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Thread #6 - We are crazy talkers here! Join in the fun!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW! 

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of our wonderful discussions on Twilight Fanfiction, Books, and Life in general.  But mostly Twilight fanfics... and life stuff that will get me a NOT ALLOWED statement. 

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice   

Because we know drypen's watching    :googlyeyes:

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I said it before and I'll say it again, I thought the This Man trilogy was garbage.  Jesse wasn't sexy and dominant.  He was lying, manipulative and abusive.  The heroine was a total doormat.  I thought she and her friends should call the police when Jesse came around. The SPaG errors in the books were frequent and distracting.  I can't believe the buzz and accolades these books have received.  Every time complimentary remarks are made about this series it pisses me off all over again.

I feel like this about the Driven series...what a piece of  :poo: So formulaic it was a joke, there wasn't an original sentence/thought in that whole pile of crap. IMO
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I feel like this about the Driven series...what a piece of  :poo: So formulaic it was a joke, there wasn't an original sentence/thought in the whole pile of crap. IMO
While I liked The Driven Trilogy I love your use of shit emoticon (makes me laugh everytime).  :D :D :D
 

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While I liked The Driven Trilogy I love your use of shit emoticon (makes me laugh everytime).  :D :D :D



How are ya Loopy Girl?  :-*
I've been binging on Mad Men over the Bank Holiday weekend. I was a whole series behind, back on track now. Is Donald Drapper still the sexiest man on our TV at the moment? Honestly, I'm asking; answers on a post card...
 
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How are ya Loopy Girl?  :-*
I've been binging on Mad Men over the Bank Holiday weekend. I was a whole series behind, back on track now. Is Donald Drapper still the sexiest man on our TV at the moment? Honestly, I'm asking; answers on a post card...
Hiya hun, I got the dreaded Ringworm atm (could I get anymore country?  :D :D)
I FLOVE Mad Men - love Donald Draper, I seriously don't think anyone is close to how hot he is.  :D
Couldn't help myself  :P :P :P
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I've binge watching Fargo, which is making me have a strange crush on B-BT.  ^-^ ^-^
Hope you're alright hun.
Oh, hows Mr Prince Albert???  ;D ;D
 
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Hiya hun, I got the dreaded Ringworm atm (could I get anymore country?  :D :D)
I FLOVE Mad Men - love Donald Draper, I seriously don't think anyone is close to how hot he is.  :D
Couldn't help myself  :P :P :P
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I've binge watching Fargo, which is making me have a strange crush on B-BT.  ^-^ ^-^
Hope you're alright hun.
Oh, hows Mr Prince Albert???  ;D ;D

Loopy!! You are soooo wrong (in all the ways that's right  :D :D)!!! My, my, my! That's not a Mad Man that is a hung man, jeez louise...

I've not seen Fargo (series) yet, but I'm gonna but it on my watch list....

I'm OK, generally, and I'm (kinda) happy to report that I have not yet seen PA but I have felt it....dum dum dum duuuum.  :D
 

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Loopy!! You are soooo wrong (in all the ways that's right  :D :D)!!! My, my, my! That's not a Mad Man that is a hung man, jeez louise...

I've not seen Fargo (series) yet, but I'm gonna but it on my watch list....

I'm OK, generally, and I'm (kinda) happy to report that I have not yet seen PA but I have felt it....dum dum dum duuuum.  :D
WHAT!?!
I seriously can't even begin with the other stuff - you touched it, inside or outside the pants???
I suppose touching is one step closer to using it.  :P :P :P
Booked, babe where are you when I need for help with interrogating about Mr PA.  :D :D :D

I'm pretty sure I've said this in a previous thread but I would pay to see Jon and Rob run towards me.  >:D >:D >:D ;) ;)
If you've seen the film and liked it, then you'll probably like the TV series - makes me laugh very episode.  ;D
 
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WHAT!?!
I seriously can't even begin with the other stuff - you touched it, inside or outside the pants???
I suppose touching is one step closer to using it.  :P :P :P
Booked, babe where are you when I need for help with interrogating about Mr PA.  :D :D :D

