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Thread #4 - We are crazy talkers here!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general.  But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement. 

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice   

Because we know drypen's watching    :googlyeyes:

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Offline Astro2009

Re: jess2002 - my world your world plus sequel our world
« Reply #961 on: July 04, 2013, 07:38 AM »
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Renee and fill were almost done traveling the east coast.
Tanya and Tyler were going as a dominate and a submissive.
What had change was that I was seeing Edward on a weekly bases.
"I haven't talked to her sense she told me."
"I'm making lasagua." (Spelled lasagna like this 3 times)
Our kissing was intent and her moans grew louder


#1 SPaG goes to,

"Thanks Kat for you help with the prof reading."

Kat sounds like a super-awesome beta!



And part-time Amish?  :D :D :D That's almost like being a little bit pregnant!



There is another Amish fic though, that I heard good things about. . . You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login. Does anyone rec it?
 
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Offline 2muchrubbish

Re: jess2002 - my world your world plus sequel our world
« Reply #962 on: July 04, 2013, 07:40 AM »
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My reading streak of good fics finally broke. Just finished jess2002's my world your world plus the sequel our world, and I do not recommend. The idea of the story was good, but poorly executed. I almost flounced a few chapters in, but since I can't flounce, I kept reading. My World, Your World ends abruptly with a resolution that the even the author states could never happen (but since its fiction this is what she's doing), so I was thankful for the sequel as it acts like an extended epilogue. With the sequel, it ends much better, but still completely unrealistic for an Amish family.
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[/spoiler]The SPaGs are horrible. Here are some examples.
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#1 SPaG goes to,

"Thanks Kat for you help with the prof reading."

my world your world
Author: jess2002 PM
the cullens are amish. bella is a regular teenager. a school project brings them together but religion keeps them apart. what happens when edward goes on rumspringa? rated m for later. please read and review! NOW COMPLETE!
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 25 - Words: 97,483 - Reviews: 576 - Favs: 466 - Follows: 242 - Updated: 02-10-11 - Published: 01-15-10 - Status: Complete - id: 5669375

I HATE when that happens.  Usually when the fic is bad, it's shit bad too.   It sucks because then you become like an addict suffering withdrawal desperately looking for a fic that'll be just as good as the ones you initially read.  *sigh*  Luckily, you'll get some great recs around here and if you're a re-reader like me, then go back to one you loved.   Still not the same as the first time you read it, but during that time someone will have recommended something good and you'll be...

I would rather cuddle then have sex.  If you're good with grammar, you'll get it.
 
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Offline Astro2009

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I don't know the details, but fanfiction NEVER can be copyrighted by the author, because the characters and the original plot belong to the original author. So Fanficwriters mustn't make money from fanfics, because they don't own them, no matter how original their plot is and you can't steal from a person something they never owned. So, even if someone plagiarized her story, she has technically no say, because she didn't own her story anyway. I don't know about that plagiarizing and publishing her story as OF...

I think that is something that could change now with that new amazon platform.

And I think we don't realize how much the Twilight fandom has changed the fanfiction "rules".

For a "real" fanfic you use the characters and the setting the author provided and play with them. You try to stay in character, you stay true to the pairings, location etc.

When you read older discussions on fanficforums you read from all those fanfic purists how sick they are of all those AH writers  ;)

So, when was the last time you've read a real Twilight fanfiction?  :D

The Twilight characters are so carefully designed it sets every Spice Girls or boyband manager to shame. You have the Posh Vamp, the Sporty Vamp, Emo Vamp etc lol
You have characters for everyone! AND you are not limited to special family bounds or names, because even in the original book it was a given that the "Cullens" change everything up with each move (who's a sibling to whom, whose last name to use...)

So, it is so easy to take this huge set of characters and write them in your own story.

Every Twilight fanfic that is AH? Technically no "Real" fanfic, so that's where the problems start. A lot of fanfics, especially those AH ones could stand alone as OF, there is nothing left of Twilight but the names of the characters and their traits (sometimes). BUT, those stories wouldn't be as good received, not as much reviews, not as much support from readers, because we just love our Edwards and Bellas and put up with crappy storys just so we can read about another Edward getting his Bella and making lots of greeneyed babies.

So, the moral of my ramblings?

I think fanfiction starts to be a huge misty zone where nobody can be sure of the rules anymore, especially in this fanfic...

But Nikky has no right atm to refuse downloading or copyrighting her stories.

I'm sure that will change.

Do you realise how in awe of you I am right now! So well said . . . and English isn't even your native language!

