did that with Take the Ice by Bellamarie117 and I haven't gone back... yet to finish it. I plan to so I won't call that one a flounce.  It was just a bit long and was starting to overwhelm me.

Angela is Bella friend.

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I stopped reading after that. There was something to do with Aro as well... I think Edward lost a battle to Aro...
So he is being forced to have a child...

Smoking, as I've mentioned here before - if it us just in passing I can sometimes ignore it, but when it becomes a lazy way for authors to give the character a crutch or simply go outside - I'm gone.

Well, thank God I ditched it early then... There is nothing I dislike more than Historical Fics that in reality are the same stories but with horses and without phones. Do your research people or don't write it!

I get that some people are bothered with smoking/smokers, but I actually find it quite surprising that there aren't more smokers in fics. I mean more than 60% people I know are smokers, even occasionally. When you meet a smoker in a fic, it will probably be a bad-@ss, bad boy type of character.

I am a smoker, but I realise why people dislike it. (For what is worth I am trying to quit...) It just surprises me that there are no more smokers in fics, it makes the story and the characters seem less realistic to me. And I am not talking only about Bella and Edward, but for all characters involved in a fic. There will always be a colleague that needs a cigarette break, a friend who will ask if he can smoke in the house etc. That (almost) never happens in fic. Then again maybe the authors don't focuse on it, but especially when it comes to stories that actually seem believable, it takes part of the fun away. Am I making any sense?

Then again, it seems like smoking might not be such a big thing in other countries/cultures.

I barely have any friends that are smokers.
Same with my brother and his friends.
I'm 30 yo and my brother 28yo.