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Offline Ellachanted

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ADULT ONLY DISCUSSION HERE SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO WAIT! DON'T LOOK IF YOU'RE EASILY OFFENDED :18only: :18only: :18only: :18only:

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Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice  :-*

Because we know drypen's watching  :googlyeyes:

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1401 on: November 03, 2012, 08:13 PM »
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:D :D :D That is one thing I always though would be good about being a Vampire, the whole unchanging/ frozen in time thing means as long as I was nicely groomed before being changed I'd never have to wax again. Oh the bliss.
At least with SM's vamps it can be changed ;)  I remember one where Alice told Bella she better clean up where she didn't want hair before the change and there was something about how hard it was to remove Jasper's goatee  ???

But it's still better than MaryJanice Davidsen's vamps.  Betsey found that even if she gave herself a manicure one day, she'd wake up the next morning with the unmanicured, broken nails she died with.  She was also so happy she just had her hair done LOL!    ^-^
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1402 on: November 03, 2012, 08:18 PM »
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But it's still better than MaryJanice Davidsen's vamps.  Betsey found that even if she gave herself a manicure one day, she'd wake up the next morning with the unmanicured, broken nails she died with.  She was also so happy she just had her hair done LOL!    ^-^

That's what happens to me! I get a manicure and the next day my nails are a mess again. I shave, and a few hours later I look like I have a caterpillar infestation. I never knew it was because I was a Davidsen vamp!
 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1403 on: November 03, 2012, 08:25 PM »
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The story ideas are really good. The plot is almost good enough to get over the writing.  They probably need a little editing in addition to the grammar/word usage/spelling issues.  So I'd probably save the stories for a time when you are not tired and irritated by other things.....because these stories won't help.  Does that make sense?  ;)

Yuppers. Lots of sense. I'll but them on the back-burner for now then. I'm pretty irritated at the moment, I got sunburnt horse riding yesterday and one of my mares has a swollen leg cause she cut herself and my brothers pony is lame. Grrr. But I'm roasting lamb for family lunch and sitting in the hammock at the moment so things are on the up.

I can't get manicures at all. Mine are always dirty and ripped thanks to the ponies. My horses always have prettier nails than I do... :(
 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1404 on: November 03, 2012, 08:26 PM »
Can somebody give me a small summary of this one :)  Is it really angsty ?

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I kind of want to read it.... but its marked as angst,  I don't want to read it and then hate that I did.   

 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1405 on: November 03, 2012, 08:48 PM »
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Can somebody give me a small summary of this one :)  Is it really angsty ?

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I kind of want to read it.... but its marked as angst,  I don't want to read it and then hate that I did.
UNDER A SPOILER or in a PM! God, I'm so NOT ALLOWED about this.....what's going on with me?  :-[

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1406 on: November 03, 2012, 08:54 PM »
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UNDER A SPOILER or in a PM! God, I'm so NOT ALLOWED about this.....what's going on with me?  :-[

Why is a.n.a.l not allowed?


Doesn't matter whichever is best for you  ;D
 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1407 on: November 03, 2012, 09:00 PM »
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UNDER A SPOILER or in a PM! God, I'm so NOT ALLOWED about this.....what's going on with me?  :-[

Why is a.n.a.l not allowed?
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Doesn't matter whichever is best for you  ;D

Oh! Ajamm, sorry no, I haven't read it which is why I'm trying to alert anyone who answers your post to cover any spoilers as I have it on my TBR and hate to have the plot spoiled.
 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1408 on: November 03, 2012, 09:07 PM »
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Oh! Ajamm, sorry no, I haven't read it which is why I'm trying to alert anyone who answers your post to cover any spoilers as I have it on my TBR and hate to have the plot spoiled.


Awww, I was excited... I thought you knew   :(
 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1409 on: November 03, 2012, 09:10 PM »
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Awww, I was excited... I thought you knew   :(

Big Sorry! :cry:
 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1410 on: November 03, 2012, 09:19 PM »
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Yuppers. Lots of sense. I'll but them on the back-burner for now then. I'm pretty irritated at the moment, I got sunburnt horse riding yesterday and one of my mares has a swollen leg cause she cut herself and my brothers pony is lame. Grrr. But I'm roasting lamb for family lunch and sitting in the hammock at the moment so things are on the up.

