Author Topic: LOCKED Twific discussion and recommendations ADULT ONLY -OVER 18 ONLY- LOCKED (Read 474921 times)

Ellachanted · « **on:** October 02, 2012, 01:40 PM »

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deranged_dreamer · « **Reply #681 on:** October 19, 2012, 11:51 AM »

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So I'm trying to read Breaking the Silence by SparklingTwilight....OMG! for someone who doesn't talk she won't shut up. I'm only 60 pages into a 900 plus page story & I'm ready to quit. If I have to read this inner monologue any longer , I'm tempted to gag her. Sigh....

So whoever rec'd it, does it stop soon or should I quit.

I flounced it. Can't remember why. That's probably it!

Ellachanted · « **Reply #682 on:** October 19, 2012, 11:57 AM »

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Now personally, my inner monologues go on and on and round and round, like hamsters on a wheel. Unfortunately, the fanfic writers tend to have their characters' inner monologues do the same thing. While I am usually quite patient with my own inner ramblings, I don't want to read page after page of it in my fiction! Sounds like it's time to skim, Ella.

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Yeah, I'm afraid to admit I flounced after about 10 pages...I didn't even get as far as to find out WHY she doesn't speak..Let me know if it's worth it and I might go back...

LOL! Still waiting to find out. I think she made a noise when her family was hiding from bad guys. I've switched to another story. I want to see if it is better. I like the idea of the story, but if I want to get any farther the skimming will have to start. I'll let you know if I go back to it

Yeah, I got the inner monologues, but I don't argue with myself as much as she does.

DeDe's Over It. · « **Reply #683 on:** October 19, 2012, 03:58 PM »

So..reading Pound of Flesh, almost at the end of it and I have to say thoroughly enjoying it, but. I find myself skipping over the "intimate" scenes and turning pages thinking "please. PLEASE! Don't have s.e.x again!" What is that? Is there such a thing as Lemon Fatigue? Because I'm suffering from a great big dose of it...."oh, oh, oh!" "yes, yes yes!" "faster! deeper! harder!" "F. F. F!" Jesus wept! Enough already....

See? Case in point. "How about" Isabella panted "For now, we just have some amazing s.e.x?" And I thought. 'NO! How about you DON"T!"

hope4more · « **Reply #684 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:15 PM »

Glass House by Livie79 just completed
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It's extremely angsty but I loved it.

hope4more · « **Reply #685 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:19 PM »

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So..reading Pound of Flesh, almost at the end of it and I have to say thoroughly enjoying it, but. I find myself skipping over the "intimate" scenes and turning pages thinking "please. PLEASE! Don't have s.e.x again!" What is that? Is there such a thing as Lemon Fatigue? Because I'm suffering from a great big dose of it...."oh, oh, oh!" "yes, yes yes!" "faster! deeper! harder!" "F. F. F!" Jesus wept! Enough already....

See? Case in point. "How about" Isabella panted "For now, we just have some amazing s.e.x?" And I thought. 'NO! How about you DON"T!"

I haven't read it yet, but I struggled with her other fic "Help Wanted". Too many s.e.x. scenes. I get what you're saying. I was thinking the same things while reading, I ended up skipping all the later ones.

DeDe's Over It. · « **Reply #686 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:21 PM »

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It's extremely angsty but I loved it.

Is there a lot of...s.e.x? Because quite frankly I don't know if I can take any more....I might have to join that fanfic author that found God on our other thread, what was her name? CellaCullen?

Ellachanted · « **Reply #687 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:25 PM »

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So..reading Pound of Flesh, almost at the end of it and I have to say thoroughly enjoying it, but. I find myself skipping over the "intimate" scenes and turning pages thinking "please. PLEASE! Don't have s.e.x again!" What is that? Is there such a thing as Lemon Fatigue? Because I'm suffering from a great big dose of it...."oh, oh, oh!" "yes, yes yes!" "faster! deeper! harder!" "F. F. F!" Jesus wept! Enough already....

See? Case in point. "How about" Isabella panted "For now, we just have some amazing s.e.x?" And I thought. 'NO! How about you DON"T!"

OMG ROFL!!!!

