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Thread #4 - We are crazy talkers here!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general.  But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement. 

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice   

Because we know drypen's watching    :googlyeyes:

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Re: Beyond inappropriate by bornonhalloween
« Reply #4181 on: September 05, 2013, 05:38 AM »
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I don't like Cougarella fics that much. Wouldn't want to be with someone younger myself...
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Hehe, my one-tracked mind only went as far as the physical side of the relationship is concerned!  :P
In RL and a serious relationship I like my men older. My husband is 11 years my senior, but is well-preserved (?sounds weird) and his mind is sometimes such of an 20 year old.  8)
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I'd cougar up for the Pretty!

In RL, i wouldn't have the guts to be a cougarella  :P ok for me to appreciate younger men's looks but ever since i was young had always been attracted to older guys. My husband is 7 yrs older than me.  :) the 2 dates i had before meeting him (pathetic, i know), were also with guys 3-5 yrs older.

This is why i enjoy reading so much. You get to live vicariously from the characters/stories. Take M/F/M, never in my wildest dreams will i consider doing that, but reading about it is exciting. Good enough for me, what with my active imagination.  :) :D

Now, if by some cosmic miracle i get a chance with Rob, will be on that like a flash  :D Damn, that man is smoking hot!!
 

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4182 on: September 05, 2013, 05:43 AM »
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That's horrible! I don't want to even imagine my Sony e-book-reader dying!  :sign0135: It's with me all the time, even when I'm not reading. It would have to be replaced immediately! My Sony was the best purchase in my life.  ;)

And I also would try calling Amazon at first. Can't hurt!

 :iagree: :iagree:

I have an Asus tab and if that crashed I would be beside myself....it would have to be replaced immediately

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I don't like Cougarella fics that much. Wouldn't want to be with someone younger myself...



Same here! I wont even download cougar fics....just not my thing. In real life, a man has to be older than me for attraction to be there.

The exception is if  the dude is a celebrity (like Rob, Jackson, etc) and the gap isn't extreme

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:iagree: He's 7 years younger than me, but it didn't even come to my mind to feel bad for ogling him. He's simply fantastic to look at and his age doesn't matter!

I don't even have words for this pic, Astro!  :love:

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Thanks for all the responses about pts being flagged....im really hoping it's nothing
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4183 on: September 05, 2013, 05:44 AM »
Hi,
There's another fanfic very similar to Love in My Box. Can you help me with that? I've forgotten the name. Its something to do with Edward and Bella working in the same office and one of them sending an email to another. I think even that is a collaboration of two writers. Thanks.
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4184 on: September 05, 2013, 06:15 AM »
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Hi,
There's another fanfic very similar to Love in My Box. Can you help me with that? I've forgotten the name. Its something to do with Edward and Bella working in the same office and one of them sending an email to another. I think even that is a collaboration of two writers. Thanks.

Hi Blah,
You will have more success if you ask this over on the 152 thread, which Ella has linked at the top of each page.

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But please do come back here to tell us what you thought of this fic when you find it - a lot of the ladies here have "Love in my Box" in their Top 10 fic list!
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4185 on: September 05, 2013, 06:52 AM »
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Well, I spent 15  minutes with the Amazon kindle helpline. He asked me to restart it several times, which did nothing ( as I could have told him) and then he realized that my kindle already was a replacement, because my original kindle did the same thing nearly exactly a year ago. So, no warranty left, no replacement...  :-\

But the ordinary kindle e-ink reader is just on sale for 49€ (64,53$), so it's not that bad.

Thanks to calibre I have everything on my netbook already  ;)

So basically all the pron and lemons keeps killing your kindle? You should buy an iPad.

 :D :D
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Offline keypad

Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4186 on: September 05, 2013, 07:15 AM »
I'm reading Stay by Crimsonmarie and so far I'm liking it.  It's not blowing me away, but I'm a still quite numb after reading The Bronze Horseman so I'm not sure anything will ever have me swooning again.    LOL   (for those of you that haven't read TBH yet, take Demaris' advice and read it NOW!)

