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Thread #6 - We are crazy talkers here! Join in the fun!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general.  But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement. 

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

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Now I've always thought of the "typical" Sunday dinner as pot roast with potatoes. Not that we could afford it often when I was a kid. 

So glad I flounced that story. It is one of my pet peeves when writers do that.  I would let a minor thing like going to Seattle from Forks for the evening go.  Unless your a vampire it is unlikely you can get there in less than 3 hours. And most drivers would be closer to four.  So 6 to 8 hours just to go to dinner or dance?  No. Normal Americans don't do that. Seattle would be a special occasion or a day trip at the minimum.  But since the vampires can do it in 2 hours with a one hour ferry ride in there,  who am I to argue? :P

Thanks Demaris for taking one for the team and reading it.  :-* :-*
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Thanks Demaris for taking one for the team and reading it.  :-* :-*

 >:( >:( Bah! Humbug!  :D

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Yesss!!! Past and present stories drive me insane, especially when authors do it throughout the whole story or have a huge slow burn to get to the present. Thankfully in present form, we have Bella speaking to her daughter about life so we know we have a somewhat happy outlook for the future of the story.

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LOL at me. Before I thought about it I was going to say, the angst wasn't that bad!! Until I remembered all that happened.

I have to re-read There Is A Light its one of my favourites too....In fact I so many re-read to do I may as well forget about new stories for a while.  Saying that, I am now reading Eye Of The Beholder which I think Super recc'd? Only on page four but I sure know where this is going....  ;D



 
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Eye Of The Beholder
« Reply #1963 on: August 07, 2014, 09:00 AM »
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One passionate night together turns into something that will bind two perfect strangers, Edward Cullen and Bella Swan, together for the rest of their lives.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Family - Edward, Bella - Chapters: 32 - Words: 47,525 - Reviews: 1,264 - Favs: 1,249 - Follows: 737 - Updated: Mar 16, 2011 - Published: Mar 15, 2010 - Status: Complete - id: 5819064

I read this awhile back and think I liked it? I don't have it saved in my read stories though, so I probably flounced lol. But I haven't seen it in the Actorward lists, so here's another.


How is it I've only just noticed that you only thought you liked it? Well, I think you ladies hate me! Jesus Christ, Jesus Christ! I can't believe I'm here again! Page 17 and it's already making me want to hurl/punch someone....

I really want to ask this, we all wear big girl pants here so...well here goes. If any of you ladies were, I want to say stupid but lets say reckless, enough to have sex with a stranger with only chemical contraception and then found yourself pregnant would you tell the father/keep the baby? I really want to know this because I'm thinking there must be something wrong with me as all these 'unplanned/secret baby' scenarios are just so far removed from any sort of reality that I could envision if this happened to me ( I mean, it could never happen to me but you know what I mean). So am I nuts?
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Re: Eye Of The Beholder
« Reply #1964 on: August 07, 2014, 09:33 AM »
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How is it I've only just noticed that you only thought you liked it? Well, I think you ladies hate me! Jesus Christ, Jesus Christ! I can't believe I'm here again! Page 17 and it's already making me want to hurl/punch someone....

I really want to ask this, we all wear big girl pants here so...well here goes. If any of you ladies were, I want to say stupid but lets say reckless, enough to have sex with a stranger with only chemical contraception and then found yourself pregnant would you tell the father/keep the baby? I really want to know this because I'm thinking there must be something wrong with me because all these secret baby scenarios are just so far removed from any sort of reality that I could envision if this happened to me ( I mean, it could never happen to me but you know what I mean). So am I nuts?

OMG I'm so sorry! I realized after skimming, that it was definitely a story I flounced. I even started a flounced fic list of my own for stories I'll partially read but never finish, whether it's due to the writing or the plot just never progresses. The worst part about that though, is that I always remember the details on those stories, and then I go nuts trying to remember things that happened, even when I flounced for reason!! But I can't get it out of my head until I've read it.

But I have to admit I have a guilty pleasure in enjoying secret baby stories. I don't even know why. Just thinking about the situation applied to real life instances makes me queasy, but if it's made up, then I'm so down to read it. Usually the drama is in the situation of having a baby without informing the father, and then there's some cheesy reconciliation and they all live happily ever after.

