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Thread #4 - We are crazy talkers here!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general.  But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement. 

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice   

Because we know drypen's watching    :googlyeyes:

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Offline ajamm

Re: Penalty shot by edward's eternal
« Reply #3961 on: September 01, 2013, 12:12 PM »
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This one had me crying...such a sweet daddyward... And the kids...the family situation... so heartwarming.  Thanks again for the rec, loved this as well.  :)

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Now off to look for a real athleteward.... >:D

I've been reading this since Tuesday.... I really like it... but it's so sweet. Even I that am a 'absolutely no angst' person can't handle so much sweetness.  :-\ I don't know how I feel about that.  :D

I need some drama or a lil bit of angst to balance it out, but I'm almost done. I don't remember the last time it took me so long to read a short fic. 8)
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3962 on: September 01, 2013, 01:07 PM »
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I'm never sure whether to put T stories on my reading list.  I only put K+ on the list if they are OS humor.  They are usually stupid, but sometimes, with humor, it's okay

But T stories are kind of in between. Some good writers write them.  Sorry, I was going through my Calibre, updating the metadata, I'm about 10% through the library.  And this was the question that keeps coming up.  How can you write a good angsty story with a T rating and only 36,000 words?

I thought you don't like angst?  ;)

I think the real Twilight books would be considered T.
It's just clean stories, no lemons, no violence, no swearing. There can be angst, of course.

The story I had this little funny SpaGs from is:

Shields of Power
Author: thunderful PM
What if Bella already knew about vampires before she came to Forks, what if she'd already met the Volturi, but wasn't allowed to tell anyone? And most importantly, what if she had her own gift?
Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 45 - Words: 151,866 - Reviews: 4,394 - Favs: 4,006 - Follows: 2,059 - Updated: 01-14-11 - Published: 09-02-09 - Status: Complete - id: 5351513

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It is a good story, very canon, Twilight-Breaking Dawn with a twist and a powerful, confident Bella.
No explicit lemons or swearing, so it's rated T. Since I tend to skip lemons often enough, that doesn't bother me.  :)
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3963 on: September 01, 2013, 01:14 PM »
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Now I started reading:


The Bad Vampires Handbook
Author: maxigrumpling PM
Turned by accident, nerdy loner Eddie faints at the sight of blood and wakes, often, at the morgue. There's no handbook for what he's become. When the Cullen's discover him he needs a total vampire makeover and the OCD, hypochondria and his image of what he is all have to go. Bella is given the task of educating him. She thinks he's a joke, but likes the glasses. E/B HEA assured.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Humor - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 28 - Words: 163,056 - Reviews: 1,129 - Favs: 396 - Follows: 466 - Updated: 05-08-13 - Published: 03-24-13 - Status: Complete - id: 9133049

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I'm only in chapter 1 but I've already laughed so much. I loved the descriptions...
I think this will be a very funny time...

 :-*

I finished that today. It is good. Not as funny as I thought and in the first half I considered flouncing it, but then it got better and better and I actually enjoyed reading it.

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Now I actually wanted to read an AH story, but got sidetracked by another Vampward:


Touching Solitude
Author: catharticone PM
Edward moves to a remote homestead in Oregon, seeking isolation to recover from a traumatic event. However, a chance meeting with his lovely yet melancholy neighbor sparks concern for her. Can these two broken individuals help each other to heal? AU.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 87 - Words: 252,786 - Reviews: 2,368 - Favs: 803 - Follows: 612 - Updated: 01-04-12 - Published: 04-08-11 - Status: Complete - id: 6888257

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It starts out promising. Edward is not a mindreader in this one...
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3964 on: September 01, 2013, 01:36 PM »
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I thought you don't like angst?  ;)

I think the real Twilight books would be considered T.
It's just clean stories, no lemons, no violence, no swearing. There can be angst, of course.