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Offline Chilibabe

Re: jess2002 - my world your world plus sequel our world
« Reply #964 on: July 04, 2013, 07:43 AM »
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My reading streak of good fics finally broke. Just finished jess2002's my world your world plus the sequel our world, and I do not recommend. The idea of the story was good, but poorly executed. I almost flounced a few chapters in, but since I can't flounce, I kept reading. My World, Your World ends abruptly with a resolution that the even the author states could never happen (but since its fiction this is what she's doing), so I was thankful for the sequel as it acts like an extended epilogue. With the sequel, it ends much better, but still completely unrealistic for an Amish family.
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[/spoiler]The SPaGs are horrible. Here are some examples.
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#1 SPaG goes to,

"Thanks Kat for you help with the prof reading."

my world your world
Author: jess2002 PM
the cullens are amish. bella is a regular teenager. a school project brings them together but religion keeps them apart. what happens when edward goes on rumspringa? rated m for later. please read and review! NOW COMPLETE!
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 25 - Words: 97,483 - Reviews: 576 - Favs: 466 - Follows: 242 - Updated: 02-10-11 - Published: 01-15-10 - Status: Complete - id: 5669375

 :D :D :D :D :D
You won't be able to read Twilight fanfics without haven't read one of jess2002 stories. Reading one, disliking it and wondering how she gets so many stories with so many reviews is like an initiation ritus. And, I assure you, you will read another of her stories, just because her summaries are pretty interesting and after some chapters you remember that she was the author you never wanted to read a story of again!   :D

Or, let me rephrase:

You have read enough good fanfic when you read a jess2002 story and don't like it.  ;)

I'm normally not that bitchy, really!  ^-^

 
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Offline 2muchrubbish

Re: jess2002 - my world your world plus sequel our world
« Reply #965 on: July 04, 2013, 07:45 AM »
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And part-time Amish?  :D :D :D That's almost like being a little bit pregnant!

 
I would rather cuddle then have sex.  If you're good with grammar, you'll get it.
 
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Do you realise how in awe of you I am right now! So well said . . . and English isn't even your native language!



 ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^
 :-*
 
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Offline lamelurker

Re: jess2002 - my world your world plus sequel our world
« Reply #967 on: July 04, 2013, 07:53 AM »
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Kat sounds like a super-awesome beta!

And part-time Amish?  :D :D :D That's almost like being a little bit pregnant!

There is another Amish fic though, that I heard good things about. . . You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login. Does anyone rec it?

I definitely rec it! I really liked In Your World. It made me jones for another Amish fic, which is how I found this dud.
 
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Offline lamelurker

Re: jess2002 - my world your world plus sequel our world
« Reply #968 on: July 04, 2013, 07:59 AM »
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:D :D :D :D :D
You won't be able to read Twilight fanfics without haven't read one of jess2002 stories. Reading one, disliking it and wondering how she gets so many stories with so many reviews is like an initiation ritus. And, I assure you, you will read another of her stories, just because her summaries are pretty interesting and after some chapters you remember that she was the author you never wanted to read a story of again!   :D

Or, let me rephrase:

You have read enough good fanfic when you read a jess2002 story and don't like it.  ;)


 :D :D :D
I'm initiated! Whoohoo!
 
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Offline Astro2009

Re: jess2002 - my world your world plus sequel our world
« Reply #969 on: July 04, 2013, 08:07 AM »
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I definitely rec it! I really liked In Your World. It made me jones for another Amish fic, which is how I found this dud.

Have you read You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login.

I would kill for her to write another fic (or at least maim for her to finish Insatiable Desires)!

ETD: Duh! Of course you have! You mentioned it this morning!  :-[

Ignore me! It's 1:09am and I need to be going to bed!

Goodnight all!  :-*
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Offline ajamm

Re: jess2002 - my world your world plus sequel our world
« Reply #970 on: July 04, 2013, 08:18 AM »
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There is another Amish fic though, that I heard good things about. . . You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login. Does anyone rec it?

I never really read In Your World, but I skimmed it. And talking about Solostintwilight have you guys read You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login? I read it awhile ago but it started okay, then BAM!!! you had unnecessary plot twist the story didn't need.
 
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Offline lamelurker

solostintwilight - In Your World
« Reply #971 on: July 04, 2013, 08:26 AM »
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There is another Amish fic though, that I heard good things about. . . You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login. Does anyone rec it?

BTW, In Your World is in the PTS index. It was P2P by Jennyfer Browne as Healing Faith. It's Part 1 of Browne's In Your World series.
 
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Offline 2muchrubbish

I found it!
« Reply #972 on: July 04, 2013, 09:01 AM »
I found it!  All the talk about kittens reminded me of a pic I had seen.



The pic has me trying to recall if I've read any Twifics in the past 7 or 8 years where E has a kitten (and I don't mean any instances where he nicknames Bella "kitty" or the like.  :sign0137:)
I would rather cuddle then have sex.  If you're good with grammar, you'll get it.
 