I think I've read 60% of the books on this list  ???
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But if I ever found myself in the unlikely event that my birth control crapped out, the condom broke, the morning after pill didn't work, or just me being stupid, I'd find myself pregnant. I'd tell the Daddy ASAP because it takes two to tango, but I do not think I'd find myself married with a child on the way, to someone I had a one night stand with. So I'd  probably be a third generation single mom. Really though, I think it would be more common for that situation to be handled with an abortion. But I live in the Southern United States and women's reproductive rights are a mess over here.

Also, ruthhazelton recommended that great AU angry child fic. I can't top it, but I did read this WIP and like it. Mostly because Rose is Bella's daughter this time around, and the writer uses such strange vernacular for the characters where Esme uses "like" twice in every sentence, it's almost as if you're reading her as a teenage character. It's hysterical. But she's not angry for having been abandoned, but more so in awe of her rock star Daddy.

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This is what happens when superstar Edward Cullen finds out he has a 15 year-old rebellious daughter. Musicianward. ExB
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 14 - Words: 82,931 - Reviews: 708 - Favs: 525 - Follows: 999 - Updated: May 26 - Published: May 27, 2013 - Bella, Edward

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How is it I've only just noticed that you only thought you liked it? Well, I think you ladies hate me! Jesus Christ, Jesus Christ! I can't believe I'm here again! Page 17 and it's already making me want to hurl/punch someone....

I really want to ask this, we all wear big girl pants here so...well here goes. If any of you ladies were, I want to say stupid but lets say reckless, enough to have sex with a stranger with only chemical contraception and then found yourself pregnant would you tell the father/keep the baby? I really want to know this because I'm thinking there must be something wrong with me as all these 'unplanned/secret baby' scenarios are just so far removed from any sort of reality that I could envision if this happened to me ( I mean, it could never happen to me but you know what I mean). So am I nuts?

I dont think you are nuts,  I guess it all depends on your mindset, or personal preferences.  Could I have sex with a stranger with out Wrapping it,  HELL NO, but then again I dont think I could have sex with a stranger to begin with.   But on the flip side of that,  I guess my conscience would get to me and I probably would try to find a way to find him and tell him,  Not really sure.   /shrug I agree alot of the stories are far from reality but then again,  this is Fiction.
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« Reply #1967 on: August 07, 2014, 10:13 AM »
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How is it I've only just noticed that you only thought you liked it? Well, I think you ladies hate me! Jesus Christ, Jesus Christ! I can't believe I'm here again! Page 17 and it's already making me want to hurl/punch someone....

I really want to ask this, we all wear big girl pants here so...well here goes. If any of you ladies were, I want to say stupid but lets say reckless, enough to have sex with a stranger with only chemical contraception and then found yourself pregnant would you tell the father/keep the baby? I really want to know this because I'm thinking there must be something wrong with me as all these 'unplanned/secret baby' scenarios are just so far removed from any sort of reality that I could envision if this happened to me ( I mean, it could never happen to me but you know what I mean). So am I nuts?
See, this would depend on if I actually knew the guy.  I can see getting drunk, having a one-night stand and then finding you are pregnant and have no idea of the name of the guy other than, "was it Edward? Edwin? David?"  When I was younger, I had friends sleep with guys of whom they barely knew the name. Fortunately, none of them got pregnant.  At least not that I know of. 

I would probably give the baby up for adoption. But then who knows.  It never happened to me.  And a lot of those friends that would get drunk and sleep with any old guy? Would probably have had an abortion.  Because it would have really freaked them out.  They were so not ready for it.
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She said after the last update that real life was starting to get better and she wanted to get on a schedule of updates every two weeks. 

I'm glad she is doing it.   ;D
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Re: Eye Of The Beholder
« Reply #1970 on: August 07, 2014, 10:49 AM »
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OMG I'm so sorry! I realized after skimming, that it was definitely a story I flounced. I even started a flounced fic list of my own for stories I'll partially read but never finish, whether it's due to the writing or the plot just never progresses. The worst part about that though, is that I always remember the details on those stories, and then I go nuts trying to remember things that happened, even when I flounced for reason!! But I can't get it out of my head until I've read it.

But I have to admit I have a guilty pleasure in enjoying secret baby stories. I don't even know why. Just thinking about the situation applied to real life instances makes me queasy, but if it's made up, then I'm so down to read it. Usually the drama is in the situation of having a baby without informing the father, and then there's some cheesy reconciliation and they all live happily ever after.