I'm pretty sure I've said this in a previous thread but I would pay to see Jon and Rob run towards me.  >:D >:D >:D ;) ;)
If you've seen the film and liked it, then you'll probably like the TV series - makes me laugh very episode.  ;D

Why does this feel like Secondary school? "Inside or outside the pants"? What base is that?  :D  Stateside ladies help me out....Outside the pants...I asked about it and he 'suggested' I have a feel, *shrug* so I did.  ;D

I'd be happy with Jon walking towards me, while I'm laying down, naked; a bed would be nice, but any flat surface will do....though standing works too...
 
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Why does this feel like Secondary school? "Inside or outside the pants"? What base is that?  :D  Stateside ladies help me out....Outside the pants...I asked about it and he 'suggested' I have a feel, *shrug* so I did.  ;D

I'd be happy with Jon walking towards me, while I'm laying down, naked; a bed would be nice, but any flat surface will do....though standing works too...
Lol, well I am a 12 yr old boy stuck in a 31 yr old woman's body.  :P :P :P
It's only 2nd base at best hun. But it's start.  :D :D :D
Well, if he suggested it who are you to turn him down.  :P :P

I'm agree hun, standing up, laying down who cares when Jon's involved.  >:D >:D :D :D
 
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Lol, well I am a 12 yr old boy stuck in a 31 yr old woman's body.  :P :P :P
It's only 2nd base at best hun. But it's start.  :D :D :D
Well, if he suggested it who are you to turn him down.  :P :P

I'm agree hun, standing up, laying down who cares when Jon's involved.  >:D >:D :D :D
Shit! Only second base?! Here's me thinking I was being adventurous! I have a lot of catching up to do, hey Loopy?  :D :D  I'm getting to third base next date...Promise!  :P  :D
 
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Shit! Only second base?! Here's me thinking I was being adventurous! I have a lot of catching up to do, hey Loopy?  :D :D  I'm getting to third base next date...Promise!  :P  :D
You better hun, as I'm living vicariously through you until the Dr gives the all clear that the hubby (and kids) can come back home.
It's been 3 days and I'm having serious withdrawals.
I think earlier just proved I need to get some and soon as I was watching BGT and got a bit excited watching Darcy taking his jacket off, I actually fangirled like a 13 yr old.  ^-^ ^-^ ::) ::)
 
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I'm OK, generally, and I'm (kinda) happy to report that I have not yet seen PA but I have felt it....dum dum dum duuuum.  :D
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Why does this feel like Secondary school? "Inside or outside the pants"? What base is that?  :D  Stateside ladies help me out....Outside the pants...I asked about it and he 'suggested' I have a feel, *shrug* so I did.  ;D

OOOOOO MMMMYYYYY GOOOOOOOD!!!!!!
*insert ear splitting scream here*

He asked you to feel it?! squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Was it impressive? :P

i can't wait for your next date! When will it be?  >:D

gosh, i feel like a twentysomething. so thrilled and excited for you :)
hubby is casting me frowning looks, while he's driving us to work, because i let out a big squeal and giggling while i read the past few posts.  :D you gave me a happy start to my day!  :-*
 
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OOOOOO MMMMYYYYY GOOOOOOOD!!!!!!
*insert ear splitting scream here*

He asked you to feel it?! squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Was it impressive? :P

i can't wait for your next date! When will it be?  >:D

gosh, i feel like a twentysomething. so thrilled and excited for you :)
hubby is casting me frowning looks, while he's driving us to work, because i let out a big squeal and giggling while i read the past few posts.  :D you gave me a happy start to my day!  :-*
Lol, that's what I was earlier when I saw what our Mrs Fassy had been up to.  :D :D
 
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I feel like this about the Driven series...what a piece of  :poo: So formulaic it was a joke, there wasn't an original sentence/thought in that whole pile of crap. IMO
LOL This one was definitely formulaic!  But, with that being said, I like this formula if they can mix it up a little.   I thought this one was a little more unique than some of the others that I've read in the past...   i.e. he was a race car driver (LOL) and there was the whole foster kids angle.    Did you guys watch Rush?  It reminded me a lot of what Colton would be like!