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Stay - crimsonmarie - As an actor, Edward Cullen is surrounded by people that he couldn't really care less about. What happens when he buys a house in the middle of nowhere and meets his new neighbors?

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Hi,
There's another fanfic very similar to Love in My Box. Can you help me with that? I've forgotten the name. Its something to do with Edward and Bella working in the same office and one of them sending an email to another. I think even that is a collaboration of two writers. Thanks.
I would also like to know what this fic is that is similar to LiMB!  I really really enjoyed that one.    Please let us know if you find out.   They're great at identifying things over at the 152 thread!
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4187 on: September 05, 2013, 07:17 AM »
Its called Dear Mr Masen by Jendonna
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"Error 434: Reprimanding an executive." Life changing or just stupid? Dear Mr. Masen: A story of unauthorized Internet usage, culinary delights and the goings-on at Cullen, Inc. AH, ExB.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Humor/Romance - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 25 - Words: 127,500 - Reviews: 12,752 - Favs: 7,083 - Follows: 6,086 - Updated: 02-14-12 - Published: 11-17-10 - Status: Complete - id: 6483877
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4188 on: September 05, 2013, 07:40 AM »
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Its called Dear Mr Masen by Jendonna
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"Error 434: Reprimanding an executive." Life changing or just stupid? Dear Mr. Masen: A story of unauthorized Internet usage, culinary delights and the goings-on at Cullen, Inc. AH, ExB.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Humor/Romance - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 25 - Words: 127,500 - Reviews: 12,752 - Favs: 7,083 - Follows: 6,086 - Updated: 02-14-12 - Published: 11-17-10 - Status: Complete - id: 6483877
I think I've heard someone else mention this here...    I wonder if it's any good?   The first chapter definitely got my attention!   I may just have to read it since I loved LiMB!
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4189 on: September 05, 2013, 07:41 AM »
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I think I've heard someone else mention this here...    I wonder if it's any good?   The first chapter definitely got my attention!   I may just have to read it since I loved LiMB!

It's great.
 
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Offline Booked

Beyond Inappropriate by bornnhalloween
« Reply #4190 on: September 05, 2013, 08:48 AM »
Waaaahhh, i am such a sap!!  :'(

Finished this and it was good. My heart aches though. Do put it on your TBR list
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Off to find another good fic to read. Hope my magic finger will pick me another winner. Have resorted to scrolling fast on my ipad and touching the screen to stop. Then i choose what looks to be the most interesting among the fics within that page. Wish me luck  :)
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4191 on: September 05, 2013, 08:53 AM »
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I think I've heard someone else mention this here...    I wonder if it's any good?   The first chapter definitely got my attention!   I may just have to read it since I loved LiMB!

It is a GREAT fic.  Bella and Edward have great chemistry in this. And Jasper is hilarious!
 
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Offline lucylu0508

Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4192 on: September 05, 2013, 08:55 AM »
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I'm reading Stay by Crimsonmarie and so far I'm liking it.  It's not blowing me away, but I'm a still quite numb after reading The Bronze Horseman so I'm not sure anything will ever have me swooning again.    LOL   (for those of you that haven't read TBH yet, take Demaris' advice and read it NOW!)
I would also like to know what this fic is that is similar to LiMB!  I really really enjoyed that one.    Please let us know if you find out.   They're great at identifying things over at the 152 thread!

I'm assuming this is a fic? Does anyone have a link? Ffn is being a pita right now and not working for me  >:(
 
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Re: Beyond Inappropriate by bornnhalloween
« Reply #4193 on: September 05, 2013, 08:58 AM »
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Waaaahhh, i am such a sap!!  :'(

Finished this and it was good. My heart aches though. Do put it on your TBR list
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Off to find another good fic to read. Hope my magic finger will pick me another winner. Have resorted to scrolling fast on my ipad and touching the screen to stop. Then i choose what looks to be the most interesting among the fics within that page. Wish me luck  :)

I thought the same thing, but it really couldn't have ended any other way. :'(

If you want a well written fic with some angst and where there is a HEA i just plowed through most of belladonnacullen's work and I highly rec There is a Light and The Practice of Love.

