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Flounced Fics (Twilight fanfiction)
« on: January 14, 2013, 04:02 PM »
Ok folks, list em here. Fics that you have flounced, and why you flounced them. Help keep others apprised of the good, the bad, and the badly edited. :-*

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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #361 on: February 06, 2013, 12:50 PM »
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Now on to a lighter subject i hope,  Has anyone read Take the Ice : by Bellamarie117?
I liked it, but I ended up skimming a lot if I remember right. It's so long.
 
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #362 on: February 06, 2013, 01:01 PM »
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Now on to a lighter subject i hope,  Has anyone read Take the Ice : by Bellamarie117?

i enjoyed it a lot!!!!!!!!!
 
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #363 on: February 06, 2013, 01:03 PM »
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i enjoyed it a lot!!!!!!!!!

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I liked it, but I ended up skimming a lot if I remember right. It's so long.

I am reading it now and so far it seems pretty good.  Thanks ladies..   :-*
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #364 on: February 06, 2013, 01:19 PM »
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i enjoyed it a lot!!!!!!!!!
For some reason I imagined you saying this in a really excited voice due to the amount of exclamation marks. I can't stop laughing :D
 

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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #365 on: February 06, 2013, 01:21 PM »
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For some reason I imagined you saying this in a really excited voice due to the amount of exclamation marks. I can't stop laughing :D

Lol! I did!

I couldn't believe it took me so long to read it.
 

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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #366 on: February 06, 2013, 01:23 PM »
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Lol! I did!

I couldn't believe it took me so long to read it.

So it was that good??   :dance: :cheer:
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #367 on: February 06, 2013, 01:27 PM »
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So it was that good??   :dance: :cheer:

Now you are having all this expectations about it....
But yeah. I really liked it.

I did have to search for it cause I couldn't remember which fic it was tho. I was afraid it was a HS fic, where Edward also plays hockey and Bella is a skater. I flounced that.
 
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #368 on: February 07, 2013, 02:44 AM »
Did anybody have a hard time with "A Pound Of Flesh"? You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login

I started reading it last year when it was still a WIP, but about 40 chapters were already posted. Everybody told me how great this is and I have to read it!
But I don't get it! The writing is a bit off though I can't exactly put my finger on it. Maybe I'm too accustomed to fics in first person.
What I also dislike are the long chapters.
And everyone kept talking about the fantastic first time of Edward with Bella. "Oh, just wait until they do it for the first time?" I don't get it. Yes, they finally did it in...chapter 19?....I can't remember, but it was hard to get there. It was nothing special. A lemon like so many others out there.
At the moment it stagnates on my Sony. It's complete, but I can't make the effort to pull through it. I'm really tempted to flounce it forever.
Is it worth my time? Will there be an interesting plot beside the designed drama that Bella can't be with an ex-inmate?


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I didn't like the writing and couldn't grasp the hype.

And I have to agree to a post before - after reading all the pages of this great thread!!!
Some authors with a certain reputation can write what they want. There's always a hype and everybody praises everything.
I thouroughly enjoy a fic by CaraNo every now and then. But her writing is always the same. At the moment, I'm a little bored with her fics. But maybe I'm only overflowed. She produces so much fics and chapters constantly - at the moment it's too much for me. And I won't read the next fic of her as a WIP.
I didn't like "Bloody Kisses". I'll never read this again - though I didn't flounce.
And sometimes I can't stand her characters talking to the reader in a fic as if they tell you a story. Can anybody relate to that? I can't describe it properly (I'm not a native English speaker). Cara has a thing for that. I hate it.
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Offline limomx2

Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #369 on: February 07, 2013, 06:48 AM »
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Now you are having all this expectations about it....
But yeah. I really liked it.

I did have to search for it cause I couldn't remember which fic it was tho. I was afraid it was a HS fic, where Edward also plays hockey and Bella is a skater. I flounced that.

Thank you.  I am reading it now.  So far so good, although i am only up to chapter 8 i want to strangle Renee already.  :)  :-*
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #370 on: February 07, 2013, 06:54 AM »
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Thank you.  I am reading it now.  So far so good, although i am only up to chapter 8 i want to strangle Renee already.  :)  :-*

That wont change!!!  :D
 

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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #371 on: February 07, 2013, 07:44 AM »
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That wont change!!!  :D

LOL Oh Joy,  I atleast hope Bella grows some  :bomb: :bomb: and tells her off.
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #372 on: February 07, 2013, 07:57 AM »
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Did anybody have a hard time with "A Pound Of Flesh"? You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login

Totally agree with you about this one. Althought the writing seems pretty great to me, I wasn't that excited about the plot and as the story progressed I got bored and flounced. I love a slow burn type of stories, but sometimes it doesn't stick with me. However I will probably go back and read the whole thing someday. There are many worst fics out there.

About CaraNo, I agree her writing is the same, but that's her style. At least you always know what you'll get with her (and I mean it in a good way), while other authors write one good story and then give up. ;) She has written a lot of fics, both angst and fluff, so at least there is a lot to choose from :P Personally, I've skipped many of her stories without reading them, but that's because I didn't like the plot. The only one I started but flounced was Isla de Cullen.
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #373 on: February 07, 2013, 08:51 AM »
I had planned to read Pound of flesh like month ago but after reading review section & few chapters from middle of story  i don't know i am not too keen to read it anymore.I am all for slow burn but something is not  catchy in this story. i guess i will read some other day in good mood.

