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Thread #4 - We are crazy talkers here!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general.  But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement. 

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

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I haven't outgrown the pretty. To me, he looks damn fine. In fact he looks like a man, so I feel less cougarish now. As he has matured, he has only gotten better. Do I start panting at first glimpse anymore? Nah, I think my whoha has grown accustom to seeing him now. Does he look good? Yes. Do I think he looks better as he ages? Yes. But after years of lusting maybe I have learned to control myself.


I don't want to have outgrown The Pretty....I feel bereft, as though someone has died! I am a drift without a paddle, with no anchor to secure my boat  :loudcry:..Wow, I'm a fanfic writer!   :D

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In fact I moaned at myself that I am now reblogging and finding silver foxes sexy. Shame to get old. Or maybe it's because hubs hair has more white in it that dark brown and I still find him very very sexy.


This is not what I call a Silver Fox in the true sense of the word...This is a young man prematurely grey? Right?! Wouldn't a Sliver Fox have just a touch more wrinkles?...Whatever, me likey 8)

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Late as always, but I am here. So whatcha like. Blonde/blue eyes, Brown/brown eyes, muscular, lean, tall, etc. Give me a direction and let me check my spank bank.

I need some good RobP0rn to relight my fire..in the words of Take That.....And I don't mean to restart the Take That Wars of 2012  :P

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WOW, bb. I liked TGV. In fact, by the time they finally got around to doing it, I was getting inpatient. Wasn't like chp 18 or something? That and the sequel The Last Mission is all I have read of hers, but I do like her style. Did she have SPAG, definitely, but it was easy to gloss over. Some stories have been absolutely terrible. I usually don't complain too bad on the SPAG unless I have to read it a dozen times to try and figure out what the heck they are trying to say. I know I SPAG all over the place, so I try not to get to picky. They are free and they have made my life fuller than it was originally. The great news is not everybody likes the same thing, so there are many to pick from. However, when collectively everyone says to flounce a fic here, I remove it from my TBR list. No questions asked.

I have found I really dislike lemons in 3rd person. I want to feel what they feel and it's hard to have that in 3rd person. Maybe it's because I am trying to abuse myself and finish Broken Angel, but you think lemons are bad in TGV, don't read the Angel series. I swore you could never have too many lemons. Ella I think it was you, but I agree now. You can.

I also started reading books (I never did that before) and sometimes I just need the break from the typical canon fic. Not sure I am ready to read Emmett and Bella or anything like that because my brain already has preconceived notion of what they look like and whom goes with whom.

I didn't really noticed that many SPaGs in the story, to be honest, I maybe now so used to them I don't seem to even see them! (Which is sad in itself) What I didn't like was that the lemons were used to stretch out the plot...I don't like lemons for lemons sake..." What shall I have my characters do now?..Oh! I know, I'll stick a lemon scene in" Nah!...There was a good plot-line, but it was rather hidden.
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Maybe I shouldn't have read that FBIward straight after TOH's FBIward or maybe I'm now too jaded and need to start following your lead and read a few RL books...

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Saw this and thought of us. Fits ?



Errr? Chance would be a fine thing....And we are back to my Household Cavalry.... :D
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Re: LINK Penalty Shot by Edward's Eternal
« Reply #3622 on: August 27, 2013, 05:20 PM »
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Recently divorced, Bella struggles to find a new life for her and her son Jake. Enter Edward and his son, Emmett. Used to being alone, finding Bella is an unexpected surprise for Edward. Blending their lives together sometimes requires an extra shot on goal to even things up. A simple, heartwarming story of two single parents finding love again, healing and building a new family.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 38 - Words: 89,462 - Reviews: 7,469 - Favs: 1,929 - Follows: 2,860 - Updated: 08-27-13 - Published: 04-14-13 - Status: Complete - id: 9203413


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peeps from behind sofa* I think I might have outgrown my Pretty crush *ducks!*

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i am totally sick of lemons; I now don't even skim, I scroll down the page fast until they're over

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What's wrong with me?' so I went and looked at RDM's Roborn and nothing, maybe I'm dead and haven't realised??

