Author Topic: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY (Read 1268379 times)

Ellachanted · « **on:** June 13, 2013, 09:16 PM »

Thread #4 - We are crazy talkers here!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW!

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general. But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement.

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice

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DeDe's Over It. · « **Reply #3921 on:** August 31, 2013, 12:10 PM »

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That mofo can kiss! Daaaamn!

Matron · « **Reply #3922 on:** August 31, 2013, 12:23 PM »

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Talking of non canon Twi, some of you may know I am a huge fan of the genre. This is why I want to introduce you to a rare breed, a male FF author BetterinTexas, who deals only in Twi non Canon (for those of you who are allergic to blonds, he writes alot of Garrick). He often writes funny, feisty, tough Bella’s, who will kick a*se first and ask questions later. Just my kind of heroine. If you want a fun and enjoyable read you could do worse them give his stories a go. You can find him here: - You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login

How is he with the relationship aspect of things? I read Twific for the love stories, and while I love non-canon, especially Jasper stories, I've held off on this guy because I wasn't sure how a man would do with a romance, the emotion of it all.

Avrildulac · « **Reply #3923 on:** August 31, 2013, 12:41 PM »

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I want his hand on my neck like that. UNF!

ajamm · « **Reply #3924 on:** August 31, 2013, 01:18 PM »

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Author: pattyrose
In the mid 1800's, out on the western range is where a real man makes his livelihood. And if he's mighty lucky, it's where he makes his destiny as well. A six chapter story with daily updates. E & B.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 7 - Words: 14,722 - Reviews: 634 - Favs: 289 - Follows: 440 - Updated: 08-31-13 - Published: 08-26-13 - id: 9632155

Open Range completed!!! Now I can finally read it.

Hhmm, but it's not marked complete....

DeDe's Over It. · « **Reply #3925 on:** August 31, 2013, 01:29 PM »

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Author: pattyrose
In the mid 1800's, out on the western range is where a real man makes his livelihood. And if he's mighty lucky, it's where he makes his destiny as well. A six chapter story with daily updates. E & B.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 7 - Words: 14,722 - Reviews: 634 - Favs: 289 - Follows: 440 - Updated: 08-31-13 - Published: 08-26-13 - id: 9632155

Open Range completed!!! Now I can finally read it.

Hhmm, but it's not marked complete....

Not sure it matters, her last AN makes it clear that it's over....

Ordinary_Reader · « **Reply #3926 on:** August 31, 2013, 01:46 PM »

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That mofo can kiss! Daaaamn!

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I want his hand on my neck like that. UNF!

I know right? I think when the ad finally comes out, there won't be anyone coherent.

lamelurker · « **Reply #3927 on:** August 31, 2013, 03:00 PM »

I'm doing something now that I never do--stop reading a story in the middle of an epilogue. But seriously, it has been 140 pages since the plot was mostly resolved, and this is way too many pages to hold my interest. It is a shame really because the story was good. If I had read this prior to reading Thief of Hearts, I would probably have said it was really good. Unfortunately, I didn't so I can only compare the two, and Pattyrose's story blows it away. The story was full of action, but with a LaFS romance. (Is that an acronym people use? Love at First Sight?) Those tend to annoy me, but I liked this one--mostly because both B/E have strong characters. I really did enjoy reading this one, I'm just a little down now because the last couple of chapters and epi took FOREVER to read through. A lot of reiteration in an effort to recap, which might be helpful if one were reading it as a WIP, but this is a repost story. I wish the author had changed it up when deciding to repost. Now I'm left feeling a bit 'meh'. *hides away from all those who loved this story*

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I think I'm going to look for something totally different now, maybe a historical piece...

Chilibabe · « **Reply #3928 on:** August 31, 2013, 03:11 PM »

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How is he with the relationship aspect of things? I read Twific for the love stories, and while I love non-canon, especially Jasper stories, I've held off on this guy because I wasn't sure how a man would do with a romance, the emotion of it all.

His stories are definitely different, but I enjoy them a lot.

I think he has really a rather male take on romance, more physical

, but pretty realistic, I think. No fairytales, no stumbling in circles around each other...

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His Bella is most always very strong, very direct. She doesn't take Sh* from anyone.
In his profile he tells his dislike for Edward in the books and Bella's weakness. He has a teenage (step)daughter and I think he portrays Bella how he would like her to be.

If you want to give him a try, perhaps start with "A fresh start". It is Belly/OC so it doesn't spoil your favorite vamps for you but it's a great story. "Growing up" is another great story, Bella/Peter, but with

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DeDe's Over It. · « **Reply #3929 on:** August 31, 2013, 03:39 PM »

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I'm doing something now that I never do--stop reading a story in the middle of an epilogue. But seriously, it has been 140 pages since the plot was mostly resolved, and this is way too many pages to hold my interest. It is a shame really because the story was good. If I had read this prior to reading Thief of Hearts, I would probably have said it was really good. Unfortunately, I didn't so I can only compare the two, and Pattyrose's story blows it away. The story was full of action, but with a LaFS romance. (Is that an acronym people use? Love at First Sight?) Those tend to annoy me, but I liked this one--mostly because both B/E have strong characters. I really did enjoy reading this one, I'm just a little down now because the last couple of chapters and epi took FOREVER to read through. A lot of reiteration in an effort to recap, which might be helpful if one were reading it as a WIP, but this is a repost story. I wish the author had changed it up when deciding to repost. Now I'm left feeling a bit 'meh'. *hides away from all those who loved this story*

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I think I'm going to look for something totally different now, maybe a historical piece...