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How are ya Loopy Girl?  :-*
I've been binging on Mad Men over the Bank Holiday weekend. I was a whole series behind, back on track now. Is Donald Drapper still the sexiest man on our TV at the moment? Honestly, I'm asking; answers on a post card...
I've been binging over Game of Thrones... have you watched any of those yet?  We flew through the first season and are 4 episodes into the second season now.  I still haven't seen Mad Men or Breaking Bad!

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I know the writing was not the best but LOVED 50SoG  :love: I like it much better than tarasueme's trilogy. I loved the characters, the story, it made me feel . Lots of romance/swoon factors that floated my boat.

Like you, it's what brought me to fanfiction.  :)

Am eagerly awaiting the movie!  >:D
   Yes, the writing was definitely not great...   I had just finished reading Outlander when I read 50 and the difference in the writing was so noticeable.   Speaking of Outlander I just may have to subscribe to Starz in August so I can watch this one!      Booked, I'm glad I'm not the only one that liked 50 better than The submissive series...  I agree, a lot more swoony stuff!

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I loved these and was so pleased when I heard that Leah Raeder was offered a publishing contract and I would read the Yellow Pages if Tarryn Fisher wrote them.

I realized I've never read the Angel series by drotuno, so I thought I might give them a go even though I'm not really a big Vampward fan as I prefer my fics AH.
I didn't realize she was offered a contract.  This book really is a hidden gem!   Did you read Mud Vein yet?  Is it a standalone?   I really need to read that one ASAP.  I love her writing!

Let us know what you think of the Angel series!  It's on my list too.

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I said it before and I'll say it again, I thought the This Man trilogy was garbage.  Jesse wasn't sexy and dominant.  He was lying, manipulative and abusive.  The heroine was a total doormat.  I thought she and her friends should call the police when Jesse came around. The SPaG errors in the books were frequent and distracting.  I can't believe the buzz and accolades these books have received.  Every time complimentary remarks are made about this series it pisses me off all over again.
Oh my gosh thank you saying this! I thought I was the only one that didn't like the This Man trilogy.   I think I gave it like 2 stars and I rarely ever score a book that low.    I could never figure out what people liked about it.   I read the second book hoping it was going to get better but it was a disappointment.
 
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that's 2 negatives for This Man - pushing it down my list
2 positives, 1 negative for Driven - keeping it high on my list for the meantime, maybe get it over with to see what the buzz is all about

thanks for all your comments!
 
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Shit! Only second base?! Here's me thinking I was being adventurous! I have a lot of catching up to do, hey Loopy?  :D :D  I'm getting to third base next date...Promise!  :P  :D

I'm glad we're finally making some progress.  You must have liked what you felt if you're determined to make it to third base next time!  We still want deets!  Remember, some of us are living vicariously through you.
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You better hun, as I'm living vicariously through you until the Dr gives the all clear that the hubby (and kids) can come back home.
It's been 3 days and I'm having serious withdrawals.
I think earlier just proved I need to get some and soon as I was watching BGT and got a bit excited watching Darcy taking his jacket off, I actually fangirled like a 13 yr old.  ^-^ ^-^ ::) ::)

Oh dear, Loopy, you're having to do without Mr. Loopy?  I hope you've replaced some of your toys.  Especially since you're all alone with some time on your hands.

What is BGT?
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I can't remember much from this story line. I believe it takes place in Texas.

There's only a couple of parts of the story I remember vividly:
It's towards the end:
Bella and Edward went on a double date with Jasper and Alice I believe. I misunderstanding happens about the hotel room and I think Bella paid for her room or asked Edward to pay for his. His pretty much stops talking to her. Her co-workers talk her into going to his apartment that's 2 hours away. She gets there and knocks on the day. He opens it shirtless, I think he working out. He shut the door in her face. It started raining and she headed to her car. Drooped her keys and that's how Edward found her, on the ground searching under her car for keys. He takes her back up to his apartment and they make love :) (I'm not going to lie, I just giggled a little writing that!)