I think you must be dead. That's all I can say.

Dior Rob has made things quiver for me like they haven't quivered in a very long time!

And I don't have any smleys to add because I am on my work laptop!

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This is a strategy I have never thought of! Move near an army barrack! Ella you're a genius!! There are a number in the London area...I'm off to investigate, not moving because, let's face it...that's a bit drastic and London isn't that big, but frequenting the local bars around said barracks...PK this might be the answer to our single status

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It is at times like this that I wished my Lebanese Lover lived in London, do you hear that Astro? MOVE TO LONDON so we can chase hot soldiers together!! You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login

Very tempting! I love a man in uniform.

Devastated that the the biennial combined US/Aussie military exercise that takes place here did NOT set up camp in the showgrounds (fair grounds) beside my school as they usually do every second August. Instead, they kept the boys in town and trucked them out to the bay where the exercises take place.

So there were plenty of trucks ful of military personel on the roads, but none jogging past the school on fitness drills, or coming over to use the playground equipment to work out on, or offering to play some football with the kids at lunch time, or coming over to talk to the kids about their careers - or just standing there and letting me look at them!

Rumour has it that there is an extremely horny Principal roaming the area and Washington and Canberra were concerned about the well-being of the soldiers and marines.

But they didn't consider my well-being!!!  :'( :'( :'(
 

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This is not what I call a Silver Fox in the true sense of the word...This is a young man prematurely grey? Right?! Wouldn't a Sliver Fox have just a touch more wrinkles?...Whatever, me likey 8)

His name is Laurence Nicotra. Um. Professor Emerson ?

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He has wrinkles bb.




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I don't want to have outgrown The Pretty....I feel bereft, as though someone has died! I am a drift without a paddle, with no anchor to secure my boat  :loudcry:..Wow, I'm a fanfic writer!   :D

I need some good RobP0rn to relight my fire..in the words of Take That.....And I don't mean to restart the Take That Wars of 2012  :P


Let me do some digging. Any particular time frame you love him in? New Moon, Cannes, WFE, etc.

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I didn't really noticed that many SPaGs in the story, to be honest, I maybe now so used to them I don't seem to even see them! (Which is sad in itself) What I didn't like was that the lemons were used to stretch out the plot...I don't like lemons for lemons sake..." What shall I have my characters do now?..Oh! I know, I'll stick a lemon scene in" Nah!...There was a good plot-line, but it was rather hidden.
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Maybe I shouldn't have read that FBIward straight after TOH's FBIward or maybe I'm now too jaded and need to start following your lead and read a few RL books...


 
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I can find stories that have original plot and I am reading along happy as can be. Then a comment comes up about the meadow or other cheesy twilight reference and those have made me cringe on occasion. I do like to mix up books. It's like cleaning my palate. I have no preconceived notions.
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His name is Laurence Nicotra. Um. Professor Emerson ?

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He has wrinkles bb.




YEs!YEs! YEssss! *Meg Ryan, When Harry Met Sally* Forget Emerson, Professor Orgazm! Soo Hot!

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Let me do some digging. Any particular time frame you love him in? New Moon, Cannes, WFE, etc.


I'm not fussed, though I do like him with a bit more hair...
 
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Offline DeDe's Over It.

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I think you must be dead. That's all I can say.

Dior Rob has made things quiver for me like they haven't quivered in a very long time!

And I don't have any smleys to add because I am on my work laptop!


LL if you say it's so, it must be so... :skeleton: Let my epitaph read:
Here lies Demaris
She found Fanfiction
but then lost the will to live
once she lost her Pretty crush


Offline rdmickey1989

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I think you must be dead. That's all I can say.

Dior Rob has made things quiver for me like they haven't quivered in a very long time!


I love his overcoat look. Flip the collar up and wooowza.

