Yes, me too!

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One of the authors of this story is jess2002 (someone above complained about her stories). She is one of the worst authors on FFN. ALL of her stories are simply shitty.


For example:
Destitution Encounters Promise by jess2002
I read it and I killed my brain with this story. It's so stupid. It's f.cking unbelievable stupid. Bella is 18 and she has son Liam and he is 2 yo. She doesn't have money because her parents kicked her out when she told them she id pregnant. Of course dog is the father but he told her she is a whore and it's not his kid. so she doesn't have money and alice told her that edward has job for her. she agreed the only thing she has to do is give him a blow job. she agrees because she needs money for food and clothes for liam. of course edward don't wan't sex and he will pay her 500$ for bj. when he sees her he of course loves her and they have sex and he pays her 1000$. he doesn't want relationship because he is 38 and 10 years ago tanya cheated on him but now he saw bella so he wants relationship. so they f.ck he treats her as if she were a brainless idiot but she loves him to and he gaves her job ad they live together and he meet jacob who is sorry but he still don't want this kid so edward adopt liam and they are happy together and edward is still a dick and treats her like servant and she is happy because she loves him.
Like I said. One of the worst authors.

One of the authors of this story is jess2002 (someone above complained about her stories). She is one of the worst authors on FFN. ALL of her stories are simply shitty.


For example:
Destitution Encounters Promise by jess2002
I read it and I killed my brain with this story. It's so stupid. It's f.cking unbelievable stupid. Bella is 18 and she has son Liam and he is 2 yo. She doesn't have money because her parents kicked her out when she told them she id pregnant. Of course dog is the father but he told her she is a whore and it's not his kid. so she doesn't have money and alice told her that edward has job for her. she agreed the only thing she has to do is give him a blow job. she agrees because she needs money for food and clothes for liam. of course edward don't wan't sex and he will pay her 500$ for bj. when he sees her he of course loves her and they have sex and he pays her 1000$. he doesn't want relationship because he is 38 and 10 years ago tanya cheated on him but now he saw bella so he wants relationship. so they f.ck he treats her as if she were a brainless idiot but she loves him to and he gaves her job ad they live together and he meet jacob who is sorry but he still don't want this kid so edward adopt liam and they are happy together and edward is still a dick and treats her like servant and she is happy because she loves him.
Like I said. One of the worst authors.

WTF?  Is alice supossed to be bella's friend here? what kind of friend find BJ job for her teenage mom friend? 

Olderward & younger bella story always creep me out.. There are so many so stories out there. Some are just ok like recently finished No Ordinary Proposal. most stories are just bad & it get even worst during lemons part. WTF is this all unnecessary kinky stuff.I dont mind when Edward-bella doesnt have age-gap. but when there is huge age gap this kinky stuff become disgusting. My all time fav oldeward-younger bella  fic is May to December romance.  .Its just beautiful.. Pity its not complete yet & author takes months to update story.

I also agree about possessiveward too. When some random blonde fawn all over him bella supoosed to just get over it but when bella simply talk to random guy he has to go all jealous.That was one main reason i didnt like Friday at noon during second half .

I really tried but I just couldn't. 

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Wow, I was just about to ask for opinions on the other topic

I didn't really read it, but I thought maybe I wasn't in the mood and nothing was wrong with it. It seems a little all over the place, but it is the first chapter. I think I will give it a chance.

WTF?  Is alice supossed to be bella's friend here? what kind of friend find BJ job for her teenage mom friend? 

Olderward & younger bella story always creep me out.. There are so many so stories out there. Some are just ok like recently finished No Ordinary Proposal. most stories are just bad & it get even worst during lemons part. WTF is this all unnecessary kinky stuff.I dont mind when Edward-bella doesnt have age-gap. but when there is huge age gap this kinky stuff become disgusting. My all time fav oldeward-younger bella  fic is May to December romance.  .Its just beautiful.. Pity its not complete yet & author takes months to update story.

I also agree about possessiveward too. When some random blonde fawn all over him bella supoosed to just get over it but when bella simply talk to random guy he has to go all jealous.That was one main reason i didnt like Friday at noon during second half .

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I totally agree with you about May to December romance but I doubt if she will ever finish it.  I totally disagree about Fridays at Noon. 

You Belong to Me
Author: TwidictedByrd  PM
Edward and Bella have a toxic relationship. A tragic accident tears them apart. Can they find a way through their pain to be the couple they are destined to become? Entry for the "A Love Like Fire" contest. Warning: This story will be a tough read at first. You may hate E/B, but hold on tight. They will have a HEA. It's just a ROUGH road to get there.
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My recent flounce i am not sure if i could say flounce because i started reading from middle somewhere than i read/ skimmed few begining  part & than dropped it.  If you want to pull your own hair or bang your head over desk than this fic is for you.

I don't understand why they are like the way they are in story. Its not like this two had any  tragic childhood still they behave like complete spoilt brat or even worse.Their relationship in begining is so disgusting. And there is  nothing tragic about accident that tear them apart.    when they meet again its like you are reading completely two different characters or completely different  story. Nobody change so much in spin of few months..   
You don't feel bad for this EB. You don't feel for any character at all.Their love-story is not epic either.A

You Belong to Me
Author: TwidictedByrd  PM
Edward and Bella have a toxic relationship. A tragic accident tears them apart. Can they find a way through their pain to be the couple they are destined to become? Entry for the "A Love Like Fire" contest. Warning: This story will be a tough read at first. You may hate E/B, but hold on tight. They will have a HEA. It's just a ROUGH road to get there.
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This fic is childish. The writting is immature and the autor keeps skiping from past tense to present and back again. Even in the same sentence. I just hate it when that happens. However, I reached chapter 4 (I needed to know more about the "tragic accident" ). One question for anyone who read the whole story:

I haven't read whole story but

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Yeah, I figured as much. But there was still some hope. So, I guess Bella was acting like a "typical" teenager  I was a teen not so long ago, and even in my drama queen years I wasn't that bad.

Has anyone here read Bella's Suicide?

I haven't flounced it yet, but I'm considering it. This author is VERY long winded, very descriptive, page after page of dialogue and/or explanations of what's going on. I'm finding myself skimming huge chunks and am getting bored. It's pretty well written, but I dunno if I can stick it out for how long the story is.

I'm just past Charlie finding out the truth about the wolves and the Cullens, is this story really worth continuing?

link please.
i dont think ive read it.

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Has anyone here read Bella's Suicide?

I haven't flounced it yet, but I'm considering it. This author is VERY long winded, very descriptive, page after page of dialogue and/or explanations of what's going on. I'm finding myself skimming huge chunks and am getting bored. It's pretty well written, but I dunno if I can stick it out for how long the story is.

I'm just past Charlie finding out the truth about the wolves and the Cullens, is this story really worth continuing?

From the summary:  Could venom reconstruct her brain? 
(Am I the only one that find this phrase weird and/or hilarious?)