The story I had this little funny SpaGs from is:

Shields of Power
Author: thunderful PM
What if Bella already knew about vampires before she came to Forks, what if she'd already met the Volturi, but wasn't allowed to tell anyone? And most importantly, what if she had her own gift?
Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 45 - Words: 151,866 - Reviews: 4,394 - Favs: 4,006 - Follows: 2,059 - Updated: 01-14-11 - Published: 09-02-09 - Status: Complete - id: 5351513

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It is a good story, very canon, Twilight-Breaking Dawn with a twist and a powerful, confident Bella.
No explicit lemons or swearing, so it's rated T. Since I tend to skip lemons often enough, that doesn't bother me.  :)

A while back.... I was all about stories about Bella being a bad ass and her having powers and not being an insecure teenager and this is one of those stories. I read a lot of these kind, but the thing is when i went to re-read them... I was so crushed because all those stories I loved about bad ass Bella looked like they were written by teenagers. :-\

Since then I haven't touched any of those stories I liked once upon a time. :D :D :D

This is one of my 'faves' that I haven't read in a while because I don't want to ruin it.  ^-^
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3965 on: September 01, 2013, 01:39 PM »
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Touching Solitude
Author: catharticone PM
Edward moves to a remote homestead in Oregon, seeking isolation to recover from a traumatic event. However, a chance meeting with his lovely yet melancholy neighbor sparks concern for her. Can these two broken individuals help each other to heal? AU.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 87 - Words: 252,786 - Reviews: 2,368 - Favs: 803 - Follows: 612 - Updated: 01-04-12 - Published: 04-08-11 - Status: Complete - id: 6888257

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It starts out promising. Edward is not a mindreader in this one...

It is good.

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Offline lamelurker

Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3966 on: September 01, 2013, 01:49 PM »
I started reading Counselor's You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login last night, and I can't stop reading. There is so much UST in this fic! Like Counselor's other historical stories, it takes a while to get used to how they speak (these characters are loggers in the 1930s), but I love the rhythm of the verse once it gets going. I can't wait to see how this plot gets resolved! I'm about half way through...
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3967 on: September 01, 2013, 01:50 PM »
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This is the You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login channel so when DiorRob hits it should be here.

My evening prayers will be featuring the phrase "5 minutes please" rather heavily!

Yeah, I didn't need 5 minutes the 1:46 minutes Director's Cut hit the spot nicely, thanks. >:D

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I started reading Counselor's You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login last night, and I can't stop reading. There is so much UST in this fic! Like Counselor's other historical stories, it takes a while to get used to how they speak (these characters are loggers in the 1930s), but I love the rhythm of the verse once it gets going. I can't wait to see how this plot gets resolved! I'm about half way through...

Sorry LL I wanted to answer your previous post and forgot. Anyway I haven't read Roar yet, but I did read Finding My Thunder and loved every single sentence!
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3968 on: September 01, 2013, 01:53 PM »
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I can't believe it's been up for 2 HOURS and I didn't realize.

I've been waiting all morning.!!!!

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Yeah, I didn't need 5 minutes the 1:46 minutes Director's Cut hit the spot nicely, thanks. >:D


 I can deal with that too.  ;)

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3969 on: September 01, 2013, 02:07 PM »
ETD: OK - Editing this post because ajamm jumped in and edited her's  ;)

This has the Uncensored Official Director's Cut as well as all of the extra scenes.

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I tried to convert it to load to youtube but it must be protected.



And there are a few other little bits and pieces here - just don't blink!

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3970 on: September 01, 2013, 02:57 PM »
OH MY GOD!!!

This is what I've been waiting for!!!

For those of you like me, with a thing for elevators...

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3971 on: September 01, 2013, 03:09 PM »
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OH MY GOD!!!
 
This is what I've been waiting for!!!

For those of you like me, with a thing for elevators...

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Holy moley...That l'ascenseur scene is HOT!!! That man gives great screen kiss!
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3972 on: September 01, 2013, 03:25 PM »
Obviously I have too much time on my hands...but I've got to find some other way to keep them busy!

Don't want to go blind!

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Re: Woodcroft Station by Little Miss Norty
« Reply #3973 on: September 01, 2013, 04:01 PM »
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I saw this and went to read the last bit.... and that does not look like a HEA to me!
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What I did read was the index in the beginning, I'm not gonna lie that is the reason I hand't read it.  ^-^
It is kind of an HEA...
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The ending didn't fit.  Kind of like HEA then well I'll see you later....
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3974 on: September 01, 2013, 04:11 PM »
Just wanted to pop on say a quick "Hi!" as I've not been able to get online for 11 days as I've been busy sorting things out as 10 days ago my eldest brother lost his fight to stomach cancer.  :'(
He had been doing so well and the doctors were hoping that this course of treatment, might well of been his last but unfortunately it wasn't so and he passed away 2 days before his 50th birthday.  :(
At least he got to meet his first Grandchild as she was born six weeks early, and though we all kind of knew that this was a matter of "when" and not "if", the last week or so has been hard.
I'll catch up on the 25+ pages later as it's 12.10am here in the UK and I know there's gonna be loads of Dior Rob etc for me to drool over, but I'm just too tired at the moment.
Take care and miss you all.  :-* :-*

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3975 on: September 01, 2013, 04:12 PM »
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I thought you don't like angst?  ;)

I think the real Twilight books would be considered T.
It's just clean stories, no lemons, no violence, no swearing. There can be angst, of course.