          

And from what I have seen so far. I love this part. The way he approaches her, looks at her. Guides his hands to the nape of her neck and takes the kiss.
*whimpers*



click me I get bigger

Oh yea. He still has the looks.

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His name is Laurence Nicotra. Um. Professor Emerson ?

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He has wrinkles bb.




Let me do some digging. Any particular time frame you love him in? New Moon, Cannes, WFE, etc.

 
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I can find stories that have original plot and I am reading along happy as can be. Then a comment comes up about the meadow or other cheesy twilight reference and those have made me cringe on occasion. I do like to mix up books. It's like cleaning my palate. I have no preconceived notions.


If I never had to see the term "the pixie", or "pixieish", I'd be thrilled. Or Bella being dazzled, even in AH fics.
 
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And from what I have seen so far. I love this part. The way he approaches her, looks at her. Guides his hands to the nape of her neck and takes the kiss.
*whimpers*



He gives 'good kiss' I must say that, he did in Twilight too..
 

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YEs!YEs! YEssss! *Meg Ryan, When Harry Met Sally* Forget Emerson, Professor Orgazm! Soo Hot!

I'm not fussed, though I do like him with a bit more hair...

Well more hair could be WFE to Rome. So let's see.

Vanity Fair - Can never go wrong. Let's see some of my edits I have. Don't forget to click them, they get bigger.


Oh Demaris, can I have one more chance?



Younger ?

Oh Demaris, I have learned so much more since that age.



Do you like me all bad boy? I can be whatever you need.




Just tell me. What do I have to do to make you mine again.




I will lay right here and wait, you know what I want to do.

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i am totally sick of lemons; I now don't even skim, I scroll down the page fast until they're over.

I thought I was the only one that skipped them. I never used to. But I just can't read them. I have been able to in some of the books I'm reading lately. But even then I sometimes skim.
 

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Re: LINK Penalty Shot by Edward's Eternal
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Just completed:

Penalty Shot
Author: Edward's Eternal  PM
Recently divorced, Bella struggles to find a new life for her and her son Jake. Enter Edward and his son, Emmett. Used to being alone, finding Bella is an unexpected surprise for Edward. Blending their lives together sometimes requires an extra shot on goal to even things up. A simple, heartwarming story of two single parents finding love again, healing and building a new family.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 38 - Words: 89,462 - Reviews: 7,469 - Favs: 1,929 - Follows: 2,860 - Updated: 08-27-13 - Published: 04-14-13 - Status: Complete - id: 9203413


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Thanks! I have been waiting for this one to finish. I skimmed one of the updates and it looked good.
 
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Well more hair could be WFE to Rome. So let's see.

Vanity Fair - Can never go wrong. Let's see some of my edits I have. Don't forget to click them, they get bigger.


Oh Demaris, can I have one more chance?



Younger ?

Oh Demaris, I have learned so much more since that age.


Do you like me all bad boy? I can be whatever you need.



Just tell me. What do I have to do to make you mine again.



I will lay right here and wait, you know what I want to do.


You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login RDM, if I wasn't in love with Astro ( and there was no silver fox hubby) I'd ask you to marry me! You made my day(or morning as it's 03.06 GMT right now...) I laughed so hard at Rob's 'sweet nothings' and your right you can't beat that Vanity Fair shoot..oldie but goodie. Yeah, Vanity Fair, that's my favourite Rob



EDIT: Sorry, I can't stop giggling   :57:
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You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login RDM, if I wasn't in love with Astro ( and there was no silver fox hubby) I'd ask you to marry me! You made my day(or morning as it's 03.06 GMT right now...) I laughed so hard at Rob's 'sweet nothings' and your right you can't beat that Vanity Fair shoot..oldie but goodie. Yeah, Vanity Fair, that's my favourite Rob

EDIT: Sorry, I can't stop giggling   :57:

Then a few more edits (mine and others) .  :-*
Don't forget to click them.





and if we are gonna cruise back to 2009, we cannot skip GQ.