I thought I was the only one to think that while reading stories. I was reading the Misapprehension of Bella Swan, and it was the same thing. Though the part where she made a cape for the Monster C*ck - well that was hilarious. But yeah, a OS full of lemons is great. A 350 page story full of lemons is too much.

hope4more · « **Reply #688 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:26 PM »

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Is there a lot of...s.e.x? Because quite frankly I don't know if I can take any more....I might have to join that fanfic author that found God on our other thread, what was her name? CellaCullen?

LOL... No, maybe two or three but be careful though there is cheating in this fic and... SPOILER

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Ellachanted · « **Reply #689 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:27 PM »

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Is there a lot of...s.e.x? Because quite frankly I don't know if I can take any more....I might have to join that fanfic author that found God on our other thread, what was her name? CellaCullen?

Time to read the original Twilight again - no sex there!!!!!

hope4more · « **Reply #690 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:28 PM »

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Though the part where she made a cape for the Monster C*ck - well that was hilarious.

That was hilarious! I loved that Bella.

Ellachanted · « **Reply #691 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:31 PM »

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That was hilarious! I loved that Bella.

I did love her comments. Though Renee? If she were my mother??? I would have moved to another country.

DeDe's Over It. · « **Reply #692 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:31 PM »

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OMG ROFL!!!!

I thought I was the only one to think that while reading stories. I was reading the Misapprehension of Bella Swan, and it was the same thing. Though the part where she made a cape for the Monster C*ck - well that was hilarious. But yeah, a OS full of lemons is great. A 350 page story full of lemons is too much.

Yes! The cape for the Monster C*ck was really funny!

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I laughed til I cried..

But what gets me is that Jaxon is a really good writer and I think she sells herself short with all the gratuitous s.e.x. scenes.... I think she'd get the same amount of readers from just her writing alone, even she she toned down on the other stuff.

DeDe's Over It. · « **Reply #693 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:35 PM »

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Time to read the original Twilight again - no sex there!!!!!

Ohhhh!Now! No! we don't have to go THAT far!

susanpr · « **Reply #694 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:36 PM »

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Time to read the original Twilight again - no sex there!!!!!

Love that thought!

I would prefer a happy medium, Just a few scattered lemons for me please!

Ellachanted · « **Reply #695 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:37 PM »

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Yes! The cape for the Monster C*ck was really funny!
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I laughed til I cried..

But what gets me is that Jaxon is a really good writer and I think she sells herself short with all the gratuitous s.e.x. scenes.... I think she'd get the same amount of readers from just her writing alone, even she she toned down on the other stuff.

Yup! And Edward freaked when she got the scissors LOL! So funny.

Yeah, I would agree that she is a good writer. I loved her other story - Help Wanted. But then I love Actorward.

Ellachanted · « **Reply #696 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:40 PM »

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Love that thought!

I would prefer a happy medium, Just a few scattered lemons for me please!

I'm trying to remember one with a reasonable amount of lemons, they all have either too much or too little it seems.....

hope4more · « **Reply #697 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:40 PM »

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I did love her comments. Though Renee? If she were my mother??? I would have moved to another country.

Oh yeah Renee was ... too much

Did you read he other fic? Clipped Wings and Inked Armor?
Is it good?

Ellachanted · « **Reply #698 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:44 PM »

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Oh yeah Renee was ... too much

Did you read he other fic? Clipped Wings and Inked Armor?
Is it good?

Not yet. I hear it's good, but I only read the first few pages and never got back to it. I'm flouncing left and right lately. I need something good or I will have to reread something.

Though I did just get a semi-new Scarpetta novel in..... murder - just what the doctor ordered...

hope4more · « **Reply #699 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:48 PM »

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Not yet. I hear it's good, but I only read the first few pages and never got back to it. I'm flouncing left and right lately. I need something good or I will have to reread something.

Though I did just get a semi-new Scarpetta novel in..... murder - just what the doctor ordered...

I wanted to read it but then I saw 600+ pages and put it off for another time.

fanficreader92 · « **Reply #700 on:** October 19, 2012, 04:51 PM »

Hi everyone,

I'm looking for one of the first fics I ever read, it was about an English Edward who was to inherit a castle and needed an heir. Bella meets him working in a pub while pregnant and he hires her to pretend they've conceived the child together. Edward has awful fashion sense and Bella is quite flighty.

Thanks in advance, would love to revisit the nostalgia!

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