You and Loopy are on my 'sh!t list' big time! Three dud fics in a row? I'm taking a break from Twific after this one...otherwise I'm going to be arrest for GBH of a laptop...

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Also, ruthhazelton recommended that great AU angry child fic. I can't top it, but I did read this WIP and like it. Mostly because Rose is Bella's daughter this time around, and the writer uses such strange vernacular for the characters where Esme uses "like" twice in every sentence, it's almost as if you're reading her as a teenage character. It's hysterical. But she's not angry for having been abandoned, but more so in awe of her rock star Daddy.

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This is what happens when superstar Edward Cullen finds out he has a 15 year-old rebellious daughter. Musicianward. ExB
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 14 - Words: 82,931 - Reviews: 708 - Favs: 525 - Follows: 999 - Updated: May 26 - Published: May 27, 2013 - Bella, Edward

The author also has an outtake in Rose's point of view where she gives Edward a nice verbal beat down in her profile


I'm not taking any more recc's from you woman!  >:(  :D


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But if I ever found myself in the unlikely event that my birth control crapped out, the condom broke, the morning after pill didn't work, or just me being stupid, I'd find myself pregnant. I'd tell the Daddy ASAP because it takes two to tango, but I do not think I'd find myself married with a child on the way, to someone I had a one night stand with. So I'd  probably be a third generation single mom. Really though, I think it would be more common for that situation to be handled with an abortion. But I live in the Southern United States and women's reproductive rights are a mess over here.


See? Right there. This is why these stories wind me up, do you see the amount of things that would have to go wrong to a woman in a 21st century western country for this to actually happen? I'm 100% behind a woman's right to choose and 'big up' to all single parents but f*ck me. I get drunk in a bar, pick up a man who's name I barely know and that decision goes on to control every breathing moment for the rest of my life? Hell no.

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I dont think you are nuts,  I guess it all depends on your mindset, or personal preferences.  Could I have sex with a stranger with out Wrapping it,  HELL NO, but then again I dont think I could have sex with a stranger to begin with.   But on the flip side of that,  I guess my conscience would get to me and I probably would try to find a way to find him and tell him,  Not really sure.   /shrug I agree alot of the stories are far from reality but then again,  this is Fiction.

All fiction should have at least some kind of traces of creditability, right? If a story is not based on some kind of reality then its science fiction. Anyway I'm just pissed, ignore me, 3 murder-inducing fics in a row.....F*ck. My. Life again.  >:(

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See, this would depend on if I actually knew the guy.  I can see getting drunk, having a one-night stand and then finding you are pregnant and have no idea of the name of the guy other than, "was it Edward? Edwin? David?"  When I was younger, I had friends sleep with guys of whom they barely knew the name. Fortunately, none of them got pregnant.  At least not that I know of. 

I would probably give the baby up for adoption. But then who knows.  It never happened to me.  And a lot of those friends that would get drunk and sleep with any old guy? Would probably have had an abortion.  Because it would have really freaked them out.  They were so not ready for it.

Yeah the glory of youth! :D We've all done crazy things, I could tell you some stories but my veejay jay is way to important to me to treat it with disrespect.  :D :D :D

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See? Right there. This is why these stories wind me up, do you see the amount of things that would have to go wrong to a woman in a 21st century western country for this to actually happen? I'm 100% behind a woman's right to choose and 'big up' to all single parents but f*ck me. I get drunk in a bar, pick up a man who's name I barely know and that decision goes on to control every breathing moment for the rest of my life? Hell no.

All fiction should have at least some kind of traces of creditability, right? If a story is not based on some kind of reality then its science fiction. Anyway I'm just pissed, ignore me, 3 murder-inducing fics in a row.....F*ck. My. Life again.  >:(

Yeah the glory of youth! :D We've all done crazy things, I could tell you some stories but my veejay jay is way to important to me to treat it with disrespect.  :D :D :D

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See, the problem as I see it is that when you are drunk and doing stupid things like a one night stand? You probably won't remember you need a condom.  So if you are the type of person who does that? I would definitely recommend the shot over the daily pill.  Because it is likely you won't remember to take that regularly either. 

I could see this happening to Jessica or Lauren.  But canon Bella doesn't seem to be the type to get drunk and go with a guy she just met to have sex. She always comes across as more cautious after seeing how her mother "got stuck". 