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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4194 on: September 05, 2013, 09:08 AM »
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I'm assuming this is a fic? Does anyone have a link? Ffn is being a pita right now and not working for me  >:(

Nope, it's a real book

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Dear Mr. Masen
« Reply #4195 on: September 05, 2013, 09:14 AM »
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I thought the same thing, but it really couldn't have ended any other way. :'(
So true  :'(

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Its called Dear Mr Masen by Jendonna
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"Error 434: Reprimanding an executive." Life changing or just stupid? Dear Mr. Masen: A story of unauthorized Internet usage, culinary delights and the goings-on at Cullen, Inc. AH, ExB.
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It's great.
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It is a GREAT fic.  Bella and Edward have great chemistry in this. And Jasper is hilarious!

Ok, will not use my russian roullette selection tonight, starting this one now. Hope to read a few chapters before going to sleep.

Good night ladies  :-*

 
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Offline lamelurker

LINK totteacher - A Tale, Edward's Eternal - Penalty Shot
« Reply #4196 on: September 05, 2013, 10:51 AM »
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Its called Dear Mr Masen by Jendonna
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"Error 434: Reprimanding an executive." Life changing or just stupid? Dear Mr. Masen: A story of unauthorized Internet usage, culinary delights and the goings-on at Cullen, Inc. AH, ExB.
Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English - Humor/Romance - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 25 - Words: 127,500 - Reviews: 12,752 - Favs: 7,083 - Follows: 6,086 - Updated: 02-14-12 - Published: 11-17-10 - Status: Complete - id: 6483877

I loved this fic! Great banter between B/E.

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This one had me crying...such a sweet daddyward... And the kids...the family situation... so heartwarming.  Thanks again for the rec, loved this as well.  :)

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Now off to look for a real athleteward.... >:D

Thanks for the rec on this, but talk about sweet... It got a little too saccharine for me, so I took a break and read A Tale by Totteacher which was okay. LAFS romance and a little drama, but just what I needed to return to Penalty Shot. PS is a heartwarming tale about creating a new family.

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Author: Totteacher
Isabella Swan had grown up surrounded by cruel Lords who use woman for their own amusement. How will the young woman be able to protect herself? Can she escape the same fate as her mother?
Rated: Fiction M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 30 - Words: 67,237 - Reviews: 1,555 - Favs: 964 - Follows: 461 - Updated: 04-15-11 - Published: 01-25-11 - Status: Complete - id: 6686669 


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Author: Edward's Eternal
Recently divorced, Bella struggles to find a new life for her and her son Jake. Enter Edward and his son, Emmett. Used to being alone, finding Bella is an unexpected surprise for Edward. Blending their lives together sometimes requires an extra shot on goal to even things up. A simple, heartwarming story of two single parents finding love again, healing and building a new family.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 39 - Words: 93,019 - Reviews: 7,879 - Favs: 2,184 - Follows: 2,822 - Updated: 08-28-13 - Published: 04-14-13 - Status: Complete - id: 9203413
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Re: LINK totteacher - A Tale, Edward's Eternal - Penalty Shot
« Reply #4197 on: September 05, 2013, 11:22 AM »
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I loved this fic! Great banter between B/E.

Thanks for the rec on this, but talk about sweet... It got a little too saccharine for me, so I took a break and read A Tale by Totteacher which was okay. LAFS romance and a little drama, but just what I needed to return to Penalty Shot. PS is a heartwarming tale about creating a new family.

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Author: Totteacher
Isabella Swan had grown up surrounded by cruel Lords who use woman for their own amusement. How will the young woman be able to protect herself? Can she escape the same fate as her mother?
Rated: Fiction M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 30 - Words: 67,237 - Reviews: 1,555 - Favs: 964 - Follows: 461 - Updated: 04-15-11 - Published: 01-25-11 - Status: Complete - id: 6686669 


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Author: Edward's Eternal
Recently divorced, Bella struggles to find a new life for her and her son Jake. Enter Edward and his son, Emmett. Used to being alone, finding Bella is an unexpected surprise for Edward. Blending their lives together sometimes requires an extra shot on goal to even things up. A simple, heartwarming story of two single parents finding love again, healing and building a new family.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 39 - Words: 93,019 - Reviews: 7,879 - Favs: 2,184 - Follows: 2,822 - Updated: 08-28-13 - Published: 04-14-13 - Status: Complete - id: 9203413

Penalty shot is the same for me, I had to take a break. I'll have to check out the other by Totteacher, sounds good.