The epilogue has them camping with her family. I think her family owns a ranch. They have a daughter and maybe a son, and Bella is pregnant again.

Any help would be appreciated! Also, I think it was based off the authors life but she didn't end up with the guy. I know I have a couple of stories by this author that I love but I just can't think of the name!

Thank you in advance,
Alicia
 
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This Story is so bad, offending, racist sh**... Just because you label something Parody, doesn't mean you can write anything you want...

If you agree, please Report it, so the FF bosses actually do somethind useful for once and pull it.


Can Haz Hamburgr
By: PnutButtr  
About three things I was absolutely positive: First, Edward was bipolar. Second, there was a part of him - and I didn't know how dominant that part might be - that was a racial bastard. And third, I was unconditionally and irrevocably in love with his dark, kinky side.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Parody/Humor - Bella, Edward - Words: 2,070 - Reviews: 3 - Published: May 19 - Status: Complete - id: 10360361
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Offline bewitchedbyhiseyes

Abused/injured/sick/raped Bella or Edward
« Reply #399 on: May 27, 2014, 06:05 AM »
Hello everyone! Can you suggest some fics where Edward or Bella has an ailment, sickness, disease, raped, abused, injured or undergone trauma? I really love it when Edward and Bella clings each other for support <3

These are the fics that I really love under that category:

Wide Awake by angstgoddess03
Daddies Precious by Pienuniek
White Blood by ineedyoursway

Do you have any suggestions? Please please place them here!
Thank you so much!

Much love,
bewitchedbyhisyeyes  :-*
 
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LOL This one was definitely formulaic!  But, with that being said, I like this formula if they can mix it up a little.   I thought this one was a little more unique than some of the others that I've read in the past...   i.e. he was a race car driver (LOL) and there was the whole foster kids angle.    Did you guys watch Rush?  It reminded me a lot of what Colton would be like!
I've been binging over Game of Thrones... have you watched any of those yet?  We flew through the first season and are 4 episodes into the second season now.  I still haven't seen Mad Men or Breaking Bad!
   Yes, the writing was definitely not great...   I had just finished reading Outlander when I read 50 and the difference in the writing was so noticeable.   Speaking of Outlander I just may have to subscribe to Starz in August so I can watch this one!      Booked, I'm glad I'm not the only one that liked 50 better than The submissive series...  I agree, a lot more swoony stuff!
I didn't realize she was offered a contract.  This book really is a hidden gem!   Did you read Mud Vein yet?  Is it a standalone?   I really need to read that one ASAP.  I love her writing!
I think that's why I like the Driven Trilogy, as I love the film Rush - Mum had such a crush on James Hunt.  :P
Unteachable was re-released in March with a (slightly) different cover, I was tempted to buy it but it was a ridiculous price and I already have the first edition. :D
Mud Vein is a great read and it is a standalone.  :)
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Oh dear, Loopy, you're having to do without Mr. Loopy?  I hope you've replaced some of your toys.  Especially since you're all alone with some time on your hands.

What is BGT?
BGT is Britain's Got Talent - it's the live Semi-Finals this week.
Darcy is a Canadian Magician which is kinda cute, I just love his tatts.  ;)

Luck would have it, when we went to our house last week with the insurance surveyor guy we went up into our attic and I actually came across my box of Avenger Toys.  :dance: :dance:
I totally forgot I put them up there and I can never decide what I like best Thor or Iron Man.  :D :D
I spoke to the hubby this morning and he said that even though he misses me he's loving having a bed to himself and catching up on all the sleep he's lost over the last 7 1/2 years.  ::) ::)
It's not my fault I suffer with insomina and I need entertaining several times through the night.  :P :P :P   
 
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