I can't get manicures at all. Mine are always dirty and ripped thanks to the ponies. My horses always have prettier nails than I do... :(
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That's what happens to me! I get a manicure and the next day my nails are a mess again. I shave, and a few hours later I look like I have a caterpillar infestation. I never knew it was because I was a Davidsen vamp!
Yeah, I do pedicures only.  I'm always breaking my nails, but the look so ugly short...sigh  :P
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1411 on: November 03, 2012, 10:42 PM »
I  just read this (well I tried to) let me just say it was a total mind F U C k . I don't know what happened  :o

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1412 on: November 03, 2012, 11:26 PM »
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I  just read this (well I tried to) let me just say it was a total mind F U C k . I don't know what happened  :o

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Reminded me of a Twilight Zone episode.  You never are quite sure what is real & what isn't. :)
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1413 on: November 04, 2012, 02:23 AM »
Rob sandwich...



How have I never seen this before?
 
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« Reply #1414 on: November 04, 2012, 05:15 AM »
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SparklingWand has completed A Different Kind of Pain.

AN: Well this is it, my friends. As we all know, all good things must come to an end, and while I hate seeing this story end, it's been a blessing sharing it with y'all. I will post the epilogue sometime next week. There's only one stone left unturned, and its a big one.

Thank you all for reading.

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disclaimer: I have not read this story, it's just been on alerts. If its crap don't blame me!  :D

It was also on my alert..I havent read this story, only 2-3 chapters in between when i found story..I got overall idea of story..Well  TBH It is very crappy story.  ;D .This chracters are supposed to be 25+ or 30 something. & Bella calling edward as  "Eddie" & jacob as "Jackie" in entire story.  :sign0090: You can imagine what type of writing will be of this story. I was so excited after reading summary but disappointed with the writing.

It annoy me that sometime really good plots/concept for story  are ruined by author's poor writing..you are like what??? it is written by 10 yr old. :banghead:

P.s:- i didnt get New alert mesage in my mail for last 2 days.  WTF?? i missed all chitchat here. :33:
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1415 on: November 04, 2012, 07:34 AM »
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Rob sandwich...



How have I never seen this before?
Is it weird that I am fixated by his feet? I'm on my iPhone and I keep zooming in to see his FEET!
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1416 on: November 04, 2012, 07:45 AM »
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Is it weird that I am fixated by his feet? I'm on my iPhone and I keep zooming in to see his FEET!
Lol, I'm now looking at his feet and they are really nice - I usually don't like feet, so this is high praise coming from me.  :D
 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1417 on: November 04, 2012, 07:55 AM »
Finished Let Your Light Shine (by LolaShoes) last night and it was simply amazing!  I am the biggest fan of the Twilight books, but I do honestly think that this was better than Breaking Dawn.     I think everyone is familiar with this one, but it takes place after the wedding and gives us a "real" honeymoon and
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I am SO glad I quit reading the other fanfic that I had been fighting not to flounce for so long.   This was worlds better!  I read until midnight and then finally had to go to sleep.  So I'll start the next one in the trilogy tonight!   

Wow, LolaShoes can REALLY write.  And if I read correctly, this was her first attempt at writing fiction?? 
 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1418 on: November 04, 2012, 07:57 AM »
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Is it weird that I am fixated by his feet? I'm on my iPhone and I keep zooming in to see his FEET!
Damn you're right!  His toes are so long.  Hmmm ...I wonder ..... *blushes at thought that the toes may be comparable in size to a not allowed to be mentioned body part*
 :57: :cheesy: :NeenerNeener: :-[ :grin:
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1419 on: November 04, 2012, 08:17 AM »
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How about the Quiet Room by givemesomevamp or Golden Moon by Nusiain Forks You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login ?

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Thanks for the Golden Moon rec, I am LOVING this one. Is the Jasper POV parts worth reading too/
 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations
« Reply #1420 on: November 04, 2012, 08:27 AM »
Have you guys read There is a Light?
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I saw that it won the 2011 Fic of the Year over at The Lemonade Stand.   Is it really that good? 

Trying to to figure out what to read after I finish the Let Your Light Shine trilogy by Lola Shoes.   
 
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