Stewart Shining





Cannes 2009





I will always have a soft place in my heart for 2009. This is where I discovered Rob and flipped the f*ck out and went coo coo like a teenager. Blogging, reading, just going absolute bonkers. Hope this helped bb. After 2009, WFE look took me for a spin. Short sides and long on top is what hubs wears. It goes back to the military thing all those decades ago. I like it long enough on top to grab a good handfull. rawrrrrrr.

Night night !!
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He gives 'good kiss' I must say that, he did in Twilight too..

I have honestly never seen him give a bad kiss. Well when he kissed Taylor it wasn't so hot, but with all his other leads in the movies. *heart palpitations*
 

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I thought I was the only one that skipped them. I never used to. But I just can't read them. I have been able to in some of the books I'm reading lately. But even then I sometimes skim.
What's worse is when you beta lemons.  You can't skim. You have read e v e r y w o r d. 

Fortunately, two of my stories have no lemons so far. And though I love the Angel series? I skim the lemons right and left. I just like the Edward.  And Bella is still sweet but not the pushover from SM's stories. And I totally get others not liking it. :)
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Wow, you too? I had the same scare with my first. Well, as I was rushed to the ER, the Dr told my husband there was no hope for the child and they were gonna try and save me. Well my son will be 22 next week. The second son was a planned c-section. I can cook em fine, just can't have em.  ;)

Oh my...reading about all these complications...I'm a tiny little bit glad that I didn't have to give birth. And it's great that all turned out well for you all! I'd love to have kids though, but to quote rdmickey: Hubs can't cook!  :D
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For me though, it was never about his looks, it was more about his personality.  He's cute. But so are a lot of other guys.  I just loved how he laughs so easily and makes such bad jokes.  And they are really bad.  But he tries.  It is so sweet.  ;D

I totally agree, Ellachanted! It's the whole package. I love his looks , but I also love his personality, his word vomits, his bad jokes, when he giggles and when his smile lits his whole face. Oh, I could go on and on. Sometimes I get lost on youtube in his old interviews for hours. I've probably watched them several times each, but they never get old.
At the moment, I can't imagine to outgrow my crush on Rob. But who knows! Maybe Rob isn't like an aging wine. Maybe he doesn't get better the older he gets.
And I too miss the longer hair, but fortunately it grows back fast! I think he might easily forget about cutting it some day and boom! The sex hair is back!  :cheer:

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I haven't outgrown the pretty. To me, he looks damn fine. In fact he looks like a man, so I feel less cougarish now. As he has matured, he has only gotten better. Do I start panting at first glimpse anymore? Nah, I think my whoha has grown accustom to seeing him now. Does he look good? Yes. Do I think he looks better as he ages? Yes. But after years of lusting maybe I have learned to control myself.

In fact I moaned at myself that I am now reblogging and finding silver foxes sexy. Shame to get old. Or maybe it's because hubs hair has more white in it that dark brown and I still find him very very sexy.



(<-- reminds of VMA-Miley! Mwah!) Wow, mighty fine!

Sorry for the repeated posts - I'm still figuring out how to quote adequately here.
But it's too late for that anyway, because rdmickey killed me thouroughly with her RobP0rn at 8 a.m. Hot damn!!!! No, I'll never outgrow my crush on The Precious. I swear!

And I agree with those of you who think too many lemons are possible. I can't take too much PWP and I tend to skim lemons when they get repetitive.
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I'm on a road trip with my daughter this week, to get her back to school and her boyfriend.  I've at the worst internet service in this hotel room.  Why did I leave home without a hotspot?!  Anyway, you won't see much of me for the next few days, so behave yourselves! 

Dior Rob *swoon*  Thanks for the Robporn, RD. And thanks for inspiring her to post it, Demaris. 

Now, in addition to being able to look at all the lovely Rob photos, soon I'll be (discreetly) ogling some college boys.  He he!
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