And? I never really rec stories for you Demaris.  I like fluffy, funny stuff and avoid heavy angst like a plague.  So usually? If I like it? Don't even bother to click.   :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

But I love you anyway!  :-*
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See, the problem as I see it is that when you are drunk and doing stupid things like a one night stand? You probably won't remember you need a condom.  So if you are the type of person who does that? I would definitely recommend the shot over the daily pill.  Because it is likely you won't remember to take that regularly either. 

I could see this happening to Jessica or Lauren.  But canon Bella doesn't seem to be the type to get drunk and go with a guy she just met to have sex. She always comes across as more cautious after seeing how her mother "got stuck". 

And? I never really rec stories for you Demaris.  I like fluffy, funny stuff and avoid heavy angst like a plague.  So usually? If I like it? Don't even bother to click.   :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

But I love you anyway!  :-*

Actually when you really break it down a baby isn't even the worse that can happen if you play pokey without the condom; men can carry so much nuclear waste between their legs that your veejayjay could just as likely explode during penetration...JS. 

Love all you ladies too, regardless  :-*

 
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Actually when you really break it down a baby isn't even the worse that can happen if you play pokey without the condom; men can carry so much nuclear waste between their legs that your veejayjay could just as likely explode during penetration...JS. 

Love all you ladies too, regardless  :-*

OMG Holy ....  now that was funny
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You and Loopy are on my 'sh!t list' big time! Three dud fics in a row? I'm taking a break from Twific after this one...otherwise I'm going to be arrest for GBH of a laptop...

I'm not taking any more recc's from you woman!  :angry: :D


See? Right there. This is why these stories wind me up, do you see the amount of things that would have to go wrong to a woman in a 21st century western country for this to actually happen? I'm 100% behind a woman's right to choose and 'big up' to all single parents but f*ck me. I get drunk in a bar, pick up a man who's name I barely know and that decision goes on to control every breathing moment for the rest of my life? Hell no.

All fiction should have at least some kind of traces of creditability, right? If a story is not based on some kind of reality then its science fiction. Anyway I'm just pissed, ignore me, 3 murder-inducing fics in a row.....F*ck. My. Life again.  :angry:

Yeah the glory of youth! :D We've all done crazy things, I could tell you some stories but my veejay jay is way to important to me to treat it with disrespect.  :D :D :D

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Master Race by By: Babette12
Alienated from the Cullens, Edward finds himself bored in South America. When he "hears" another vampire creating a master race he is intrigued. But who would be the perfect genetic material and what will be the cost to the human mother?
Rated: Fiction M - English - Drama/Romance - Edward, Bella - Chapters: 25 - Words: 115,557 - Reviews: 1,518 - Favs: 618 - Follows: 393 - Updated: Apr 21, 2010 - Published: Nov 4, 2009 - Status: Complete - id: 5488416

This one was pretty good IMO. I thought that B's was pretty realistic in this one for the most part....from what I can remember. ;)  I occasionally suffer from CRS too.   :D  This is on FFN.



 
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I wish it bothered me, the teacher/student element, I really wish this was the biggest problem with this story. It gave me whiplash, I think this is the most 'British' fanfiction I've read (in terms of language, colloquialisms, etc) and no one in the fic was! Bella had the Cullens over for Sunday dinner and decided to go the 'traditional' route with roast beef and Yorkshire puddings?! If that is traditional US Sunday dinner it's the first I've heard, do you even have a 'traditional Sunday dinner', US wide? Bella and Edward sit in a restaurant Bella orders wine (she's 22) Edward (18 almost 19) says "bloody Americans" and their over 21 drinking restriction why can't they have the lower age limit like the UK. Now, I'm sure lots of American teenagers grumble about not  being able to drink but would they say bloody Americans when they are one? The writing is soooooo nonsensical and bad, I know I say this all the time but this hits 'bad writing' out the park! It's cringingly (that's not a word but, whatever) clear that this is a older woman writing her fantasy but doing so really immaturely, if I'd read. "You are my life now" one more time I was going to smash something.  There came a point as I was nearing the end where I was just having to laugh, shake by head, put my iPad down, walk it off, before continuing. What I can say positively about it is there were very few SPaG mistakes, so yeah! for the British education system..... :D :D Loopy Girl I still love you, just.  :-*
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I have to stop posting so I can finish that f*ing So Right But so Wrong! Good Night everyone!!
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You and Loopy are on my 'sh!t list' big time! Three dud fics in a row? I'm taking a break from Twific after this one...otherwise I'm going to be arrest for GBH of a laptop...
NB. BTW I'm not taking any more recc's from you women! You're scary...   :D :D
So, I take it you liked it, then?  :P :P :P
I'm still contemplating between a hot poker up the arse or scooping my eyes out with a rusty spoon, while still trying to read it. 
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Please tell me you're writing a Daddyward where the child, now a teenager, hates Edward for being an absent father?! And sticks to its guns (if there was an actual gun involved all the better) for more that 3 chapters!  PLEASE, SOMEONE WRITE THAT STORY! 
I WOULD so read this if it was made into a fic.  :D :D >:D >:D
 