Offline lamelurker

Re: I found it!
« Reply #973 on: July 04, 2013, 09:05 AM »
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I found it!  All the talk about kittens reminded me of a pic I had seen.



The pic has me trying to recall if I've read any Twifics in the past 7 or 8 years where E has a kitten (and I don't mean any instances where he nicknames Bella "kitty" or the like.  :sign0137:)

Nice pic! Reminds me of B/E's kitten in hunterhunting's Clipped Wings and Inked Armor, except without the big paws
 
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Offline Ellachanted

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Re: I found it!
« Reply #974 on: July 04, 2013, 09:13 AM »
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I found it!  All the talk about kittens reminded me of a pic I had seen.



The pic has me trying to recall if I've read any Twifics in the past 7 or 8 years where E has a kitten (and I don't mean any instances where he nicknames Bella "kitty" or the like.  :sign0137:)
OMG! Rainbow!  How could you not remember Rainbow?  I love her so much. 

Sideline Collision by Nolebucgrl  I think I almost love Rainbow more than Edward....almost  :D :D :D
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Offline 2muchrubbish

unnecessary plot twists
« Reply #975 on: July 04, 2013, 09:25 AM »
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And talking about Solostintwilight have you guys read You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login? I read it awhile ago but it started okay, then BAM!!! you had unnecessary plot twist the story didn't need.

Unnecessary plot twists seems to be the norm in fics.  Actually, even a lot of books have them too.  Particularly the ones that are self-published that make you feel like you're reading fics with different character names.  :o

Actually, this leads me to a rant regarding the seemingly popular trend to publish books in serial format instead of just one frakking book.  I'm talking about the books that deal with one couple the whole series and how there's always more than a few  :wtf: moments.  Like book 1 is how they met and got together, book 2 is how they deal with being together and hints of some big, bad, dark secret, book 3 is about the fall out of that big, bad secret and the couple splits, book 4 has the couple back together after some alpha machinations on the H's part and the h falling into his peen hypnosis, book 5 has the h pregnant and feeling like a beached whale and the H doesn't tell the h that his new, oversexed, young secretary has her over-sized boobs all up in his face and her fingers all up and down his business and it goes on and on.  Obviously, I'm exaggerating it... a bit, but not by much.  I mean, c'mon!  Just write the dang story without me having to question the HEA in book 9 that seemed so concrete in book 2!  Is it just me?

This just reminds me of the train wreck of an epilogue that abso-fuckin-lutely ruined High Anxiety for me.  How in the all hell can you write about all the crap they went though and how much they went through to be together for a seemingly HEA in the last chapter and then T-Rex poop on my emotions with that epi.  Sorry, just couldn't get any love for E after that epi and lost all hope for a real HEA.  No matter how much I want to bleach that shit storm out of my brain, even after 2+ years after reading it, it's still hovering there in the back of my mind whenever this fic is mentioned.  Anybody who hasn't read High Anxiety, please take my advice and DON'T READ THE EPILOGUES!
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Re: I found it!
« Reply #976 on: July 04, 2013, 09:26 AM »
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Nice pic! Reminds me of B/E's kitten in hunterhunting's Clipped Wings and Inked Armor, except without the big paws

I thought the same !
 
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Offline lamelurker

Re: I found it!
« Reply #977 on: July 04, 2013, 09:27 AM »
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OMG! Rainbow!  How could you not remember Rainbow?  I love her so much. 

Sideline Collision by Nolebucgrl  I think I almost love Rainbow more than Edward....almost  :D :D :D

Sideline Collision is still on my TBR. Should I move it up? I just started Stephaniiie's The Hard Way To Learn A Lesson.
 
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Offline 2muchrubbish

Ack!!!  how could I forget CW&IA and Sideline?!?  oh yeah... will be re-reading those soon.  Thanks!
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Re: I found it!
« Reply #979 on: July 04, 2013, 09:29 AM »
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OMG! Rainbow!  How could you not remember Rainbow?  I love her so much. 

Sideline Collision by Nolebucgrl  I think I almost love Rainbow more than Edward....almost  :D :D :D

I'm trying to remember if i've read this one. But i can't. :'(
 
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Offline Peonie

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Sorry, I don't have any to rec, but I discovered You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login just yesterday. You can search for different -ellas and -wards and different pairings. There are Dancella and Danceward categories here.

Find a fic that you like the sound of and then search here for discussion and recs. Or just post here asking if anyone has read it.

Aren't you wondeful??  :-* :-*

I'm not a re-reader, Motu and Gabriel's series were the only two fic that I've re-read as fiction and as books...Since I've been part of PTS it's impossible to re-read something! the TBR list is too long!! :)



HAPPY 4th of JULY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :) :) :) :)
 
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