About CaraNo, She doesn't have  extra ordinary plots, but she make up with her writing style. she is like hit and miss writer.I like her 40 % stories while i cant read her 60% stories.Like recently I didnt' like her recently finished fic Masen Rule.There was nothing special or unique about this story. It was pretty blah..But I am liking prequeal of this story Masen Rule Begining. lot.Its still unfinished .I had read many author's great story but i can't read their any other story, I feel like asking them after such great story you wrote this crap story. atleast Carano is better than them.Her stories first 2-3 chapters give overall idea of how story will turn out. And Carano's basic rule is her EB always get HEA together & no cheating so that's plus one.
 
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #374 on: February 07, 2013, 10:36 PM »
Thanks for your answers!

Yes, with CaraNo it's never a total fail. I simply have to take a break and stop reading her fics as WIPs. And I agree: Masen Rules was nothing special. Not bad, but nothing for my To-be-re-read-list.
 
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #375 on: February 07, 2013, 10:41 PM »
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Thanks for your answers!

Yes, with CaraNo it's never a total fail. I simply have to take a break and stop reading her fics as WIPs. And I agree: Masen Rules was nothing special. Not bad, but nothing for my To-be-re-read-list.
I think I've liked everything I've read by CaraNo.  But I can't just read her stories.  I tend to read one and go to something else.  Then come back a month later and read another.  Some are definitely better than others. But I don't think I've flounced any. 
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #376 on: February 07, 2013, 11:22 PM »
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I had planned to read Pound of flesh like month ago but after reading review section & few chapters from middle of story  i don't know i am not too keen to read it anymore.I am all for slow burn but something is not  catchy in this story. i guess i will read some other day in good mood.

About CaraNo, She doesn't have  extra ordinary plots, but she make up with her writing style. she is like hit and miss writer.I like her 40 % stories while i cant read her 60% stories.Like recently I didnt' like her recently finished fic Masen Rule.There was nothing special or unique about this story. It was pretty blah..But I am liking prequeal of this story Masen Rule Begining. lot.Its still unfinished .I had read many author's great story but i can't read their any other story, I feel like asking them after such great story you wrote this crap story. atleast Carano is better than them.Her stories first 2-3 chapters give overall idea of how story will turn out. And Carano's basic rule is her EB always get HEA together & no cheating so that's plus one.

Now see we are all different because I loved Masen Rule and her recent O Holy Christmas made me laugh hard.
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« Reply #377 on: February 08, 2013, 02:13 AM »
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Now see we are all different because I loved Masen Rule and her recent O Holy Christmas made me laugh hard.

And it's good this way! I loved O Holy Christmas and I absolutely adored Close Your Eyes, Simply Edward, River and NFW. Actually I'm still really waiting for the sequel to NFW.
I'll do now what I did before I started reading WIPs. I'll read a CaraNo story every now and then. There are still some completed which I didn't read yet. As I said, it's never a total fail. And actually, I can't imagine to flounce a CaraNo fic. Even when they're not great - imho - they're too good to flounce.  :)

Back to topic: I flounced a WIP today. I don't think I can finish this even when it's complete.
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This Edward is simply to "weak" for me. Don't get me wrong - I don't want to discriminate mental problems. I surely have my own.  ;D  I enjoyed the first chapters a lot, but I think since then she drags it out. I think I remember her mentioning that the story was rather completed but then she had to continue.
I skimmed through the actual chapters
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I think she's treating him like a child in this fic. I don't like that.

 
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #378 on: February 08, 2013, 06:57 AM »
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Thanks for your answers!

Yes, with CaraNo it's never a total fail. I simply have to take a break and stop reading her fics as WIPs. And I agree: Masen Rules was nothing special. Not bad, but nothing for my To-be-re-read-list.

The summary just did not catch my interest.  I am starting to think I will jsut not read it at all.
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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #379 on: February 08, 2013, 07:21 AM »
Found this one in a summary on someone's fav page and it looked like something I would like.  Little did I know...


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   Story: Divorce Or Affair

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Edward made a big mistake back in high school. Now he has to suffer the consequences. He marries the woman that caused the whole mistake. His family hates his wife. But what happens when Bella Swan comes crashing back into his life? Will he be faithful?


Author states she has rewritten this.   

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Re: Flounced Fics
« Reply #380 on: February 08, 2013, 07:30 AM »
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Found this one in a summary on someone's fav page and it looked like something I would like.  Little did I know...


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   Story: Divorce Or Affair

Author: Music Is My Life Now
Edward made a big mistake back in high school. Now he has to suffer the consequences. He marries the woman that caused the whole mistake. His family hates his wife. But what happens when Bella Swan comes crashing back into his life? Will he be faithful?


Author states she has rewritten this.   

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Even reading 2 paragraphs into the first chapter it is a big  :sign0135: for me.  The writing seems childish.
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