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Finally Back: There is a Girl, there is a Boy. There is a Kid. There are feelings. That's about it, really. But what else is there?
Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Bella, Edward - Chapters: 25 - Words: 125,330 - Reviews: 470 - Favs: 648 - Follows: 330 - Updated: Nov 23, 2010 - Published: Nov 18, 2010 - id: 6486960
Thanks for the rec hun, I started this last night and I'm already 1/2 way through it.  :)
Though I do have to say Thank God for online translators as I know no Spanish apart from the basics and though there's not a lot in this but the author doesn't translate them at the bottom or top of the chapter, there obviously words I don't know but that still doesn't stop it being a good fic.
Oh, btw it is complete just not marked it, for anyone who's interested *cough*MRS FASSY*cough*.  :)  :D :D
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Actually when you really break it down a baby isn't even the worse that can happen if you play pokey without the condom; men can carry so much nuclear waste between their legs that your veejayjay could just as likely explode during penetration...JS. 

Love all you ladies too, regardless  :-*
OMG, you totally took the words out of my mouth
Me and my Best Gay were talking about my step-niece today as she just told her parents that she is pregnant from a one night stand is keeping the baby.
And though she has a major support system (which I know a lot of people don't) but one of the first things I said to her after offering her my support etc was did she get herself checked afterwards at the GUM clinic as getting pregnant is the BEST result from a one night stand - I'm a realistic Aunt if nothing else.  :D :D
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So I set up OneDrive and I am liking it so far. I love that it has an app for my andriod phone and can access my stuff from there. I have put all of story and docs on it. It also give you an additional 3GB over the 15 for photos.
Glad that you're liking OneDrive hun.  :)
I just had an email saying that my storage is 20GB now and it's still free with them.  :dance: :dance:
I really like it and like I said the other week when we were talking about backing stuff up, I particularly like that you can use Words, Excel and One Note online for free as well through OneDrive.  :)
 

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Thanks for the rec hun, I started this last night and I'm already 1/2 way through it.  :)
Though I do have to say Thank God for online translators as I know no Spanish apart from the basics and though there's not a lot in this but the author doesn't translate them at the bottom or top of the chapter, there obviously words I don't know but that still doesn't stop it being a good fic.
Oh, btw it is complete just not marked it, for anyone who's interested *cough*MRS FASSY*cough*.  :)  :D :DOMG, you totally took the words out of my mouth
Me and my Best Gay were talking about my step-niece today as she just told her parents that she is pregnant from a one night stand is keeping the baby.
And though she has a major support system (which I know a lot of people don't) but one of the first things I said to her after offering her my support etc was did she get herself checked afterwards at the GUM clinic as getting pregnant is the BEST result from a one night stand - I'm a realistic Aunt if nothing else.  :D :DGlad that you're liking OneDrive hun.  :)
I just had an email saying that my storage is 20GB now and it's still free with them.  :dance: :dance:
I really like it and like I said the other week when we were talking about backing stuff up, I particularly like that you can use Words, Excel and One Note online for free as well through OneDrive.  :)

From what I understand, everytime someone signs up a new account through you, you get an additional 500MB to a max of 5(?)GB. Yes, I like that we can use Word, Excel, etc through that app to. It is great.
 
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From what I understand, everytime someone signs up a new account through you, you get an additional 500MB to a max of 5(?)GB. Yes, I like that we can use Word, Excel, etc through that app to. It is great.
I never knew you could get additional space if you introduced people - I'm getting on that straight away, as you can never have too much online storage.  :D :D
 
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I am trying to move my active calibre library to my onedrive app on my desktop. If it works, then every time I update my stories, it should automatically update in onedrive online too. I will let you all know if this works
 
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