Author Topic: Twific discussion and recommendations Part Three - ADULT ONLY - OVER 18 ONLY (Read 944067 times)

Ellachanted · « **on:** March 12, 2013, 10:46 AM »

Thread #3 - We are crazy talkers here!

ADULT DISCUSSION HERE, SO TRY TO KEEP IT CLEAN! UM NO, WAIT! IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED, LOOK AWAY NOW!

This is the new thread as the other was sooo long and had lots of pages. Continuation of SavanaBlue's great contiuation....

Okay, here is a place to discuss what you are reading, ask for recommendations and complain about the writing.

Everyone is entitled to an opinion, so please play nice

Because we know drypen's watching

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elliemae5290 · « **Reply #3441 on:** May 10, 2013, 11:38 AM »

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You don't get TSTL heroines that so often pop up.

What is a TSTL heroine?

laurendeplume · « **Reply #3442 on:** May 10, 2013, 11:42 AM »

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What is a TSTL heroine?

I think 'too stupid to live'

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Avrildulac · « **Reply #3443 on:** May 10, 2013, 12:27 PM »

Wanted to share these SPaG errors with you:

" I didn't have much time to dwell on the finer points of his body however. He was extremely pail. He was sporting an eight pack and broad shoulders. He wasn't crazy built but his muscles were cut sharp. I notices the way his deltoids cut sharply into his triceps. His pecks looked smooth and pillowed but when I rubbed the cream over them they were rock solid. "

Ellachanted · « **Reply #3444 on:** May 10, 2013, 01:43 PM »

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Wanted to share these SPaG errors with you:

" I didn't have much time to dwell on the finer points of his body however. He was extremely pail. He was sporting an eight pack and broad shoulders. He wasn't crazy built but his muscles were cut sharp. I notices the way his deltoids cut sharply into his triceps. His pecks looked smooth and pillowed but when I rubbed the cream over them they were rock solid. "

I had to google 8 pack. Um "he wasn't crazy built" but he has an 8 pack. Yeah. Is it just me or is this ugly?

Avrildulac · « **Reply #3445 on:** May 10, 2013, 01:46 PM »

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I had to google 8 pack. Um "he wasn't crazy built" but he has an 8 pack. Yeah. Is it just me or is this ugly?

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Nope, not just you. Totally ugly. Looks reptilian! This same author also described Edward's hair as looking "like a frayed copper wire." Not a good description at all. Who thinks wiry hair is sexy? I flounced the story on page 17, i just couldn't read it anymore.

laurendeplume · « **Reply #3446 on:** May 10, 2013, 01:51 PM »

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I had to google 8 pack. Um "he wasn't crazy built" but he has an 8 pack. Yeah. Is it just me or is this ugly?

Abs like that always make me think of a woodlouse on it's back with its legs tucked in

I actually really dislike that level of definition, not hot at all personally.

Ellachanted · « **Reply #3447 on:** May 10, 2013, 02:06 PM »

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Abs like that always make me think of a woodlouse on it's back with its legs tucked in I actually really dislike that level of definition, not hot at all personally.

Woodlouse?

So true....

ajamm · « **Reply #3448 on:** May 10, 2013, 03:09 PM »

I read this and I think it's a beautiful story.

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laurendeplume · « **Reply #3449 on:** May 10, 2013, 03:16 PM »

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I read this and I think it's a beautiful story.

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I did enjoy this, but

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ajamm · « **Reply #3450 on:** May 10, 2013, 03:22 PM »

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I did enjoy this, but
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I liked that part but didn't at the same time. I guess I liked reading about something different, about them falling in love again.

Astro2009 · « **Reply #3451 on:** May 10, 2013, 04:40 PM »

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Wanted to share these SPaG errors with you:

" I didn't have much time to dwell on the finer points of his body however. He was extremely pail. He was sporting an eight pack and broad shoulders. He wasn't crazy built but his muscles were cut sharp. I notices the way his deltoids cut sharply into his triceps. His pecks looked smooth and pillowed but when I rubbed the cream over them they were rock solid. "

To be fair, she was rubbing cream into his pecks - she was obviously to dazed and confused to be bothered with SPaG!

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I had to google 8 pack. Um "he wasn't crazy built" but he has an 8 pack. Yeah. Is it just me or is this ugly?

He's too defined - too lean. 8 pack like this = "crazy built" = steroid use = small...feet?

My dad used to have a leather sofa in his office. Spot the difference:

deranged_dreamer · « **Reply #3452 on:** May 10, 2013, 04:56 PM »

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To be fair, she was rubbing cream into his pecks - she was obviously to dazed and confused to be bothered with SPaG!

He's too defined - too lean. 8 pack like this = "crazy built" = steroid use = small...feet?

My dad used to have a leather sofa in his office. Spot the difference:

This last one looks like one of those se.x toys plastic girls/boys.

I much rather have a man with some beer belly that would enjoy going out for a pizza after a movie than some guy that would go home and drink some whey protein.

Astro2009 · « **Reply #3453 on:** May 10, 2013, 05:33 PM »

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I much rather have a man with some beer belly that would enjoy going out for a pizza after a movie than some guy that would go home and drink some whey protein.

Some p0rn for D_D:

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deranged_dreamer · « **Reply #3454 on:** May 10, 2013, 05:46 PM »

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Some p0rn for D_D:

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Ellachanted · « **Reply #3455 on:** May 10, 2013, 05:59 PM »

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Some p0rn for D_D:

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LOL My idea of a six-pack!

Okay really? something in between the leather furniture and the fat guy showing off his non-existent abs would be perfect.

ficfangirl · « **Reply #3456 on:** May 10, 2013, 08:29 PM »

Belladonnacullen has started a new story. The name of Bella's corporation? SAF Global...

Do you think belladonnacullen is a lurker on this thread?

Shame
Author: belladonnacullen PM
She destroys him. He hides his disgrace. She manipulates. He dominates. She's driven by power. He's inspired by duty. Their corporate arrangement is motivated by shame. ExB, AH, Rated M.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Angela & Bella - Words: 1,268 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 30 - Published: 05-10-13 - id: 9281621
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elliemae5290 · « **Reply #3457 on:** May 10, 2013, 08:48 PM »

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LOL! That is too funny! Ya learn something new everyday. Thanks.

Peonie · « **Reply #3458 on:** May 11, 2013, 01:00 AM »

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I did enjoy this, but
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that was drastic!
But I've enjoyed the story..If I remember correctly I've suggested it here

Astro2009 · « **Reply #3459 on:** May 11, 2013, 01:20 AM »

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So I was told that this place would help me look for some fanfiction stories.

Ok....So I am not looking for a particular story, but I am wondering if anybody has fanfic suggestion of when Bella realizes she never loved Jacob when he kisses her in Eclipse and chooses Edward. (Bonus: If Jacob goes crazy or is in total denial and won't give up)

Like I said I'm not looking for a specific story, so any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you!!!

I'm just doing some housekeeping and came upon this. It jogged my memory of your post - it sounds exactly like what you're looking for - so much so that someone has probably already posted it.

It's a WIP but was updated in April. The update before that was in October 2012.

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After Jake kissed Bella against her will in Eclipse, she can't forgive him. She decides to accept Edward's proposal and their relationship is stronger than ever. Jake's furious and loses his control. Edward drops his boundaries, with unexpected consequences. No Victoria. Lemons

laurendeplume · « **Reply #3460 on:** May 11, 2013, 03:57 AM »

Has anyone read You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login? I came across it yesterday but haven't heard anything about it.

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