The story I had this little funny SpaGs from is:

Shields of Power
Author: thunderful PM
What if Bella already knew about vampires before she came to Forks, what if she'd already met the Volturi, but wasn't allowed to tell anyone? And most importantly, what if she had her own gift?
Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 45 - Words: 151,866 - Reviews: 4,394 - Favs: 4,006 - Follows: 2,059 - Updated: 01-14-11 - Published: 09-02-09 - Status: Complete - id: 5351513

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It is a good story, very canon, Twilight-Breaking Dawn with a twist and a powerful, confident Bella.
No explicit lemons or swearing, so it's rated T. Since I tend to skip lemons often enough, that doesn't bother me.  :)
I don't actually mind angst, I just need humor mixed up with it.  Heck, my preferred reading is murder mysteries.  My issue with angst is that many writers just go on and on and on with it.  The good writers mix it up, just like life.  When it gets too angsty, I just want the character to kill themselves and get it over with LOL!

But really, all the good angsty stories, like Wide Awake and Hit by Destiny are way over 100K words.  So when you see an angst story with a T or K rating that is only 35K words, you know it was written by a teen and everything is better quickly.  Life just doesn't work that way.  Either that or they have no real dialogue.  That's all I'm saying. An M rated angst that is that short, may be okay only because they use sex to fix things. And everyone knows that sex fixes everything....  ??? :P :D :D :D :D :D

No really, if you are a good writer, you could write an angsty short story.   ;D
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3976 on: September 01, 2013, 04:20 PM »
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Just wanted to pop on say a quick "Hi!" as I've not been able to get online for 11 days as I've been busy sorting things out as 10 days ago my eldest brother lost his fight to stomach cancer.  :'(
He had been doing so well and the doctors were hoping that this course of treatment, might well of been his last but unfortunately it wasn't so and he passed away 2 days before his 50th birthday.  :(
At least he got to meet his first Grandchild as she was born six weeks early, and though we all kind of knew that this was a matter of "when" and not "if", the last week or so has been hard.
I'll catch up on the 25+ pages later as it's 12.10am here in the UK and I know there's gonna be loads of Dior Rob etc for me to drool over, but I'm just too tired at the moment.
Take care and miss you all.  :-* :-*
So sorry about your loss.  My thoughts are with your family :(   :-*
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3977 on: September 01, 2013, 04:44 PM »
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Just wanted to pop on say a quick "Hi!" as I've not been able to get online for 11 days as I've been busy sorting things out as 10 days ago my eldest brother lost his fight to stomach cancer.  :'(

Take care and miss you all.  :-* :-*

Please know how very saddened I am for the loss of your brother. I send my deepest condolences for you and for your family.

I can't imagine how painful it has been for you but don't forget that we'll always be here for you.
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3978 on: September 01, 2013, 04:44 PM »
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Just wanted to pop on say a quick "Hi!" as I've not been able to get online for 11 days as I've been busy sorting things out as 10 days ago my eldest brother lost his fight to stomach cancer.  :'(
He had been doing so well and the doctors were hoping that this course of treatment, might well of been his last but unfortunately it wasn't so and he passed away 2 days before his 50th birthday.  :(
At least he got to meet his first Grandchild as she was born six weeks early, and though we all kind of knew that this was a matter of "when" and not "if", the last week or so has been hard.
I'll catch up on the 25+ pages later as it's 12.10am here in the UK and I know there's gonna be loads of Dior Rob etc for me to drool over, but I'm just too tired at the moment.
Take care and miss you all.  :-* :-*

My condolences, Loopy, to you and yours. You are missed. Take care!
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3979 on: September 01, 2013, 05:27 PM »
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Obviously I have too much time on my hands...but I've got to find some other way to keep them busy!

Don't want to go blind!

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Wrong one. ^-^ I hate it when I accidentally quote the wrong quote. >:(
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #3980 on: September 01, 2013, 05:30 PM »
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OH MY GOD!!!

This is what I've been waiting for!!!

For those of you like me, with a thing for elevators...

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Mother of God.


This is like pron for me. ^-^
 
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