So, back to an earlier post/pic of Eric's "member", was that posted with his permission? I mean, seriously, he does appear really really smaller than average.
I've been babysitting the last few days and I've been introduced to Candy Crush, a little kids game. Omg, I need to be committed!!!! I can't stop playing!!!!!! It's a freakin' game for a 10 y/o kid!! I need help. No gimme some Dior Rob, that'll cure me.
 
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Re: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Four- ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY
« Reply #4198 on: September 05, 2013, 11:46 AM »
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I'm assuming this is a fic? Does anyone have a link? Ffn is being a pita right now and not working for me  >:(
Are you talking about Stay by crimsonmarie or The Bronze Horseman?   TBH is a book, part of a trilogy and OH SO good!  (best thing I've ever read hands down across all genres, but very heartbreaking in parts)
 
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Re: LINK totteacher - A Tale, Edward's Eternal - Penalty Shot
« Reply #4199 on: September 05, 2013, 12:45 PM »
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Author: Totteacher
Isabella Swan had grown up surrounded by cruel Lords who use woman for their own amusement. How will the young woman be able to protect herself? Can she escape the same fate as her mother?
Rated: Fiction M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Bella & Edward - Chapters: 30 - Words: 67,237 - Reviews: 1,555 - Favs: 964 - Follows: 461 - Updated: 04-15-11 - Published: 01-25-11 - Status: Complete - id: 6686669 


I read A Tale a couple months ago, and it was pretty good, but I especially enjoy historical fiction.

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If you think that my descriptions of life in rural Australia are a little far-fetched, go and read this:

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Aussie Bella introduces her American friends, Alice and Rose, to a little taste of everything Australia has to offer... including three very delicious Aussie cowboys. Perhaps roos aren't the only things mating in the Outback.

Apart from the fact that I have never met Edward Cullen at a B&S Ball, this fic was like a snapshot of my life! Even my hometown of Brisbane, and where I live now (Rockhampton - Rocky) get a mention!

It's only a 2-shot, so give it a read.

Thanks for the rec of Woodcroft Station, it was a good quick read.  Makes me want to visit someday and just dress my husband up.
 
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PTS virgin no more
« Reply #4200 on: September 05, 2013, 03:44 PM »
Hi.  Just popped my PTS cherry and now I'm skulking the dark alleys of this site looking for... Okaaay, that just sounded really creepy  :-[

Starting over: Hi.  New to the site, but not to fan fiction.  It looks like the Twilightverse is very popular here, so I'll jump in.  I've been reading fan fiction for a long time.  I was actually introduced to the world of fan fiction by my 3rd grade teacher when she gave my class an assignment to re-write or re-tell Charlotte's Web or Bunnicula however we wanted.  I ended up writing a crossover type story of a vamp Wilbur trying to suck Chester dry at the movies.  That assignment made me realize that I like reading so much more than writing. 

I'm not sure if you are fans of Robert Pattinson like a lot of Twilight fic readers are, but he doesn't really do anything for me.  No lynching, please!  I will admit that recently there are pictures where he does look mighty fine and I feel a little like Melissa McCarthy in the gif. 



I've read a lot of Twilight fan fiction over the last 5 or so years.  Some good, some bad and some that are pretty horrible.  I have probably read most of the fan fictions that have been pulled to published when they were wips.  I won't comment on my opinion there because I really like to avoid drama or pushy people who try to harass convince me that my opinion is the wrong one.  Some of my favorite Twilight authors are TheFicChick, Teambella23 (I guess it's MaryElizabeth23 now), pattyrose, purelyamuse, Livie79, LaViePastiche, kharizzmatik, 107yearoldvirgin and Bratty-Vamp.   I will read anything these author write even if it's about water drying up in the desert, because somehow, someway these authors can make that boring scenario into a kick ass story.


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