That was what I felt too, that this story is good, unless you've read TOH. I've not read a lot of historical fic but I enjoyed Twice As Long As Yesterday by Hopeful Wager and and Wrenfield Hall by Wannabe Charlotte. Bringing Bella Home by Counselor is...interesting though Edward doesn't speak and My Wounded Solider also by Counselor starts strong but loses the plot 3/4 of the way in. 1942 by Aniseed is set in war torn France and Bella is an English spy and works with Edward as part of the resistance , OK-ish..

Chilibabe · « **Reply #3930 on:** August 31, 2013, 04:13 PM »

I know, it's only a tiny SpaG, but very funny...

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I had to admit that I was slightly surprised by my own possessiveness, but I realised it was probably a mare thing.

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Chilibabe · « **Reply #3931 on:** August 31, 2013, 04:49 PM »

And the reason why commas are important:

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Once I had eaten Alice and Heidi, who had of course bonded over their mutual love of shopping, made me take them up to my room

nomnomnom

lamelurker · « **Reply #3932 on:** August 31, 2013, 05:10 PM »

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Author: pattyrose
In the mid 1800's, out on the western range is where a real man makes his livelihood. And if he's mighty lucky, it's where he makes his destiny as well. A six chapter story with daily updates. E & B.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Romance - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 7 - Words: 14,722 - Reviews: 634 - Favs: 289 - Follows: 440 - Updated: 08-31-13 - Published: 08-26-13 - id: 9632155

Open Range completed!!! Now I can finally read it.

Hhmm, but it's not marked complete....

Cute story. B/E were adorable!

lamelurker · « **Reply #3933 on:** August 31, 2013, 05:24 PM »

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That was what I felt too, that this story is good, unless you've read TOH. I've not read a lot of historical fic but I enjoyed Twice As Long As Yesterday by Hopeful Wager and and Wrenfield Hall by Wannabe Charlotte. Bringing Bella Home by Counselor is...interesting though Edward doesn't speak and My Wounded Solider also by Counselor starts strong but loses the plot 3/4 of the way in. 1942 by Aniseed is set in war torn France and Bella is an English spy and works with Edward as part of the resistance , OK-ish..

Great suggestions! I've read all but 1942, so I may give that a go, though I'm trying to avoid spies right now!

I do like Counselor's writing and have been meaning to read Roar Like a Lion and Finding My Thunder. I loved Twice as Long as Yesterday and mean to read the P2P version by Killian McRae one of these days! So many choices...

Astro2009 · « **Reply #3934 on:** August 31, 2013, 06:51 PM »

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That stare! It's almost predatory!

I must remember to drink lots of water today - I need to stay hydrated!

Astro2009 · « **Reply #3935 on:** August 31, 2013, 06:53 PM »

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I know right? I think when the ad finally comes out, there won't be anyone coherent.

I'm barely coherent now!

Might need more batteries...

Astro2009 · « **Reply #3936 on:** August 31, 2013, 07:01 PM »

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And the reason why commas are important:

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Once I had eaten Alice and Heidi, who had of course bonded over their mutual love of shopping, made me take them up to my room

nomnomnom

Lucky Alice and Heidi!

That's an EPOV, right?

Astro2009 · « **Reply #3937 on:** August 31, 2013, 07:58 PM »

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That mofo can kiss! Daaaamn!

Slo mo mofo!

Astro2009 · « **Reply #3938 on:** September 01, 2013, 12:40 AM »

If you think that my descriptions of life in rural Australia are a little far-fetched, go and read this:

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Aussie Bella introduces her American friends, Alice and Rose, to a little taste of everything Australia has to offer... including three very delicious Aussie cowboys. Perhaps roos aren't the only things mating in the Outback.

Apart from the fact that I have never met Edward Cullen at a B&S Ball, this fic was like a snapshot of my life! Even my hometown of Brisbane, and where I live now (Rockhampton - Rocky) get a mention!

It's only a 2-shot, so give it a read.

Astro2009 · « **Reply #3939 on:** September 01, 2013, 01:22 AM »

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ETD: Apparently this is a hacked version, but it has this, so I'm feeling morally compromised!

ETD2: OK - who am I kidding! I have no morals when it comes to the Pretty!

But I do have this:

Here is the Youtube version (but it has no sound)

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Chilibabe · « **Reply #3940 on:** September 01, 2013, 01:39 AM »

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nomnomnom

Lucky Alice and Heidi!

That's an EPOV, right?

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But no, BPOV and nothing sexual in that T story...

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